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Koko ga Uwasa no El-Palacio Volume 2

Volume 2

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+ posted by ruggia as translation on Jul 29, 2011 11:31 | Go to Koko ga Uwasa no El-Palacio

Welcome to El-Palacio Volume 2

Tranlsation by ruggia
FOR IMS USE ONLY
PROOFREAD BY georgi /* */


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Volume 2 Contents
Chapter 08 – El Palacio’s M{?}ther
Chapter 09 - Foggy♥Training
Chapter 10 - Boy-ish Promise
Chapter 11 - Nice to meet you, Classmate
Chapter 12 - I'm not a Heel!
Chapter 13 - What a fool...
Chapter 14 - My first house-watching
Chapter 15 - After the festival...

Page 01 (cover)
Chapter 8
El Palacio’s M(?)ther
# or "El Palacio's M(?)ther" /* I prefer the first one */

Page 02
B1: I'm going!
B2: Hina-chan, you forgot something!

B1: {Here} apron.
B2: Ah, that's right

B1: I ironed it, too.
B2: Thank you, Mariko-san.

B1: I'll get going too, then. /* moved then */
* See you later *
B2: {Ah,} Bunny-chan, wait a minute.


Page 03
B1: {Here,} I made some cookies. Take some ♥
* Bunny-chan's Cookie *
B2: Thank you, they'll all be delighted! /* added "all" for clarity */

B1: {Eh?} Kisaragi-san's going out too? {so early}
B2: Aah...
B3: She got called to a party at the kindergarten. /* "for" works too, actually */

B1: Mari-sis!!
* Argh *

B1: I'm all out of shampoo!! /* reversed order */
* Uh oh *
B2: I bought some yesterday... did I forget to take it out?...
* Come on- *
* Don't walk around dressed like that *

B1: Here it is.
* Got it? *


Page 04
B1: Here, Itsuka-chan
* Thanks Mari-sis *
B2: Looks like Mariko-san is the Mother of El-Palacio.

B1: Wha~~~t, I'm not that OLD, Tadasuke-chan!
* I'm not much older than Hina-chan *
B2: Blah blah
* and I'm still... *

B1: N...no, I didn't mean it that way...// You were taking care of them, so

well...
B2: ....ter....
B3: What?
B4: SISTER!
# maybe it's better to say Onee-san instead... not too sure. /* me neither, though I prefer avoiding japanese terms when possible */ /# agreed #/

Awwh- this is a refill bag... that's so annoying.
* Th...that's right!!


Page 05
B1: AHH!!
B2: Mmm?
B3: That's my ice cream!!

B1: Oh, really... /* added an ellipsis */

B1: Give it back!! I was going to eat it after my bath!! /* maybe replace "was going" by "wanted" */ /# hmm I prefer “was going” #/
* That was the last one!! *
< Grrrrrrr! >
B2: I finished it already

B1: No forgiveness, even if it's you!! /* doesn't come off well in English... maybe something like "No forgiveness, even if it's you!!" could work better */ /# still doesn’t feel quite right, but can’t think of anything better... #/
< Slam > < Boom >
B2: Oh...wanna fight?
B3: Stop!
B4: Ouka, you're the one at fault! Apologize to Itsuka-chan....


Page 06
B1: Ouch!!
< SLAAAAAM >

Panel2
< twitch > < twitch >

Panel3
B1: You!!
< swoosh!!>

Panel4
< Bang > < ..ang> < Bang >


Page 07
B1: The house is going to break... // So if you two want to fight, could you guys do it on the ring? /# think it should be plural :D #/
B2: {ah~ ah~} she made holes on the wall again...

B1: {I'd been wondering for a while...} Is that gun real...

B1: Ah, that's right!

B1: I'll buy you ice cream, // so let's all go shopping~~~!!

B1: Anyway, it's time to go running. /* or "time for my jog" */
B2: Hey! You guys!
B3: Aww // aww
B4: Bath ti~me.


Page 08
B1: Seriously... // Those two don't even try to help...
B2: It's okay.
B3: Taisuke-chan alone is a great help.

B1: They keep relying on you for all sorts of things...
B2: He~y, Mari-chan!!

B1: What is this- you are with a boyfriend today?

B1: oh, it's the referee bro.
B2: Aww--


Page 09
B1: You look like a YOUNG bride.
< squeeeze >
B2: YOUNG bride!? Do I really look like that~~~ /* lol */

B1: Yeah! A very young couple.
B2: Umm... Mariko-san's breast is ...
* Aw~ *

B1: I'm so jealous, bro!
< Squeeze >
B2: Ouchhhh....

