Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 10

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personal message to ruggia: If you ever need raws... just come and ask me.

In this chapter I saw the name "Naruto" and the first thing I thought was, "Didn't I call him Narudo in a previous chapter?" Then, of course I went oh shit. But, yeah... if I did TL'ed his name as Narudo in a previous chapter... sorry for that.

One important note for this chapter is that this tl is for the mag raw. The tanko differs much more in this chapter than in every previous chapter. I have marked off where it differs. I did not provide a translation for the change in the tanko because I like to think that if you have the tanko, then you would know at least somewhat how to read Japanese. Unless, it is requested for some reason... If it is requested, then I would have to ask why someone who can't read Japanese at all would buy a Japanese book...

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 10
Title: Break & Through

page 1

1. Sorry, Kiri...

2. For dragging you out here to cut my hair.

3. It's fine.

4. I enjoy doing this.

5. Ye-Yeah...

6. ...This really is no trouble at all.

7. Iwai...

page 2-3

Title: Break & Through

1. ...You've gotten

2. quite used to this, haven't you?

3. ...Yeah, it's because I cut your hair almost everyday.

4. Like this / snip snip

5. Hm

6. Snip Snip

7. Snip

8. Snip...

page 4

1. I really like this sound... / Even though I lamented it as a symbol of the "Impossible" before.
TL note: sound is the sound of hair being cut. If PR feels "this sound" needs to be more specific, then please do so... Because I'm 50/50 on this
TL note2: I am not completely sure if lament is the correct word here, it should be something more to the meaning of, "to feel not comfortable with"

2. Heheh.

3. Have you changed your mind about watching the stars as well?

4. About that...

5. Eh?

6. Don't all girls like the stars? / I always thought that as a given.

7. ...Sigh, / and here I thought you would understand.

page 5

1. Before I met you... I couldn't even take one step away from my house.

2. So, when night fell, all I could do was watch the stars.
TL note: you think they have a tv or something in that mansion...

3. ...It simply brings back all those memories... / ...Of when I was all alone...

4. I see... Sorry.

5. Does Kiri...

6. Like it?

7. Eh? / Oh, you mean stars?

a. Today sure is cloudy...

8. ? Yeah...

9. No, it isn't my cup of tea either... / Those elementary school science lessons were all so tedious and boring...

page 6

1. Everyone in class can't wait to see them with the person they like.

2. I can't help but think if it really is different seeing them together.

3. Ms. Hitomi said it as well.

4. ...Ah?

5. Um...

6. Wait, what the hell is this?... / This isn't good...

7. I wonder

8. if I had such a person, would I...

9. ...Huh?

page 7

1. What was that uneasiness just now?...

a. IF I HAD?

2. But... well,

b. SFX: pat pat

3. ...I don't know.

4. I became so engrossed about asking the person I want to be with all of the sudden, haven't I?...

5. I, you see, haven't even lived my current life for more than a few months. / I don't think it's time for me to think about boyfriends...

6. ...Ah / Umm, I...

c. Wait a second, my role...

7. Ah, Kiri.

8. YES?!

page 8

1. Thanks for listening to my story about the stars.

2. I'm sorry to be a bother, but please cut my my hair tomorrow as well.

3. It sure was great to have end up in the same school, isn't it? / It saves so much time for this.

4. Speaking of which, I haven't thanked the professor either...

page 9

1. ...By-by the way, / Kiri... about the stargazing, do you have...

2. ...Huh? / Kiri...?

3. ...?

4. Hey... Kiri?

page 10

1. Hey... You.

2. is something wrong?...

3. Not really.

4. I don't know why I expected everything to just fall into place.

5. I don't do anything for her except cut her uncuttable hair.

6. ...But, even then I believed that would be enough to develop a good relationship. / I... I...

7. will happily cut her hair. / For I am the convenient friend...!!!

8. ...Gi-...

page 11

1. Girls / can all just go ROT IN HELL!

2. ...Wha?!...

