Shibatora 90

pg01

random text on the side (usu taken out for tankouban though): Sprinting off everyday to do things. The only time to be calm is the warm breakfast-time, and the cook is, of course, Taketora.

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Mitsuki: Mm... so that Oni's now gone to Yuuji's company to work?
Taketora: Yeah, since Asakura's injuries haven't completely healed yet.
[small text] They just happened to have a vacancy.

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Mitsuki: He's just been released from jail and doesn't seem like the smart type. Can he cope?
small text above soup: fuuu (blowing)
Taketora: He'll be OK!

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Taketora: Katou will definitely work hard.
Taketora: I believe in him!

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Mitsuki: ...oh yeah, you should be getting to work, right?
Taketora: Eh? It's still early...

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Mitsuki: Oh, but it's been this time for a long time already...

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Taketora: What-! Why didn't you say so earlier!
Mitsuki: Dear, be careful on the road! [K: or whatever she uses to address her husband]

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pg02

Taketora: I'm going to be late-! [K: all long dashes]

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File90. sneak shot

sign: no idea, sorry...

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Taketora: pant
pant
pant

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small sfx: no idea << I need the raw for this ><
large sfx: stare-

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sfx: pant
pant

Girl: M...
M...
Morning.

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pg03

sfx: smile

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sign: don't know ><
sfx: flash [K: the sfx means it's lit]

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sfx: OOHHH
bike sfx: whirrrrrr

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Friend: What? Come on, XXXXX!

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Yurie: AAAAH! Ruka! I said hi to him!
Yurie: Didn't you think that that boy was cute?
Yurie: Probably a middle-schooler. I think younger than me by 1 or 2 years?

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Ruka: I don't know... I have no interest in guys younger than me.

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Yurie: Whatever! It's good that you aren't interested!
small text: This way I won't have to worry about you stealing him away!
You're so pretty that if you like this type, I'll get mad!

Ruka: Huh? What's so good about that kid?

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pg04

Ruka: I won't settle for anything less than the Three Highs!
Yurie: What Three Highs?

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Ruka: High level of education, high salary and high height.
Ruka: I heard that this was the expectation of boyfriends in the past.
small text: That's what my mother said.

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Yurie: What? I don't get it!

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Ruka: Anyway-!

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Ruka: Anyone that looks like a kid is a no.
small text: I really won't go for that.

Chiba: Even though you are really enthusiastic when working,
but if you don't manage to overcome this bad habit... [K: lateness]

Taketora: pant...
pant...
pant...

Yes! I'm really sorry!
I'll buy a new alarm clock!

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pg05

Taketora: Huh...
I should really get a new alarm clock...

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Man: Nonsense!
Taketora: Eh?

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Taketora: Hm? They're the girls from just now...
Taketora: Why are they still here?
small text: What about school?

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Taketora: What happened?
Man: Oh, are you a friend of theirs?

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Taketora: No, I'm not...
Yurie: It's him!

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Yurie: This... this person took a picture of Ruka's underskirt in the staircase of the station!
Man: What are you talking about!

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Man: You just want to frame me with these words!
Man: You brats...

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pg06

Ruka: Huh? What are YOU talking about, geezer!
I heard the sound of your phone taking photos!

Ruka: Even though you tried to block it with a cough, but my ears are really sensitive and I heard it all!

Man: What? Nonsense, you skank!

Ruka: Skank?
small text: Calling me a skank!

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Taketora: Can both of you calm down?
Taketora: Let's calmly go over the situation again.

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Man: ...I was only climbing the stairs,
Man: so how could I take those pictures? You have to look at who you're talking to! [K: if you could find a phrase that incorporates sneakily taking pictures into one phrase yeah that would be great XD]

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Ruka: Then take out your phone!
Ruka: The proof should be inside.

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Man: I know! You're trying to extort money from me with these methods...
Man: This has become quite popular amongst female high schoolers lately!

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pg07

Man: Which school do you study at? Let me see your student ID!
Ruka: What?
Ruka: You're covering up your embarrassment with anger! [K: ok that is a lame way of putting it, would be nice if it was shorter]
If you take out your phone, I'll show you my student ID!

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Man: Really?

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Man: All right, then I'll let you see my phone.
Man: If there are no pictures of you inside...

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Ruka: What...?

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Man: I'll tell your school that you two threatened me!
Man: You'll both be expelled!

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Yurie: That's fine, right? Ruka...
Ruka: No problem!
Yurie: Eh?

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pg08

Man: All right! Then just take it and check!

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Ruka: click click

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Man: Well?
Are there any photos?

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Yurie: There aren't... what should we do?

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Ruka: You have another one, don't you?

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Man: Want to check my briefcase?

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Man: Or check my pockets?
Man: I won't scream pervert even if you two touch me.

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Taketora: Can you allow me to check for them?

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Man: Eh?
Man: Go ahead...

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pg09

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Taketora: It looks like there aren't any other phones.
Ruka: What?
Ruka: But he really...

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Man: See, you really threatened me! [K: alternatively replace all threatens with blackmail]

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Man: Placing the crime of taking sneak photos on an innocent working-class member...
Man: planning to extort money from him, right?

