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My first translation for Ivyscan. Corrections and help were given by vvhime, kurenai and Conner from that site. Scanlation is reserved for Ivyscan but don't worry! They're working on it!
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Front cover
Aruko MC MARGARET COMICS
Bessatsu Margaret
Yasuko to Kenji (Yasuko & Kenji)
1
Spine
Bessatsu Margaret
MARGARET COMICS
Yasuko to Kenji 1
Aruko
3885
Shueisha
Absolutely hilarious, hands down! The battle of the peerless siblings!!
Since the death of her parents, Oki Yasuko, a second-year high school student, has been living with her mangaka big brother Kenji, who used to be the boss of a biker gang. Bickering nonstop, their relationship is hardly harmonious.
One day in the cram school Kenji forces her to attend, Yasuko falls in love with Tsubaki Jun. But chaos ensues because of the history that Kenji and Jun's sister Erica share!
-Included works-
Yasuko to Kenji #1
Especially written for this volume, Cyborg Rabako
The most horrible, awful, self-centered ass of a big brother
VS
the romantic urchin of a little sister
MC MARGARET COMICS
Bessatsu Margaret
ON KENJI'S SHIRT, LEFT
Total Ownage
ON KENJI'S SHIRT, RIGHT
Hello and drop dead!
Front flap
Other popular titles for you to enjoy:
Starless Blue
Love Letter
High Score 2 volumes
Mitsuami to Akai Jitensha
Ginga
Yasuko to Kenji #1
Back flap
Comment from the author, Aruko
Hello. This is Aruko. I see liquor stores with "Aruko" written on their signboards here and there. The other day, I found a municipal pool named Aruko. Things like this give me a sense of intimacy.
-Aruko
Title page
Yasuko to Kenji 1
by Aruko
--
Table of contents:
Yasuko to Kenji (1) ..... (page 3)
Cyborg Rabako ........ (page 181)
P1
SFX: slap
SFX: Slap slap
SFX: Slap slap slap
SFX: Scurry
SFX: Scurry
SFX: Sigh~~
Sign: Parent-Teacher Conferences
B1: Please excuse me.
SFX: open
p2
b1: Welcome.
SFX: shock
b2: Ah, you must be Oki-san.
small: ?!
BL1: Please have a seat.
b3: Thank you.
SFX: Slam
b4: I'm Yasuko's older brother.
b5: Thank you for taking care of my little sister.
BL2: Brother: Kenji (24)
BL3: Sister: Yasuko (17)
p3
b1: So... you're her brother.
small in bubble: Umm... Why are you here?
B2: I'm her legal guardian.
BL1: Sorry about that.
b3: Our mother and father are both dead
BL2: That's right...
BL3: Ha ha
b4: Excuse me, but what do you do for a living?
B5: I'm a mangaka.
BL4: ...he is my only family.
b6: So, Sateoki-sensei,
b7: how is my Yasuko doing?
BL5: This is because our parents died six years ago in a traffic accident.
BL6: My brother and I live together happily as friends and siblings. <3
b8: Well, she's extremely cheerful.
b9: And her studies?
B10: Terrible.
b11: WHAT?
BL7: Well, that's a lie.
p4
BL1: You idiot!
BL2: Come here. I'm going to tie you to your desk!
B1: Useless! Useless! Untalented and an idiot, too! You won't be able to become a rockin' adult if you stay this way!
b2: Owww!
b3: It's always like this.
b4: I don't need to be told that by you!
small: You're such a pig, you just walked through everyone!
b5: What did you say? What did you call your brother?
BL4: No!!!
b6: I mean, let me walk on my own!
BL5: Shh, shh
BL6: People will think I know you.
b7: You'd better prepare yourself. I'm going to make sure you study seriously.
b8: What? No!
B9: Don't give me that!
B10: This corrupt world isn't so nice you can live your life slacking off.
p5
BL1: I hate guys like that.
BL2: Noisy.
BL3: Pushy.
BL4: Brutal.
b1: ...
BL6: He really tied me up...
sign: Oki
BL7: Even though he's family...
BL8: Let me go!!!
SFX: scritch
BL9: Let me go! You devil!
SFX: clunk
SFX: clunk clunk
SFX: scritch scritch
p6
b1: Boss~
b2: You're going too far~ Poor Yasuko-san~
b3:Yeah~
SFX: roll
b4: Call me Kenken sensei when we're working.
BL1: Oki Kenji: former hoodlum and wild bunch Naked Gun's boss.
Oki Kenji: Former hoodlum and Naked Gun's boss.
Currently a mangaka known as Kenken (pen name).
b5: I-I'm sorry, Kenken-sensei.
BL2: Nickname: Mosu. Former Naked Gun chief bodyguard. Presently, Kenken's art student.
BL3: Nickname: Adidas. Former boss of Naked Gun's Kamikaze unit. Presently, same as the other guy.
BL4: Shut up and study.
SFX: thump
SFX: bang
BL6: He's always such a nuisance.
BL7: For example...
p7
BL1: ...times like this...
b1: Hey, Yasuko.
b2: scary~
BL2: Kenji in actve service
BL3: Stepping back
BL4: or this...
b3: Hey, Yasuko.
b4: Scary~
BL5: When he became a mangaka.
BL6: Stepping back
BL8: I can't even count the number of times he made me suffer through things like that.
