Announcements
Welcome to MangaHelpers! Check out the forums for the latest discussions.
translation-needs-proofread

Ao no Exorcist 15

Every single damn one of them.

en
+ posted by Queenofmuffins as translation on Aug 17, 2010 02:00 | Go to Ao no Exorcist

-> RTS Page for Ao no Exorcist 15



Yes. Yes, she did. \o/

This month's chapter is dedicated to an awesome group of people I consider myself lucky to know. They patiently wait for each chapter, support me no matter what, and entertain me with crazy theories! <3
Thanks, guys. And a MASSIVE thanks to Addenza for finishing it off!
Enjoy the chapter. Sorry it took so long. ^^;


"The most awesome idea ever. The okumura twins go to america. shortly thereafter, Yukio is arrested for weapons possession."- Earthforge.

Ohghdfkgodtoomuchtext ;A;
It's 3am, so there are probably a couple of mistakes... My apologies in advance!

For the J.A.C. ^^
Can be used by any groups for Non-English scans. :3

1:
-Sorry, Ni-san, but you’re going to be late!
-Shura-san is already waiting for you, so hurry up and...

Text: The harried younger brother, Yukio, and the absent older bro, Rin...?

2:
-...Where on earth did he...?!

SFX: *Beep* *Beep*

SMS: From: Shura
To The Scaredy-Cat Four Eyes
-Sorry, gonna be a bit late. Had to go grab some props.
-I'll be leavin' it to yew, Scaredy. <3
-From Shura-sama.

-Every single damn one of them...

-*beep*

3:
Text: The Exorcist's path
-is long and arduous...!?
-Chapter 15: Every single damn one of them.
-Kazue Katou

4:
-Oh, hey Ma. / Yeah, I’m just at the hospital now. / ...Yeah, Bon’s doing well...

-Koneko-san had surgery yesterday and is still hospitialized. / He's fractured his left forearm so it looks like it’s gonna take about 4 or 5 weeks for it to heal.

-But he’ll probably be released within the week...

Tv: Police are appealing for witnesses of yesterday's forest fire, which occured at the True Cross Academy Tokyo Campus...

-...But you ain’t worrying about your own son!? / So mean, Ma.
Box: Police and experts are considering the possibility of spontaneous combustion...

-I broke two ribs too! I can hardly breathe, ya know! / ...Yeah, yeah, more importantly, about Bon?

-Ah... Bon’s hurt his throat...But...Well...

5:
-I’d say he’s hurt emotionally more than physically…
-...Well, anyway, how’s everything in Kyoto on your end?

-Hope Okami-san and the head monk is doin' well.
[Tn: "Okami" is kinda like the landlady / woman in charge.]

-Wha...!
-Are you serious?

-Haaah...

-Here goes nothing...!

6:
-Greetings all!!

-Oh?

-There’s hardly anyone here...

-Hey... where are the Kyoto Trio?

-They’re still resting at the hospital. / And Miwa-kun's undergoing surgery…
-Oh, / I see!

7:
-I hope nothing goes wrong.

-Wh-What’s up? / Don’t tell me ya still find me scary?

-So here he is!
-You're wrong!!

-Whaaat!? Then why are you so angry?! / Will you only be happy if I say I'm sorry or somethin'!?
-T-That's not it! / Apologising…? I don’t want you to do anything like that…

-You…
-Okumura-kun!!

8:
-Yukio!
-From today onwards Okumura-kun will be attending a different curriculumn, so please come with me.

-Huh? I am?

-Excuse me, Yunokawa-Sensei. Please continue with the lesson.
-Yes, yes.

-I'm sorry for interrupting, everyone.

-Tchh.

-Uhh...

9:
-...You all know, don't you. / Uhm... that is to say, you all know about Okumura-kun actually being Satan's child, yes?
-Well... you are shocked, right?

-When we teachers heard about it in April, we were also... pretty shocked.
Text: I thought Sir Pheles was joking.

-Well, if by any chance, / Rin Okumura acts strange or if something happens, we do have some safety measures in place.
-Just get away as quickly as possible for the time being, / And report it to us or any other nearby Exorcists.

-...Now then, turn to page 33 of "Basic Mashou Coping Measures"....