B1: Well then, shall I get some cabbage~~
B2: And-
* Thank you *
B3: She's already into the young couple thing...
* ouch *


Page 10
< stack >

B1: Thank you as always!
B2: This will last for at least a week~~ /* for clarity */
B3: This is one week's worth...

B1: A~ll right, then... /* all right is my policy */ /# yes sir! :D #/
B2: !?

B1: Hmph!!
* Ooh *
B2: Bro, you're carrying all this back!?
B3: That's...why...I..came...so....

< Crack >

B1: .....
B2: Hmm, don't overdo it.
B3: I'll deliver it later.


Page 11
B1: I'm useless...
* Haa.... *

B1: It's okay.
< squeeze >

B1: I get them delivered every time.
B2: Ah...um... Mariko-san?

B1: Wh--why don't we separate a bit? /* sounds a bit odd, but at least it's short */
B2: Aww~ Young couples don't walk separately~~

B1: .....
B2: Th...then, you could have ordered them on the phone.... // isn't that easier for you too?

B1: That's true,


Page 12
B1: But... // it's more important to mingle with the townspeople, right?

B1: Mingle with...
B2: People?
# probably need a better word than "mingle" /* I like mingle, what wasn't too much to my liking was town people, but it's good enough */

B1: Yes...


Page 13
B1: Because El Palacio is supported by
Fish: *oh- Mari-chan, // when is today's match?*
CowBoy: *Aww~ // it's nice to be young~ *
Shop: *I'll definitely go again*
Bakery: *Here! Take this too! // Share with everyone!! *
B2: all these people...

B1: .......
B2: I see...

TEXT: So Mariko-san is...

B1: Really...
B2: It's the exact opposite of Ouka
* Ah... it's Ouka *
* Ouka's here!! *


Page 14
B1: What is? /* win. */
< Startle >

B1: Ouka!? Why are you here!?
* She came from nowhere... *
B2: I'm free to be wherever I want.

B1: !?
BOX: Ice Cream

B1: Oh, it's for Itsuka-chan {I see}

B1: What's with that face?
* Ouchhhh *
B2: You got a problem?

B1: {Ouch} Why don't you learn a bit from Mariko-san
B2: And become someone who is loved by everyone~


Page 15
B1: Are you stupid?

B1: I'm loved, right!
* Eh!? *
* Ah, Ouka-chan *
B2: You should just tell her the truth-

B1: There's no need to compare Mari and I in the first place. /* moved in the first place; also, leaving I as is, I made a note about this before */
* ri---ght, mister? * /* some changes in punctuation */
* ? *
B2: Aaah- What are you saying?

B1: Of course it's Youth!
B2: {To begin with,} we weren’t even born in the same DECADE /* I'd be tempted to write it as "we weren't even born in the same DECADE" */

B1: You can notice a huge difference just looking at the smoothness of the skin~
< twitch > /* lol */

<twitch> <twitch>
B1: Isn't your butt starting to sag too, Mari?


Page 16
< snap >
B1: My butt is... what?

< pull >

B1: Eeh!?


Page 17
B1: Just 'cause I'm listening quietly...
B2: blabbering on mindlessly .....

B1: {Oops} Did I hit a sore spot?

B1: Stop!!
B2: I... I didn't know butt was taboo....
B3: Both of you...
< rumble rumble rumble >

< Boom >
B1: Wah!
B2: ?


Page 18
< Zazazaaa>

B1: What the!?
B2: Ah, What? What happened?

B1: ?
< pick >

B1: you noisy brat
# can't really think of a nice word for 尻の青い小娘。/* your expression sounds good enough, I am not too familiar with the japanese saying, something about a blue assed girl? lol */

* Ohhhh!! *
* ah *


Page 19
B1: Mari the Kid!
B2: Big-sis will teach you some manners.

B1: And...

B1: Shiyumisen Ouka!!
B2: What an old-fashioned phrase.


Page 20
B1: There's trouble!!

B1: Ouka and Mari started brawling!!
B2: {what} Where!?
B3: Just around the corner!
B4: Then we can't just stand here!

B1: Sorry- we're done for the day!!
B2: Aww, what's wrong
B3: I'm so sorry
B4: They started it again...

B1: Come on! Close the shutters before there's any damage!! /* some might say the way I changed it is wrong */
< rattle > <rattle>
< slide~ >

B1: Hey! Where!!?
B2: {here} Over there!
B3: Ohh- its heating up!!
Mom and kid: * No * *Let's go and see *
Crowd: * Yeah... *


Page 21
B1: Whoohoo!!
< Slam >

B1: Wah!!
< Boom >

B1: Ouka!!
B2: Go!!
* Whaaaaa *
B3: Why are they fighting? /* just simple fighting should do */
B4: I don't know, but we get to see a match for free...