BL9: I can even think of more
BL10: Yasuko!
BL11: Yasuko!
BL12: Yasuko!
BL13: Interfering all the time is just part of his bad nature.
SFX: chirp
SFX: chirp
SFX: Chiiiin
BL4: I'm leaving.
BL5: All right, off to school.
b5: Hey, Yasuko.
p8
b1: You've got cram school starting today.
b2: Cram school?!
BL1: bleh blehhh
B3: What's up with that? I had no idea! Don't just do things like that on your own!
b4: I'm going to karaoke with my friends today.
SFX: Splash
SFX: flush
SFX: Zip
SFX: wham
b5: What were you saying about an empty bucket?*
[*karaoke – empty (kara) orchestra (oke), oke could also mean bucket]
B6: Huh?
BL1: Late sleeper
BL2: Hey...
BL3: Hey! You didn't wash your hands!
BL4: This is what our home is like.
p9
BL1: I feel like school is a place where I can relax.
b1: Yasuko!
B2: Let's go to karaoke.
b3: I'm coming!
BL2: Pshhht, forget about cram school.
BL3: What are you going to sing?
SFX: chatter chatter
SFX: chatter chatter
SFX: chatter chatter
p10
SFX: turn
b1: It's time for cram school.
b2: N-no!
sfx: ?!
p11
b1: Go study!
BL1: Tyrant!!
small talk by Kenji: See you
BL2: What are they talking about? I have no clue what this stuff is.
BL3: You think I'm going to get smarter just by going to cram school?!
BL4: Cheapskate
SFX: Scratch scratch scratch scratch scratch
b2: I'm going to get a lecture when I get home.
p12
BL1: Oh.
BL2: He's reading manga.
SFX: Ha ha ha
p13:
SFX: thump
sign on street? “A” Cram School
tag on back of shirt? Lecturer
BL1: Hey!
B1: Um!!
p14:
b1: I'm sorry about before. Because of me he found out you were reading manga and got mad at you.
b2: Ah...
b3: No problem.
SFX: Kyun...
b4: Bye.
BL1: W-wait!
SFX: twist
SFX: crash
BL2: Uwah...
p15
b1: ...Are you OK?
BL1: Ah ha ha
b2: I'm fine! I trip a lot!
B3: Really? Is it like one person sumo-wrestling?*
[*In Sumo wrestling you're trying to trip the other person]
B4: You're weird.
b5: Here.
p16
BL1: Wah.
b1:Thanks.
sfx:kyun
b2: No problem.
b3: Wow, you go to N-High?
BL2: That's a boys' school, right?
b4:You must be smart.
b5: Not really.
b6: Ah, I'm a 2nd year at K-High, Oki Yasuko.
BL3: Same year as you.
p17
b1: I'm Tsubaki.
b2: Tsubaki Jun
BL1: Jun-sama.
BL2: So your reading manga in class didn't mean anything, I guess
BL3: Yeah, it doesn't matter. I can listen while I read.
BL4: Seriously? That's amazing!!
b3: Well, I've got to go that way.
b4: You don't take the train?
B5: Nope, I walk.
b6: All right...
Sfx: dejected
BL5: I wanted to talk to him longer.
b7: Bye.
p18
b1: See you tomorrow at cram school.
BL1: “See you tomorrow.”
SFX: clang clang [need translation for this sfx]
SFX: clang clang
BL2: Tsubaki-kun... I...
BL3: get the feeling we're going to be in love.
p19
b1: You look like you're slacking.
SFX: Unsightly
b2: You're relaxed. That's proof.
b3: What the hell is this?
BL1: The lid from a soy sauce bottle
b4: Why is this fried with the tempura?
B5: Huh? I must have accidentally put that in.
b6: WAKE UP!!
SFX: BANG
b7: Hot!
SFX: Splash
B8: Do idiots live bracing themselves in their own idiotic way? [I guess to get the meaning I would say something like “Do idiots live in their own world?”]
B9: If you're this careless, you could get accidentally die tomorrow!
BL2: You klutz!
BL3: Shut up with all the “idiot idiot” stuff.
b10: Fine. If you don't like it, I'll eat it all myself!
BL3: Don't talk back.
b11: Is that the way brats today spew out words?
B12: Don't say “spew words.”
BL4: Don't say brat, either.
p20
b1: So, how was cram school?
BL1: Huh?
B2: What's this all of a sudden?
B3: I asked you how it was.
b4: It--
b5: It was...
b6: It was fine! I won't try to skip anymore!
BL2: Oh, I'd better prepare for class!
BL2: That was close.
p21
BL1: If I told him I met someone cool at cram school who makes my heart beat fast
If I had told him I met some cool guy at cram school who makes my heart race--
BL2: A brat being head over heels in love!
BL3: Don't lose sight of reality and just play around!
BL4: What a pain...
...
BL5: I wonder if he's ever been in love.
BL6: LOVE
b1: Gross!
B2: I can't imagine that.
BL7: I'm going to sleep.
p22
b1: Wh-what? Yasuko, you started cram school?
BL1: So that's what happened yesterday.
B2: Yep.
b3: You seem cheerful about it, Miss I-Hate-Studying!
BL1: That's because...
BL2: I've fallen in love.