-Okumura-kun... No,

10:
-"Rin Okumura" is...

-the child born of a human woman that Satan's possessed body impregnated around 15 years ago.

-He inheritied Satan's blue flames.

-...Um...Okumura-sensei...isn't it true that.../ You're Okumura-kun's twin brother, right?
-I didn't inherit the flames.

-I undergo daily check-ups, / but suprisingly enough, I'm just your average human.

11:
-By sealing Rin Okumura's flames inside "Koumaken",
-He was raised as a relatively normal person for the last sixteen years.

-However, Koumaken can no longer hold his flames in check. His power was awoken approximately 3 months ago.
-...Until then, Rin was brought up without any knowledge of who he really was...

Text: Three months ago...

Text: Oh. I get it now...

Bubbles, top right to left:
-What is it you really want to do...?
-...Friends, then?
-I just...didn't know that you were a nice person really.
-I...I'm not a demon! / Okay, so I'm not human either, but... / Don't just go deciding things like that!!
-Somebody...!!
Text: So back then...

Text:That's what he meant...

12:
-Why? / What was he raised for?

-To be frank, I don't understand it either.
-Sorry, but that's all I know about this.

Text: Yuki-chan just...
Text: quickly spoke about Rin as if it was another one of his lessons.
-Tch! Hey! / *cough* *cough*

Text: Even though I...
-was so close to the two of them, I knew nothing.

13:
Text: Nothing...

-They won't let you act on your own anymore, Nii-san. / You mustn't go out without our permission...!
-...That's why I wanted to talk to 'em properly....!

-And what's with Shiemi...! / Nrrrghhh!! / What am I gonna do??

-...It was the first time I'd seen Shiemi-san get angry at someone who wasn't part of her family.

-Huh?
-Nothing, nothing. / This is your new curriculumn.

-Ooh, sanks.
-Go in.

14:
-We've reserved the Training Room for you.
-Shura-san will be arriving soon so just wait patiently for....
-What's this? / A batting machine?

-Please select a mode.

-...It's a training machine which simulates a battle with plenty of small fry...
-Oooh... sounds cool...!

15:
-Haaah...
-You've selected "Easy Mode".

-Looks like you've been pissed for awhile now, dude.
-Play will begin in 10 seconds.

-Woah!

-...I'm not angry...

16:
-Nah, you're pissed. / Whenever you're angry,
-Nii-chan knows straaaight away~!
Text: One more time...

-... At most you were born earlier by only a couple of hours, so it's not like I want you to pretend like your the older brother.
-...How long will it take for you to understand that what you do has consequences!?
-I kno...!
-Haah
-Can you stop being so flippant for once and straighten up?

-Gaargh!
-"Straighten up"...!?

-What use is straightenin' up?
-Tch.
Text: Dammit! One more time!

17:
-So, how is broodin' about it gonna solve anything?
-That ain't the problem!

-Worryin' about it for a single day is more than enough.

-I ain't the type to just sit around regretting when there's fightin' to be done.

-Nyahahahaha! / Yer gotta breezy attitude~

18:
-It's a relief yer such a breezy idiot, / Rin.
-Shura!

-...Plus, looks like yer leavin' yer tail out in the open, just like a monkey. / It suits an idiot like yer.
-Stop it with all the 'Idiots' will ya!?
-Isn't... that her pjyamas....?
Text: She overslept?

-I felt all restricted when I was hiding my tail. / I'm more comfortable like this!
-It's good that yer so optimistic.

-'Cause Yukio and I are now yer coaches, / we're gonna be a lot more tougher from now on, ya hear?

19:
-Hereafter yer not gonna be allowed to move around without me, / capish?
-Got it!
Text: Yep!
-You don't get it at all, do you!

-Um, / Since I'm free for an hour until my next class... do you mind if I watch?
-...Yer worried?
-Well, no...

-What are we gonna do for my "class"?
Rin's tail SFX: Hyon Hyon
-First we're gonna get yer to practise with yer flames.

Bag: Candles
-What I've got here is a ton of candles.
-Candles?

20:
-Yep. We'll set up 3 to begin with. / Except for the middle candle,
-yer gonna try to light the two candles on each end in one stroke.

