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Zombie Hunter is a seinen horror mature series, hence its contents might not be suitable for the young.
This is requested by Finito, please don't use it for scanlations yet, as it may need proofreading.
My first attempt at this based on <a href="http://www.box.net/public/000usbuemz"> Chinese Raws </a>.
Let me know your comments.Thanks.
______________________________________________________________________________________
ZOMBIE HUNTER VOL 4
CHAPTER 22 - EVE OF DISASTER
Page 56
Frame 1
Before all this begins,
Im just an easy-going person ..
Frame 2
An ordinary high school boy,
Leading a normal life .
Page 57
Frame 1
But
Frame 2
Ive never thought..
Frame 3
I'd be seeing Hell so soon....
Page 58
- no text -
Page 59
Frame 3
Inukai : Urgh gh !
Frame 4
No matter how many daybreaks there are in future.....
I know I can never pass the days with a peaceful mind anymore .
Page 60
Frame 2
Inukai : WAGHH!!!
Frame 3
Inukai : Hei (Pant)
Inukai : Hei (Pant)
Frame 4
Boy 1 : Inukai, why are you spacing out in the middle of the road ..
Page 61
Frame 1
Girl : Good morning!
Frame 2
Inukai: Go Good morning!
Frame 3
Boy 1 : Aren't your over reacting?! //
Ive merely wanted to scare you but ended up startling myself!
Frame 4
Inukai : Ah! I just saw the Shinigami* look-alike man again
Translator note -*Shinigami Grim Reaper or Death God
Page 62
Frame 2
Inukai : .he disappeared
Frame 3
Ki : Are you still in dreamland? Why do you always look so sleepy?
Frame 4
Inukai : dreaming !?
Frame 5
Girl : Inukai-kun, how does that scary man look like?
Page 63
Frame 1
Boy 1 : Yoko-chan, you dont have to believe in this sleepyhead!
Frame 2
Boy 1 : Or, are you actually interested in him?
Frame 3
Yoko : I thought if theres such a dangerous man around...isn't that dangerous ...so ..
Frame 4
Inukai : enough enough .
Frame 6
Yoko : My school is just around the corner, I'm leaving now. See ya!
Page 64
Frame 1
Aikira: Yeah yeah, Be careful on the roads!
Frame 2
Yoko : Ta (step)
Yoko : Ta (step)
Frame 3
Boy 1 : Heh Heh Heh, Yoko-chan is so cute!
Frame 4
Boy 1 :.....huh? What is it? Did I say something wrong........?
Frame 5
Akira : Ermm...
Frame 6
Boy 1 : This Is All Sleepyhead Inukais Fault!!
Page 65
Frame 1
Akira : Hey...I heard the new homeroom teacher is coming today!
Frame 2
Boy 1: How is he like?
Frame 3
Akira: Maybe....
Frame 4
Akira : He's that dangerous guy that Inukai saw earlier...
Frame 5
Inukai : Wha.....What did you say!?
Others : Ha ha ha
Others : Ha ha ha
Page 66 to 67
Page 66
Frame 2-3 sfx : *click**clack*
Page 67
Frame 1 & 3 sfx : *click**clack*
Frame 4 sfx : *sliding door*
-- No text--
Page 68
Frame 1
Manao Miwa (MM) : From today onwards, I'm your new homeroom teacher. My name is Miwa Manao.
That day...in my school...
Page 69
Frame 2
a demonic sensei showed up....
Page 70
Frame 1
Boy 1 : Isn't this great? It isn't that scary man!
Frame 3
Boy 1: Hey .Did you hear what I just said?
Frame 4
Inukai : ...ermm...yes.....
Frame 5
Inukai : I don't know why.. ..but I feel uneasy...about that sensei....
Boy 1 : Huh?
Frame 6
Inukai : I ....dont like her........
Page 71
Frame 1
Boy 1 : Is it because she's so gorgeous that you feel nervous?
Frame 2
Inukai : ....terrifying...
Boy 1 : What?.
Frame 3
The moment Miwa Manao entered the classroom, i felt uneasy and a cold chill running down my spine. //
It seems like .....an ominous and evil presence has invaded the class
Frame 4
Boy 1 : Hey are you alright?
Frame 5
Student : Is Miwa sensei single?
Page 72
Frame 1
Student : Does Sensei have a boyfriend?
Frame 2
Student : Please tell us your vital statistics!
Student : What do you wear to sleep?
Student : After how many dates will you do it?
Frame 3 -4
Student : Is Sensei still a virgin?
Student : Does Sensei have any SM* experience?
Student : Do you have a vibrator?
