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Rozen Maiden II 16

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+ posted by dancingblade as translation on Aug 19, 2009 06:46 | Go to Rozen Maiden II

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Rozen Maiden Tale 16
RAW: http://mangahelpers.com/downloads/details/47523 (Thanks Finny!!)
Note to translation checkers: I've marked some of the lines I had trouble with, using this ★. It would be greatly appreciated if you check some of these, even if its not all of them.

Thanks Olivine for your TC!

Now... Lets begin desu!

Page 02

断末魔の叫び...!!
Top Text: Judgement day

あぁ...
Kirakishou: Aah...

あぁあああ...
Kirakishou: AAAAAH!

やっと...
Suiseiseki: Finally...

TALE16 声
Title: TALE 16 Voice

Page 03-04

やっと会えたですね...
Suiseiseki: Finally, we can be together again...

蒼星石!
Suiseiseki: Souseiseki!

蒼星石...!?
Jun: Souseiseki?

僕の唇のぶつかったあの指輪が...?
Jun: My lips touched her ring?

執念深い子...!
Suigintou: Stubborn child!

どこまで双子の妹が大事だって言うの...
Suigintou: Why can't you just let go of your younger twin sister...★

そう...そうだったのね...
Shinku: Of course...

なぜ気づかなかったのかしら...
Shinku: Why didn't I notice....

蒼星石は水銀燈にローザミスティカを奪われ物言わぬ人形になった
Shinku: When Souseiseki's Rosa Mystica was taken by Suigintou, she became a doll who could no longer talk

けれど私達薔薇乙女に「死」はない......
Shinku: There is no such thing as "death" for us Rozen maidens

ただ "魂が遠くに行くだけ"
Shinku: However, "Our spirits simply go far away"

Page 05

そうです...!
Suiseiseki: Exactly! (desu)

ローザミスティカが失われれば人形は眠ったままでその帰りを待ち続ける
Suiseiseki: If a doll's Rosa Mystica is lost, she will wait for its return while she sleeps.

たとえ自らの手でそれを手放したとしても
彼方から呼び戻す声が聞こえたのなら...
Suiseiseki: If her voice is heard, even if she departed by her own free will...

新たなマスターを得てローザミスティカが戻れば蒼星石もきっと...!
Suiseiseki: If a new master is found and if her Rosa Mystica is returned, Souseiseki will definately be called back from the other side!

Jun: ......

マスター!?
Jun: Master!?

さっきのアレで!?偶然とはいえアレで契約って事になっちゃったのか
Jun: Just then!? Although it appeared to be Suiseiseki's ring...


あの指輪は翠星石でなく蒼星石って人形のらしい
Jun: The doll I accidentally made a contract with is Souseiseki

でも...
Jun: But...

Page 06

蒼星石って一体どんな...!?
Jun: Who the heck is Souseiseki?

いや...
Kira-seki: No...

いや... いやよ...
Kira-seki: No... Noo..

せっかく手に入れた... 私のボディ...
Kira-seki: I suffered so much to obtain... this body...

私の...
Kira-seki: My b...

あ...!
Kira-seki: Ah!

あ...あ
Kira-seki: Ah...ah

あああ!!
Kira-seki: AAAH!!

来たです拒否反応ですっ!
Suiseiseki: Its coming. The rejection! (desu)

なに...?
Suigintou: What?

Page 07

あぁ...あ
Kira-seki: Aah...Ah

ローザミスティカ...!
Shinku: The Rosa Mystica!

さっきの契約によってボディに残っていた蒼星石の記憶が呼ばれてるのです
Suiseiseki: Souseiseki's memory is being called back to her body because of the contract that was made a little while ago (desu)

それに雪華綺晶のローザミスティカはこの世界で まだ実体化していない...
Suiseiseki: Moreover, Kirakishou's Rosa Mystica hasn't materialized in this world yet...★

相容れないボディとローザミスティカが反発し合っているです
Suiseiseki: Their incompatible bodies and Rosa Mystica will repel each other (desu)★

この不安定な状態を待ってたですよ...!
Suiseiseki: I was waiting for this imbalance!

