Tadashii Kodomo no Tsukurikata! 2

So, I'm back with a double header of Tadashii Kodomo no Tsukurikata. I was also supposed to post my TL of Koisome Momiji's oneshot, but there was one already. As for my other projects, Waltz 3 is coming up, I'm finishing 2 chapters of ST&RS (because of a request) and Inugami 3 is almost done. Just a little waiting, I'm still in a bit of disarray in my sched. Anyways...



Tadashii Kodomo no Tsukurikata
Chapter 2: Mind Control

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Chapter 2: Mind Control
TADASHII KODOMO NO TSUKURIKATA!
how to make the right future

# a love-like survival school life starts.
Story: Morita Marita
Art: Kuroda Takayoshi
# new series chapter 2.

---02

[#because of a guy from a future, Yuu's school life has changed. because for the sake of humanity, he has to make children with the girl he likes, Kyouko!]
Teacher: okay!
now then, our transfer student shall introduce himself.
(!board) Mi Raito
(!board) Tatsumi
Raito: I'm Tatsumi Raito.
-pleased to meet you!-
Girl: -he's really cool!-
Girl2: -yeah! (!heart)-
Guy: -geh-
Teacher: about your seat...well, beside Tanaka's empty!
Yuu: !
......
-it's Future Guy...-
[yesterday,]

---03

Raito: let's get along, Tanaka Yuu.
Girls: -kyaa! (!heart)-
[this man who came from the future,] \\ [told me this:]
Yuu: ......
-let's get along...-
SFX: look away
[that I should get married to my childhood friend Kyouko-chan,]
Kyouko: -uhmm...-
[or else humanity shall perish.]
[yes,]
[for the sake of humanity, we have to tie the knot! (!star)
Kyouko: ?
?

---04

Yuu: /I guess.../
/I want 2 children...no, at least 3!/
(!top)Imagination of the Future
Yuu: -a dog shall complete the picture...-
Raito: hey,
class has already ended, Tanaka Yuu.
Yuu: !
Raito: you have a minute?
Yuu: ah, sure.
Kyouko: ah.

---06

Raito: well, \\ sorry about yesterday.
-you saved me in many aspects...-
Kyouko: ......
ah, \\ sure.
......
uhmm...
Asuka: Kyouko? \\ if we don't hurry to the club, sensei might get angry again!
Kyouko: ah, \\ yeah, I'm coming now.
Asuka: ......

---07

Yuu: Mind Control?
Raito: yeah.
yesterday, the girl that lead to your misunderstanding with Takane Kyouko...

(!flashback)
Raito: -I found her already down within the school grounds...-
-please take her to the infirmary.-
Kyouko: -s...sure...-
(!end flashback)

Raito: is being manipulated by a powerful ability user \\ in order to make children with you.
Yuu: ability user?
then, then that girl must have...
Raito: no feelings about you.

---08

Yuu: /damn it!/
-my first-time popularity has been...-
w...
who was it, and for what purpose?
-uuuh...-
Raito: -don't cry!-
ah...
*of course,* \\ *those who want the killer virus to spread in the future.*
Yuu: eh?
Raito: well, \\ there are also those who profited because of that disaster...
Yuu: ......
Raito: it'll cause trouble for them if the disaster wouldn't happen.
they must've sent an "assassin" here to get in the way of my mission.
Yuu: assassin?
/meaning.../

---09

Yuu: /from here on out,/
/I'm gonna get attacked by manipulated girls?/
-I'm gonna be in heaven!-
ha!
I, I don't wanna! I know, okay?
-I'm not even thinking about weird thoughts!-
-ehehe! (!heart)-
Raito: ......

---10

Raito: if that's what you say.
Yuu: ......
/but, it's that situation.../
/when I'm not able to marry Kyouko-chan,/
/it's a lifetime of misery!/
/that's.../
/that's pretty.../
(!on Chibi-Yuu) -eureka!-
th...then, if we can use mind control on Kyouko-chan to make her love me...
Raito: impossible. \\ because I'm not an ability user.
-I'm a technology user...-
Yuu: /useless!/
SFX: vwing!
Raito: oh, here it comes.
SFX: beep
Yuu: and, \\ what are you doing?
-beep?-

---11

!?
Yuu: *wha, wha, what are you doing!?*
Raito: a steady effort. \\ I've been doing surveillance on Takane Kyouko--
Yuu: *stop that! don't look!*
-peeping is an absolute no-no!-
(!top) waaah!
Raito: ......

---12

Raito: *I'll have you know...the human's destruction in the future lies in this...* \\ *so it doesn't matter if they're naked or not!*
-don't get in the way!-
Yuu: *e...even so, it's still not good to do that!*
-as a human!-
Raito: you got a problem if it's only sound?
SFX: blink
Yuu: uhh...
Raito: "uhh"?
Yuu: ah, \\ well...
Asuka: =by the way, Kyouko,= \\ =do you happen to know the transfer student?=
Kyouko: =ah, yeah. I met him...yesterday.=

---13

Asuka: hmmm...
fufufu...
Kyouko: what is it?
Asuka: don't you think he's a hottie?
Kyouko: not really. \\ he seems normal.
Asuka: ah, I see. \\ since Kyouko already has Honjou-senpai, right?
Kyouko: A~SU~KA~~?
what did that mouth of yours say?
(!top)hauah!
Asuka: wai...Kyouko, this tsukkomi is too classic!
^a tsukkomi is a gag where the trigger of the punchline is told with a straight face

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Asuka: ......
SFX: scrit scrit
Kyouko: really, that's not it.
because when it comes to love,
I can't understand it.
Asuka: yaah! \\ you're a really pure girl, Kyouko!
-I can't take it anymore! (!heart)-
Kyouko: wait, Asuka!
SFX: squeeze
Kyouko: =where are you touching?=
Asuka: =ehehe!=
Raito: now I know.