TL note - *Sadomasochism
Page 73
Frame 1
The class is in frenzy. There is a weird atmosphere in the class
Frame 3 sfx : *ooh!*
Students :We want to see Sensei naked!
Frame 4
Students :Show us some tits!
Frame 5
Students :Show us! Show us! Show us!
Frame 6
The class seems to be in 'high' mood. They seem to be manipulated by this weird atmosphere.......
Frame 7
Boy 1 : Hey .What is wrong with them?
Inukai : I dont know ...
Page 74
Frame 1
Students : Show Us!
Frame 2
At that moment, I saw...
A spine -chilling scene
Frame 3
Miwa Manao's eyes began to change,
Her pupils, eyeballs and whites .. are glowing,
Frame 4
Changing to a pair of gold eyes ...
Frame 5
And.... time seems to stand still.
Page 75
Frame 3
Seems like someone has cursed me, my body feels heavy....I can't move or speak at all...
Frame 4
....This is..... a nightmare!
Frame 5 sfx : *click**clack*
Frame 6
...she's heading here!..
Frame 7
MM : ....Inukai kun...
Page 76
Frame 1
MM :....You must be Inukai!
Frame 2
This is only a dream! Im dreaming thats all!
Frame 3
Inukai : Don't touch me!
Page 77
Frame 1
MM : Inukai, please don't yell during the lesson!
Frame 2
Boy 1 : Stu...pid!
Frame 4
Inukai : I ...I am sorry....
Page 78
Frame 1
Akira : You have been acting strange since this morning....
Frame 2
Inukai : I know I sound weird asking you this...
Akira : Huh?
Inukai : Do you find Miwa-sensei a bit strange?
Frame 3
Akira: ...a bit strange...?
Frame 4
Inukai : Akira ..please don't think i'm crazy.........
Frame 5
Inukai : Miwa Manao ..... I don't think she's simple..
Frame 6
Akira: She's so beautiful, even if she's a bit strange, it shouldn't be a big deal?
Frame 7
Inukai :That's not it! I feel that she will definitely bring disaster!
Page 79
Frame 1
Akira : ....you look scary, Inukai. Don't be so agitated!
Frame 2
Inukai : But I saw it!
Frame 3
Akira : Saw what?
Frame 4
Inukai : I saw that woman....transform!
Frame 5
Inukai : And the colour of her eyes change ...
Inukai : And .....time....
Page 80
Frame 1
Akira : ...Ha ha! Women are actually Devils in disguise!
Frame 2
Inukai : But I'm serious!
Frame 3
Inukai : I have this.... foreboding sense that something disastrous is going to happen!
This is requested by Finito, please don't use it for scanlations yet, as it may need proofreading.
My first attempt at this based on <a href="http://www.box.net/public/000usbuemz"> Chinese Raws </a>.
Let me know your comments.Thanks.
______________________________________________________________________________________
ZOMBIE HUNTER VOL 4
CHAPTER 22 - EVE OF DISASTER
Page 56
Frame 1
Before all this begins,
Im just an easy-going person ..
Frame 2
An ordinary high school boy,
Leading a normal life .
Page 57
Frame 1
But
Frame 2
Ive never thought..
Frame 3
I'd be seeing Hell so soon....
Page 58
- no text -
Page 59
Frame 3
Inukai : Urgh gh !
Frame 4
No matter how many daybreaks there are in future.....
I know I can never pass the days with a peaceful mind anymore .
Page 60
Frame 2
Inukai : WAGHH!!!
Frame 3
Inukai : Hei (Pant)
Inukai : Hei (Pant)
Frame 4
Boy 1 : Inukai, why are you spacing out in the middle of the road ..
Page 61
Frame 1
Girl : Good morning!
Frame 2
Inukai: Go Good morning!
Frame 3
Boy 1 : Aren't your over reacting?! //
Ive merely wanted to scare you but ended up startling myself!
Frame 4
Inukai : Ah! I just saw the Shinigami* look-alike man again
Translator note -*Shinigami Grim Reaper or Death God
Page 62
Frame 2
Inukai : .he disappeared
Frame 3
Ki : Are you still in dreamland? Why do you always look so sleepy?
Frame 4
Inukai : dreaming !?
Frame 5
Girl : Inukai-kun, how does that scary man look like?
Page 63
Frame 1
Boy 1 : Yoko-chan, you dont have to believe in this sleepyhead!
Frame 2
Boy 1 : Or, are you actually interested in him?
Frame 3
Yoko : I thought if theres such a dangerous man around...isn't that dangerous ...so ..
Frame 4
Inukai : enough enough .