あぁ...
Kira-seki: Aah...

Page 08

マス...
Kira-seki: Mas...

マス...タ...
Kira-seki: Mas... ter...

マスタ...
Kira-seki: Master...

マ...スタ...ァ...
Kira-seki: Ma... ster... r...

Jun: .........

さあ水銀燈そろそろ観念してもらうですよ!
Suiseiseki: Suigintou, it's about time you gave up!

このスキに蒼星石のローザミスティカを埋め込むです!
Suiseiseki: This is your chance to return Souseiseki's Rosa Mystica!★

Suigintou: !

いやよ誰が...
Suigintou: No. Who are you to decide?★

Page 09

Shinku/Suiseiseki: !!

真紅!?
Jun: Shinku!?

力がぬけて...
Shinku: My power is weakening...

そろそろ限界のようね...
Shinku: It seems I'm about to reach my limit...

翠星石も真紅も媒介なしの戦いですからね...
Suiseiseki: Like Shinku, I don't have a medium either...

く...もう少しだったのに...
Suiseiseki: Kuh... It was just a little more...

Page 10

はっ...残念だったわね
Suigintou: Hah... That's unfortunate

おい水銀燈!どういうことだ
Jun: Hey Suigintou! What's going on?

聞いてたはずよお馬鹿さん...薔薇乙女が戦うには媒介が必要なの
Suigintou: You should have heard about this, idiot... A medium is necessary for a Rozen Maiden to fight

私は例外よ? どうやらあの末妹もね
Suigintou: Although it seems like the youngest sister is an exception,

でも他の姉妹は違う...
Suigintou: The other sisters are different...

誰かと契約しなければ思うようにカを使えない
Suigintou: We're helpless unless we're in a contract with someone

だから指輪をさし出して契約を求めたのよ
Suigintou: So that's why we presented our rings and requested a contract with you

ーーただひとつわからないのはあの真紅の指輪...
Suigintou: But the one thing I don't understand is Shinku's ring...

指輪は本来一人の乙女に一つだけ... 指輪を失えばその時のアリスゲ一ムを降りたと見なされ
Suigintou: Essentially, there is only one ring per maiden. If the ring is lost, it's considered losing the Alice Game

ローザミスティカを差し出すかあるいは次の時代とマスターを待って再び眠りに就く...
Suigintou: We must preserve our Rosa Mystica or we will fall asleep once more, to await the possibility of the next era...

鞄の中で紡がれる乙女の夢は長い時間をかけて新しい指輪を創り出すのよ真珠を抱く貝のようにね
Suigintou: Inside the briefcase, the maiden's dreams eventually create a new ring, like an oyster embracing a pearl

Page 11

翠星石の持っていたのは蒼星石の指輪だったわそして真紅もまいた世界のマスターと契約を解いたと言っていた
Suigintou: Suiseiseki had Souseiseki's ring, and Shinku mentioned that her master of the winded world cancelled the contract

2人ともまだ新しい指輪を持つには早すぎる
Suigintou: Its too early for both of them to have new rings

ーーどういう事なのかしら...
Suigintou: I wonder how this happened...

翠星石...ひとつ教えて頂戴
Shinku: Suiseiseki... explain it to me

貴女はここまで計算尽くでいのまかなかった世界に来たと言うの?
Shinku: Did you say that you planned your arrival in this world all by your own?★

貴女の狙いが蒼星石の復活ならばこの状況は確かに千載一遇と言えてよ
Shinku: Under these circumstances, if your aim was the revival of Souseiseki, you can certainly say that this was a once in a lifetime opportunity

でも... 蒼星石のボディとローザミスティカがこのまかなかった世界に揃う瞬間をなぜ知り得たの?
Shinku: But... how did you know that Souseiseki's body and Rosa Mystica were both gathered here in this unwinded world?