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Raito: Tanaka Yuu,
is the Honjou guy from that conversation pertains to him?
Yuu: -I got curious at the last part of the conversation...-
ah, yeah. \\ the captain of the men's basketball club.
Raito: *that guy* \\ *is the one that'll marry Takane Kyouko in the future.*
Yuu: eh?
Raito: there was a record that they've met again in college. \\ 5 years later, they married.

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Yuu: /Honjou-senpai...the basketball club's captain and ace./
(!girls) kyaa! (!heart)
/even the pro scouts are coming at him! there's no other popular guy here than him!/
/ànd that admirable guy,/
/is gonna be Kyouko-chan's future husband?/
/it's over!/
(!scoreboard)
YUU HONJOU
-5hundred million 100

Referee: -you don't wanna give up, but the match has already ended!-
Yuu: /my lifetime of misery is sealed!/
Raito: no, there's still a way!
I told you, right? those two gone out only during college...
from that situation eariler, it seems like Takane Kyouko doesn't have any love for him...
Yuu: -did he read my mind?-
Raito: and so does Honjou.

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Raito: anyways, \\ first, we must observe our enemy's movement.
Yuu: ......
Honjou: club tour?
fine by me, I welcome you!
Yuu: /and...we directly approached him!/
Raito: -pleased to meet you!-
Honjou: hmm?
Tanaka-kun...right? do you want to join here too?
Yuu: !
how did you know my...
Honjou: what are you saying? we've already met several times!
-you're Takane's childhood friend, right?-

---18

Both?: ......
Asuka: that Tanaka, \\ he came here to the basketball club without even his reflexes...
Kyouko: there you go again, Asuka!
Asuka: eh? but it's true!
-he falls down when he gets hurt!-
Kyouko: ......
Yuu: haah...
he even remembers my name...
Houjou-senpai is probably a good guy.

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Yuu: to top it off, he has looks!
he's too perfect, I don't get it...
looks like I can't win against him!
Raito: ...
/this guy, why is he always being down?/
you know,
!?

---20

Yuu: *guah!*
Asuka: sorry! are you... \\ al... \\ uwaah!
-nosebleed?-
anyways, you really do suck!
-try avoiding it!-
Kyouko: hey, Asuka!
Asuka: ugh...
I...I know! this is all my fault..
-it wasn't on purpose!-
I'm gonna be responsible in taking him to the infirmary!
Raito: ......
Kyouko: -I'm gonna check on him later!-
Asuka: -hey, hang in there!-

---21

(!sign) Infirmary
Asuka: thanks for helping me carry him, \\ Tatsumi-kun!
Raito: sure.
-----... \\ Tokui Asuka...was it?
Asuka: ahh, Asuka's fine.
-I can also call you Raito-kun! (!heart)-
Raito: I was surprised back there... \\ that there's another girl close to him aside from Takane Kyouko...
Asuka: !
I...I'm not close to him!
we were together once during middle school...
Yuu: -nngh...-
Asuka: aside from being Kyouko-chan's childhood friend, he's a nobody...

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Asuka: *I should've been with Kyouko from the start!* \\ *that guy should just be left out there!*
*the fact that they live near each other is her greatest misfortune of all!*
if he's not around, for sure, Kyouko... \\ would've had a really fun life!
Raito: i...is that so?
/hmm, is this girl the source of Yuu's belittling of himself?/
/whatever, but.../
Asuka: -whenever I see his face, I can't help but get mad!-
Raito: /I'm a bit more concerned about her.../

---23

Asuka: ah, \\ club time's almost up.
Tatsumi-kun, \\ sorry but can you take these to the classroom?
Raito: sure.
Honjou: Takane!
are you gonna check on Tanaka? \\ I'll go too.
-as a representative of the basketball club.-
Kyouko: Takane-senpai.
-Yuu's fine, right?-
Honjou: -hahaha!-
-that's nothing for him!-

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(!sign) Infirmary
Asuka: hey, Tanaka!
SFX: rub
Asuka: hey, wake up!
SFX: rub \\ rub
Yuu: hmm?
Asuka: oh,
you finally woke up.
Yuu: ......
T...Tokui!?
w...why are you on top of me?
!
Asuka: sorry, I've been wanting to take you home...

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Asuka: but,
now that we're alone...
Yuu: wai..hey! \\ Tokui...san?
Asuka: ...... \\ I know that you like Kyouko...
Yuu: /d...don't tell me.../
Asuka: /*but don't you have any...*/
/*other options?*/
Yuu: /m.../
/Mind Control!/
^if ever Yuu gives in, it's a mindf*ck.

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Honjou: hey, Takane...
I want to ask you something...
what do you
think of Tanaka?
Kyouko: !
eh?
wh...what's wrong, senpai?
why did you...
!!

---28

Honjou: *I'm just curious.*
*since* \\ *I like you, Takane.*
Kyouko: uhmm...
s...senpai?
leave that guy be... \\ and with me,

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#a double Mind Control big pinch! it's also gonna be steamy next time!
#continues in Issue 24