* Ah!! *
* No...no way *

B1: H-ey, both of you, stop!!
B2: If you want to fight, take it to the ring... /* take=to */


Page 22
* Bo-nyun * /* lolol */

B1: Listen.
B2: Your dog is barking.

B1: There's a referee and a crowd, such splendid

B1: Pro-wrestling!
< Whoosh>
B2: Stop!!


Page 23
B1: Is that so!?

B1: !?
B2: Mariko-san!! Using a gun in a place like...

< ka-bam >
B1: Oh...

B1: Hey, You!!

B1: We are caught red-handed!!? /* feels like a bubble is missing */ /# Oops #/


Page 24
B1: Where are you looking, ref!!?
B2: Take away the weapon! It's against the rules!!
B3: That!?

B1: Please do something~~ {Policeman}
* You fool *
B2: It's the referee's job to handle a match {Isn't it?}

B1: Even if you say that.... // Eh, what?
* P- please *
* Whaaa!!*
* Run- *

B1: Please wait!!

*Welcome back*
B1: Today, I mingled with everyone again♥
B2: {mm?} Where's Tadasuke?
B3: He's not back yet.... {weren't you guys together?}
*Ah, Ice cream*

* Argh... *

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Chapter 09 - Foggy♥Training
Page 01
Chapter 9
Foggy ♥ Training


Page 02
B1: Phew~~~…

B1: So~ hot~~~
B2: Argh- I’m dying –
B3: Shall we call it a day?

B1: I should train in a swimsuit tomorrow
B2: Uh- shirt is all sweaty…
B3: I can squeeze sweat out of mine
B4: Let’s go take a shower ~~
B5: Hey, hey, he-y!!


Page 03
B1: Don’t take off your clothes here! Go change in your room!!
# couldn’t think of anything better :P
* You girls have no shame!! *
B2: what?

B1: The doors are closed properly, so no one’s going to peek. {that’s why it’s so hot in here}
B2: No… that’s not it…

B1: Look around you... # or, “look at your surroundings closely….”
* Ouka-san… *
* hmm… *
B2: Ah, so that is what you meant?

B1: Tadasuke is looking at us with PERVER~TED eyes.

B1: {wha} That’s not it!! It's just common sense…. /* got rid of "talking about" since it sounded a bit long to me */
B2: So tha~t’s why you keep screwing up.
B3: Not concentrating on the match even though you're a referee…

B1: I’m telling you, that’s n….
< Poke >


Page 04
B1: Listen, Tadasuke!! // As a referee, view us not as women, but as wrestlers!!
B2: That’s what it means to be a pro!!

B1: ….
B2: I’m telling you, I’m an amateur…

B1: Even for me, you're just a “manservant”, so
B2: I’ve never ever…


Page 05
B1: Seen you as a ”GUY”!
B2: Ah- is that so.

B1: Right, Hina?
B2: Eh!? Ah… um…. I’m

B1: …… /* win */
B2: Mari-sis !!

B1: There's no hot water!! /* replaced "I can’t get "*/
< shiver > < shiver > < shiver >
* You're all wet… *
B2: Aww~again? // I wonder if it needs to be fixed properly~?

* All naked again… *
* It-chan!? *

B1: Haha- How about … # not too sure about this.


Page 06
B1: this for a change?! /* changed it a bit, I think that's pretty much what she's saying i.e. this should be all right once in a while */ # nice. #/

B1: Public bath, huh…

B1: {pff} the store’s closed today!!
Left Sign: Store Closed

B1: He-y, Op-en !!
< Bang > < bang >
B2: Hey, stop!! { STOOOP!! } # is “fool” or “dumb ass” better?

B1: Shut u~p!!
B2: Who is this fool!!
< open >

B1: <argh> Ouka-chan!?
B2: Geezer- Let us in. Our bath is broken!
< Oh! >


Page 07
B1: Let me go, today’s my day-off…
< grab >

B1: Argh… // Mmm ….
B2: Co~me O~n.
B3: You'll be blessed with such beautiful women!! /* not too sure how best to say this one */
* Hey - *
B4: You're doing it again!!

B1: I’m so sorry…
* Um… well… *
B2: If it’s Ouka-chan’s request…
B3: Wow- We're the only ones here-
B4: Let’s go, quickly
B5: If everyone's there, I can’t wash my face…
B6: Is it okay…

B1: {argh} so unreasonable…
Sign: Male

< grab >
B1: Uek…

B1: Where are you going? You're coming with us.
Sign: Female
B2: Huh?
B3: Eh!?
B4: Wha, what!? /* why is he complaining? */


Page 08
< Open >

B1: ~~~~~~~~!?

