Personal Paradise 1

Personal Paradise

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Box1: It's the year 2066... The world has become a dark place. Natural disasters, wars, and overpopulation have made cities a danger zone. The gap between the rich and poor is getting larger and larger; likewise, general dissatisfaction is increasing.


Box2: Aimless teenagers gather in gangs, ready to use violence and threaten society. The rich, however, have already solved this problem with a simple solution...


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Box1: ...they’ve made their sons become the leaders of these gangs to bring them under control and restore order in these dangerous cities.


Box2: Gang tattoos aren’t just being used for identification... They've become the “entrance ticket” for an apprenticeship and a job.


Box3: This severe system has worked well up until now,

box4: but the youthful mind wasn't made for confinement.


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box1: Some started to rebel against the system. They either ignored it or used it to further their own purposes.

Box2: The chaos is perfect...

box 3: But of those who step out of line, not all of them are violent...

box 4: ...there are those who just want to live life freely without constraints...


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box1: ...and it's them that this world is especially difficult for.

Anna: Please, just let me pass!

Anna: This really isn't funny anymore...!

Bianca: It's not?! I think it is...


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bianca: If you wanna get past me, then do it!


Bianca: Or are you afraid you'll trip over your crabs?


Boy1: Crabs?

Girl1: HAHAHA! She totally looks like she has crabs!


Bianca: Hey, chica! Where did you get your clothes?! From the dumpster?!


Girl2: I bet she was born at a garbage dump!


Bianca: HAHA! Right!

Bianca: That explains a lot!


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anna: …


anna: Yeah... Really funny...!

anna: Can I go now?


Bianca: No, you can't!

Bianca [slang]: You in a hurry or something?!


anna: Oh, well... I haven't eaten yet...

anna: and I'm hungry!


Bianca: Did you hear that?! She's hungry!

bianca: Then you better eat something right away!


Bianca: Your lunch is already here...


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Bianca: Let's see... What do we have today?


Bianca: Mmm! Orange peels!


Anna: Uuuh! No! I won't eat that!


Bianca [slang]: You ungrateful bitch! You're gonna eat what I give you!

Bianca: Go! Grab her!

Anna: Wha?!


Anna: L-L-Leave me alone!

Anna: Aaah!!


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Bianka [slang]: Be a good girl and open your mouth for me!

Anna: No!! Let me go!


Bianca [slang]: Mmm! Yum yums! Here, one for mama...

Nicky [slang]: Nico, your girl and the other guys are bullshitting around again!


Nicky: Maybe you should do something...?


Nico: Nah!

Nico [slang]: That's Bianca's problem.



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Nico [slang]: I'm not gonna deal with it.

Nico [slang]: I don't care about each little thing!


Nicky: …


Nicky: What's wrong with you?!


Nicky: As the Northside leader, shouldn't you be keeping order?


Nico: Shut up, Nicky!!

nico [slang]: This is girly stuff! Who cares!


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Nicky: Okay, I got it! Stop with the yelling!


Nicky: Ever since Nico got together with Bianca, he's getting more and more rotten...


nicky: I really don't like it!

Nicky: There's no way the city's getting less violent at this rate...


Panel4 T/N: SFX - Cough!


Bianka: What?! Had enough already?!

Bianka: Are you on a diet or something?!


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Bianca: There’s still a lot left. What a waste...


Julian: …


Julian: Stop it!!


bianca: What?

bianca: What do you want?


Julian [slang]: Cut that shit out! What are you even doing this for?!


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Julian: This...

Julian: …I'm not letting this go on any longer!


Nico: He...?!


Bianca: W-Who is that…?!


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Boy1: Hohoho! I’m laughing my ass off here!


Boy1 [slang]: A weakling like you wants to boss us around?!


Julian: Yep.


Boy1 [slang]: Better rethink that, baby-face! Or you might end up getting acquainted with this baby-rock!


Julian: Hmm...


Anna: ...


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Julian: Okay! I’ve thought it over.

Julian: Give me your best shot! Let’s see if you can hit me…

boy1: Are you fucking with me!?


Boy1: Take that!!


Julian: Argh!!


Anna: Oh no!!


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Julian: Hmm... That wasn't nice! Now I'm bleeding...


Boy1: You told me to throw it!

Bianca: Oh man!


Boy1: He’s lost his marbles!

Bianca: What a psycho!

Girl1: Let's go!


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Julian [slang]: Before you run off and leave your buddy behind…

Julian: …I'm gonna tell you something!

Julian: I don't like guys like you!

Julian [slang]: To me you’re just chow.


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Bianca [slang]: E-E-Eww!!

Guy1: H-He's biting him...


girl1: And drinking his blood...!


Nico: Fuck!!

Nico: Does he really have to do this right now?!


Anna: He's like a vampire… in a horror movie?!


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Julian: Mmm! Thanks for the blood donation!


Julian: And another thing! Keep your hands off the lil' red-head!

Julian: or your blood is mine too! Though it probably wouldn't taste very good…


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Bianca: You... You're messing with me...


Bianca: You have no idea who you’re talking to!

Bianca: I'm Bianca! My boyfriend is the leader of the Northside gang!

Bianca [slang]: Nicolas is gonna fuck you up!


Julian: Maybe…


Julian: …but I don’t give a shit.


Julian [slang]: Wounds heal, sweetheart.


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Julian: I’m not afraid of a little pain.

Julian: Spare me your threats.


Julian [slang]: Have a nice day, you spineless wimps!

Julian: Bye!


Boy1: What a creep...

Bianca: He’ll pay for that!


Anna: Who was that guy? I haven’t seen him around before.

Anna: And why’d he help me? He doesn't even know me…


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Text1: I thought everyone in this damn city just looked out for themselves...


Text2: Is that guy with his cold eyes really that different?

Text3: I also want to know...

Text4: …why he was drinking his blood!

Text5: Maybe I’ve finally found an ally…