-Even if you don't unsheath your sword, you can still use yer flames... Well, first off just try it.
-A-Alright! / ...Let's do this!

-...Mmmmppphh!

-...Guuurr...rrrghhhh...!!
-Hnnnngh / Ngggh? / Oooooon!!!

21:
-Ohh.

-Tohoho
-I told yer to light just the 2 of 'em! Yer burning them all!

-One more time!!

-...Are yer even trying?

-Nope, wrong. Yer haven't lit the middle one!

-Yer can't light it one by one!

22:
-Grrrrr!! Goddammit!!
Text: Nrrrrggghhhh!!!
-Yer...so impatient yer bein' sloppy!
Text: Aren't yer just ventin'!?

-Anyway, for the time being I want you to do more than 3 sets every day for an hour.
-Keep at it until you can do it even while pickin' yer nose.

-For the rest of the time yer gotta study and train yer muscles fer awhile.
-Huh...?
-T-That's all?
-Got it in one.

-Aren't we gonna train with my sword!? / We're runnin' outta time!

-...Do yer understand why yer controlled by those flames when yer draw your sword?

-!? Dunno...
-It's 'cause yer afraid.

-So yer succumb to the flames.

23:
-Yer gotta get used to the flames, then increase your confidence slowly from there.
-And it's from there you draw Koumaken.

Text: I...I see... She's absolutely right.
-She's friggin' amazing.
-Un...Understood.

-My, my... / ...And now for the "Scaredy-Cat Four Eyes", Yukio-kun?

-...What? Ah, you must be mistaken. Who would that be?

24:
-Yer, it's yer.
-It's been awhile since we hung out.

-What?

-I'll pass...
-...Such a speedy reply! Yer bein' unsociable.

25:
-The rules are the same as they were five years ago. / We select "infinity mode",
-And whoever breaks their concentration first loses.

-And the loser treats the winner a meal...
-Yes, yes.

-How many times have yer treated me to a meal? / Stop yer complainin'! / I'm yer boss, and I order yer to do it!

-Whoo-hoo! I win!
-Treat me to Monja, Scaredy Cat Four Eyes!
-Tch...

26:
-Oi, Shura! Stop bullying kids! Aren't you ashamed of yourself? / ...Jeez, if only you were that enthusiastic about the qualifying exams...
-Aw, shuddup! I don't wanna be an Exorcist! It'll be a pain in the ass!

-Livin' in the dorms is good enough for me!

-Scaredy, don't forget you owe me!~
Text: Mwahahaha!
-Don't call me by such a foreign-sounding name!

-Wahahahaha! / You sure got your ass kicked, Yukio!
-Goddammit...!

-Hey! / Did you just swear? / How rare for you~!

-I really hate her... / She's obviously talented but instead chooses to let it go to waste.
-She doesn't take this seriously at all...!

27:
-Someone who tries as hard as they can just looks like a fool!
Text: Next time I'll beat her, no matter what!

-...Well, think outside the box. /...Perhaps she is able to see things from a different perspective
-because of that attitude?

-.........
-It's on.

-...However, if I win... / You can't call me "Scaredy Cat Four Eyes" anymore.

28:
-...Alright!
-But only if you win, Scaredy. <3

-If you think that I'm still the same as I was 5 years ago, you're making a big mistake.

-Hey! / It's not fair you guys get to play!
-Nope, it is. / Have fun with the candles!

-Damn...
-S'alright, let's go~~
Text: Infinity mode selected. Activation in ten seconds.

-Alright.

29:
-Play ball!

30:
-Hum Hum
-Hmmmm

-Ho...
-Holy shit...!!
Text: She hasn't missed a single one...!

-Wh-Wh-What the hell are you two...!?
-What about ya!? / Can't yer concentrate even fer just a minute!?
Text: Don't watch!

-Mmmm. Yer've been practisin'?
-...Kinda...

31:
-Expecting him to pass the exam in six months time is insane. / Ani's life is in an extremely precarious position.

-You gotta point...But what choice do we have, nyaa?

-"What choice do we have", you say...