B1: Ah... no, // this is …. { you’re wrong… }

B1: Kyaaaaa!!
< swift !!>
B2: My, my. /* LOL, Lestat, it's your favorite Ara~ Ara~ */

B1: What were you thinking!!
B2: It’s special training!! { starting now }


Page 09
B1: If you get agitated just from looking at a woman’s body…
B2: you could never be a proper referee.

B1: Well… It seems too drastic, but….
B2: it’s true that he needs higher tolerance…
B3: We can just cover the important parts, right?
B4: Eh!? Why’s everyone agreeing?

B1: …either way, can’t we use a different method!?
B2: {Huh?} Like what?

* Like a video… *
B1: So, umm… // we can deal with this one step at a time…. /* I'd be tempted to use one step at a time */ /# that sounds better#/
# or “we can use more time…”

B1: ……

B1: AAaaah! Quit whining!!
B2: Undress already!!
< toss > < toss > < toss >
B3: Wah—Wait a sec….


Page 10
B1: Go
< Uooooooohhhh >

< splaaash >
B1: Kya…

B1: !!!

<dizzy>
B1: Oh my... Hina-chan!? /* ara ara xD */

B1: Bah…
< splash >
B2: Wha… what the….


Page 11
B1: dah…!?

< flip >
B1: -----!!!

B1: Are you okay?
B2: Ye…s…

* Ah, Tadasuke-san? *
B1: I’m going out!!
< Splash >

< slip!! >


Page 12
B1: Careful!!
B2: Argh..
B3: ….!?

< boing >
B1: !?

* T-t-t-t-th… this sensation is…..*
* Bare breasts!!! *

B1: Are you okay, Tadasuke-chan?


Page 13
* Pointy…. * // * Pointy in the middle… * // * soft… *
# wasn’t sure what ちょくで is...
B1: Was sudden naked encounter too stimulating~? // Both for Tadasuke-chan and for Hina-chan.
B2: O… of course!! {it’s too much…}

B1: But isn’t this normally a delightful situation for guys?
* although it’s a problem if he enjoys it too much…*

B1: Well, if he’s someone true to his instincts…

B1: I’ll MURDER HIM right here.
* You brought him here… *
< phew- >

B1: This is for the sake of driving the heart and soul of a referee into Tadasuke.

B1: therefore, let’s start by washing my back.
B2: What?
* This has nothing to do with being a referee *


Page 14
< scrub > <scrub >

B1: {argh..} looks like she really doesn’t see me as a guy….
< scrub > <scrub >

B1: No, no…

B1: !?

B1: Argh, why is she so feminine… // even though it’s Ouka…

B1: Hey! Less slacking, more scrubbing!! /* maybe something like "less slacking, more scrubbing" lol */ /# I like that #/
B2: Y… YES!


Page 15
B1: rub
B2: Wah!?

B1: I’ll wash Tadasuke’s back!!
B2: Mm?
B3: I…Itsuka-chan!?

B1: Ah~~~ That sounds good~~~ {me too}
B2: Hmph
B3: Then I’m with Hina.
B4: Eeh!? {but…Kizaragi-san} /* not sure if that was the name, or if it was with an s */

B1: …..
B2: rub ♥ // rub ♥
< rub >
B3: This is pretty f-u-n!!
B4: Is this okay? Nobody cares… {really?}
< rub > < rub >

B1: All right! Everyone….

B1: Tu~rn right!!
< whirl >
B1: Wah… {so sudden}


Page 16
B1: ……

B1: {What?} Don't tell me you were disappointed. #it’s suppose to be about the bubbles covering, but sounds like it’s about her body….

B1: S, Stop joking!!
B2: Hm Hmmm.

B1: Brace yourself…
< roll > < roll >
B2: I’ll be using all my strength.

B1: Uryaaaaaaa
< Scrub > < scrub >
B2: -----------k!!!

B1: sting // sting
* ar…argh *


Page 17
B1: Kya…
< Squeeze >

B1: Your breasts got bigger again, Hina! Right?!!
B2: Wait…. It-chan!?

B1: Damn- Not fair- all on your own- // don’t leave me behind!!
B2: It… it will be fine, It-chan…. {calm down}
B3: ARGH!! Don’t listen…
B4: Hina’s breasts got bigger….

B1: Don’t fight over something so silly { shameful}
B2: Breasts are completely useless.
B3: mm-…

B1: rather than getting bigger, get taller! both of you!!
B2: …….


Page 18
B1: ….

B1: What?

B1: No, um… when I stare at the mask, // I can think of you as a wrestler…. {so}

B1: I understand your feelings…. // but it makes me uncomfortable when you stare like that….
B2: In this situation.
B3: I thought so… sorry.