Frame 6
Yoko : My school is just around the corner, I'm leaving now. See ya!
Page 64
Frame 1
Aikira: Yeah yeah, Be careful on the roads!
Frame 2
Yoko : Ta (step)
Yoko : Ta (step)
Frame 3
Boy 1 : Heh Heh Heh, Yoko-chan is so cute!
Frame 4
Boy 1 :.....huh? What is it? Did I say something wrong........?
Frame 5
Akira : Ermm...
Frame 6
Boy 1 : This Is All Sleepyhead Inukais Fault!!
Page 65
Frame 1
Akira : Hey...I heard the new homeroom teacher is coming today!
Frame 2
Boy 1: How is he like?
Frame 3
Akira: Maybe....
Frame 4
Akira : He's that dangerous guy that Inukai saw earlier...
Frame 5
Inukai : Wha.....What did you say!?
Others : Ha ha ha
Others : Ha ha ha
Page 66 to 67
Page 66
Frame 2-3 sfx : *click**clack*
Page 67
Frame 1 & 3 sfx : *click**clack*
Frame 4 sfx : *sliding door*
-- No text--
Page 68
Frame 1
Manao Miwa (MM) : From today onwards, I'm your new homeroom teacher. My name is Miwa Manao.
That day...in my school...
Page 69
Frame 2
a demonic sensei showed up....
Page 70
Frame 1
Boy 1 : Isn't this great? It isn't that scary man!
Frame 3
Boy 1: Hey .Did you hear what I just said?
Frame 4
Inukai : ...ermm...yes.....
Frame 5
Inukai : I don't know why.. ..but I feel uneasy...about that sensei....
Boy 1 : Huh?
Frame 6
Inukai : I ....dont like her........
Page 71
Frame 1
Boy 1 : Is it because she's so gorgeous that you feel nervous?
Frame 2
Inukai : ....terrifying...
Boy 1 : What?.
Frame 3
The moment Miwa Manao entered the classroom, i felt uneasy and a cold chill running down my spine. //
It seems like .....an ominous and evil presence has invaded the class
Frame 4
Boy 1 : Hey are you alright?
Frame 5
Student : Is Miwa sensei single?
Page 72
Frame 1
Student : Does Sensei have a boyfriend?
Frame 2
Student : Please tell us your vital statistics!
Student : What do you wear to sleep?
Student : After how many dates will you do it?
Frame 3 -4
Student : Is Sensei still a virgin?
Student : Does Sensei have any SM* experience?
Student : Do you have a vibrator?
TL note - *Sadomasochism
Page 73
Frame 1
The class is in frenzy. There is a weird atmosphere in the class
Frame 3 sfx : *ooh!*
Students :We want to see Sensei naked!
Frame 4
Students :Show us some tits!
Frame 5
Students :Show us! Show us! Show us!
Frame 6
The class seems to be in 'high' mood. They seem to be manipulated by this weird atmosphere.......
Frame 7
Boy 1 : Hey .What is wrong with them?
Inukai : I dont know ...
Page 74
Frame 1
Students : Show Us!
Frame 2
At that moment, I saw...
A spine -chilling scene
Frame 3
Miwa Manao's eyes began to change,
Her pupils, eyeballs and whites .. are glowing,
Frame 4
Changing to a pair of gold eyes ...
Frame 5
And.... time seems to stand still.
Page 75
Frame 3
Seems like someone has cursed me, my body feels heavy....I can't move or speak at all...
Frame 4
....This is..... a nightmare!
Frame 5 sfx : *click**clack*
Frame 6
...she's heading here!..
Frame 7
MM : ....Inukai kun...
Page 76
Frame 1
MM :....You must be Inukai!
Frame 2
This is only a dream! Im dreaming thats all!
Frame 3
Inukai : Don't touch me!
Page 77
Frame 1
MM : Inukai, please don't yell during the lesson!
Frame 2
Boy 1 : Stu...pid!
Frame 4
Inukai : I ...I am sorry....
Page 78
Frame 1
Akira : You have been acting strange since this morning....
Frame 2
Inukai : I know I sound weird asking you this...
Akira : Huh?
Inukai : Do you find Miwa-sensei a bit strange?
Frame 3
Akira: ...a bit strange...?
Frame 4
Inukai : Akira ..please don't think i'm crazy.........
Frame 5
Inukai : Miwa Manao ..... I don't think she's simple..
Frame 6
Akira: She's so beautiful, even if she's a bit strange, it shouldn't be a big deal?
Frame 7
Inukai :That's not it! I feel that she will definitely bring disaster!
Page 79
Frame 1
Akira : ....you look scary, Inukai. Don't be so agitated!
