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Bloody Monday 22

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+ posted by Queenofmuffins as translation on Jul 8, 2009 15:41 | Go to Bloody Monday

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Newest chapter guys. :D

...Oh, and did I mention that js06 is awesome?
Everyone, send him some Bloody Monday love~ ;3


Page 149:

It...It can't be...
こ。。。これは。。。

...He escaped!?
―逃げられた

File 22 [J]

Page 150:

He set off the grenade,
手榴弾を爆発させて
blowing off his own hand just so he could escape.
自分の手を捨てて逃げたんだ

Tch...
。。。つ

Who are these people?
何なの?
この人たち

How can they be willing to kill or do such suicidal things
どうして簡単に人を殺したり

so easily…?
自殺したり…
I-It's just so…!!
こんなこと。。。!!

That guy...
あの男..
I guess he’d already be outside the laboratory by now...right?
今頃もう研究所の外。。か?

Nope.
―いや

Page 151:

He hasn’t escaped.
―逃げられないさ

Page 152:

It seems he didn't know it, but there was a VoIP here.
あいつ知らないみたいだったけど今はIP電話があるから
[Tn note, from wikipedia: Voice over Internet Protocol (VoIP) is a general term for a family of transmission technologies for delivery of voice communications over IP networks such as the Internet or other packet-switched networks. Other terms frequently encountered with VoIP are IP telephony, Internet telephony, voice over broadband (VoBB), broadband telephony, and broadband phone.]

You know, like Skype.
スカイプとか

These days, having an internet connection is pretty much the same thing as having a live phone line.
インターネットがつながってるってことは電話回線が生きてるのと同じことなんだよ

I used it to call the police,
それ使って警察呼んどいた

telling them we were being attacked by a gun wielding terrorist.
ここが銃を持ったテロリストに襲われてるって

SFX: Phone ringing
トルルルル

Page 152:

...It’s [K].
[K」だ.

How did your assignment go?
首尾はどうだ?

The request went as I expected it to, really…
依頼は果たしたがね。。。

I got my ass kicked by the genius hacker's counterattack.
天才ハッカーくんの反撃で小々痛い目を見た.

What? Falcon appeared?
なに?ファルコンが現れたのか?

kukuku.
ククツ 

At this rate,
I won't be able to withdraw safely either.
オレもこのまま
タダで引きさがるわけにはいかなくなった

Throw your weapon away!
所持している武器を捨てなさい!

I repeat!
繰り返す 

Throw it away!
所持している武器を捨てろ!

I’ll go into more details later.
詳しいことは後だ
Right now I still have one more task left to do.
もう一仕事残ってる

Page 154:

A-All right...
...よーし 

Put your hands behind your head, just like tha-
そのまま手を頭の後ろにー

1 injured male coming through!
男性1名負傷!

Dad...
父さん

He has a bullet in his left abdomen,
左腹部に銃弾による創傷

and needs an immediate blood transfusion!
輸血の必要あり!

Page 155:
...!!
The...The man from before...
did all this...by himself!?
これ。。
さっきの男が
たった一人で...!?

Page 156:

Holy crap.
―本気で 

He seriously...got angry...
怒らせちまったってことかー

Page 157:

Fuji...maru...
ふじ。。まる。。

Dad!
父さん!

Hold on!
父さん、しっかり!! 


T...this…
これを

This is...?
―これは?

The murdered...
殺された。。。
Chief Okita gave this file to me…
沖田課長から渡されたファイルと。。。

Shikimura had...
敷村が。。。
sent it to Munakata...
宗方に送っ。。

DAAAAD!!
父さん!!

Due to excessive hemorrhaging, he's losing consciousness!
出血多量により意識レベル低下!

至急ショックパンツの用意を!Hurry and prepare the anti-shock pants!
Antishock pants: you strap it to the patients legs and abdomen. I think it's just used in Japanese hospitals... I guess you could use a term like "defibrillator" instead, which the western audience might know better.

Page 158:

You're the patients family, right?
きみはご家族だね
Are you going to ride?
乗りますか?

Ye-
は。。。!!

Fujimaru-kun!
藤丸くん!
Everyone!
皆!

Houshou-san!
宝生さん!
Dad has…
父さんが…

Everyone, come and ride with me! 
皆これに乗って!

Let’s go to the hospital together.
一緒に病院に行きましょう

―For christ's sake,
you guys...
―まったく
君たちはねぇ。。

Page 159:

I'd just told you not to do anything rash...
勝手にムチャしないでって言った矢先に。。

Geez~
もう~

We're sorry…
It's just that we really didn't expect to be in a situation like that.
スイマセン。。
あんな状況になるなんて予想してなくて

...Houshou-san,
―宝生さん
Will you now admit that we're useful in battle?
そろそろ戦力として見てくれませんか

This time I did quite well at adapting to the circumstances...
今回だって臨機応変にうまくやれたと。。。

Do you really think it all went according to plan?
本当に要諦通りうまくいったとでも思ってる?

It was mere chance that you were able to survive.
君たちは偶然に恵まれて生き延びただけ

...mere chance...
たまたまうまくいってるの

I also understand your feelings, y'know?
君たちの気持ちも分かる

But do you really think things will keep continuing to go well from now on?
でも本当にこれから先ずっとうまくいくなんて思ってるの?

I just…
don't want to let you…
do any more dangerous things.
私はただ
君たちに
これ以上危険なことをさせたくないの

Please try to understand the feeling that we, as adults, want protect children.
私達(大人)が子供を守りたい気持ちも分かってちょうだい。

Page 160:
...You understand nothing.
―何もわかっちゃいない

Otoya…!!
音弥…!!