3. What in hell happened to you?

4. Aha! He must've got rejected when he went to confess his love.

a. Ah... Of course

5. This is a school field trip. There is a lot of confessing happening.

6. Yeah, but who does Kiri have to confess to?...

7. ...It's probably Iwai.

8. Probably.

9. Umm... That tiny little girl?

aa. ?

10. What's so great about that little kid?

b. Umm...

11. She is cute, I guess...

12. I don't see it...

c. I just want to pet her.

page 12

1. There's no one better than Mizumi... / She's friendly and she's beautiful.

2. Eeh? Mizumi...?

3. The class president is umm...

4. She is pretty but... / yeah... pretty but...

5. For some reason, I'm feel a little sorry...

a. For Kashiko...

6. Ah-Choo!

7. ...Kashiko, did you catch a cold?

8. No... This is something else...

9. Though, while I was in the restroom, there was this huge moth that sent chills down my spine...

b. *Self-Control
TL note: probably this is just short for "have some self-control"

10. S-S-Stop!

page 13

1. ...Say

2. Weren't you with someone earlier? / Did that person walk back before I met up with you?...

3. Eh...

a. Ah, she means Kiri...?

4. ...Speaking of which, he didn't say anything before he left...

b. I wonder why?

5. Y-You must've imagined it. / Well... We're back...

c. Hmm?

d. SFX: Clatter Clatter

e. SFX: Rattle Rattle
TL note: d and e are really the same thing.

page 14

1. Stop that! Nigi! / It isn't summer yet!
TL note: I guess the japanese only tell scary stories in teh summer?

2. Eeh?

3. It's fine! This is about camping. / So, he swung the blood-stained weapon at her, okay?...

4. SSTTOOPP

5. ...Kashiko, Nigi is such a weird girl...

a. How are you sleeping, Byouinzaka?

6. Aah... Right, this is your first time being in the same class with her...

page 15

1. Nigi Ubusato, 15 years old, female.

2. My favorite genres are SciFi, thriller, and horror.
TL note: I translated this by matching them to the list of movie genres on wikipedia. Original is "occult, splatter, and horror."

3. Favorite character is...

a. Yes YES

4. Hannibal Lecter
TL note: or if you rather stick to the original japanese: "Dr. Lecter"

5. And actor is...

b. Well...

6. Tobin Bell!
TL note: the man who played Jigsaw in the Saw movie series

7. If it's favorite person in terms of history,

8. then that's easy! It's Norma Grayland!!
TL note: the original author of crime edge

page 16

1. You have to forgive us, Nigi... / Can't you do like a normal love story?

a. Honestly, I want to go to sleep already.

2. Yeah, you have a boyfriend.

3. Hah? Who?

b. Damn

4. That Naruto guy. / Your childhood friend, right? How lucky.

5. Eh? Is this true?

c. First I heard of this.

d. About Kotarou, right?

6. Oh, you didn't know, Iwai?

7. Naruto and her are next door neighbors.

8. Naruto is quite tall, isn't he? / He's always lazying around, but when he is praticing Iai, he gets 30 times cooler!

9. Heeh?

10. Then, I'll tell him for you.

11. Don't..!!

page 17

1. It's fine.

2. We're not going out.

3. We just played together as kids.

4. That's all and nothing more.

5. We are merely just

6. Childhood friends.

page 18

1. ...Well, I guess.

2. I don't really see her as a girl so much since I knew her since we were kids.

a. I mean I can't even comprehend her hobbies.

3. ...Hmm...

4. Why did you ask me this?

5. No reason, it was just on my mind.

6. Ki- / Kiri isn't here, huh?

7. Well... / I wonder who he is going to watch the stars with tonight?...

b. Well no, there's no hidden reason behind all this.

c. What a little kid.

8. ...That guy is sulking in bed back in the cabin, / so I think it's better to just leave him be.

page 19

1. Eh? Why?...

2. Well, umm...

3. Ah! / Naruto, Kashiko.

a. Ah

4. If I have to guess...

b. See, he's here.

5. Hey

6. ...Yo.

7. Um, hey.

8. About the star gazing event tonight. / What are you going to be doing?

page 20

1. ...What about you?

