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Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 2

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+ posted by lucifell as translation on Dec 21, 2009 01:12 | Go to Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge

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Dansai Bunri No Crime Edge Chapter 02

PAGE 01

Box: Swift cuts.

Box: Fluent cuts.

Box: Fall to the floor as silent as blood.

Box: I cut this girl's hair. With the desire to stay by her side.

Box: In order for her to not be bothered by anyone.

Box: With these small scissors I'll protect her.

PAGE 02

Title: cut02: Portrait of heresy.

Box: This is surely such a story.

Kiri: Well?

Iwai: Great!
>It's become so light...!

>txt on bottom right: Quickly gaining popularity! The serialization that is going smooth's second chapter!!

PAGE 03

Byouinzaka: ...so you really cut it....

Byouinzaka: Why are you here....?

Kiri: What do you mean "why" ? This is the bus to school.
>Is it wrong for us to be here?

Flashback: You will have to fight us you know.

Byouinzaka: ..I'll have to tell onee-chan...

Byouinzaka: I'm sure she'll be awfully surprised.

PAGE 04

Byouinzaka: ....don't ask anything...
>...don't decide on anything...

Byouinzaka: ...don't do anything...
>Aww...

Box: "The one who could finally cut my hair has come."

Box: "...therefore I wish to properly go to school and see what it's like."

Box: This is what it seems she told her current guardians.

Box: After that, the preparations were strangely fast.

Box: But we're of the same age, so we will now be classmates.

Box: And today is her first day.....

Iwai: ...I've,
>sort of gotten scared...

Iwai: Will I make friends.....or will I be bullied...or...

PAGE 05

Kiri: It'll be all right, Iwai-chan...

Iwai: But...

Kiri: You're the one who said she wanted to go to school right?
>Your hair was even cut. So there's nothing left to say.
>.....well, maybe there's something be to said about "that"....

Iwai: Ah...

Iwai: Th..this?

Iwai: They said to commute to school, and these arrived yesterday...

>lil txt: I don't have another backpack so....

Kiri: ....what kind of person would....

Iwai: Mmm..

Iwai: Mushiyanokouji....Iwai is my name....

Iwai: I'm here due to my father's work circumstances...

>lil txt (Complete lie)

Iwai: Um.

Iwai: Well..

PAGE 06

Iwai: I'm...inexperienced.

Iwai: But please treat me well...

PAGE 07

>top txt: Isn't this a junior-high school?!

Guy: ...isn't that a middle schooler?

Kiri: So embarrassing!

Kiri: This is so~~~ embarrassing!

Iwai: They're staring.

Iwai: Ahh.
>They're staring at me.

Iwai: I surely appear to be an unpleasant person!

Iwai: Since I'm an outsider...

Iwai: And creepy looking...

Box: Completely wrong.

>3 lil txt along bottom:
She's for real...
It's really a middle schooler
Is she in the wrong place?

PAGE 08

>lil txt top right: Ehehe

Girl: She's so sma~~~~ll.

Girl: She really is elementary school size isn't she?

Girl2: Pleased to meet you....Iwai...chan is it?

Girl3: That was such a cute introduction~

>lil txt: gehahahaha

Girl: Your hair's so pretty.

Iwai: Eh?

Girl: really!
>Incredible isn't it?

Iwai: Ah...

Girl: It's just like a baby's hair.

Girl2: Ehh, that's so cute~~

Iwai: Eh...
>ah...
>uweeehhh?!

PAGE 09

Kashiko: R...
>Rival...!

Iwai: ....heh...?

Kashiko: No fucking way!
>What kind of crazy maintenance do you go through for such hair..!

Iwai: Hiiiii~~~

Kiri: Y...

Kiri: You have to beat me first

Kiri: if you want to touch her~~~!

>lil txt along bubble: Graaahhhhh!!

Kashiko: Wha?

???: Ha...Haimura?!

???: Haimura's anger is like ecstasy~~

Guy: What's with this chaos?

???: Uoohh. Then you'll have to beat me too!