-When you get right down to it, it's exactly what you... / No, it's the result that you wanted, right?
-Wait, don't tell me you didn't have a plan? 

-I just thought that we shouldn't hide the truth... for both the Order, and Rin's, sake.
-Apart from that, yeah, I don't really have a plan.
-It's not like this has happened before, yer'know.

-Are you so certain that you can cross such a dangerous bridge!

32:
-...We've always been standing on that bridge. / The Order won't need to hide and Rin can use his flames freely.
-We're in the same dangerous position but isn't the situation better now than it was before?

-However, Mephisto's plan is still a mystery. / ...He seems to be enjoying himself, manipulating everyone like pawns on a chessboard.
-There's a chance that Negauiz, Amaimon... even you and I are merely his pawns.

-...You're kidding...!

33:
-...I swore before Father's grave that I would protect Ani...!!

-...Do you know which qualities are needed to become a good Exorcist?
-Huh!?

-...Something like mind, body and skills?
-Naturally, / but what's most important is to not supress one's true feelings.

34:
-'Cause demons will take advantage of that pent-up anger and stress.

-And so,
-Rin has what it takes to become a good Exorcist.

-Someone like yerself is in danger.
-Exactly the type to turn into a demon by accident...

-...What do you mean...?
-As I see it, / yer more of a worry than Rin.

35:
-Thanks for your concern.

-But it's unessassary.
-I'll do what I have to do.

-Mwahaha/ Yer've just gone and closed off yer heart! Now I'm even more worried.
-I really wanna know how yer feelin'.

-...Then, to be perfectly honest, / I've detested you right from the very start.
-Bwahahaha! / Good, good!

36:
-That's it...!

-Hey... That's cheating...!
-That rule doesn't exiiiist~

Text: I could only hit one or two, at best...!
Text: So that's what a professional Exorcist is like...?

37:
Text: DAAAAMMMIIITTT!!!

-Wha... / These are....
-Blue flames!?

[Tn: Naww. How could you be mad at that face? ^_^]

38:
-...What did you just do... / Nii-san...?

-Ng.../ uhm...
-My bad.

-Hey! / Wait a tic! I might've burned ya clothes off but... / ya body and underwear didn't burn!!
-...Doesn't this mean I can control them a bit!?

39:
-Not in the slightest...!

Text: Yeah,
It does!

-Oh my~
Text: Where are you going!?
Text: Uwaaaah
-I thought I'd let 'em blow off some steam after having been selfishly thrown around by the higher ups, / before that ball of resentment...

-...wound too tight and exploded...
Text: Sigh...

-In the end it was a draw, nyaa~

40:
-Did it relieve your stress?
-Haah...
-No... / but...

-I do feel a little better.
-Thanks.

-Oh...but,
-Nex time, I'll finish it.
[Tn: Is it just me or does Yukio have weird-ass nipples? o_O]

41:
-Yes, this is Okumura...
-I see...
-He isn't always a Scaredy Cat Four Eyes after all...!

-Forgive me.

42:
-What are you apologising for?
-It's just...it's all my fault that you guys got injured...

-Exactly. We're not going to be happy if you don't look out for yourself more.
-Forgive me!

-More importantly that that... / What you said about Koumaken... is it true...?

-...Yeah...

-There's no mistaking it.
-Ever since I was a kid, the head monk has been constantly showin' me a photograph of it.
-Okumura-sensei also said that it was, didn't he?

43:
-What do you think... Konekomaru?
-What do I think?

-I'm confused.
-And you, Bon?

-I...

-With such a pretty nurse as you, it'd be worth breaking my ribs just to be hospitalised! / I swear oneday I'll be hospitalised!
-Huh!?

-Shima...

-Ah, Bon! Koneko-san! It's bad!! / The quality of the nurses here kick ass... / Hey, what'cha do that for!?
-...No, seriously, it's bad!

44:
-Something has happened to the Head monk.
-The head monk...?
[Tn: The same kanji is used here, but Shima uses a more respectful "Ossama" to refer to the Chief Monk, while Bon uses a more casual "Oton".]

-I just got an urgent call.
-It seems a corner of old True Cross Northen Dormitory has been polluted by Kohl Tahl...