Author's note: (Gomaisatsu)
How are you all doing? This is Aruko, I'm doing good. Thank you to everybody who picked up this book!! I'm really grateful. Anyway, this the way I usually write these messages to all of you. Without fail alone and writing very small. Right now it's 3 in the morning. And nobody's home. Waaaaaah. Aruko the Night King. And every time the thought that “What if nobody will even read this...” crosses my mind I fall "fyuu" into a pit of emptiness.
SFX: Fyuu
Arrow: Empty hole
Until page 63
p23
b1: All right. Now this question.
b2: You, tell me the answer.
BL1: I want to get closer to him.
b3: You with the pigtails, by the window!
b4: Hey! Stand up!
BL2: If we become friends maybe he'll talk to me...
SFX: thump
b5: He's looking at me. (heart)
b1: HEY! I'M TALKING TO YOU! YOU!
SFX: startle
B2: Me?!
B3: What?!
B4: Where?!
P24
b1: The answer.
BL1: Tsubaki-kun.
Small talk in corner of 3rd panel: Yes, very good
BL2: You really are awesome.
b2: Hm?
B3: Thanks for earlier!
Giving me the answer, I mean.
b4: Huh?
Oh.
b5: Don't worry about it.
b6: Um.
BL3: Umm umm
b7 As thanks, can I treat you to something?!
b8: Do you want to go get some tea with me?!
p25
b1: Huh? No, that's OK.
b2: Bye.
BL1: W-wait!
SFX: trip
SFX: grab
B3: ...You fell again.
p26
b1: Wahh
I'm sorry!!
BL1: I'm sorry~~~
BL2: Sorry!
BL3: Sorry!
b2: Hah
b3: You're really weird!
b4: Bye-bye.
SFX: squeeze
p27
BL1: Tsubaki-kun,
BL2: I like you!
SFX: apply
SFX: braid
B1: Eek! When did you get here?!
Small talk (on his head) Hurry up and move
B2: Brats like you shouldn't try to look all fashionable. (It's too early in the morning.)
SFX: Embarrassed
b3: Everything you say is irritating.
b4: It's normal. I'm leaving.
b5: You'd better go to cram school after classes finish.
b6: I told you I'd go.
BL3: So obedient...
p28
BL1: I want to hurry up and see Tsubaki-kun, so there's no choice.
b1: From now on, students who get red marks on the quizzes will have to stay late and do make up work.
b2: You're going to have to work hard so you don't get red marks.
BL2: Totally got a red mark.
b3: Huh? Only me?
B4: So I have to do this whole thing?
B5: That's ridiculous.
p29
b1: It's lame to have to stay after for cram school, isn't it?
b2: Yeah!
Ah ha ha ha.
BL1: I'm so uncool.
SFX: slide
b3: I'll help.
b4: You probably won't be able to finish it by yourself.
p30
BL1: Tsubaki-kun...
b1: So the answer is “A”?
b2: Is it?
B3 Don't ask me. I just explained it!
Small bubble: You weren't listening!
BL2: He's so kind.
Small bubble: What about this?
Small bubble: Like I said-
BL3: He's totally different from HIM.
Sfx: scratch
b3: Late...
p31
b1: I'm pretty sure Mosu will be here soon.
SFX: irritated
b2: What is that Yasuko doing? Cram school should have been over awhile ago.
BL1: Oh, that's who he meant.
b3: Thank you, Tsubaki-kun!
BL2: You saved me.
b4: You're welcome.
b5: As-- As thanks--
b6: I said it's OK.
b7: Ah, I'm hungry! Hungry... Yeah, that's it!
SFX: Please.
SFX: Please.
SFX: Please.
b8: All right...
Do you want to go get something to eat?
P32
BL1: YES~!
BL2: I'd like a Big Mac, fries, and a coke. And also a teriyaki burger. Ah, and the L-set, and...
BL3: You can't eat all that.
BL4:On top of that...
SFX: munch munch
BL5: this is kind of...
BL6: Ha ha
b1: You've got food on your face.
p33
BL1: ...like a date.
BL2: When I'm with Tsubaki-kun, I enjoy myself so much, I forget about everything else.
b1: Ahh~ Yasuko-san,
so you're on a date.
p34
Sign: Oki
b1: I'm sorry I'm late.
SFX: irritated
b2: What's up with the boss?
BL1: I haven't even had dinner yet.
B3: Yasuko's late getting home.
b4: Next on the news--
b5: A high school girl was kidnapped by an unknown assailant...
b5: The following day, her body was discovered--
Television: illegible
BL1: WHAT THE HELL IS THAT BRAT DOING?
SFX: gnaw gnaw
P35
b1: Ha ha ha.
Boss, you're worrying too much.
b2: Yasuko-san is just on a date.
(I happened to see her on the way here.)
SFX: snap
b3: What did you just say?
SFX: sunset
b4: Uh-oh.
BL1: I totally lost track of time.
Phone: [All the lines say “him' or "that jerk'. At the bottom the note outside says “that jerk” is Kenji]
BL2: roar
p36
SFX: faint
BL1: Hey.
BL2: Hey.
b1: He's going to kill me.
b2: If you keep swaying like that, you're going to fall again.
BL3: Grrr~~
BL4: Grrr~
BL5: Grrr~~~~
?!
?
p37:
SFX: dash
b1: I'm sorry, Tsubaki-kun. Don't ask anything. Just run!