2. I asked you first.

3. ...well...

4. I guess I'll just watch it with some group...

5. Other than that, I don't have anywhere to go to...

6. Heeh?

a. What's with that "heeh?"

b. Oh, nothing.

page 21

1. Is that... / the high school vice president?

2-6. (bubbles of dots or of nothing)

7. Yeah, that's Shihoudou. / She really is popular, huh?

8. She sort of shines, don't you think?

a. She always there for the president though.

b. How wonderful...

9. She's pretty and smart. / She ranks high in grades, the vice president of the student council, and humble as well. Makes me want to be a fan too.

10. That was quite detailed.

c. They're high school. I don't care.

11. I just don't see you two as friends.

d. Geez, boys...

12. Doesn't something seem wrong?

page 22

1. M-Ms. Vice President!

2. Pardon us, but won't you come hiking with us?

3. To the cycling course as well.

4. Yeah, I want to go all together!

5. Thank you, I would be happy to, / but, I'm sorry. The president said to not make any side trips.

6. The president, again?

7. Aren't you always with him? And, since today is a rare moment when you're all by yourself...
TL note: to complete the sentence: "won't you please come along with us?" or something along those lines

8. Eeh... But...

9. ...That guy is just working you like a dog. / Yes, yes. Forgive me for this, but he's rich, so he just gets all cocky and stuff...

page 23

1. That guy / isn't fit to be president...

2. ......

3. ...You... Do you know just who Romeo is?

page 24

1. You

2. You shouldn't argue. You...

3. ......

4. Wah!

page 25

1. Excuse me.

2. Eh?

3. EH?!

4. I'm going on a little date with this girl, okay?

5. ......

page 26

1. ...Hey, / I heard he's childhood friends with the Vice President like you guys.

2. ...Heh?

3. Who is?

4. Student Council Preseident Zaiga. / They're always together.

page 27

1. I heard there was a student whose hurt. / I've come here to confirm that.

a. Not good.

2. I wouldn't go that far. / I'm fine.

3. ...Is that so? Alright. / Then you won't might coming with me to the High Schooler's cabin later.

b. I guess I've been too comfortable

4. There's work to be done for tonight's events.

5. Understood...

6. ......

7. You / were treated cruelly, weren't you?
TL note: interesting note, in the tanko, starting here, the scene is completely different until the next scene change with iwai and the boat. Meaning, the lines and pictures are completely different

page 28

1. ...What makes you think that?

2. Aah, nothing. It would be great if I'm wrong, but

3. ...You entered this school from a rather far away elementary school, right?

4. You are the only one from your school, so I don't hear your name a lot.

5. ...You, having no relation to anyone else.

6. ...Was that

7. hard for you?

page 29

a. It's the scissor boy! The murderer!

b. Kiri, so you say you hate the neighborhood children again...

1. I am

2. a bad person.

3. I'm not "normal," so... / ...If I'm not to be normal... I must control it. I must.

4. But, / if there is another person out there in the world for me... / Someone who can accept the "evil" me as I am.

5. I never threw away my scissors because in the coner of my heart, I wished it to be true.

page 30

1. Then Iwai appeared. / I thought that she was the one.

2. But, that was just wishful thinking.

3. I believed it when she thanked me. / But, it differed from my imagination.

4. She thought as a girl.

5. Obviously, there is someone else.

6. I should stay positive. / But, no matter what it was, right now, I'm...

7. simply embarrassed how I was on cloud nine all by myself...

page 31

1. Really, those guys were such a pain... / ...Thanks for this. I'm imdebted to you, Mushiyanokouji.

2. Ah, no. / It was I who...

3. Wait.

4. How did she know my name?

page 32

1. All I could think of was / die die die...
TL note: or "kill kill kill" would probably be more to what it supposed to be

2. Simply, those guys just do not understand a girl's feelings / at all.

3. Honestly...

4. Men can all go rot in hell.

5. ...Wh-

6. Why?...

page 33

page 34

1. You think that as well, don't you?

2. "Hair Queen."