Sugars 2

souka's translation
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TRANSLATION LEGEND
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1. Separate texts in connected bubbles are with double slash //
2. “” Speech
3. [] Narration/Thoughts
4. <> Labels/MISC
5. ST: Small Texts
6. (Small text inside/outside adjacent to bubble)
7. SFX: Sound Effects
8. TN: Translator's Note
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SUGARS CH 02


pg 037

[] Sweet Talk and Sweet Pastries
[] Two girls can do just about anything.
[] I just can't stand being left alone.

<> Shirakawa Mami, 18 years old // Sugarless Woman
[] I'm not going.

<> Concert Ticket


pg 038

"" It's good!
<> Sugars
<> SWEET [2] // The Wicked Woman and the Banana Pancake


pg 039

"" You're not interested in this movie? How about another one?
"" That's not it.

[] I don't like sweet things.
[] And I don't understand the thing called "love" very well.

"" I'm saying that it would be problematic if I went with you to this movie, and you confessed your love to me.

[] Love affairs and sugary things are too sweet aren't they?

<> Cafetaria
"" Goodness.
"" You did it again.


pg 040

"" I was playin cupid nd all for that Kie guy, but ya were so mean to tha poor guy.
ST: Don't ya got a heart?
"" Your love life and my love life is different.
ST: What did ya find so funa bout it?

ST: Thank ya for the nail polish remover.
"" Ya ain't gonna get anywhere with ya cold attitude.

"" It ain't gonna be good if ya don't fall in love.

SFX: mu (offended)
ST: What's up with her?
"" I'ma send that line right back at ya, Akahoshi Tomomi-san

"" Aren't I always in a welcoming mood!?
ST: It's just that I don't got any guys coming to me.

"" Excuse me!
SFX: clatter


pg 041

"" Howdy Akahoshi-sempai!!

[] A guy?
"" Was there such a guy in cooking club?

"" Be-...Benihara-kun
"" Sorry I was busy before club activities! // I created the recipe I borrowed from you yesterday!!

SFX: donn
ST: Diameter Approximately 30cm
"" Here he goes.
ST: 山石 ...it's a rock?
TN: not sure if its a name or they're just mocking it. if its a name its "Yamashi"
"" It's huge.
ST:　厚さ Thickness 12cm
ST:　重箱 Food box
TN: it's the traditional stacked japanese lacquer box
SFX: キャキャ kyakya (chatter chatter)

"" Howz it? Ooh, wanna taste it!? // Of course I made enough for everyone.

"" No.


pg 042

SFX: straight up attitude
"" No.
(Without a second thought.)

"" I should have some strange black thing right from the morning right? // My policy is to only put edible things into my mouth.
ST: oblate oblate!
TN: thats a word for some round thing, i think
"" W-wai-!
"" Mami!!
ST: I thought this was a hot plate.

"" S-sorry, Benihara-kun. She's so straightforward.
"" That's...

"" That's right...!!
ST: I remember now.

"" Well the recipe was black & white, so that's why I made it this color!!
"" I guess I couldn't figure it out by myself in the end! // Thanks for the advice!
ST: 持って帰る Takes it away.
ST: それじゃ～ See you later~

"" ......
"" What was that all about?
"" I told ya he's a 1st year, Benihara.
"" Lately, he seems to be all caught up in making pancakes.


pg 043

[] That's like a dog's name.
[] He's a good kid, but a total airhead ain't he.
[] Which should I pick?

[] I don't like the mushy sweet attitude nor the flattery.

pg 044

"" Patisserie Fujita

"" Uhhhh... // What?
"" Gooood mornin'
"" I would be Benihara Tarou!

"" Tomomi's would be that show rack over there.
"" Oh no! I have something for you Shirakawa-sempai!!

"" Here!
"" It's a thank you for yesterday.
ST: U....
[]
ST: Waaaa....
ST:いいなぁ～～<3 This is great~~<3
"" Ah it should be okay. I bought it this time.

"" Sorry but no thanks. I ain't good with sweet things.
"" Eh!?

"" Seriously!? You don't like sweets, but you still gave such good advice last time! // That's crazy! I respect you!!
SFX: startled

SFX: ding dong
"" Oh it's the chime!
TN: the bell that rings and tells you that it's time for class

"" Later alligator!
SFX: lick
"" ...
ST: Well about...
ST: This...


pg 045

[] In the end I didn't like them.
"" Hey, isn't this underwear cute?
<> Just Before // Christmas // Merry Bra

ST: Cream Puff Disposal
ST: Cuuute~
SFX: munch munch
"" Ah, it really is cute.
<> no // outer // Christmas Issue
TN: can't really see the labels, best just to leave this out
"" Right? Christmas is close, so Kie will need some things like these.