>lil txt next to her: Kashiko-chan....

???: Me too!

Girl: Who knows...

Kashiko: Stupid....boys!

PAGE 10

Iwai: Ah.

Iwai: Is she really not angry?!

>lil txt under her: They're walking through the school....

Kiri: She was just mortified by your hair.
>You see, Kashiko-chan is a hair cut model at a beauty salon run by her family...

>lil txt: That was like a critical defeat for her.

Iwai: No. Are you angry with me too...?

Kiri: Th...that's because I should be the only one to get that clingy with your hair.....

Iwai: ...Kiri-kun is kind of a perve---

Iwai: N...never mind! I didn't say anything!

Iwai: ...I'm sorry, but....
>I was really happy.

Iwai: All my fears disappeared after all.
>I felt truly normally when everyone wanted to touch my hair.

Kiri: I wonder if it's the same as the "killing goods"....

PAGE 11

Box: ...Ahh.

Box: That's right.

Box: My ancestor was a cutthroat murderer.

Box: These scissors were surely his "killing goods"...

Iwai: I always thought of the "goods" as really scary things.
>But I don't think that way about the "crime edge" at all.

Iwai: A long time ago,
>I was told something by my father.
>It's always remained in my heart.

Iwai: "The killing goods...

Iwai: are items handed down from descendant to descendant."

Iwai: "They are dangerous weapons left behind by cruel murderers".....

PAGE 12

Box: They choose their user.

Box: They won't rot, won't break.

Box: And to pass them on, you couldn't just hand them over.

Box: Each and every one of them becomes stronger with each new memory it obtains.

Box: If it's a tool of cutting, it becomes easier to cut through humans like meat.

Box: If it's a tool of poison, then no more than the tiniest drop will be needed to cause excruciating pain or death.

Box: ..however, that isn't the curse's true nature.

Box: It awakens a sense for murder. It is always trying to tempt it's user into committing more murders....

Box: In this way it eats into the heart of it's user....

PAGE 13

>lil txt next to him: ...I shouldn't ignore this...

>lil txt over her: right?

Houko: ..That Haimura guy

Houko: is a goods user...

Yamane: ..I thought I felt something, but until I saw that girl's hair was cut I couldn't believe it.

Yamane: ....Houko-oneechan...
>...what should we do....

Houko: ...Yamane.

Houko: If Haimura doesn't know anything, then now's the time.

Houko: It may be necessary to stop him now before he can--

Professor: Eeeehhhh

Professor: You mean kill~~~ You want to kill him~~~?
>Awwwww but that's such a waste!

Yamane: That precious, precious loli!
>And yet I've waited all this time to do my fun observations!

PAGE 14

Houko: ...you're too noisy, professor.

Houko: And besides, you haven't said anything about that girl's hair being cut....

Professor: But if I said anything I knew it would turn out like this.

Professor: It's just so sad.

Professor: But are you really okay with this, Hou-chan?

Professor: Can you be so cruel and calm at the same time?

Professor: Can you really decide to kill someone so~~~ easily?

Yamane: ...onee-chan, what should I do?

Yamane: Is it okay to kill him?

Yamane: If it is, I'll do my best for you.

Yamane: Hello?

Yamane: Hey...

Yamane: What should--

Houko: Shut up already!

PAGE 15

Houko: About that, do what you think is best.

Houko: "Injection of death sleep."

Iwai: .......Ah.

PAGE 16

Iwai: ---Byouinzaka-san!

Iwai: ...ah...umm...I...

Iwai: I think I may have sort of misunderstood the killing goods...

Iwai: And perhaps about my father as well, so...
>I'm sorry about what I said..

Iwai: So...ummm...

Yamane: (just mumbling)

PAGE 17

Yamane: ...you seem to be in high spirits.

Yamane: Your "majesty."

Iwai: .....eh?

Yamane: .....My ancestors in ancient times as well as recent,

Yamane: ...have always been military nurses in one country's campaign or another.

Yamane: Always heroic and famous nurses in the rear.

Yamane: Always taking care of and making sure,

Yamane: that the weak got their medicine.

