Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 14

~read only~

Eh... I thought about it while playing darksiders. What I was thinking... should I post the other TL I have. And, I said, sure why not... There is probably a few dozen people who actually read this because I don't have the staff to churn out the scanlations at lightning speed (That is due to various reasons of various natures). So, I thought I should at least end the arc for those people... or you people I guess.
This of course might bring the question of... How many translations did bokolife already did?... Well... That's for me to know and for you to don't ask questions.

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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 14
Title: Waltz of the Stars

page 1

1. I am the vanguard.

2. You are the rear guard.
TL note: metaphors... meh

3. ...?!

4. You've done well enough. / "To protect the battle game flag," we are entirely same in that respect.
TL note: jintori - a game children play where two sides try to take over the other side's "base." aka a children war game. aka, battle game.

5. But, I see you as someone who liked to fight.

6. The fate of a murderer is to be unwillingly caught. / However... KaKaKah

7. ...Putting you in this ghastly state,

8. I take no joy in this.

page 2

1. STOOOOOOOOP!

2. What

a. SFX: Be-Ring
TL note: Umm... I'm not really sure, but I think it is a feedback noise. I don't know the correct way to make that sound with letters...

3. Hello, "Sentencing and Execution."

b. What are you saying?

4. I've heard a lot of rumors about you from the Professor.

page 3

Title: Waltz of the Stars

name:
"Pet Whip of Submissive Butchery"

unit:
Killing Goods

author:
!Ruka Shihoudou
<-original
Fujin "the Swine Mistress" Shihoudou

skill:
!Domesication Strengthening
!Domesication Whipping
<- tips: When targeted at a male, whipping him serveral times can manipulate his mind into your control. However, once manipulated, he will be only capable of accepting very simple commands.

page 4

1. Kuh...

2. Justice Nakajima!

3. Quietly surrender that rope of yours! / As long as I'm alive, you shall do no evil.

a. My cell...

4. Kozakura...! / Don't butt in! I go nuts when you're around!

5. I don't care! You're the bad guy here!

6. Aah?

7. Even though I honestly don't know a whole lot about these Killing Goods!

8. ......

9. You believe what you're doing is cool or something, don't you?!

page 5

1. Hey...! Leave me alone! Turn that damn thing off!

2. By the Public Noise Pollution Act, I order you...
TL note: That isn't a real regulation name... I just prefer this to the extra long Regulations for the Prevention of Public and Private Nuisances. But, of course if the TS can make that fit, then by all means use that instead.

3. No.

4. You can't kill like that, right?

5. That Kozakura told you about my "conditions," didn't she?

6. It's wrong to just randomly kill someone! / You're not worthy to be called an "Ally of Justice!"

7. Please stop trying to get high off of this!!

page 6

1. !

2. Ah...

3. Ah

4. Tsk... / I lost my concentration...

5. Hey, Cutting and Severing!

6. We'll continue this at some later date!

7. I can't even speak calmly!

8. Wa-Wait!

9. Ah?

10. I've already lost my interest in you.

11. Wait, what?! Weren't you the one who sent the letter?!

12. Help us...

13. You don't get it? What you did was entirely your own.

page 7

1. So fuck off.

2. You dumb bitch.

page 8

1. For now it seems, / the two of them are safe.

2. Thank you, Byouinzaka.

3. It was nothing...

4. Kiri... That man...

5. Ah... He was an Author too. / More importantly...

page 9

1. That whip of yours... It's killing powers have peaked.
TL note: okay... so, this line is a bit weird... I'm just going to leave my note as that.
TL note2: What I'm trying to say is that the whip's power has reached its maximum and is now drained and uselesss.

2. So, all your puppets are gone. It's over now.

3. Ah... Umm...

4. The President... Is he okay?

5. That may sound a bit strange coming from me, but...

6. His wounds look really terrible...

page 10

1. I'm a bit worried...

2. To be pitied...

3. To be wretchedly pitied... / By the Queen.

4. This... This... / Again, I'm... like that depressing...

page 11

1. U....

2. Eh?...

3. Uah

4. UAH

5. AAAH... AH

page 12

1. Looking back to my childhood...

2. At that depressing Performance Day when the role of the princess was stolen from me.

3. Romeo was the school idol, and I was that childhood friend of his. / The class leader, that girl I couldn't stomach.

4. The bewitched boys all voted for that girl to be the lead. / To them it was all just a game.
TL note: I added the "to be the lead" part for clarfications where lead = princess

5. Even Romeo was one of them.

6. ...I was little / but I was deeply sad by it.