B2: Hun?!
BL1: She can't run away from me.
BL1: Spirit of Hitomi Kinue*!
*First Japanese woman runner to win an Olympic medal
BL2: Give me your speed!
sfx: zoom
P38
SFX: zoom
SFX: zoom
SFX: trip
SFX: SPLAT
BL1: Uwah
b1: Hey...
SFX: turn
b2: I'm sorry! Are you all right?!
P39
b1: ....I'm fine but.....
I'm fine, but...
b2: you don't look so good.
SFX: Huh?
BL1: What?
BL2: Boss, what are you doing?
BL3: Huh?!
BL4: Please come with us.
BL5: Let me go.
BL6: Ahh, You're bleeding.
BL7: What were you doing...?
BL8: Let go of me!
BL9: Stop it!
SFX: phew
b3: Do you want to stop by my house?
Since it's right by here.
b4: You can't ride the train looking like that.
b5: Eh? (heart)
BL7: Tsubaki-kun's house?
P40
Sign: Tsubaki Flowers~
b1: Tsubaki Flowers? So it's a flower shop.
That's so cool!
B2: What's cool about that?
B3: This way.
b4: Ah, yes.
BL1: Is this OK? It's already night time.
b5: Thank you for allowing me to come into your house.
b6: I'm home~
p41
SFX: Hmm?
Apron: Tsubaki Flowers
BL1: Wow!
b1: This is my sister.
b2: So pretty! Like a model.
b3: I'm his sister Erika.
BL2: Thank you (heart)
BL3: She's so tall.
b4: What's this? You've got a girlfriend?
B5: She's not my girlfriend.
BL4: Oh, come on <3
b5: You never told me!
P42
b1: Aw, shut up. (sweat drop)
b2: Have you eaten dinner yet?
B3: If you have, would you like some tea?
BL1: It must be so great...
for siblings to get along like this.
b4: Forget the tea. Have you looked at her?
BL2: She's injured.
b5: Oh, my!
What happened!? I'm so sorry I didn't notice.
BL3: Terrible, terrible! Where's the first aid kit?
b6: Wow, you have such a great relationship with your sister.
b7: Isn't it normal?
BL4: She's... she's so kind.
SFX: Stare
BL5: It's nice here. Completely different from my home.
BL6: I'd so much rather have this kind sister than my brutal brother who won't even allow me to have company over.
p43
BL1: I was thinking about making croquettes for dinner tonight.
BL2: That sounds great! Why don't we make them together?
BL3: Ah...
BL4: How great!
BL5: This is delicious, Yasuko.
BL5: That would be so nice...
BL6: Heh heh heh
b1: There, all done.
b2: I was so surprised that Jun brought a girl home.
b3: Oh, thank you so much! I'm sorry I didn't thank you earlier.
b4: I'm Oki Yasuko. I go to the same cram school as Tsubaki-kun.
b5: Oki?
P44
b1: Do you have a brother by any chance, Yasuko-chan?
B2: Ah, yes.
I do.
b3: Where did he go to middle school?
B4: How old is he?
What's his name?!
sfx: huff huff huff
BL1: What's gotten into you all of a sudden?
SFX: Rumble rumble rumble THUD!
SFX: Crash
?!
SFX: bang
p45
BL1: Wha--
BL2: what is he doing?!!
b1: What are those hoodlums doing...
in front of the store?
BL3: Oh, no. Oh, no.
b2: I'll go call the police.
BL4: WHAT?
p46
b1: It's dangerous, so you'd better go inside.
BL2: Boss, please don't make a scene.
BL3: Oh, no.
BL4: Oh, no.
b2: YA-
SU-
KO.
b3: Huh?
BL1: No!!!
b4: I'm pretty sure he just said Yasuko.
BL2: He'll totally hate me if he finds out a guy like that is my brother.
b5: Are you listening to what your brother is saying, you idiot?!
b6: Brother?!
BL3: No~~~
b7: I know you like to dawdle on your way home, but you've been wandering around all this time without even contacting me!
SFX: Ba [??]
[It describes her sudden appearance. I think it’s better to just put the explanation near the sfx.]
p47
BL1: Erika-san?!
B1: It's been a long time, hasn't it,
b2: Oki Kenji?
p48
BL1: Huh?
BL2: It's been a long time?!
BL3: What?!
SFX: rumble rumble
SFX: rumble rumble
BL4: They know each other?!
SFX: rumble rumble rumble rumble
RESERVED FOR IVYSCAN
Front cover
Aruko MC MARGARET COMICS
Bessatsu Margaret
Yasuko to Kenji (Yasuko & Kenji)
1
Spine
Bessatsu Margaret
MARGARET COMICS
Yasuko to Kenji 1
Aruko
3885
Shueisha
Absolutely hilarious, hands down! The battle of the peerless siblings!!
Since the death of her parents, Oki Yasuko, a second-year high school student, has been living with her mangaka big brother Kenji, who used to be the boss of a biker gang. Bickering nonstop, their relationship is hardly harmonious.
One day in the cram school Kenji forces her to attend, Yasuko falls in love with Tsubaki Jun. But chaos ensues because of the history that Kenji and Jun's sister Erica share!