Frame 2
Inukai : But I saw it!
Frame 3
Akira : Saw what?
Frame 4
Inukai : I saw that woman....transform!
Frame 5
Inukai : And the colour of her eyes change ...
Inukai : And .....time....
Page 80
Frame 1
Akira : ...Ha ha! Women are actually Devils in disguise!
Frame 2
Inukai : But I'm serious!
Frame 3
Inukai : I have this.... foreboding sense that something disastrous is going to happen!
-- End of Chapter 22 - -
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Read it and here's some little comments. Just know that English is not my first language so I can't proofread like a pro and all, but from my look, it looks great.
Page 63
Frame 6
Yoko : My school is just around the corner, I'll make a move first. See ya!
This could be interpreted in some other ways, maybe something more like "I'll be leaving first", "I'll be going first", "I'll move out first".
Page 72
Frame 3 -4
Student : Is Sensei still a virgin?
Student : Does Sensei have any SM* experience?
Student : Do you have a vibrator?
*Sadomasochism, or some side note under the frame saying what it means, not everyone knows what SM stands for here.
Page 78
Frame 4
Inukai : Ki ..can you please dont feel that there's something wrong with me ...
I think it would sound better with a "not" instead of the "dont", but still sounds like a weird thing to ask someone.
Thanks for your comments. I've done the following:
a) Change the lines
b) Add in the sfx
c) Modify some sentences (will be modifying now & then, unless you give me the Cut-off date)
Do you want me to do Capitalisation for the words, or you'll do it during scans time? :)
I'll do the capitalization when I do the typesetting, its no problem.
NJ on the sfx and the lines sound pretty good now
I plan on doing the typesetting when I'm done with the cleaning, so you can modify it as much as you want for now.
I'll ask you before I start doing it, in case you have some final touch to add and if I can find a proofreader to have a look before I start, it would be perfect.
p.s. im only going by the script, i havent looked at the raws yet
there, happy now? :p :smile-big
btw i fixed some more stuff
______________________________________________________________________________________
ZOMBIE HUNTER VOL 4
CHAPTER 22 - EVE OF DISASTER
Page 56
Frame 1
Before we begin,
Let me say Im an easy-going person ..
Frame 2
Just an ordinary high school boy,
Leading a normal life .
Page 57
Frame 1
But
Frame 2
I never thought..
Frame 3
I'd be seeing Hell so soon...
Page 58
- no text -
Page 59
Frame 3
Inukai : Urgh gh !
Frame 4
No matter how many daybreaks there are in future.....
I know I can never pass the days with a peaceful mind anymore .
Page 60
Frame 2
Inukai : WAGHH!!!
Frame 3
Inukai : Hei (Pant)
Inukai : Hei (Pant)
Frame 4
Boy 1 : Inukai, why are you spacing out in the middle of the road ..
Page 61
Frame 1
Girl : Good morning!
Frame 2
Inukai: G-Good morning!
Frame 3
Boy 1 : Aren't your over reacting?! //
I merely meant to scare you, but ended up startling myself!
Frame 4
Inukai : Ah! I just saw that Shinigami*-like man again
Translator note -*Shinigami Grim Reaper or Death God
Page 62
Frame 2
Inukai : he disappeared
Frame 3
Ki : Are you still in dreamland? Why do you always look so sleepy?
Frame 4
Inukai : dreaming !?
Frame 5
Girl : Inukai-kun, how does that scary man look?
Page 63
Frame 1
Boy 1 : Yoko-chan, you dont have to believe in this sleepyhead!
Frame 2
Boy 1 : Or, are you actually interested in him?
Frame 3
Yoko : I thought if there was such a dangerous man around...we'd be in danger so
Frame 4
Inukai : enough enough .
Frame 6
Yoko : My school is just around the corner. See ya!
Page 64
Frame 1
Long Hair : Yeah yeah, Be careful on the roads!
Frame 2
Yoko : Ta (step)
Yoko : Ta (step)
Frame 3
Boy 1 : Heh Heh Heh, Yoko-chan is so cute!
Frame 4
Boy 1 : What? Did I say something wrong...?
Frame 5
Ki : Er...
Frame 6
Boy 1 : This Is All Sleepyhead Inukais Fault!!
Page 65
Frame 1
Ki : Hey...I heard the new homeroom teacher starts today!
Frame 2
Boy 1: What is he like?
Frame 3
Ki : Maybe....
Frame 4
Ki : He's that dangerous guy that Inukai saw earlier...
Frame 5
Inukai : Wha.....What did you say!?