I can at least
protect my own life.
自分の命くらいは
自分で守ります

SFX:Silence
し-ん

Houshou text:
This kid...
この坊やは..

Ah!
あ!

Er…Houshou-san..!
あのつ…宝生さんつ。。。!

This...file was given to me a while ago by Dad.
これ。。。さっき父から渡されたファイルです。

I've made a copy already, so please have it analyzed at THIRD I or wherever.
コピーは取ったんで「THIRD-i」でも分析してください。

…Hm?
。。。ん?
THIRD-i or "wherever"?
[THIRD-i] “でも”?

Fujimaru-kun!
藤丸君!
You're...still planning to do it, too!?
君も。。。まだやるつもり!?

Page 161:
Sorry...
すみません。。。

Honestly~~
モォ~~

It's in one ear and out the other with you...
言っても聞かない。。。

Well, fine...But like I said before, contact me first.
分かった。。。でも前に言った通り連絡は私に

Not the Police, or…
警察もだけど。。。

Another member of THIRD-i.
「THIRD-I」のは他のメンバーも

Because right now...this isn't the kind of situation where we can trust them...
今は。。。信用できる状況じゃないから。。。

...Understood.
―はい

162:
Fuuu~
ふーつ~
Really...Every time I come here, the inspection is so strict.
本当。。。何回来ても検査厳しいよ

Even though it's just a water supply facility.
ただの水道工事なのに

Hahaha
はははは
And in exchange,
そんかわり
the reward is about 10 times the usual?
報酬はいつもの10倍近いんだぞ?

Think of it as a bonus!
ボーナスだと思え

But 10 times~~President.
10倍でもなあ~~社長

After working here, I want to undergo purification at a shrine.
ここの仕事の後は御祓い受けたくなるくらいッスよ~

Ammaright, Marlo? 
な。。。マウーロ?

Page 163:

I'm fine.
ワタシは平気

I'm working for my brother-in-law's after all!
お兄さんのために働くよ!

You’re such a good kid, Marlo!
いい子だーマウーロ

All right!
I’ll be working for my cute lil’ Hide and Raoul!!
ようし
オレは可愛いHideとRaoulのため働くぞ!!

Sshh!
お静かに

It's the water supply in here.
We leave it to you.
この奥の水道です
よろしくお願いします

Oh, my~~
thank you for your business as always!
いや~~~
いつもありがとうございます!

Page 164:

...Ah
-ん
Marlo's entered.
マウーロ入ったって

Page 165:

It was unexpected that Falcon appeared at the research institute, wasn’t it?
そっちはファルコンが研究所に現れるなんて予想外だった

...Yeah
―ああ

After the Okita file was passed on to Falcon’s hands,
沖田ファイルがファルコンがの手に渡った以上

it'll be only a matter of time before he notices why he is involved in this case.
自分がなぜ今回の事件に巻き込まれたのか気付くのは時間の問題ですね

We'll need to prepare for that, K.
それは覚悟しないとね K

Finally…
ようやく..
It looks like it'll become interesting.
面白くなってきそうだ

...I have great expectations of your intellect.
君の頭脳に期待しているよ

Page 166:

The leader is you, K.
リーダーはあなただよ、K

In the end, I'm merely nothing more than a staff member.
僕はあくまでも参謀に
すぎない

However...
ただ。。。

I intend to enjoy it from my standpoint.
僕は僕の立場なりに楽しませてもらうつもりだよ。

Page 168:

The shining
輝ける

"Monday's Celebration", that is.
”月曜日の祝祭“をね

Dun dun dun!~
Stay tuned for chapter 23, coming soon. ^^

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#1. by shadow-skill ()
Posted on Jul 8, 2009
Really well done queeny!

A couple of suggestions: page 152, police would never ask someone to drop their weapon, so 'please' really isn't needed.
page 159, "Will you now admit that we're useful in battle" or something of that nature might fit better.
page 160, "you don't understand anything" might fit better.
And, '... at THIRD I or somewhere...' in other words, he really doesn't care where its done, so long as its analyzed.
page 163, this is normally done, and you may or may not change your view, but unless someone is being addressed as 'nii-san/nee-san' translate it. i.e. I'm working on my brother's behalf.

Aside from that, you did a good job! Keep up the good work!
I was wondering what happened to this series after it was 'taken' from gievmoar scans... glad 2 c it back up.
#2. by Queenofmuffins ()
Posted on Jul 8, 2009
Thanks for your help shadow-skill. I really appreciate it. :D
(Especially the "痛い目を見た" thing. ;3)

I've added the changes as you've suggested. I guess I translated the police bit a little too literally, as I learnt -なさい endings usually means like "kudasai", but as you said the police have powah. They don't need to say please! >:3

I wasn't sure about the nii-san bit, as it had an extra kanji I'd never seen before in it. It was quite strange. It was written "お義兄サン" and I couldn't tell if there was another meaning for it, or if that was maybe a really formal way of just saying "older brother". Any ideas?

Anyway, I hope to continue it as long as possible. I'd be really grateful if you could just read-through my Bloody Monday translation when they're posted in the future, so I can fix any mistakes I make. ^^
#3. by Mikessc88 ()
Posted on Jul 8, 2009
thanks muffin
#4. by shadow-skill ()
Posted on Jul 8, 2009
2 things, 1st: 'nasai' ins't a stand in for 'kudasai'. Its used when being authrotative, but not oppresive. Kinda like when you yell at a child 2 stop something, you're not being mean or anything, right? Same sorta thing, changes a little based on the situation though.

2nd: the 'nii-san' there (as u can c, I don't have the program 2 write in japanese) means brother in law.
#5. by Arhazivory ()
Posted on Jul 9, 2009
Good job muffins, and it sound like you're getting some nice help too. :D
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