-Included works-
Yasuko to Kenji #1
Especially written for this volume, Cyborg Rabako
The most horrible, awful, self-centered ass of a big brother
VS
the romantic urchin of a little sister
MC MARGARET COMICS
Bessatsu Margaret
ON KENJI'S SHIRT, LEFT
Total Ownage
ON KENJI'S SHIRT, RIGHT
Hello and drop dead!
Front flap
Other popular titles for you to enjoy:
Starless Blue
Love Letter
High Score 2 volumes
Mitsuami to Akai Jitensha
Ginga
Yasuko to Kenji #1
Back flap
Comment from the author, Aruko
Hello. This is Aruko. I see liquor stores with "Aruko" written on their signboards here and there. The other day, I found a municipal pool named Aruko. Things like this give me a sense of intimacy.
-Aruko
Title page
Yasuko to Kenji 1
by Aruko
--
Table of contents:
Yasuko to Kenji (1) ..... (page 3)
Cyborg Rabako ........ (page 181)
P1
SFX: slap
SFX: Slap slap
SFX: Slap slap slap
SFX: Scurry
SFX: Scurry
SFX: Sigh~~
Sign: Parent-Teacher Conferences
B1: Please excuse me.
SFX: open
p2
b1: Welcome.
SFX: shock
b2: Ah, you must be Oki-san.
small: ?!
BL1: Please have a seat.
b3: Thank you.
SFX: Slam
b4: I'm Yasuko's older brother.
b5: Thank you for taking care of my little sister.
BL2: Brother: Kenji (24)
BL3: Sister: Yasuko (17)
p3
b1: So... you're her brother.
small in bubble: Umm... Why are you here?
B2: I'm her legal guardian.
BL1: Sorry about that.
b3: Our mother and father are both dead
BL2: That's right...
BL3: Ha ha
b4: Excuse me, but what do you do for a living?
B5: I'm a mangaka.
BL4: ...he is my only family.
b6: So, Sateoki-sensei,
b7: how is my Yasuko doing?
BL5: This is because our parents died six years ago in a traffic accident.
BL6: My brother and I live together happily as friends and siblings. <3
b8: Well, she's extremely cheerful.
b9: And her studies?
B10: Terrible.
b11: WHAT?
BL7: Well, that's a lie.
p4
BL1: You idiot!
BL2: Come here. I'm going to tie you to your desk!
B1: Useless! Useless! Untalented and an idiot, too! You won't be able to become a rockin' adult if you stay this way!
b2: Owww!
b3: It's always like this.
b4: I don't need to be told that by you!
small: You're such a pig, you just walked through everyone!
b5: What did you say? What did you call your brother?
BL4: No!!!
b6: I mean, let me walk on my own!
BL5: Shh, shh
BL6: People will think I know you.
b7: You'd better prepare yourself. I'm going to make sure you study seriously.
b8: What? No!
B9: Don't give me that!
B10: This corrupt world isn't so nice you can live your life slacking off.
p5
BL1: I hate guys like that.
BL2: Noisy.
BL3: Pushy.
BL4: Brutal.
b1: ...
BL6: He really tied me up...
sign: Oki
BL7: Even though he's family...
BL8: Let me go!!!
SFX: scritch
BL9: Let me go! You devil!
SFX: clunk
SFX: clunk clunk
SFX: scritch scritch
p6
b1: Boss~
b2: You're going too far~ Poor Yasuko-san~
b3:Yeah~
SFX: roll
b4: Call me Kenken sensei when we're working.
BL1: Oki Kenji: former hoodlum and wild bunch Naked Gun's boss.
Oki Kenji: Former hoodlum and Naked Gun's boss.
Currently a mangaka known as Kenken (pen name).
b5: I-I'm sorry, Kenken-sensei.
BL2: Nickname: Mosu. Former Naked Gun chief bodyguard. Presently, Kenken's art student.
BL3: Nickname: Adidas. Former boss of Naked Gun's Kamikaze unit. Presently, same as the other guy.
BL4: Shut up and study.
SFX: thump
SFX: bang
BL6: He's always such a nuisance.
BL7: For example...
p7
BL1: ...times like this...
b1: Hey, Yasuko.
b2: scary~
BL2: Kenji in actve service
BL3: Stepping back
BL4: or this...
b3: Hey, Yasuko.
b4: Scary~
BL5: When he became a mangaka.
BL6: Stepping back
BL8: I can't even count the number of times he made me suffer through things like that.
BL9: I can even think of more
BL10: Yasuko!
BL11: Yasuko!
BL12: Yasuko!
BL13: Interfering all the time is just part of his bad nature.
SFX: chirp
SFX: chirp
SFX: Chiiiin
BL4: I'm leaving.
BL5: All right, off to school.
b5: Hey, Yasuko.
p8
b1: You've got cram school starting today.
b2: Cram school?!
BL1: bleh blehhh
B3: What's up with that? I had no idea! Don't just do things like that on your own!
b4: I'm going to karaoke with my friends today.
SFX: Splash
SFX: flush
SFX: Zip
SFX: wham
b5: What were you saying about an empty bucket?*
[*karaoke – empty (kara) orchestra (oke), oke could also mean bucket]
B6: Huh?
BL1: Late sleeper
BL2: Hey...
BL3: Hey! You didn't wash your hands!
BL4: This is what our home is like.
p9
BL1: I feel like school is a place where I can relax.
b1: Yasuko!
B2: Let's go to karaoke.
b3: I'm coming!
