Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge 3

Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
Chapter 3
// - comments for the typesetter. anything after // are the comments
/ - separate lines or bubbles
[] - special effects (such as emphasis, small letters, etc)
A blank line between each panel, two lines to separate a page.


Page 01
Sister: I hated Yamane....
Sister: Even though we were twins, unlike me, she was nerdy
Sister: and didn't like to talk....

Sister: she was annoying... so I always ignored what she said
Sister: so ..... I didn't notice about the goods

Sister: or when she became the owner.

Doctor: ....do you still
Doctor: hate her?


Page 02
Kiri: Don't point that needle!

TITLE: Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge
cut03: Isolation Inhibitor

Kiri: What the.... What the heck's going on!?
Kiri: Why did you attack Iwai....


Page 03
Yamane: If I kill that girl
Yamane: I can get a prize

Kiri: prize..?

Yamane: That girl is the descendant of "Hair Queen"
Yamane: the uncuttable hair is the sign.

Yamane: The "Killing Goods" that kills her
Yamane: becomes capable of killing even the laws of nature
Yamane: so it can grant any type of wish.

Kiri: What.....

Kiri: Then is Iwai actually cured,
Kiri: like she said before>
Kiri: Its just like my scissors....


Page 04
Kiri: Wha

Kiri: This girl... as I thought
Kiri: is a bit strange

SFX: Git


Page 05
Kiri: It doesn't break...?
Kiri: Even though the needle is so thin...
Yamane: Killing Goods doesn't break.

Yamane: ....my ability is "Critical Shot" and "Drug Amplification"
//"Critical Shot" = 薬効必中, "Drug Amplification" = 薬効強化
SFX: Bushi....

Yamane: Once its injected, regardless of where it pierced,
Yamane: it will cause over ten times the effect.
//this page is a bit weird, especially the "Critical Shot" and "Drug Amplification".. I can't really think of a suitable word that sounds cool.

Page 05
SFX: Tosu (injected)
Kiri: !

Kiri: Eh
Kiri: What is this, wha....
Kiri: am I going to die
Kiri: cause of this injection
Kiri: this is a lie....no....


Page 06
Kiri: Sorry....

Kiri: Sorry....Iwai...
Kiri: I....
Kiri: like this... couldn't do....
Kiri: Sorry.....

Kiri: .....

BOX: Sorry...
BOX: Sorry sister
BOX: I....


Page 07
Yamane: I...
Yamane: Father... and Mother....
Yamene: I....

Yamane: Sorry....
Yamane: I'm sorry....
Yamane: sorry....

Yamane: voices came out from this Syringe, telling me to kill many, many people.....
Yamane: its the turth
Yamane: No one believed me

Yamane: But
Yamane: But...


Page 08
Yamane: I wanted someone to listen
Yamane: I was....always
Yamane: always alone....

Sister: What are you talking about
Sister: I'm the one who did it.

Yamane: ...what...

Sister: its not you
SFX: Grip...
Father: Urgh... //little bubble

Sister: Yamane
Sister: really... you
Sister: can't do anything without me
Sister: Everything....I

Sister: have to decide.... for you.....


Page 09
BOX: Sister was crying

BOX: Is it because of me.
BOX: Sorry sister
BOX: I won't be a nuisance anymore...
BOX: I'll listen to whatever you say....and be more...
Yamane: ah..... / ah...... / how can I.... / Oo....

Phone: .....Yamane
Sister: please understand


Page 10
Sister: I'm planning to lift your curse with the death of the Queen
Sister: but I'm not doing this because I want to....

Sister: This method is by all means our last resort
Sister: When that time comes, I'll take your hand and do it instead.

Sister: ....so right now

Sister: The target you are aiming that killing intent is [Emphasis]only me![/Emphasis]
Sister: ....I, Gumai!


Page 11
Kiri: Urgh....
Kiri: Ah eh...?

Kiri: What is this... I'm.... alive....?
Kiri: Ahhh but I'm still sleep-

Kiri: -y
//I'm not sure how it should be done.... should I separate sleep-y or just make one word and leave the second one blank?


Page 12
Kiri: I have a feeling I'm
Kiri: Watching something inappropriate
Guy: Kiri-ku~n. Its morning~ Rise and shi-ne ♪


Page 13
Sister: wait Professor, don't come in....!
Prof: Wahaha
Sister: Argh Haimura is awake!?
Kiri: So-
Kiri: Sorry!
Kiri Small: I'm apoloziging for some reason //no bubble

Kiri: Injection....
Kiri: why?

Prof: Like that, they are calming down the intent by playing murder.
Prof: Goods Owners like you tend to kill aimlessly if you stay quiet.

Kiri: .....

Prof: Ah
Prof: Right, right, nice to meet you
Prof: call me Professor
Kiri: P-Pro?


Page 14
Prof: Its been one night since yesterday
Prof: You guys were attacked by a sleeping pill
//I'm putting "sleeping pill" cause I can't think of a good word for a medicine you inject to put people to sleep...and I don't think anesthesia is the right word...or is it?