-It appears some of the victims are civilians.
-One person has been severely affected by a Mashou...And around ten others have been polluted...

45:
-Hm? What's the cause?
-It's unknown.

-For the time moment, anyone with the rank of Meister in Doctor is gathering. / Shura-san, aren't you one as well?
-Yeah...In a way...

-'nyway, the mission is nothin' much... / But while we're his chaperons he can't leave our sides.

-Huh?
-So let's bring 'im too.
Text: Ao No Exorcist... Continued in August's Issue.

Text: The beginning of a bold act!?

Have you shown your appreciation today? Click the thanks button or write your appreciation below!

10 members and 30 guests have thanked Queenofmuffins for this release

earthforge, Rena Chan, addenza, KiraraDemon, JoannaDesu, meowkie, candy, Marcin00, BexXx, Sharero-Demian

Comments
Add your comment:

Login or register to comment

Benefits of Registration:
    * Interact with hundreds of thousands of other Manga Fans and artists.
    * Upload your own Artwork, Scanlations, Raws and Translations.
    * Enter our unique contests in order to win prizes!
    * Gain reputation and become famous as a translator/scanlator/cleaner!
#1. by earthforge (MH's Most High Quality Poster)
Posted on Aug 20, 2010
I love you QofM. I so dearly love you.

So if you don't mind, I am going to proofread this. Well, the parts you've done. Edits in parentheses.

"Miwa-kuns undergoing surgery" --> "Miwa-kun(')s undergoing surgery"

Awkward: "-Well, if by any chance, / Rin Okumura is strange"

"-the child born of a human woman Satan's possessed body impregnated roughly 15 years ago." --> "-the child born of a human woman (that) Satan's possessed body impregnated (around) 15 years ago." (Problem with using "roughly" is it kinda gave the wrong connotation - yes, I know, mind out of the gutter...)

"You're Okumura-kun's older twin brother, right?" (Isn't it supposed to be 'younger' brother?")

"-He inheritied Satan's blue flames." --> "-He inherited Satan's blue flames."

Rest looks clean... though I never did think to consider Yukio's nipples..
#2. by Queenofmuffins ()
Posted on Sep 21, 2010
\o/

I can feel teh love! :3
#3. by Rena Chan ()
Posted on Sep 22, 2010
Derp, then why am I the first one to click the "Thanks" button but not the first one to see this :/
#4. by Queenofmuffins ()
Posted on Sep 22, 2010
She needed some inspiration for the insane workload she has to deal with, being at Uni at age 15.... so I gave her acess to my translation as a treat. ^^

Thanks for the "thanks", Rena-chan! It's always appreciated! \o/
#5. by candy ()
Posted on Sep 22, 2010
THANK YOU!!!anything you do is greatly appreciated no matter how long it takes!
#6. by scribbledoutname ()
Posted on Sep 22, 2010
:D:D:D:D
Queen of Muffins, I registered just to say how awesome you are :D

And earthforge, are you seriously at Uni at age 15???? :O :O!! Whoa!!
#7. by Queenofmuffins ()
Posted on Sep 23, 2010
Thanks, you guys!! You're awesome!! <3

And yes, she seriously is... doing stuff harder than I ever have, and she's four years younger than me! :O
So you can see why she needed a present to help her cope. ^^
#8. by BexXx ()
Posted on Sep 26, 2010
I forgot ta say thanx for this before muffins ^_^

Love ane!!! XD Yipeeeeeeeeeeeee

Keep up the good work :D
Level [B] Translator

About the author:

Alias: Queenofmuffins
Rank: Level [B] Translator
Message: Pm

Author contributions

Translations: 108
Forum posts: 618

Quick Browse Manga

Latest Site Releases

Date Manga Ch Lang Uploader
Apr 14 MH Yearbook 2019 Mangahe...
Feb 15 MH Yearbook 2018 Mangahe...
Mar 1 MH Yearbook 2013 Mangahe...
Jan 19 MH Yearbook 2012 Mangahe...

Latest Translations

Date Manga Ch Lang Translator
Feb 7, 2025 Berserk 124 es 4M4M
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 13 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 12 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 11 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 10 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 9 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 8 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 6 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 5 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 4 tr McMaster68