BL2: Pshhht, forget about cram school.
BL3: What are you going to sing?
SFX: chatter chatter
SFX: chatter chatter
SFX: chatter chatter
p10
SFX: turn
b1: It's time for cram school.
b2: N-no!
sfx: ?!
p11
b1: Go study!
BL1: Tyrant!!
small talk by Kenji: See you
BL2: What are they talking about? I have no clue what this stuff is.
BL3: You think I'm going to get smarter just by going to cram school?!
BL4: Cheapskate
SFX: Scratch scratch scratch scratch scratch
b2: I'm going to get a lecture when I get home.
p12
BL1: Oh.
BL2: He's reading manga.
SFX: Ha ha ha
p13:
SFX: thump
sign on street? “A” Cram School
tag on back of shirt? Lecturer
BL1: Hey!
B1: Um!!
p14:
b1: I'm sorry about before. Because of me he found out you were reading manga and got mad at you.
b2: Ah...
b3: No problem.
SFX: Kyun...
b4: Bye.
BL1: W-wait!
SFX: twist
SFX: crash
BL2: Uwah...
p15
b1: ...Are you OK?
BL1: Ah ha ha
b2: I'm fine! I trip a lot!
B3: Really? Is it like one person sumo-wrestling?*
[*In Sumo wrestling you're trying to trip the other person]
B4: You're weird.
b5: Here.
p16
BL1: Wah.
b1:Thanks.
sfx:kyun
b2: No problem.
b3: Wow, you go to N-High?
BL2: That's a boys' school, right?
b4:You must be smart.
b5: Not really.
b6: Ah, I'm a 2nd year at K-High, Oki Yasuko.
BL3: Same year as you.
p17
b1: I'm Tsubaki.
b2: Tsubaki Jun
BL1: Jun-sama.
BL2: So your reading manga in class didn't mean anything, I guess
BL3: Yeah, it doesn't matter. I can listen while I read.
BL4: Seriously? That's amazing!!
b3: Well, I've got to go that way.
b4: You don't take the train?
B5: Nope, I walk.
b6: All right...
Sfx: dejected
BL5: I wanted to talk to him longer.
b7: Bye.
p18
b1: See you tomorrow at cram school.
BL1: “See you tomorrow.”
SFX: clang clang [need translation for this sfx]
SFX: clang clang
BL2: Tsubaki-kun... I...
BL3: get the feeling we're going to be in love.
p19
b1: You look like you're slacking.
SFX: Unsightly
b2: You're relaxed. That's proof.
b3: What the hell is this?
BL1: The lid from a soy sauce bottle
b4: Why is this fried with the tempura?
B5: Huh? I must have accidentally put that in.
b6: WAKE UP!!
SFX: BANG
b7: Hot!
SFX: Splash
B8: Do idiots live bracing themselves in their own idiotic way? [I guess to get the meaning I would say something like “Do idiots live in their own world?”]
B9: If you're this careless, you could get accidentally die tomorrow!
BL2: You klutz!
BL3: Shut up with all the “idiot idiot” stuff.
b10: Fine. If you don't like it, I'll eat it all myself!
BL3: Don't talk back.
b11: Is that the way brats today spew out words?
B12: Don't say “spew words.”
BL4: Don't say brat, either.
p20
b1: So, how was cram school?
BL1: Huh?
B2: What's this all of a sudden?
B3: I asked you how it was.
b4: It--
b5: It was...
b6: It was fine! I won't try to skip anymore!
BL2: Oh, I'd better prepare for class!
BL2: That was close.
p21
BL1: If I told him I met someone cool at cram school who makes my heart beat fast
If I had told him I met some cool guy at cram school who makes my heart race--
BL2: A brat being head over heels in love!
BL3: Don't lose sight of reality and just play around!
BL4: What a pain...
...
BL5: I wonder if he's ever been in love.
BL6: LOVE
b1: Gross!
B2: I can't imagine that.
BL7: I'm going to sleep.
p22
b1: Wh-what? Yasuko, you started cram school?
BL1: So that's what happened yesterday.
B2: Yep.
b3: You seem cheerful about it, Miss I-Hate-Studying!
BL1: That's because...
BL2: I've fallen in love.
Author's note: (Gomaisatsu)
How are you all doing? This is Aruko, I'm doing good. Thank you to everybody who picked up this book!! I'm really grateful. Anyway, this the way I usually write these messages to all of you. Without fail alone and writing very small. Right now it's 3 in the morning. And nobody's home. Waaaaaah. Aruko the Night King. And every time the thought that “What if nobody will even read this...” crosses my mind I fall "fyuu" into a pit of emptiness.
SFX: Fyuu
Arrow: Empty hole
Until page 63
p23
b1: All right. Now this question.
b2: You, tell me the answer.
BL1: I want to get closer to him.
b3: You with the pigtails, by the window!
b4: Hey! Stand up!
BL2: If we become friends maybe he'll talk to me...
SFX: thump
b5: He's looking at me. (heart)
b1: HEY! I'M TALKING TO YOU! YOU!
SFX: startle
B2: Me?!
B3: What?!
B4: Where?!
P24
b1: The answer.
BL1: Tsubaki-kun.
Small talk in corner of 3rd panel: Yes, very good
BL2: You really are awesome.
b2: Hm?
B3: Thanks for earlier!