B1: If everyone was in their ring uniform….. I wouldn't have to avert my gaze…. {it would be more useful for training…} /* I couldn't really find a nice way of saying he wouldn`t be at a loss for where to look... */
B2: Aww- what a strange thing to say~
# Since I’m guessing I the word “manic” won’t quite work in English, I couldn’t think of something else…

B1: Tadasuke-!! /* btw, are we using this or Tadasuke? */ /# I’m getting mixed up :P #/


Page 19
B1: COUNT!!
B2: No-
* Hina- * * Turn over *

B1: What are you doing!!

B1: A~ll right, from here, use the rope…
* Hina- tag- *

B1: throw!!
* swoosh *
B2: f-, fool!!

< slip >


Page 20
B1: NO---


Page 21
< SLAM ! >

B1: OHHHHHH! Hurl Kick!!
B2: Hina, what a technique!!

< SPLAAASH >


Page 22
B1: Mm…

B1: {Oh} Are you awake?

B1: Eh…? Where am I….? { when did I….}
B2: I’ve never seen someone get KO’d by Hina.

B1: Tadasuke-san!!
B2: Thank god- You're awake!!

B1: I’m so sorry… it’s my fault…
B2: No, the one at fault is…. {this one }
B3: Huh?

B1: So, how is it? Have you built up some tolerance now?
B2: Hmm?


Page 23
B1: You don’t have to worry. I’ll never see you as a woman.
B2: Hoh-

B1: Then let’s test the fruit of your training.
< grab >
B2: Wait…. Ouka-san! You're doing it again…

< cling >

B1: You…
B2: Just kidding!
B3: Wha…

< grab > /* this is going to be epic */


Page 24
< fall.. >

<drip- … >

B1: You need more training!!
< BAAAAAAAM >
B2: Kyaaaa!!
B3: argh…
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Chapter 10- Boy-ish Promise
Page 01
Chapter 10
Boy-ish Promise
{ U-m.. x=2, so…}
{plastic model…}

Page 02
B1: One
B2: Two!
B3: Three!!

< Yay- > < Yay- > <Yay- >
B1: I did it-
B2: Bunny-chan!!
B3: -uch~~~
B4: Are you okay? It-chan…

B1: Hahaha! No problem, no problem!!
B2: {Yah-} I lost again-!

B1: You’re pretty cheery about it. {Even though you lost~}
B2: It's fi~ne. Everyone’s cheering too!!

B1: {Well} I guess…
< Yay- > < Yay- > <Yay- >

B1: !?
{ Argh- I’m starving-}

< grumpy>


Page 03
{ I’m going- }
{ Take care }

B1: Itsuka-chan’s skipping school again?
B2: Mmm- …

B1: The place is bo~ring // even if I go.
B2: Boring….
B3: Listen here…

B1: Just because it’s boring doesn’t mean you shouldn’t go. // If you're always absent, you might be expelled! // To begin with, how could it be fun if you’re in that mindset! // It will get awkward too…
< Blah Blah> < Blah Blah> < Blah Blah>
B2: {Argh} SHUT UP!

B1: Bun-chan, Let’s go!!
{ running away? }
B2: Where?


Page 04
B1: Kindergarten.
{ Eh? }

B1: Huh…

B1: Is it okay
B2: to leave her like that?

B1: Hmm…

B1: But, we're pretty liberal, so...
{ Fu- I’m revived.}
< bleh… >
B2: It’s just anarchy!!


Page 05
B1: Besides, Itsuka-chan is good with kids.

B1: Cause she’s on the same level-
< Open >
B2: you too..

B1: Well, the school is fine…
B2: But, then…

B1: Here.
< thump >
B2: ?

B1: If you're so concerned, go take a look ♥
----- Cell Phone Screen –---
I’ll be eating with everyone, so send me a lunch box~~~~~ > <
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


Page 06
--- WALL -----
JUMBO
Kindergarten
- - - - - - - - -

B1: Will it be bad….
B2: If I intrude on my own? { As I thought…}
< stare >

B1: Tadasuke…

B1: Bunny-chan, fly once more!!
B2: Hey- Let’s play on the seesaw.
B3: Not fair- I’m going on next-
B4: Let me go on too-
B5: Let’s play soccer
B6: Bunny-chan, here, look, look-
{ Wow…}
B7: U…um, Lunch Box… { Are you okay? }

B1: Sorry. Thanks for the help…
{ No…}
B2: Hmm? Where’s Itsuka-chan…?

