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Hameln no Violinist ~Shchelkunchik~ 17
Lute and Great's Hallellujah (Last Part)
+ posted by Elanor Pam
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on Jul 20, 2009 17:04
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The Violinist of Hameln
Shchelkunchik
Aide: It's terrible!!
Board Chairman...!!
Board Chairman Clari!
In the middle of the new recruits' class...!
One of the students transformed into a mazoku...
And is attacking the surrounding classmates! Please come urgently!!
---- pg 2
17th movement - Lute and Great's Hallellujah (Last Part)
Clari:
Yeah, I know...
(sfx: fwom!)
---- pg 3
Aide: Ah??
You knew...!?
Board Chairman! We should immediately...!!
Clari: There's no need
A magical barrier is already being formed around the school. Nothing can escape
The Magicorps are also on standby for emergencies
Aide: Eh? The Magicorps?
What on earth......!?
Percuss: The student who turned into a mazoku is...
an inheritor of Chestra's blood...
The incident in the Ark was a sample of...
only a fraction of this student's power...
---- pg 4
Clari: Their aim is...
the Demon King's blood...
This much I was able to predict...
Now we wait...
...............?
and see if the wire puller...
will sink his teeth in the bait...
and give himself away...
---- pg 5
Lute: Great...
---- pg 6
Lute: We used to
play a lot...
Until that...
tragedy happened.........
---- pg 7
Lute: Since then, you distanced yourself...
from everyone...
from people
Even from our family......
No matter how many times
we'd reach out a hand...
we were never able to close the distance...
Little Lute: Great!
What's your problem!
---- pg 8
Lute: Don't push me away as well!!
Don't hate me!!
Great: It's not that, nii-san
It's not because
I hate you
---- pg 9
Great: My right eye
hurts...
sometimes...
there are times when my blood
runs...
when there's a bad smell of
blood...
And there's a scream
from my heart
Devour them...
Kill them...
they're food
those...
...humans...
---- pg 10
Great: Scary...
scary...
I'm scared!
I just don't know...
What I'm turning into...
What I should do...
Lute: Gre...
Great: DON'T GET ANY CLOSER...!!
Lute voiceover: He didn't want to push others away...
Great: Lute-niisan...
Lute voiceover: He -had- to push others away
Great: You can't stay by my side
---- pg 11
Lute Voiceover: Great... he was fighting...
Great: Nii-san... I have a request
If, when I get big...
Lute Voiceover: all on his own, in his little body...
Great: I go on a rampage from the Demon King's blood...
If I can't hold this blood back...
promise me
that you
will
---- pg 12
stop me...
---- pg 13
Students: This is bad! He was caught!!
He'll be killed...!!
Piroro: Aah, even Lute-san's power
couldn't stop him!?
Lute voiceover: Just how am I supposed
to stop you...
Great: The demon king's blood is strongly lodged.........
in my right eye...
Before I hurt everyone.........
Before I'm possessed by the Demon King's blood--
This right eye...
---- pg 14
BLOODY DEATH EATER!!
---- pg 15
Students: Wha, what the-- a monster just--!!
A summoning spell!?
H.Pipe: I see!! Of course--
Student: !?
H.Pipe: That was his aim all along!!
Lute wasn't just fighting!
He wasn't just pointlessly jumping around in circles!!
That "Justice" (kanji:aura) was...
HIM DRAWING A MAGICAL FIELD!!
TO SEIZE GREAT!!
Lute: Great
I'm fulfilling that promise
---- pg 16
Lute-niisan
just...
gouge out
my right eye...
---- pg 17
Shchel: DOOOOON'T!
GREAAAT!
LUTE-SAN!
Piroro: Shchel! Stop that!!
Don't be rash!
You're different from them
Your arms, your body
will be torn apart!!
Shchel: Lute-san and Great, too
They're both mistaken!!
You can't do things that way!
You can't rely on strength!
Piroro: But you can't do anything!
You should know that!
Shchel: That's not it! That's not it!!
---- pg 18
Shchel: that's...!?
sfx: GOON
---- pg 19
Shchel: Bratsche-san...!?
Bratsche: Shchel-kun...
Your arms were skewered, but...
Even so, you were trying to help those two...
Worrying about them more than about yourself...
Watching that...
---- pg 20
Bratsche: I understood your feelings, so
Go ahead!!
Give your best!!
Shchel: Bratsche-san...!
Off-pannel: Uwaaah
What's that--
---- page 21
(nothing except a sight out of nightmares)
---- pg 22-23
Students: THE HELL
IS THIS!?
They're eating
the summoned monster!!
There's a whole swarm of them!
H.Pipe: They're like piranhas--
Piroro: Fa...
Fairies...?
shadow guy: kuku
Black Fairies!?
---- pg 24
Bratsche: Shchel-kun!!
Go ahead!!
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The Violinist of Hameln
Shchelkunchik
Aide: It's terrible!!
Board Chairman...!!
Board Chairman Clari!
In the middle of the new recruits' class...!
One of the students transformed into a mazoku...
And is attacking the surrounding classmates! Please come urgently!!
---- pg 2
17th movement - Lute and Great's Hallellujah (Last Part)
Clari:
Yeah, I know...
(sfx: fwom!)
---- pg 3
Aide: Ah??
You knew...!?
Board Chairman! We should immediately...!!
Clari: There's no need
A magical barrier is already being formed around the school. Nothing can escape
The Magicorps are also on standby for emergencies
Aide: Eh? The Magicorps?