7. It was after that is when I encountered the Good.

8. It was then I decided.

page 13

1. That I will try to reverse the natural order as well.

2. Men are...

3. Men are all just idiots.

4. I never forgot how sad I was that day.

5. I never wanted to experience that again.

6. So it told me to rise to the top... To rise to the top, / if I had control,
TL note: yeah... reTL

7. I can get everything and everyone I want.

page 14

1. Even if the control is temporary, Petwhip gave me it.

2. After that, only by the Queen's death could I get greater true dominance.

3. All so I can have the person I love!

4. That's what I believed in! Yet I'm again as this unseemly...!

5. As this unseemly...!

6. U...Ugh...

7. I will... always

8. For my princess...

page 15

1. Cutting and Severing is so horrible.

2. Saying how your hair is full of split-ends.

3. All I see is pretty red hair.
TL note: I added stuff into this line. It still has a similiar meaning. Literal would be more like, "It's just pretty red hair."

4. It still even has that natural wave.
TL note: umm... wave as in wavy hair. I'm not sure if wave is a often used word to describe hair. I'm transliteraling the japanese in this line. AKA, it literally says wave. The hair isn't curly... It is just wavy...

5. I have always

6. liked it...

page 16

1. To be saying such things after all this time...

2. You're too modest, Ruka. / Please give me another attack order...
TL note: umm... that "modest" word had multiple meanings... it could mean sweet, kind, modest... etc etc >_> I had to choose one, I chose modest

3. Haha... This isn't like you, Ruka.

4. It seems like... This is your win...

5. ...And thus, the fighting was over.

6. Ugh...

7. What was I...?

8. Ah...

9. ......

10. Afterwards, the Professor filled us in on rest of the story.

page 17

1. The original... confined... disciplined... and broke down men.

2. But, not one of the victims was found to be chained down.

3. Was it devotion? or fear? / I didn't understand why they didn't run away.

4. Though I believed / it wasn't the female who had the chains around the men.
TL note: the ending scene pictures finishes the rest of the thought

5. Is

6. Is the star gazing...

7. over already?!

8. Eh... Iwai?!

9. But I wanted to see them too...

a. You're late.

b. It was really cloudy till a while ago though.

10. Where did you go by the way, Iwai?

11. Eeeeeeh... Well.

page 19

1. You two, where did...

2. S-Sorry, Kashiko.

a. SFX: drag

3. We're just want to go and take a look!

b. SFX:
TL note: I don't know what this is... Umm... maybe it is "grr..." I dunno >_> It's probably not grr btw.

4. Why are they bothering to go when you can see the stars from the cottage?...

5. Who knows, Ko-rou.
TL note: Kotarou... is his name. This is my liberty at translating this line. If you do not know japanese, don't worry about it :)

6. Myabe that's a better place to see them.

c. Hey

7. Where did you two run off to?

d. I didn't see you for quite some time!

8. W-We had a meeting to be tomorrow's duty officers!

e. Don't accuse us of anything

9. Ahaha

f. ...Damn it!

g. What was that for?!!

page 20

1. How is it? You can't really see the stars. / Are you having at least a little bit of fun?

a. It cleared up a bit for us to see though

2. Yeah... / ...Yeah...

3. I guess I should've watched it with everyone. / That probably would've been more fun and exciting...

b. Hahaha...

4. Really now?

page 21

1. ...Sorry, Kiri.

2. For all the stuff today... Causing you so much trouble.

3. Hm, it's fine.

4. ...But, like this, I can see it with you.

5. I guess this is quite all right.

6. ...Heh?

7. When you didn't promptedly return after not answering my request. / I didn't know what to do then.

a. What?

8. ...Answering your request?

page 22

1. Eh?

2. Eh?

4. ...Well, when I was there at that time, you merely told me I was convienent for cutting hair...

5. Eh, I wouldn't...

6. ......

7. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH / Sorry! SORRY! I didn't mean what I said!

a. You took in such a horrible meaning from it!

8. No... Yeah, sorry.

9. I guess I jumped to conclusions there...

10. Yeah...

11. Such a sensation...

page 23

1. ...It's so pretty.

2. ...Yeah.

3. ...It's but... But

4. I'm feeling a bit... warm.

a. SFX: gulp...

b. SFX: Grab

c. ......?

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