Artist Acro 71

My suggested changes are bolded.
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With a name like 'Dread Hell', I'm expecting something truly epic.

http://club.shogakukan.co.jp/magazine/SH_CSNDY/ahthisutoa_002/detail/
(You know the drill by now.)


(Top text- As the battle takes to the skies, those pursuing Acro are.....)

???: We'll be reaching 'Seiten City' in about two hours.

{Passenger Whale #13.}

???: You're a life saver, Dada.

Leonji is so busy restoring the 'Art Cathedral' that he barely has time to lift a finger...

Dada: The thanks is all mine.

ARTIST ACRO.

???: Hm?

Dada: To be able to meet my master Leonji after seven years gives me all kinds of happiness!

{Leonji's student Dada.}

(Handwritten- I'm glad I was able to come on such short notice.)

{Communication Sprites.}

(Side text- They appeared in volume five.)

Dada: I always believed that a time like this would happen.

Please use me however you want to, big sis!!

???: You don't need to call me 'big sis'....

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Dada: Ah, that's right.

While you've been studying in the Capital, did you find anything you like, Sis?

(Handwrittten- As the curator, something must have caught your eye.)

???: Wh---What...?

Dada: You didn't notice? People and Artists are both being changed by artwork.

Artists' knowledge after the fact has revealed....

That the artwork itself is awakening 'skills'.

Think of it like this. Artist 'A' creates a work which in turn,

Awakens another non-Artist to his skills. This first hand experence will then, (p/r note: non-Artist is singular, so I'm using a singular pronoun - his - to refer to it. You could use 'her' if you prefer, but in my opinion, just don't use 'his or her'!)

Allow 'skills' to evolve.

???: Evolve?

Dada: Yeah...

Although there seems to be a limit to just how much growth one can experience...

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???: Even as a curator, I've never heard this...

(Sfx- Gaaan shock)

Dada: Huh?

Wait! Don't cry!!

The master will kill me!

The truth is, this isn't a widespread fact.

There are times where even when one is exposed to 'skills,' one's ability never develops.

That's why we have to keep watching.

Slowly the number of Artists that one can encounter is starting to rise.

???: I see!

(Sfx- Bitatsu tak)

???: Gyah!!

Dada: Big Sis!!

???: Pi---

Pickles!!

(Sfx- Bitritsu fwap)

Pickles: B--

Bi...

Big Trouble!!

(Sfx- Byokou fluttter)

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Crown: What is that light...

Is his skill evolving...?!

Does this have to do with Vil bringing him back from the dead?!

Vil....

Gave him a parting gift...!!

ARTIST ACRO

(Center text- I'll make sure my master's wishes come true!!)

Chapter 71: Acro, He Evolves.
SAKURAI ATO

(Bottom text- The latest volume #5 is out in all stores!!)

Acro: Crown...

There's one thing I'd like to ask you.

Why do you....

Want to destroy this world so badly....?

Crown: Is that it....?

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Crown: I feel like it. That's why.

(Sfx- Dotsu twhop)

(Sfx- Bakkiiiiiin claaaaang)

Acro: Don't screw with me!!

(Sfx- Mekkiiiyaaa dssssssh)

(Sfx- Kiiiin dfssss)

(Sfx- Gawaatsu blooop)

(Sfx- Gunyatsu fluttter)

Crown: Wha?

It's bent at an angle...

It's become Clay?!

Whatever he touches becomes like this, then....?

(Sfx- Byuuutsu fwooosh)

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Crown: It's floating in the air!!

He's got another power?!

What the...?

He can control them at will?!

(Sfx- Hyuuuu fwisssssh)

Crown: Che!

(Sfx- Batsu fwish)

(Sfx- Gotsuuu thok)

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(Sfx- Gaaaa baaam)

Crown: The hell?! He's using the trash around here as ammo!!

Just what the hell awakened in him?!

(Sfx- Kuruuruu spppppnnn)

(Sfx- Daaan tmp)

Crown: Dammit!

That weirdass thing he's riding on....

If I could kill it, he'd lose his air advantage!

{Acro's not there?!}

(Sfx- Dadada tmptmptmp)

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Crown: Wha...

{He's running across....}

{The air...!!}

Crown: I get it....

(Sfx- Busshiii bloorsh)

Crown: It makes sense!!

I know what his skill is!!

(Sfx- Dokaaatsu dooof)

Acro: Hup!!

(Sfx- Bakiiiin claaang)

(Sfx- Don bump)

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{He's not using his skill the way it's intended any more....and this is invisible to the naked eye...}

{Somehow, he's turning the 'Air' into clay....!!}

{He's turned the air....}

{Into his raw material!!}

{He's using the clay in the air to suspend himself and that garbage.}

{And because I can't see it, it looks like he's running in mid air!!}

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Crown: How damned troublesome....

He's able to see his material....

While I can't see his attacks!!!

(Sfx- Dogoooo fwoooosh)

Acro: I have to touch the area I want to use...

In order to transform it into clay.

(Sfx- Bashii fwassh)

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Acro: This is my....

Material Limit.

(Sfx- Bariii zzzt)

Deco: My brush...!!

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Deco: It fell all the way down there....

This isn't looking good...

(Sfx- Ooooooo fwoooooo)

(Sfx- Dogooon THOK)

(Sfx- Dokii Throb)

Deco: What'll I do?!

Nene: We have to find a way to get to Acro now!!

Dread: Not happening.

Right now Acro is the prey of my master's skill.

That man....Crown,

Has the skill that leveled 'Seiten City'.

Nene: Now that I think about what the Old Man said...

He was talking about Crown the whole time, and not Vil...!!

(Sfx- Doki doki Throb throb)

{Then Crown's skill...}

{It's really....!}

Nene: Acro!!

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Acro: Crown....

You're weak.

I was thinking that you must be a serious threat, especially since Vil gave up his life...

But you don't seem to be much of anything.

Crown: Heh..

(Sfx- Kyahahahahahah!!)

(Sfx- Datsu dash)

Crown: Acro...

Remember what happened seven years ago?

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Crown: Seiten City was destroyed.

And everyone there....

Was the victim of Vil's skill 'Live Movie.'. (delete the period)

It was sudden, but rumors of Vil's involvement spread from there.

But...

I'm the one...

Who did it....

(Sfx- Kuku hehe.)


Crown: How about...

I show you my skill?

(Sfx- Bari zzzt)

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Crown: I can take my opponent's skill,

Copy it, and make it my own....

It's called 'Faker'!!

(Sfx- Bariiiii ZZZZZZT)

(Side text- At long last, Crown's ready to get serious....!!)

NEXT UPLOAD ON DECEMBER 22nd.

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CROWN AND DREAD.

Their skills are like the devil incarnate.

ARTIST ACRO
Chapter 72; Uploaded on December 22nd!!