What on earth......!?
Percuss: The student who turned into a mazoku is...
an inheritor of Chestra's blood...
The incident in the Ark was a sample of...
only a fraction of this student's power...
---- pg 4
Clari: Their aim is...
the Demon King's blood...
This much I was able to predict...
Now we wait...
...............?
and see if the wire puller...
will sink his teeth in the bait...
and give himself away...
---- pg 5
Lute: Great...
---- pg 6
Lute: We used to
play a lot...
Until that...
tragedy happened.........
---- pg 7
Lute: Since then, you distanced yourself...
from everyone...
from people
Even from our family......
No matter how many times
we'd reach out a hand...
we were never able to close the distance...
Little Lute: Great!
What's your problem!
---- pg 8
Lute: Don't push me away as well!!
Don't hate me!!
Great: It's not that, nii-san
It's not because
I hate you
---- pg 9
Great: My right eye
hurts...
sometimes...
there are times when my blood
runs...
when there's a bad smell of
blood...
And there's a scream
from my heart
Devour them...
Kill them...
they're food
those...
...humans...
---- pg 10
Great: Scary...
scary...
I'm scared!
I just don't know...
What I'm turning into...
What I should do...
Lute: Gre...
Great: DON'T GET ANY CLOSER...!!
Lute voiceover: He didn't want to push others away...
Great: Lute-niisan...
Lute voiceover: He -had- to push others away
Great: You can't stay by my side
---- pg 11
Lute Voiceover: Great... he was fighting...
Great: Nii-san... I have a request
If, when I get big...
Lute Voiceover: all on his own, in his little body...
Great: I go on a rampage from the Demon King's blood...
If I can't hold this blood back...
promise me
that you
will
---- pg 12
stop me...
---- pg 13
Students: This is bad! He was caught!!
He'll be killed...!!
Piroro: Aah, even Lute-san's power
couldn't stop him!?
Lute voiceover: Just how am I supposed
to stop you...
Great: The demon king's blood is strongly lodged.........
in my right eye...
Before I hurt everyone.........
Before I'm possessed by the Demon King's blood--
This right eye...
---- pg 14
BLOODY DEATH EATER!!
---- pg 15
Students: Wha, what the-- a monster just--!!
A summoning spell!?
H.Pipe: I see!! Of course--
Student: !?
H.Pipe: That was his aim all along!!
Lute wasn't just fighting!
He wasn't just pointlessly jumping around in circles!!
That "Justice" (kanji:aura) was...
HIM DRAWING A MAGICAL FIELD!!
TO SEIZE GREAT!!
Lute: Great
I'm fulfilling that promise
---- pg 16
Lute-niisan
just...
gouge out
my right eye...
---- pg 17
Shchel: DOOOOON'T!
GREAAAT!
LUTE-SAN!
Piroro: Shchel! Stop that!!
Don't be rash!
You're different from them
Your arms, your body
will be torn apart!!
Shchel: Lute-san and Great, too
They're both mistaken!!
You can't do things that way!
You can't rely on strength!
Piroro: But you can't do anything!
You should know that!
Shchel: That's not it! That's not it!!
---- pg 18
Shchel: that's...!?
sfx: GOON
---- pg 19
Shchel: Bratsche-san...!?
Bratsche: Shchel-kun...
Your arms were skewered, but...
Even so, you were trying to help those two...
Worrying about them more than about yourself...
Watching that...
---- pg 20
Bratsche: I understood your feelings, so
Go ahead!!
Give your best!!
Shchel: Bratsche-san...!
Off-pannel: Uwaaah
What's that--
---- page 21
(nothing except a sight out of nightmares)
---- pg 22-23
Students: THE HELL
IS THIS!?
They're eating
the summoned monster!!
There's a whole swarm of them!
H.Pipe: They're like piranhas--
Piroro: Fa...
Fairies...?
shadow guy: kuku
Black Fairies!?
---- pg 24
Bratsche: Shchel-kun!!
Go ahead!!
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Some suggestions:
on page 1:
FYI:
"New students" is a non-specific reference for a group of students that join a school together as a class since it could also include transfer students. Vocational schools might refer to their group as "new recruits." Colleges and high schools refer to theirs groups as "freshman." I suggest using "new recruits," but it should be fine as is.
on page 3:
"The incident in the Ark, too, must have been caused...
to measure a glimpse of this student's power..."
>>
"The incident in the Ark was a sample of...
only a fraction of this student's power..."
Page 7:
"you'd never approach us..."
>>
"we were never able to close the distance."
Negative past of the volition + to suru form (trans: about to) turns into this.
Page 9:
"And there's a screaming
from my heart
Devour...
Kill...
they're food
all humans.........
...and stuff..."
>>
"And there's a scream
from my heart,
Devour them.
Kill them.
They're food,
those
humans."
screaming -> scream
And the imperative seems to work better for kill and devour.
removed "... and stuff..." for having no meaning.
Page 10:
Lute voiceover:
He didn't want to be apart...
Lute voiceover:
He -had- to stay apart
>>
"He didn't want to distance himself..."
"He had to distance himself from everyone."
For script continuity. Use the same phrasing as either page 7 "distance himself" or page 8 "push others away" since this is referring to previously mentioned behavior by Great.
"Watching that...
---- pg 20
Bratsche:
I understood Shchel-kun's feelings, so" <- "Shchel-kun's" should be "your"