Giving me the answer, I mean.
b4: Huh?
Oh.
b5: Don't worry about it.
b6: Um.
BL3: Umm umm
b7 As thanks, can I treat you to something?!
b8: Do you want to go get some tea with me?!
p25
b1: Huh? No, that's OK.
b2: Bye.
BL1: W-wait!
SFX: trip
SFX: grab
B3: ...You fell again.
p26
b1: Wahh
I'm sorry!!
BL1: I'm sorry~~~
BL2: Sorry!
BL3: Sorry!
b2: Hah
b3: You're really weird!
b4: Bye-bye.
SFX: squeeze
p27
BL1: Tsubaki-kun,
BL2: I like you!
SFX: apply
SFX: braid
B1: Eek! When did you get here?!
Small talk (on his head) Hurry up and move
B2: Brats like you shouldn't try to look all fashionable. (It's too early in the morning.)
SFX: Embarrassed
b3: Everything you say is irritating.
b4: It's normal. I'm leaving.
b5: You'd better go to cram school after classes finish.
b6: I told you I'd go.
BL3: So obedient...
p28
BL1: I want to hurry up and see Tsubaki-kun, so there's no choice.
b1: From now on, students who get red marks on the quizzes will have to stay late and do make up work.
b2: You're going to have to work hard so you don't get red marks.
BL2: Totally got a red mark.
b3: Huh? Only me?
B4: So I have to do this whole thing?
B5: That's ridiculous.
p29
b1: It's lame to have to stay after for cram school, isn't it?
b2: Yeah!
Ah ha ha ha.
BL1: I'm so uncool.
SFX: slide
b3: I'll help.
b4: You probably won't be able to finish it by yourself.
p30
BL1: Tsubaki-kun...
b1: So the answer is “A”?
b2: Is it?
B3 Don't ask me. I just explained it!
Small bubble: You weren't listening!
BL2: He's so kind.
Small bubble: What about this?
Small bubble: Like I said-
BL3: He's totally different from HIM.
Sfx: scratch
b3: Late...
p31
b1: I'm pretty sure Mosu will be here soon.
SFX: irritated
b2: What is that Yasuko doing? Cram school should have been over awhile ago.
BL1: Oh, that's who he meant.
b3: Thank you, Tsubaki-kun!
BL2: You saved me.
b4: You're welcome.
b5: As-- As thanks--
b6: I said it's OK.
b7: Ah, I'm hungry! Hungry... Yeah, that's it!
SFX: Please.
SFX: Please.
SFX: Please.
b8: All right...
Do you want to go get something to eat?
P32
BL1: YES~!
BL2: I'd like a Big Mac, fries, and a coke. And also a teriyaki burger. Ah, and the L-set, and...
BL3: You can't eat all that.
BL4:On top of that...
SFX: munch munch
BL5: this is kind of...
BL6: Ha ha
b1: You've got food on your face.
p33
BL1: ...like a date.
BL2: When I'm with Tsubaki-kun, I enjoy myself so much, I forget about everything else.
b1: Ahh~ Yasuko-san,
so you're on a date.
p34
Sign: Oki
b1: I'm sorry I'm late.
SFX: irritated
b2: What's up with the boss?
BL1: I haven't even had dinner yet.
B3: Yasuko's late getting home.
b4: Next on the news--
b5: A high school girl was kidnapped by an unknown assailant...
b5: The following day, her body was discovered--
Television: illegible
BL1: WHAT THE HELL IS THAT BRAT DOING?
SFX: gnaw gnaw
P35
b1: Ha ha ha.
Boss, you're worrying too much.
b2: Yasuko-san is just on a date.
(I happened to see her on the way here.)
SFX: snap
b3: What did you just say?
SFX: sunset
b4: Uh-oh.
BL1: I totally lost track of time.
Phone: [All the lines say “him' or "that jerk'. At the bottom the note outside says “that jerk” is Kenji]
BL2: roar
p36
SFX: faint
BL1: Hey.
BL2: Hey.
b1: He's going to kill me.
b2: If you keep swaying like that, you're going to fall again.
BL3: Grrr~~
BL4: Grrr~
BL5: Grrr~~~~
?!
?
p37:
SFX: dash
b1: I'm sorry, Tsubaki-kun. Don't ask anything. Just run!
B2: Hun?!
BL1: She can't run away from me.
BL1: Spirit of Hitomi Kinue*!
*First Japanese woman runner to win an Olympic medal
BL2: Give me your speed!
sfx: zoom
P38
SFX: zoom
SFX: zoom
SFX: trip
SFX: SPLAT
BL1: Uwah
b1: Hey...
SFX: turn
b2: I'm sorry! Are you all right?!
P39
b1: ....I'm fine but.....
I'm fine, but...
b2: you don't look so good.
SFX: Huh?
BL1: What?
BL2: Boss, what are you doing?
BL3: Huh?!
BL4: Please come with us.
BL5: Let me go.
BL6: Ahh, You're bleeding.
BL7: What were you doing...?
BL8: Let go of me!
BL9: Stop it!
SFX: phew
b3: Do you want to stop by my house?
Since it's right by here.
b4: You can't ride the train looking like that.
b5: Eh? (heart)
BL7: Tsubaki-kun's house?
P40
Sign: Tsubaki Flowers~
b1: Tsubaki Flowers? So it's a flower shop.