< SPLASH!! >

{ Hey- here I go- }
{ Spirit Bomb }
{ Wow-- } {Run-}
B1: She’s having so much fun… { This side of her is…}


Page 07
B1: Everyone- take a seat.
PANEL: Sakura

B1: All right then,
B2: Thanks for the meal.
{ Thanks for the meal!! }

B1: Bunny-chan, I’ll give you carrots!!
B2: Eat this too!!
B3: Me too

B1: She’s really popular… Kisaragi-san.

B1: Hey! Itsuka!

B1: I’ll give you carrots too!

B1: {Oh} Hiroki, You are kind!
{ It, it’s a special occasion!! }


Page 08
< lift >
B1: Ah.

B1: Waaah- Itsuka took my food!!
{ Octopus sausage }
B2: Hm! It’s good!!
B3: Itsuka-chan!!

B1: Carrots aren’t even good
B2: in the first place.
{ Waaah} < aaaaah }
B3: That doesn’t mean you had to take that!!

B1: Sorry, I’ll make you one next time… { forgive her} // okay?
B2: { You’ll regret that…} { Argh.. my stomach.. }


Page 09
B1: Stupid Itsuka! That’s why you’re so weak!! {cause you don’t eat carrots!}
B2: What did you say!!

B1: Always losing even though you're a “GUY”!!
< That’s right, that’s right>

B1: I AM A GIRL!!

B1: Liar- you don’t have any breasts!
{ What…}
B2: Yeah! Yeah! /* kick her when she's down now won't you */

B1: Then show us that you don’t have any balls!
< Kya!! >
B2: Girls don’t have balls-
# O___0 /* lol, brings back memories */

B1: A~ll right then, here, take a look!!
B2: You fooool!!

B1: Don’t fight them on their level!!
{ Whaa} {Yaa} { Kids, stop}
B2: But they started it!!


Page 10
B1: I’m not losing 'cause I’m weak!!
B2: I’m losing on purpose because you guys will all whine if Bun-chan loses!!
{ Hey, don’t overdo it }
{ LIAR!!}

B1: Everyone only cheers for Bun-chan anyway!

B1: I…
B2: Of course!!
B3: Bunny-chan is much, much cooler and stronger!

{ YE~AH!!}
B1: ….. // yeah ….

B1: Grrr~~~ that’s why I….
B2: I DON’T CARE ANYMORE!!


Page 11
B1: Ye~ah!! Ye~ah!!
{ Argh }
B2: Try beating Bunny-chan!!

B1: A~ll right! I’ll win the next match!! { It’s next Sunday}
B2: However, if I win…

B1: I’m gonna take some Octopus Sausages!!
{ I’ll take the whole bowl!!}
{ Then, if you lose, bring us some snacks!!} // { Juice too!} // { For everyone!!}
{ Wow }
B2: She’s so childish~~~…

TEXT: But---

B1: If Itsuka-chan tries her best because of this, then….

B1 Today’s Second match is about to start ----


Page 12
< Wow >
B1: What a flashy supporting team!
B2: Hina-ta~n* !!
B3: Fighter Machihira Itsuka enters the ring!!
#TL NOTE: *-tan is a childish way of saying –chan.

< Yeah- > < Yeah - >
B1: Bunny-!!
B2: Fighter Bunny Kisaragi enters the ring with some kids!!
B3: Bunny-chan!

B1: Go!!
< Yeah- >
B2: Bunny-chan!
SFX B3: Step.

B1: !?


Page 13
< STUMP >

< Grab >

B1: First-Blood Wins!!
SFX B2: <Hit> // < Hit > // <Hit >

B1: Rya!!
< Grab >
B2: Bunny-chan, hold on!!
{ Bunny- turn it around!! }
B3: Don’t Lose!!
< Yea- >
B4: ….


Page 14
B1: One!

B1: Two !!
< Escape >

B1: Bunny-cha~n!!
B2: Eat this!!

B1: Argh…gh…
< Num > < Yum > < Num >
B2: There’s still a lot more!!

< Swing >

B1: Here it comes!!


Page 15
< Flip >
B1: Stomp

< SLAM!! >

< Swoosh >

B1: Yeah!!

B1: See, I knew it…
B2: Even though it’s only screams when I’m attacking…


Page 16
B1: When I’m losing, they get pumped up like this.
< Wow >

< Hold >

B1: ONE!

< Ha-…. >

B1: !?
B2: …….

B1: TWO!!
B2: Well, it’s fine…


Page 17
B1: Everyone’s happy, and even if I try, it will still…

B1: ……Hmm?

B1: !?

< Boo--- > < Boo---->
B1: What happened?
{ Hey! Don’t come on the ring! Get down!! }
B2: He’s issuing a warning since Ouka’s trying to intrude.
< Boo--- > < Boo---->

B1: It was Bunny-chan’s Win!!
{ Stupid referee }

< Boo--- > < Boo---->
B1: What are you doing, ref!!
B2: Stop disrupting, Ouka!!