貴女をこのまかなかった世界に導いたのは...
Shinku: Who guided you to this world?

真紅... 本当は貴女もその答えは知ってるハズですよ
Suiseiseki: Shinku... I'm sure you already know the answer

貴女も翠星石も水銀燈も...
Suiseiseki: The one that led you, me and Suigintou...

全てをここに導いたのは
Suiseiseki: And everyone else here, was...

Page 12

お父様...!
Suiseiseki: Father!

...そん... な...
Shinku: No... way...

...ああ... でも...
Shinku: ...Ah... but...

Page 13-14

そう... だったわ...
Shinku: Yes... at that time...

私はあの時...
Shinku: I was...

nのフィールドで雪華綺晶の罠に嵌まり白薔薇に飲み込まれ
Shinku: In the N-field, I was caught in Kirakishou's trap. I was swallowed by a white rose...

深い闇の底に沈んで行った
Shinku: And sank to the bottom of the abysmal darkness

そこで見たものーーー......
Shinku: In the darkness, I saw...

ーー...光?
Shinku: ...a light?

ーーめ...
Shinku: I...

私の可愛い...
Shinku: Remember I was summoned...

Page 15

この声はーーーー
Shinku: By an enchanting voice

Shinku/Suiseiseki: !!

Page 16

これ...!
Jun: Its that...

またあの時計...
Jun: That clock again...

あっ
Suiseiseki: Ah!

Page 17

蒼星石...!
Suiseiseki: Souseiseki!

Page 18

ああッ
Suigintou: Ahh!

水銀燈! お願いです蒼星石のローザミスティカを...
Suiseiseki: Suigintou! Please... Souseiseki's Rosa Mystica...

いやよ!
Suigintou: No!

絶対に返さない
Suigintou: I'll never give it back

これは私のよ
Suigintou: Its mine

私のローザミスティカ...
Suigintou: My Rosa Mystica...

っ...
Suiseiseki: Hmph...

どこまでも強情な...
Suiseiseki: It can't be helped.

仕方ないです...
Suiseiseki: Being stubborn to the very end... (desu)

Page 19

蒼星石!
Suiseiseki: Souseiseki!

Page 20

待ってて下さいです蒼星石...
Suiseiseki: Please wait for me Souseiseki...

雪華綺晶から解放してあげるですからね......
Suiseiseki: I'll free you from Kirakishou

遅くなってごめんなさい...今
Suiseiseki: I'm sorry. I was too late... this time

別のローザミスティカを......
Suiseiseki: Another Rosa Mystica......★

Shinku: !?

うぅ...
Jun: Argh...

時計が...
Jun: This clock...

Page 21-22

Page 23

ーー...え......
Jun: ...where......

Page 24

ここ...は...?
Jun: Is.... this place?

おきたかしら!?
Kanaria: He woke up, I wonder!?

わっ
Jun: Whoa

ジュンーー気がついたみたいかしら
Kanaria: Jun. It looks like he's regained consciousness, I wonder?

ジュン? えっ?
Jun: Jun? Huh?

なんで僕の名前...
Jun: That's my name...

...えっ
Jun: Ah

Page 25

こいつも人形...?
Jun: This thing's also a doll?

ローゼンメイデンか?
Jun: Another Rozen maiden?

おい大丈夫か?
MSJun: Hey are you okay?

へーーコュイツが
大学生の僕か
MSJun: Oh?.... Is this the university student, me?

Page 26

中学生の僕ーーー!
Jun: It's the middle school student, me!

よう
MSJun: Yo,

僕
MSJun: Me

二人のジュンがついに対面...!!
Top text: The two Jun's are finally face to face!!

次回は42号(9/17発売)に掲載予定です。お楽しみに!
Bottom Text: The next chapter is scheduled to be published in issue #42 (on sale 9/17). Enjoy!

