Moukin-Chan 1

[title:] Mokin-Chan
[author:] Makoto Akui
Japanese Pages: http://urasunday.com/moukin/comic/001_001.html

Page 1
Narration: In the forest outside of the city...
Narration: ...there was a little shrine that nobody remembers.
Narration: And behind the shrine…
Narration: ...there was a holy tree that was so tall that you couldn’t see its top.
Narration: Lately, there’s a rumor about this tree.
SFX: SWEEP SWEEP
Kid: I’ve heard from someone that they’ve seen a ghost by the tree!
Kid: Seriously?!
Kid: Yea, they said that they’ve seen a long haired woman standing on the top.

Page 2-Page 3:
Chapter 1: Mokin-Chan

Page 4:
Crows: KAW! KAW!
Crows: KAW! KAW!
Boy: The crows!
Girl: I’m scared!
SFX: Zak Zak
Crow: KAW!
Boy: Ack!
Girl: Eeeeeeek!
SFX: GRAB
Crow: Kaw?!
Crow: ?!

Page 5:
SFX: GOH GOH GOH
SFX: GOH GOH GOH GOH GOH GOH GOH GOH
Crow: Gah!
Crow: Gah!
SFX: SMERK
Mokin: ohayo.
Caption: Rui Mokin, 16 years old

Page 6:
Kids: Gyaaaaah!
Mokin: …
SFX: SWEEP SWEEP
Mokin: …
SFX: SHFF SHUFF
Student: Good Morning!
Crows: Chatter Chatter
Student: Morning!
Student: Hey!
SFX: BUMP
Student: Watch it!

Page 7:
[no text]

Page 8:
SFX: FWIP
Mokin: Sorry.

Page 9:
Student: IT WAS MY BAD!!!
SFX: SHOOOP
Student: You idiot!!
Student: Apologize more properly!!!
SFX: *PANIC*
SFX: *Chatter*
Makimi: Ah, don’t worry about it. He’s just like that.

Page 10:
Makimi: Good morning!
Mokin: Morning.
Makimi: You’ve been kicking some dude’s ass from the morning? Not bad, Rui.
Caption: Makimi Ono
Mokin: No.
Makimi: We’re sophomores now. You gotta get used to the news classmates…
Makimi: …
Makimi: ...Hey…
Makimi: ...what do you think you are doing?

Page 11:
Saaya: Ah…
Saaya: ...good morning…
Saaya: ...Rui-san.
Caption: Saaya Ikeoka
Saaya: Now, please! Go ahead! With no hold back!
Mokin: ?
Makimi: What are you talking about?
Saaya: Huh?
Saaya: I thought this was a line to be stepped on by Rui-san.
Saaya: It’s so inappropriate in the morning…
Makimi: YOU ARE SO CREEPY!

Page 12:
Makimi: Zzz..
Saaya: Huhuhu… Heheheh…
Saaya: Snort
Book: Beru-Bara
Mokin: …
Teacher: Alright.
Teacher: Pass the handouts to someone behind you!
SFX: FLIP
Girl: Hey, why don’t you look behind?
Girl: So rude
Girl: Oh, that’s because…
Girl: ...she looks so mad all the time, and I don’t know why.
SFX: *whisper*
Girl: Really?
SFX: Tap Tap
Girl: Huh?

Page 13:
Mokin: I’m not mad.
Mokin: SMERK
SFX: Fwoom
Mokin: …
Mokin: FWIP
Mokin: Here.
SFX: Jolt
Boy: ?!!

Page 14:
SFX: DING DONG
Student: Bye bye.
Makimi: Rui!
Makimi: Come shopping with me after school.
SFX: Hff Huff
Saaya’s mouth: Ahehe
Saaya: No way, Rui-san!
Saaya: Do...Do...Do you wanna go on a date with me-hehe..
Makimi: Shut up you stupid four-eyes!
Mokin: Sorry.
Mokin: I have work.

Page 15:
SFX: *chatter chatter*
Makimi: Oh, you have work.
SFX: That’s too bad.
Saaya: Rui-san! Next Time!
Saaya: Next time we can go!
SFX: Wooooooh!
Mokin: kuku…
Customer: Excuse me!
SFX: FWIP
Mokin: I’ll be right there.
Customer: ?!
Customer: …

Page 16:
Kid: Hmm… Hmm…
SFX: Woomp
Mokin: What would you like?
SFX: Z-GO-GO-GO-GOH…
Kid/SFX: EEEEEECK
Mokin/SFX: JOLT

Page 17:
Mokin/SFX: *PANIC*
Kid: EEEEEECK
Waitress: Rui-chan!
Waitress: I’ve got this one!
Kid: Eeeeh
Mother: I wish that waitress could be a little more friendly.
Waitress: I am very sorry.
SFX: Grip
SFX: *Chatter Chatter*

Page 18:
Sign: Matsudo Bookstore Headquarter
SFX: Gaaah
?: Thank you for coming.
Narration: This story…
Narration: ...is a little bit mysterious…
Narration: ...and a little bit awkward…
Narration: ...it’s about the everyday life of an ordinary girl.

Page 19:
Narration: Oh…
Narration: I apologize for the late introduction.
Narration: I am your narrator…
SFX: FWOSH

Page 20:
Narration: ...I am the tree.
SFX: DOOOM
Caption: You mean that one!