Page 18
B1: What'cha gonna do? Piss off the customers by stopping the count? #that sounds a lot better
B2: I don’t…
B3: want to end this match like this!!

{ Hmm}

B1: Hey, how long are you going to delay the fight!!
B2: Pull her down already!!
B3: Incompetent!!

B1: Now the match can go on!
< Step >
B2: Gosh, he’s such a handful.
B3: But things are heating up quite nicely~ { the crowd too }

< Weak … >
B1: Stupid Tadasuke…


Page 19
{ Everyone wishes for Bun-chan’s victory…}
{ as opposed to mine!! }

< SLAM >

B1: ONE!!
B2: Don’t give up so easily…

{ Giving up and losing….}
{ You shouldn't be laughing wholeheartedly }

B1: TWO!!
B2: It-chan, turn it around!!

B1: It’s fine already…
B2: No one’s cheering for me anyway…


Page 20
B1: THR….
< Escape >

< WHOOOOO >
B1: She got away!!

B1: Wha!!

B1: It-chan! /* cute */


Page 21
< Turn >
B1: !?
< Run >

< Wiggle Wiggle >
B1: Eeh!?

B1: It-chan?
< Dash >
B2: Whaat?
B3: She’s running away!!

< Yeah >
B1: What happened?
< Yeah >
B2: Itsuka ran away.
B3: Then it’s Bunny-chan’s win?
B4: ~~~~…

B1: Itsuka-!?


Page 22
B1: YEeeeeeeeeeah
< Dash >

B1: Ho…!! Interesting…
B2: Ouka-san?

B1: Come, Itsuka!!

< Stop >


Page 23
< Boooom >

< YEeeeeeeaaaaaaaah >


Page 24
{ Aaaa }
{ Ouch….}

< Knock, Knock >

B1: Oh, thank god, You’re awake.
B2: Tadasuke…

B1: Eh? What about the match?
B2: It’s all over. They’re selling the merchandizes right now! // {Customers who purchased our goods can receive free autographs right now} // { Of course, it’s mine, right? } // { No, um….yes}

B1: Here, come in.

B1: Hiroki…

B1: He kept on asking me to see Itsuka-chan, so.
{ Don’t tell her- }
B2: !?

B1: Ah, I see- You brought me Octopus Sausages as promised! { Good job! }
{ My stomach was just starting to feel empty }
B2: ……


Page 25
B1: Stupid Itsuka!!
B2: I won't give you any since you lost!!

B1: Whaaaat!? You don’t remember at all!? // Stop lying, stupid-
B2: I’m not lying! You fell by yourself and lost!!
B3: ……

B1: What were you thinking, stupid! It was so lame!!
B2: …… If it landed, I would’ve won!!
BOX: As expected… // Itsuka-chan is Itsuka-chan

B1: I’m going, Tadasuke-san.
B2: Good luck.

B1: Be careful.

< Swoosh >


Page 26
B1: { Then } I’m off.

B1: Good luck,
B2: Itsuka-chan.

### End of Chap 10 ###

Chapter 11- Nice to meet you, Classmate
Page 01
Chapter 11
Nice to meet you, Classmate


Page 02
< BAAAM!! >

B1: I-…Is it okay to come so suddenly? // She might think I’m weird…
B2: No! There won't be another chance for me to come so naturally…. /* removed the notion of "day", I couldn't make it sound good */ /#agreed.#/

{ As a CLASSMATE!! }
B1: Al….all right!


Page 03
B1: Hel-….
B2: Hello….
< Open >

B1: !?
< BAAAAANNNNGGG!! >

B1: Oops?

B1: Hina-chan’s friend?

B1: Yes…


Page 04
B1: As you kno~w, // she suddenly got a fever.

B1: But Hina-chan will be delighted~~~ // someone came to visit.
B2: Eh!?
B3: She’d be delighted…. {for real!?}

{ This is Hina-chan’s roo~m }
Door Sign: Hina // Itsuka
B1: Ah…

B1: Nnn…..no…that’s embarrassing…
B2: {Eh?} Why?
B3: I’m…not a kid anymore…
B4: What…

{ What’s going on!! }
{Ah- that’s the wrong spot…}

B1: Hina-chan, your friend's here~~~
{ Huh!?}
< Open >


Page 05
B1: !?

B1: {Oh no~~} You haven't made any progress~~~
B2: Mariko-san, you made too much.

B1: Hmm?
{ You should eat a lot, especially when you’re sick~~.}

B1: Sakamoto-kun….?
B2: H…hey… Asano…san.