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#1. by sasuigintou ()
Posted on Aug 19, 2009
thanks for this translation!!!
#2. by Olivine ()
Posted on Sep 3, 2009
たとえ自らの手でそれを手放したとしても 彼方から呼び戻す声が聞こえたのなら...
Suiseiseki: Even if Souseiseki departed on her own free will, I could still hear her distant voice...

I believe the first part is correct. (たとえ自らの手でそれを手放したとしても)
Although it is not mentioned, I believe that the subject of the second part is Souseiseki, so it will be "if she could hear the distant voice",
more rigorously, it would be something along the lines of "if she could hear the distant voice calling her back."
#3. by Olivine ()
Posted on Sep 3, 2009
蒼星石つて一体どんな...!?
Jun: Who the heck is Souseiseki?★
I believe that's correct. Although the Japanese should be 蒼星って一体どんな・・・!?

それに雪華綺晶のローザミスティカはこの世界で まだ実体化していない...
Suiseiseki: Moreover, Kirakishou's Rosa Mystica has not materialized in this world yet...
I believe that is correct.

さあ水銀燈そろそろ観念してもらうですよ!
Suiseiseki: Suigintou, its about time for you to hand it over!★
観念means resign, giving up, so something like, "Suigintou, it's about time you gave up!" "Suigintou, prepare yourself!"

このスキに蒼星石のローザミスティカを埋め込むです!
Suiseiseki: You have Souseiseki's Rosa Mystica imprisoned in you! (desu)★
スキis obviously katakana for 隙, or opportunity. So,
"I'll take this oppurtunity to return Souseiseki's Roza Mystica to her body!"
"We'll take this oppurtunity to bury Souseiski's Roza Mystica in her body!"
"Now, I'll return Souseiseki's Roza Mystica to her body!"
or any combination of them.
#4. by Olivine ()
Posted on Sep 3, 2009
いやよ誰が...
Suigintou: No. Who are you to decide?★
I don't now either. Go with this for now.

力がぬけて...
Shinku: My power is weakening...★
That's correct. A more rigorous translation would be "my power is draining (out of my body)", "my power is going away", but "my power is weakening" is all right.

そろそろ限界のようね...
Shinku: I'm about to reach my limit★
That's correct, too, although more rigorously it would be "It seems I'm about to reach my limit..." from "ようね".
#5. by Olivine ()
Posted on Sep 3, 2009
翠星石も真紅も媒介なしの戦いですからね...
Suiseiseki: Like Shinku, I don't have a medium either★
Correct.

く...もう少しだったのに...
Suiseiseki: Kuh... Just a little more...★
"もう少しだった" is past tense, so it can be "It was just a little more", or "I needed just a little more", but this is all right.

はっ...残念だったわね
Suigintou: Hah... That's unfortunate★
This is all right.

聞いてたはずよお馬鹿さん...薔薇乙女が戦うには媒介が必要なの
Suigintou: Idiot, you haven't heard about this? A medium is necessary for a Rozen Maiden to fight★
It's all right, but "聞いてたはずよ" is "you should have heard about this", but it's all right.

ーーただひとつわからないのはあの真紅の指輪...
Suigintou: But there's one thing about Shinku's ring I don't understand...★
This is more like "The one thing I don't understand is Shinku's ring", but it doesn't really matter and is up to you.

I hope it's all right I'm translation-checking(?) your work like this.
#6. by Olivine ()
Posted on Sep 3, 2009
貴女はここまで計算尽くでいのまかなかった世界に来たと言うの?
Shinku: Did you say that you planned your arrival in this world all by your own?★
I don't know...sorry. That's really unusual Japanese.

...ああ... でも...
Shinku: ...No... that can't be...★
I believe this is "...Ah... but..." (でも means but), leading into
そう... だったわ...
Shinku: No... at that time
"Yes... at that time". (そう means yes)

...I hope that helped...
#7. by dancingblade ()
Posted on Sep 4, 2009
Thanks for the check Olivine! I'll be updating this with your suggestions in the next few days.

Edit: It's been updated

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