"" Right!?
"" I don't need that at all!! Jeez! Seriously!! No need at all!!
ST: Uhm, you broke your nail again.
"" Should I buy it? It would probably raise my girl power.

SFX: sparkle sparkle
ST: Just how far did the two fo you go!?
[] She's so cute when you blush.
ST: No! We didn't do anything! Give me a break!
[] Even though I'm always acting cool, I'm really jealous of you when you are like this.


pg 046

[] That'd be impossible for me.

SFX: sigh

ST: Laid Laid Love Me
ST: Because I Love To Layer // Layers

"" I no go to go out side~~
ST: air guitar
"" do do do do ...~~
SFX: moving around

"" La-...
TN: ok well that was all some english he made up. i really couldn't understand half of it.


pg 047

"" ...... // Hi.
"" As one would expect, this is pretty embarrassing.

"" What are you doing here alone!? Oh... do you want to have some banana pancake?
"" No.
ST: And didn't I tell you that I don't like sweet things?

ST: Oh that's right. I better write it down.
"" .....

"" Why banana pancakes?

"" Oh this? It's just that I heard a song lately called "Banana PAncakes"
""
"" That it?
"" Yes!!
"" ...

"" You... sure are care free aren't you?
"" Yep!!
ST: a second time

<> 安直 Simple Minded.

[] Yeah...
"" I think I am pretty simple too.


pg 048

"" I can see my friends everyday.
"" I learned the 5-cut method by myself today. // The weather's great. Food's delicious.

"" And improving my banana pancake was a bonus.
"" With that, my Happy Tank is all the way filled.
ST: Okay, I'm gonna eat~


pg 049

[] All of my worries from before have...
"" Hey...
"" Give me a bit of that.
"" Huh, but
ST: It's sweet...

"" I'll try
"" and eat it.

"" Okay!
ST: Of course I'll give ya some.
ST: Yay

ST: It's sweet! And hard!
ST: Ehh!? Even though you said yourself that you would eat it!?

[] I couldn't help but to feel like an idiot.


pg 050

[] I feel like everything's been engfuled by Tarou's pancakes.

<> Wester Music // ROCK POPS

[] I try to look at today like it's the weekend
[] If I do that I can always go with the flow
[] I ain't gotta wake up early
[] So I'ma make ya some banana pancake
TN: the above is the banana pancake song, i need help with making it sound more lyrical

"" Oooh! What a rare sight.

"" Mami, you're listening to Western music?

"" Ohh, this? // Tarou was listening to it...

ST: air gutiar
SFX: pon (moving around the place)


pg 051

"" Puhaha
"" Hold on...
"" Sorry...
"" ...

"" Mami is kinda...
ST:
"" Cute like this.

<> Cute?

"" Seriously?
ST: Spacing out

[] I guess I've become less tense by eating his confestionaries and pancakes.

"" Speak of the devil.
SFX: Hahaha


pg 052

"" Tar-...

ST: Ow that hurts. You superwoman!
ST: Huh what?
ST: You're just too skinny.

ST: Ho ho.
ST: Thanks, see you later.


pg 053

"" Oh?


pg 054

"" Shirakawa-sempai, were you here the whole time!?
ST: surprised me

"" ......
"" That girl just now...

"" Ohh, she's just a girl from my class.
"" How should I say this... she's kinda like my fighting partner.
TN: in a joking manner of course

"" I told her if I make some good pancakes, I'd give her some.
[] There's something sweet...
"" She really loves sweet stuff.
"" Oh! Sempai, would you like some too?
[] Stuck in my throat.
"" This time, I'm pretty confident.
"" No, I don't any.


pg 055

[] It's pitch black.
"" I hate it.

[] I'm going to vomit.

"" I hate...
"" You and your sweets.


pg 056

"" Mami?

"" Why are you all spacing out now?
"" Ohh, sorry.
"" Anyway, did you order that thing, Mami?
"" Huh?

"" ......
"" I did not.
ST: ホットコーヒー I ordered a hot coffee.
ST: マサカ Of course.
"" I knew it.


pg 057

"" I can't imagine you eating sweets.

ST: Sorry.

[] "Would you like to have some banana pancakes?"

[] "She loves sweet stuff."
[] I don't wa-...
[] Huh??

[] Jeez.
[] Everyone and their
[] Sweets, sweets, sweets.


pg 058

[] It's hard to squeeze.
SFX: squeeeze

SFX: splat
"" Hey... wha-!!

"" Is something wrong, Mami!? You're certainly using a lot of chocolate syrup!