That's so cool!
B2: What's cool about that?
B3: This way.
b4: Ah, yes.
BL1: Is this OK? It's already night time.
b5: Thank you for allowing me to come into your house.
b6: I'm home~
p41
SFX: Hmm?
Apron: Tsubaki Flowers
BL1: Wow!
b1: This is my sister.
b2: So pretty! Like a model.
b3: I'm his sister Erika.
BL2: Thank you (heart)
BL3: She's so tall.
b4: What's this? You've got a girlfriend?
B5: She's not my girlfriend.
BL4: Oh, come on <3
b5: You never told me!
P42
b1: Aw, shut up. (sweat drop)
b2: Have you eaten dinner yet?
B3: If you have, would you like some tea?
BL1: It must be so great...
for siblings to get along like this.
b4: Forget the tea. Have you looked at her?
BL2: She's injured.
b5: Oh, my!
What happened!? I'm so sorry I didn't notice.
BL3: Terrible, terrible! Where's the first aid kit?
b6: Wow, you have such a great relationship with your sister.
b7: Isn't it normal?
BL4: She's... she's so kind.
SFX: Stare
BL5: It's nice here. Completely different from my home.
BL6: I'd so much rather have this kind sister than my brutal brother who won't even allow me to have company over.
p43
BL1: I was thinking about making croquettes for dinner tonight.
BL2: That sounds great! Why don't we make them together?
BL3: Ah...
BL4: How great!
BL5: This is delicious, Yasuko.
BL5: That would be so nice...
BL6: Heh heh heh
b1: There, all done.
b2: I was so surprised that Jun brought a girl home.
b3: Oh, thank you so much! I'm sorry I didn't thank you earlier.
b4: I'm Oki Yasuko. I go to the same cram school as Tsubaki-kun.
b5: Oki?
P44
b1: Do you have a brother by any chance, Yasuko-chan?
B2: Ah, yes.
I do.
b3: Where did he go to middle school?
B4: How old is he?
What's his name?!
sfx: huff huff huff
BL1: What's gotten into you all of a sudden?
SFX: Rumble rumble rumble THUD!
SFX: Crash
?!
SFX: bang
p45
BL1: Wha--
BL2: what is he doing?!!
b1: What are those hoodlums doing...
in front of the store?
BL3: Oh, no. Oh, no.
b2: I'll go call the police.
BL4: WHAT?
p46
b1: It's dangerous, so you'd better go inside.
BL2: Boss, please don't make a scene.
BL3: Oh, no.
BL4: Oh, no.
b2: YA-
SU-
KO.
b3: Huh?
BL1: No!!!
b4: I'm pretty sure he just said Yasuko.
BL2: He'll totally hate me if he finds out a guy like that is my brother.
b5: Are you listening to what your brother is saying, you idiot?!
b6: Brother?!
BL3: No~~~
b7: I know you like to dawdle on your way home, but you've been wandering around all this time without even contacting me!
SFX: Ba [??]
[It describes her sudden appearance. I think it’s better to just put the explanation near the sfx.]
p47
BL1: Erika-san?!
B1: It's been a long time, hasn't it,
b2: Oki Kenji?
p48
BL1: Huh?
BL2: It's been a long time?!
BL3: What?!
SFX: rumble rumble
SFX: rumble rumble
BL4: They know each other?!
SFX: rumble rumble rumble rumble
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I'm not really used to proofreading in this way, but here are some comments and corrections:
- You should also check to make sure you have punctuation at the end of sentences. Occasionally you forget to capitalize letters at the beginning, too. This isn't the most convenient place to point out the missing punctuation, so I didn't list them.
P4
"You're such a pig, you just walked through everyone!"
--> "You're such a pig! You yourself just rode on others' coattails!"
^ Firstly, that's a comma splice. Secondly, since the sister also implies that the brother is useless, I'm wondering if it would make sense to translate it as something like, he used others' success, or something else? Could you clarify "walked through everyone"?
"This corrupt world isn't so nice you can live your life slacking off."
-->"This corrupt world isn't so forgiving that you can get by while slacking off."
P6
"Call me Kenken sensei when we're working."
--> "Kenken-sensei"
P7
"...times like this..."
--> "...during times like this..."
"Kenji in actve service"
--> "active service."
"I can even think of more"
-->"I can even think more instances."
^ It sounded a bit incomplete. Also, don't forget the punctuation.
P17
"So your reading manga in class didn't mean anything, I guess"
--> "So, I guess it didn't affect you that you were reading manga in class."
^ The phrase was a little awkward, and I think that she's trying to say that it's not like reading manga distracted him, or it wasn't really a big deal?
P21
"If I told him I met someone cool at cram school who makes my heart beat fast"
"If I had told him I met some cool guy at cram school who makes my heart race--"
^ The second one.
P24
"As thanks, can I treat you to something?!"
"Do you want to go get some tea with me?!"
^ For these lines, just a question mark "?" will do fine. "?!" implies panic, surprise, incredulity, etc.
P39
"Since it's right by here."
-->"It's right around here anyways."
P48
"It's been a long time?!"
^ I would add quotation marks around it since she is repeating someone else's dialog.
I'm not sure if Ivyscan has its own proofreaders, but if you need someone to check the rest of the chapters, I'd be happy to help! ^^