Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 11

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This is a modified version of my translation for chapter 11. In this modified version, I imagined Iwai being a scottish new englander and Kiri as a white rapper poser. Basically I had iwai said bloody hell at every chance I had and kiri say fuck and bitch at every chance I had.
The important thing is I think it is funny.

Also of note, this is the Zombie Rape in what I call the zombie rape arc.

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 11
Title: To overcome the corpses
TL note: this is about a previous translation: back in like chapter 5, I TL'ed the title as "to cross the storms" or something like that, I wanted to change it to "to overcome the storms" after the chapter was released. Yeah... It was already out, I didn't bother. There is a pattern to the titles... no matter how slight

page 1

1. She fell?

2. Uh-huh. / Mushiyanokouji did.

3. Really? / Is she okay?

4. Well, she looks alright.

5. She was taken to the medical office in the high school lodging area to dry.

6. That girl sure is clumsy...

a. But, doesn't it seem strange?

b. Yeah, I know.

7. Has it begun...?

page 2

1. Bloody hell, it's Night...?

2. ...I can see 'em cottages from here. / Then, this must be the them high schooler's lodge, right?

3. I see...

4. I must've fell into the water...

page 3

1. No...

2. I was pushed?

3. No matter...

4. First, I have to get on out of here...!

5. ...To Mushiyanokouji.

6. ...Poor thing

7. No one can save you now.

page 4

1. No matter what you'll do, you're all alone.

2. As I lead you to your horrific fate, / let out your patethic cries for help.

3. Tokuasa Private High School President, / Romeo Saiga

4. Bloody hell?

5. It's so awful...

page 5

1. ......

page 6

Title: To overcome the corpses

page 7

1. ...Bloody hell...

2. Why won't it open?

3. What's is this...?

4. The High Schoolers... Did they all go to sleep?

5. ...Hell, what time is it right now?

page 8

a. SFX: Clink

1. Crime Edge?!

2. What are you doing here?

3. Did Kiri come here?...

4. How queer.

5. Did he drop you?

6. How is Kiri even able to drop this?

page 9

1. Ki... / Kiri...

2. Oh bloody hell, you almost gave me a heart attack you...

3. Yes! / Hey, while with the vice president, I...

4. Are you listening?

page 10

1. Bloody... Don't ignore me!

2. Like how when you left without saying anything yesterday!

3. Hell! Kiri!

4. Are you daft?...

5. ...Eh?...

page 11

a. SFX: Slap

1. ......

page 12

1. ...Bloody

2. Mad.

3. How Kiri is

4. Kiri is...

page 13

1. being like that!

2. Never has he been so rough with my hair!

3. Those eyes... That stance...

4. It was like he's gone bloody mad.

5. ...Just what happened here?...

6. ...AH...

7. --...

page 14

1. ...Who's there?

2. Is it them High Schoolers?

page 15

1. AH...

2. AH...

3. AH__...

4. ...What?! / What is this?!!!

5. AH_...

6. AH...

page 16

1. S-

2. STOP...

3. NO!...

4. SFX: RIP

5. They're so much bigger than me.

6. So many male boys

7. are grabbing and

8. pushing on top of me...
TL note: I am pretty sure this is just a euphemism for rape

page 17

page 18

1. GAH!...

2. oo...

3. ....

page 19

1. LET

2. ...!!

3. GO!

4. LET GO!

5. .....! / .........

6. Hah

7. Hah

page 20

1. Hah

2. Hah

3. Hah

4. Hah

5. Kiri...!!

page 21

1. ...It's all perfectly okay. / Kiri is only just being mindcontrolled right now.

2. His spirit is right here.

3. ...I'll keep it with me.

4. You mustn't cry, Iwai.

a. Guh

5. There's no mistaking it... I'm under attack by the power of a Killing Good.

6. The Vice President pushing me off... And that letter...

7. That bloody President must be the Author of the Good...!
TL note: not a typo... Since it is the Vice president who is the author, and the president is the Instead

page 22

1. I'll somehow return you back to your senses. I'll find a way. / and then we'll make our escape...!

2. ...So wait for me. / Kiri.

page 23

1. Back there,

2. I attacked a bitch.

3. Just who was that bitch?

4. Hell... Why did I even do that in the first place? / Oh, My body is moving on its own.

5. Everything is so messed up...

6. I remember coming to the high school cabins, then all of a sudden I got caught in a brawl.

7. ...Umm / Just who the fuck called me up in this shizzit?

page 24

1. ...Fuck. I can't remember. / I'm so tired. My legs are so heavy.

2. I hear some bitch's voice.

3. I have to obey it. / I can't think of anything else.

4. That is okay.

5. It feels good...

page 25

1. ...HAHA

2. This has worked better than expected.

3. I was extremely cautious when I heard he was a blood relative of the infamous Glayland,

4. ___...

5. but I guess he is just a normal boy like the rest of us.

6. --..-...

7. He's pretty much mentally gone. / The Killing Good did not leave a trace.

page 26-27

1. My name is / the Pet Whip of Submissive Butchery
TL note2: Yeah, I know it is a Horse Whip... But pet whip is what it says.

2. My power is "Domesticated Whipping"

3. Whipping a man at serveral places will kill his mind / and domesticate him to obediency.

4. ...Its power is limited to men. / But, the results are amazing.

5. You are obeying this as well, right? / "Externally," I merely act like a submissive young lady.

6. ...Ruka. / I'm different. I'm not under the Good's power.

7. I only wish to do as you say... That's my true feelings.

page 28

1. Hit me

2. Curse me

3. Trample me.
TL note: ah... the infamous japanese foot fetish... Though I got to admit... Some of those softcore foot fetish videoes I have come across in my time had some really nice feet. Umm... Those videos were all purely for translational/educational purposes... Of course.

4. I take pleasure in having you rule over me.

page 29

1. I am your Instead.

a. SFX: Whack

page 30

1. ...Deep down

2. You're a really obscene man.

3. ...Right.

4. There was one thing I would like to ask.

5. ...Why are you doing all this?

6. Why not lock him and the good queen in a room.

7.Then it would be the simple matter of whipping him with that whip to kill her, right?

page 31

1. ...I like control.

2. I want to be greater than anyone of all time.

3. That'll be my wish for killing the queen.

4. That's why

5. Before I kill her, / for that "certain thing" known as the "Queen,"

6. I should at least make her angry, no?

page 32

1. With all of my might,

2. I will abuse her without end.