Yamane: Mostly, to reach death, there are only two ways to be truly dead.

Yamane: You can become a murderer in the most extreme case.
>But the curse will still be able to remain.

PAGE 18

Iwai: ...please stop, okay Byouinzaka-san....?

Iwai: Don't say these strange things...I want to be frie...

PAGE 19

Box: ...ah....

PAGE 20

Kiri: Ku...!

PAGE 21

=no txt=

PAGE 22

Kiri: ...Iwai-chan!

Kiri: Just hold on, Iwai-chan!

Iwai: ....Ki...
>..ri...kun.

Box: ...she's all right...!
>But I don't know what's happened to her...

Yamane: ....I thought about it on my own.

Yamane: ..onee-chan told me to do what I thought was best...

Yamane: So I thought about it.
>And this is what I came up with.

PAGE 23

Yamane: Even if I have to kill...

Yamane: ....I am

Yamane: "Injection of death sleep."

Box: The "curse" of the killing goods.

Box: I clearly sensed it from this thing just now.

Box: Furthermore, we had the same thought.

Box: Am I....and these scissors.

Box: "together"...?

PAGE 24

Box: ....no.

Kiri: ..that's not right.

Kiri: "We" thought.

Kiri: "We" decided the name.

Kiri: I'm not alone at all!

Kiri: I am,

Kiri: Crime Edge of the Separation Cut!

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#1. by ruggia ()
Posted on Dec 21, 2009
hurray! does this mean there will be more scanlation? (and possibly a regular update?)
#2. by lucifell ()
Posted on Dec 21, 2009
I'm torn on whether to continue this. Dont really think im skilled enough in the language for it yet. The way the conversations are in this are sort of confusing. and annoying.
#3. by Asrodeia ()
Posted on Dec 22, 2009
I hate how Kiri seems to be using baby talk, in those boxes on the first page... I mean, how do you translate the effect of "ただただ守ろう。into English?
This manga's writing is a little different than I am used to seeing, as there are actually periods.... which makes for choppy sentences that unfortunately sound odd in English, but I also can't think of a better way to word them and still have a true translation...

Page 4,

『...だからちゃんと学校にも行ってみたい』
The みたい part is a verb suffix, and it means, "to VERB and see(what it is like)", or to "try it out", so in this case, it would be "to go and see what it is like", 
 [That's why I want to properly go to school](to see what it is like.)

Page 5, about the backpack...

 If it was, "to tell", would it still be 言われる? i (IMO, not sure) thought it was more like, ...something could be said about THAT, though...
 same with 送られて, it is in the passive, or potential form... and is Iwai the one doing the sending? and, what is with the きて
 I had thought that what Iwai said had the meaning of, "yesterday it was sent (by her guardians, i assumed) and came(received?)...
 ”ーって”is a shortened form of the quotation ”と”. in that case,
   「ぜひ通学に」と[言った,]昨日送られてきて...
 Would be a way to write it. so in that way,
"Certainly, commute to school" they said, and [.I.]got sent this yesterday.
It could be translated as such. and then kiri would be saying, "what kind of people are they...."

Page 8
Is her name aka? i thought they meant Akachan, as in a baby..... so like, her hair is soft like it hasn't had any stress or anything...
>You see, Kashiko is a hair cut model at a beauty salon run by her family...
I think her name is Kashiko....

 I could be completely wrong about this, as I have taken only 3 high school Japanese courses and 1 semester of 3rd semester college japanese, but I thought i should try and see...

thank you for the translation!

EDIT: I have no idea why it suddenly turned italic.... OH.[.I.], i meant it as a possibly dropped word. no more italics.

武者小路
むしゃのこうじ
武者means warrior, and 小路means lane, or alley, so her name is like, Path of the Warrior....which doesn't fit her at all...(she's so short)

also, i can't find the 'top text' on page seven... where does it say highschool?

Areas to check:

This chapter was more difficult than any other translation I've done to date. I'm fairly certain there are multiple inaccuracies throughout the chapter.
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