[] I always...

[] have my coffee black. The title "Sugars" doesn't really match me. I always act cold when someone likes me. But as for me, if there's a time I gotta do something, I'll do it.
TN: needs to sound more epic


pg 059

SFX: scrape scrape

SFX: gulp
[] I'll become sweet... for your sake.

ST: Ehh!?
SFX: gata (suddenly gets up)

"" Sorry Kie, there's somewhere I have to go.
"" I'll exomplain to you later.

"" Wai-. Ehhh!? Ehhhh!?
(I guess that's fine but...)


pg 060

[] At this rate... // I'll lose him.

"" Tarou

SFX: pant pant


pg 061

"" Sempai?

" About...
"" About the stuff I said yesterday...

[] I want to tell him that...
[] I wanted to eat the pancakes.
"" I didn't really mean it.


pg 062

[] I want to tell Tarou right now.

"" It's just that I...
[] I have to tell him.

pg 063

SFX: straight forward
"" This.
"" I'm not going.

"" Oh, you don't like park performances!?
ST: Then how about the aquarium?
"" No that's not it.

ST: She rejected me...
"" I'm saying that I don't want to go with you.
ST: like everyone told me she would...

ST:
"" But...


pg 064

"" Thank you.

ST: And again.
[] At last...

[] I told him my feelings splendidly, but in the end I was rejected. (I knew that would happen.)
[] "I'm sorry"

[] "I like someone else"
TN: so i'm a little confused about this situation too. apparently after she said "thank you" there was some un-shown scene where she confessed to him.

[] I feel okay though because I've come to realize a lot of feelings that I did not before.


pg 065

[] Next time, if I like someone...

ST: Did you reject someone again?
ST: Sure... anyway, I'm hungry.

"" My bad
SFX: bump

ST: What should we have for lunch?
[] I'll be more honest with my feelings to that person.

ST: Really!? A home-made bento!? For me!?

[] And...

[] I'm even crying.
"" Mami? Are you okay?


pg 066

"" I'll have that person

"" It's nothing.
SFX: giggle

"" Make me some of my favorite pancakes.


pg 067

<> The Sugarless Girl and Banana Pancakes

There wasn't really a guy that fit my tastes this time.
I felt like I had a rough time drawing.
I kept thinking "how do I draw someone that's cute...!?"
Them, some of my helpers were like "how about this and that and this"... poor Tarou.
Coincidentally at that time, I was listening to the perfect song to do with the story, Jack Johnson's "Banana Pancakes."
Mami was popular beacuse she's a girl. I love tsundere girls. <3 <3

TN: below is from left to right
* Shirakawa Mami.
Born on December 3rd.
Blood Type: AB
163cm, 49kg
TN: 5'3.5" , 108 pounds

* Benihara Tarou
Born on September 10th
Blood Type: B
167cm, 56kg
TN: 5'5" , 123.5 pounds

TN: are you serious? finally someone that's shorter than me. but its a manga character. i feel like a midget in my city. it's hard to meet girls. T_T;

SFX: jin jin jin (numb feeling)
[] 何 What's up with him.
[] 肩 Is his shoulder made out of metal!?
[] Jeez that hurt

[] Owwww

<> シュガーずはみだしげきじょー Sugar's Alternate Ending
<> Mo
TN: thats whats on his shirt


pg 068

<> And yet some more ranting.

All of the guys I kept trying to draw looked like shaggy old men.
I keep trying to draw "idol" like boys but I can't.
My type of guy would be Odagiri Joe-san, I daresay!!
And maybe Natsume Souseki... Matsu Ken-san (he can't dance), Eita-san, Itou Atsushi-san, James MvAvoy, Josh Harnett (Ah now I've go into foreigners) that's about it.
And some guys which moustaches look good on are nice too.
Because of that sometimes I end up drawing moustaches in in the manga and of course my supervisor says to me "Yamamori-san... having moustaches in Shoujo comics is a bit..." in a cutely irritated way. Sorry.
I like skinny looking guys in mangas.
Skinny guys with capris and slightly sagging , and sharp jaw line are nice too! Ehehe!
To be honest, I tried to draw but it didn't work out... I won't go into the details...　(I'll keep it civil)
Oh and I like Robert de niro too.
I guess I should stop there.

I-I'll do my best!!

Josh Harnett in "Parasite" looks so hote from the side!! Look!
Josh Harnett

Look's like he has a little bed hair. <3

"" Sorry but
"" Moustaches are a bit...
TN: above is for the lil manga dialogue on the phone

TN: all crazy looking guys, except for Itou Atsushi-san <3