Others : Ha ha ha
Others : Ha ha ha
Page 66 to 67
Page 66
Frame 2-3 sfx : *tok**tok*
Page 67
Frame 1 & 3 sfx : *tok**tok*
Frame 4 sfx : *sliding door*
-- No text--
Page 68
Frame 1
Manao Miwa (MM) : I'm your new homeroom teacher. My name is Manao Miwa.
That day...in my school...
Page 69
Frame 2
a demonic teacher showed up....
Page 70
Frame 1
Boy 1 : Isn't this great? It isn't that scary man!
Frame 3
Boy 1: Hey .Did you hear what I just said?
Frame 4
Inukai : ...er...yes.....
Frame 5
Inukai : I don't know why.. ..but I feel uneasy...about that teacher....
Boy 1 : Huh?
Frame 6
Inukai : I ....dont like her........
Page 71
Frame 1
Boy 1 : Is it her beauty that makes you nervous?
Frame 2
Inukai : ....terrifying...
Boy 1 : What?.
Frame 3
The moment Manao Miwa entered the classroom, I felt uneasy and a cold chill ran down my spine. //
It seems like .....an ominous and evil presence has invaded the class
Frame 4
Boy 1 : Hey are you alright?
Frame 5
Student : Is Miwa-sensei single?
Page 72
Frame 1
Student : Does Sensei have a boyfriend?
Frame 2
Student : Please tell us your vital statistics!
Student : What do you wear to sleep?
Student : After how many dates will you do it?
Frame 3 -4
Student : Is Sensei still a virgin?
Student : Does Sensei have any S&M* experience?
Student : Do you have a vibrator?
TL note - *Sadomasochism
Page 73
Frame 1
The class is in a frenzy. There is a weird atmosphere in the here
Frame 3 sfx : *ooh!*
Students :We want to see Sensei naked!
Frame 4
Students :Show us some tits!
Frame 5
Students :Show us! Show us! Show us!
Frame 6
The class seems to be in a 'high' mood. They seem to be manipulated by this weird atmosphere.......
Frame 7
Boy 1 : Hey .What is wrong with them?
Inukai : I dont know ...
Page 74
Frame 1
Students : Show Us!
Frame 2
At that moment, I witnessed...
A spine-chilling scene
Frame 3
Miwa Manao's eyes began to change,
Her eyes .. are glowing,
Frame 4
Shining a bright gold
Frame 5
And.... time seems to stand still.
Page 75
Frame 3
Feels like someone has cursed me, my body feels heavy....I can't move or speak at all...
Frame 4
....This is..... a nightmare!
Frame 5 sfx : *tok**tok*
Frame 6
...she's heading this way!
Frame 7
MM : ....Inukai-kun...
Page 76
Frame 1
MM :....You must be Inukai!
Frame 2
This is only a dream! Im dreaming thats all!
Frame 3
Inukai : Don't touch me!
Page 77
Frame 1
MM : Inukai, please don't yell during the lesson!
Frame 2
Boy 1 : Stu...pid!
Frame 4
Inukai : I ...I am sorry....
Page 78
Frame 1
Ki : You've been acting strange since this morning....
Frame 2
Inukai : I know this may sound weird...
Ki : Huh?
Inukai : But do you find Miwa-sensei a bit strange?
Frame 3
Ki : ...a bit strange...?
Frame 4
Inukai : Ki ..please don't think i'm crazy.........
Frame 5
Inukai : Miwa Manao ..... I don't think she's normal..
Frame 6
Ki: She's beautiful, but a bit strange. But why is that a big deal?
Frame 7
Inukai :That's not it! I feel that she will definitely bring disaster!
Page 79
Frame 1
Ki : ....you look scary, Inukai. Don't get so agitated!
Frame 2
Inukai : But I saw it!
Frame 3
Ki : Saw what?
Frame 4
Inukai : I saw that woman....transform!
Frame 5
Inukai : And the colour of her eyes changed
Inukai : And .....time....stood still
Page 80
Frame 1
Ki : ...Ha ha! Women are actually Devils in disguise!
Frame 2
Inukai : But I'm serious!
Frame 3
Inukai : I have this.... foreboding sense that something disasterous is about to happen!
Ex:
Page 61
Frame 3
Boy 1 : Aren't you over-reacting?! //
I merely meant to scare you, but ended up startling myself!
But the pink thing does help (though we can skip them for now since I did a doc comparison side-by-side) :smile-big
Btw, I did put the raws (for chinese) in my 1st post as well.
@ Godmode - Really appreciate your comments! It helps in some parts where I was thinking how to make it sound better. Am putting the other chapter up soon (hopefully), please take a look and comment as well. :)