Prof: I am Iwai's current guardian, so I rushed in for the rescue.
Prof: My, I was so worried and worrid
Sister: LIAR
Sister: Then why were you trying to take her clothes off.
SFX-next to Prof: we went together

Prof: What are you talking about. When the patient's not breathing, you first examine the body and apply CPR
Sister: Shut up, Lolicon.
Front of Sister: Aa!?
Kiri: ...he is more perverted than me....
SFX: Gasha.... Gii....

Small bubble: Anyway, she's in middle school. Its definitely not Loli.
Iwai: Ah...Byouinzaka-san?
Small bubble: You are just too werid.
Small bubble:
Kiri: Ah, Iwai.

Yamane: .....that....
Iwai: Eh....ah.... It grew.....
Yamane: I understand but..... in just one.... night?
Yamane-SFX above: Wah

Kiri: It's quick during noon too, but it apparently grows in one go during the night.
Kiri-between bubble: although, I've never seen it
Kiri: so I come and cut them in the morning.
Yamane: ....it seems....
Yamane: there's problem everywhere.....


Page 15
Iwai: I'm...
Iwai: I'm in debt....
small top left: Bu-but

Iwai: As long as its cut, I can get it tidied up in the morning....
Kiri-no bubble: I can cut lot of it too
Iwai: I talked with Kiri and figured it woult be fine....

Iwai: ....so...
Iwai: ....as I thought....is it disturb---ing...?

Someone: The jinx is still present, ha....
Someone: As expected, our royal Queen is very presistent.


Page 16
Iwai: ....the Queen...
Iwai: Byouinzakas were talking about it too...
Prof: yes, yes

Prof: Um~ let's see....

Prof: Ah- this, this. It's this person.
Prof: Name is Zeibulfa

Prof: Iwai's ancestor-sama, and
Prof: the first "uncuttable hair".


Page 17
Kiri: Iwai...!?
Prof: She left two curses

Prof: One is special ability to murderers' instruments,
Prof: the other is uncuttable hair to her descendents.

Prof: and by using these two,
Prof: we are conducting a never ending murder game.

Kiri: ...why something like this...

Prof: Who knows
Prof: the fact is that they both exist in real life
Prof: there are even some records or data left.


Page 18
Sister: ....getting cursed is very borthersome
Sister: conscious gets controlled opposed to one's will, and
Sister: create chaos around the victim and bystanders.

Sister: Iwai.... you do have things I can sympathize for,
Sister: but death of the Queen is said to be the only way to end the Good's curse.

Sister: you are a human who should be dead.

Iwai: ....no way....


Page 19
Prof: Yes, but
Prof: then its not fun.

Kiri: What do you mean, its not fun.....
Prof: well, if it's only Kiri, its barely a resistance, right?

Prof: You see, I'm a member of an organization called "Gossip".
Prof: its close to an ideological cult,
Prof: a gathering of people who love seeing pointless stuff such as homicides.

Prof: we were waiting for someone who will take Iwai out of this place.
Prof: in other words, someone who can win her trust...

Prof: and has a weapon capable of fighting back.

Prof: consequently,
Prof: that has appeared.


Page 20
Prof: Nickname is fine with
Prof: "Dansai Bunri no Crime Edge" right?

Prof: ....its the beginning
Prof: protect the Queen from the Killing Goods owners who are seeking salvation.
Prof: cut through the enemies with those scissors.

Prof: we were all
Prof: waiting for that.


Page 21
Iwai: ...Kiri

Iwai: ...Do you completely believe
Iwai: that Crime Edge is a Killing Goods?

Kiri: ....since it can cut Iwai's hairs
Kiri: I'm thinking I should at least have to accept it....
Iwai: is that it....

Iwai: then should I also
Iwai: accept that I'm destined to die....


Page 22
Iwai: .....
Iwai: I don't know what to think....

Iwai: ....until I met Kiri,
Iwai: there were times when wished I can die quickly
Iwai: I hoped someone would kill me without pain.....
Iwai: I wonder if that was how it's supposed to be....
Iwai: Byouinzaka-san was angry at me
Iwai: if there are more people who think like that...
Iwai: it sort of.... feels like living is
Iwai: is a really bad thing.....
SFX: Posu (Pat)


Page 23
Kiri: then its fine
Kiri: as long as [emphasis]I cut them[/emphasis]


Page 24
Kiri: Embarrasing...
Kiri: but...

Kiri: Did you hear?
Kiri: It's bad if Killing Goods don't release their urge to kill by pretending murder.
Iwai-no bubble: heavy..

Iwai: ....reallly?
Kiri: Professor said it
Kiri: ...so

Kiri: ....anyway... at least for me,
Kiri: I'm in trouble if Iwai isn't there
Kiri: umm therefore....


Page 25
Kiri: Isn't it okay,
Kiri: to live with more pride, royal Queen?

Iwai: ....is that the case.
//suppose to sound a bit high-and-mighty... is there a better word for it?
Iwai: I'll express my gratitude, Dansai Bunri.
BOX: ....to be honest,
BOX: I was scared too.

BOX: But I was even more scared
BoX: of this girl disappearing from my sight.
Kiri: Queen talks like that?
Iwai: eh-
Iwai: its definitely this- its royalty.

BOTTOM BOX: To be Continued....in September Issue. comes out on July 27th (Monday)!!

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I think I'm starting to get the hang of it... (i think :P)
I wasn't too sure if I should put words such as "Killing Goods" or "Owners" in some special quotation for not....