Ruka: N... no, we wouldn't do this...

Man: I'll tell you up straight. Don't think that just because you're protected by juvenile law nothing much will happen to you.

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pg10

Man: Once I go to the police station and accuse you, you might as well just wait for your expulsion!
Man: This matter will spread quickly. You'll be seen as criminals and pictures of you will be all over the Internet.

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Man: In this society, once you take one wrong step...
Man: your life is over!

Man: In the end you'll be so low that you'll work in a nightclub...

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Yurie: S...

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Yurie: Sorry! We were wrong!
Ruka: W... wait! Yurie!

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Man: Wrong...
Man: What?

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Man: You have to be joking! I had a very important meeting today.
Man: It's all over because of you!

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pg11

Man: Kneel down and apologise!
Then I'll forgive you!

Girls: This...
Girls: Here?

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Taketora: Asking them to kneel here...
I think we should just go to the police station and talk it over.

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Man: No, it's fine!
Man: We don't need the police for this,

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Man: hurry up, kneel and apologise, and I'll forgive you!

Yurie: Hey... we have no choice... just kneel.

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Ruka: I... I understand.

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Taketora: Please wait.

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pg12

Taketora: Please let me look at your phone again.

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Man: You won't find something that isn't there no matter how much you look!

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Taketora: True...
sfx: click click

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Taketora: Not just sneak photos... there isn't even one photo...
phone: No photos present. [K: or something tech lingo-y]

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Man: Because I wouldn't even use my phone to take pictures.

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Taketora: But this phone...
one of its biggest merits is its high photo resolution.

Taketora: Would someone who doesn't plan to take photos with it actually buy it? Really...

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pg13

Taketora: Not even one photo on it, maybe...
sfx: click click

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Taketora: As I thought!
Taketora: You've set it so that photos are saved directly to the memory card.

Man: surprise/shock

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Ruka: Eh?

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Taketora: But there isn't a memory card in the phone...
Taketora: What's going on?

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Man: I really don't know a lot about mobile phones. Maybe I set it by accident?

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Man: I haven't installed those memory card things since I bought it,
you can search me if you don't believe me!

Man: And my briefcase too.
Man (smaller): And my suit pockets...

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Taketora: You... look a little nervous. You pushed your glasses up quite a few times.
Taketora: Are you focusing on where everyone is looking at?

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Taketora: Your shoes are also polished well,
Taketora: And the buttons of your suit are buttoned neatly.

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pg14

Taketora: But why is it only your tie that's so loose?

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Man: S... so what?
The weather is very hot today...

Taketora: But...

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Taketora: why is your shirt buttoned up so high?

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TAketora: You saw the the high school girls were looking for you, and recognised the danger.
sfx: reach
Taketora: So you took the memory card out of your phone...

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pg15

Taketora: And hid it here!

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Taketora: At that time you panicked, and just slipped it in your tie. That's why it looks so messy.
Taketora: And if you tried to fix it, the card might fall out...

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Taketora: That's why you let your tie stay loose.
Taketora: This is that memory card, right?

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pg16

Ruka: You... you lowlife!
Ruka: So you really...

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Man: Return it, ingrate! [K: ok, seriously, don't use ingrate. My insult vocabulary isn't that large so i don't know what a professional would say]

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Man: I...

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Man: I'll get you!

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Man: Aah!

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pg17

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Man: Ooh...
Man: Cough! (or Hack!)

sfx: splat splat

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Taketora: I apologise for forgetting to take this out sooner.
sfx man: quiver quiver

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Taketora: I'm a police officer from Ko...(the name of the province) Youth Group (sorry I don't know the appropriate terminology, I would need the furigana for that ><)

Taketora: and I'm arresting you for the crime of taking sneak photos! (K: again, something more cool sounding XD)

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pg18

Man: P... police?
Man: No way...

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Taketora: He may have been a repeat offender.
Taketora: Thank you for your help.

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Yurie: no... no way...
Yurie: He's an adult?
Yurie: Shock...

Ruka: So... so cool...

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Taketora: Could I ask you to follow me to the police station? I need you to record down what happened.
Girls: Yes... of course!

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pg19

Yurie: Ah, we can't! We have an exam to get to!
sfx: bow

Taketora: Eh, is that so?

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Yurie: Yes! So can you just clear that memory card for us, Mr. Policeman?

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Yurie: Come on!
Ruka: Oh... yeah.

Taketora: Hey! Wait...
Taketora: Can you contact me after...

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Taketora: Be... be careful...

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Yurie: That shocked me! I didn't think that he could be a policeman!

Ruka: But you really can't tell!

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Yurie: Speaking of which...
sfx: click click
Yurie: That was really annoying.

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pg20

Yurie: To think that we'd become victims of sneak photos...
small texT: ha ha ha...

Ruka: Idiot! There are many ways to mute the phone!

Phone:
top: Display all photos

buttons: left: Back
middle: Show (or Select)
right: Delete

magazine text: The "crimes" fill up the screen!
"The weak victims" are actually a fierce female sneak photo pair!

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Yurie: We took a whole load this morning too!

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Ruka: What do you say to raising the price of face shots to 500 yen each?

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