B1: He came to visit Hina-chan 'cause she missed school today.
B2: Eh?
B3: Aah….no…

B1: Handout…..I took yours too, so….
B2: Oh? Is that so~~~


Page 06
B1: { Sorry} Thank You.

B1: It….it’s nothing…It was on the way so…
B2: So natural…

B1: With this, it's not weird if I visit even if we've never talked…..
B2: Since I’m her CLASSMATE!!

< stab >
B1: Hmmm- so you’re our neighbor. { maybe right next door?}

B1: No… I’m pretty sure Sakamoto-kun’s house was…..
B2: {Oh} then-

B1: A childhood friend!
{ Argh } < slash >
B2: We just became classmates this year.


Page 07
B1: This guy…what’s up with the on-going offensive questions!?
B2: Ah- is that so.
B3: Maybe

B1: Is he jealous of me for being Asano’s classmate?

B1: This person is Tadasuke-san. He’s El Palacio’s…
B2: Referee, right? { I know that.}

B1: Ah, That’s right.
B2: You always come watch us play. /* removed since, not that it was wrong but we've been using it a lot in the last few sentences */

{ Aww~~~}

B1: How nice of you~
B2: You knew?


Page 08
B1: Of course—since we're CLASSMATES.

Background: We’re classmates / We’re classmates / We’re classmates / We’re classmates

B1: Then I’ll go make some tea. Please wait for a bit~~~
B2: Let me lend you a hand, Mariko-san.

< Close >

{ Eh!? }

{ Ah!? }


Page 09
B1: It’s been a long time since a friend of Hina-chan came over~~~
B2: Now that you mention it, Hina-chan never brings her friends over. { although I’ve seen them outside… }

B1: Tadasuke!!

B1: Ho-----w’s this costume!! { Bun-chan made it!}
{ Is it sexy? Huh? Is it?}
B2: It might be good if I added body paint too….
B3: There’s the first reason…..

B1: {Hm?} A guest?

B1: Ah----


Page 10
B1: What’s wrong? You can wait in the room~~
B2: Ah---no, I wanted to let her rest…
B3: I don’t know what to do if we’re alone…. {Although I’d be really happy}

B1: Tadasuke!!

B1: Did you heat up the bath already?
B2: H-… Hey!! Not in front of a teenager!! { Have some decency!!}

B1: Mm?


Page 11
< BANG!! > /* lol. that was awesome */

B1: Are you okay?

B1: I’m so~~~ sorry.
{ No…}
B2: A light punishment for someone who saw my body. {only that}
B3: It’s your fault for roaming around dressed like that! /# but she’s not dressed LOL #/

B1: {Tha~t’s right } Even though he came all the way to visit Hina-chan….right?

B1: How shameful…


Page 12
B1: Getting sympathy for a simple cold. She fails as a wrestler!
B2: Don’t be unreasonable! Hina-chan’s only a middle schooler.

B1: Shiyumisen Ouka…

{ she should be punished}
{ not again…}
B1: This person…. must be bullying Asano on a regular basis… {unforgiveable}
B2: ………

B1: Hey, you. Do you like Hina?
B2: Wh-…what are you saying so suddenly!..... // I…..I don’t….

B1: What an insensitive person!!
B2: It’s not like that….um….you see…ah!

B1: As a fan….I like her!!
B2: Hmmm-


Page 13
B1: Then who’s next? {whose fan are you?}

{ Eh…. U—m…}
B1: Don’t give off such killing intent!! { the rest of you too…} # or “Don’t pressure him!!”
B2: Everyone sure likes bloomers. {damn}

B1: I don’t have any preference for bloomers….
B2: I haven’t said anything!!

B1: Then what do you like? { What's hot with middle-schoolers ?}
B2: School swimsuits?
B3: School swimsuits!?


Page 14
B1: That’s no different from the old days~~ I’m sure WAITRESSES are more…
B2: Waitress!! {Welcome~}

B1:How about…..Bunny Girls? {they were around even before}
B2: Nurses are …..
B3: Eh-, then how about maids!? /* I think it flows much better when they're all plural */ /# yes sir~#/

{ Ah}
B1: When will you drop this useless talk? /* it even rhymes lol */
{ In front of a middle schooler…}
{ It’s not useless! It’s all business}

B1: {Huh} Why is Asano doing pro-wrestling at a place like this… {mumble}

B1: ……

B1: !?
< Step Step>


Page 15
B1: Hina-chan!?
{ Wow}
{ I see, Pajamas!!} /* hahaah */

B1: You should be in bed!! I was going to get the plates later.
B2: No problem. I should move a little…

{ When you’re in such a condition, you need plenty of rest. }
B1: Even though he’s a referee, he keeps calling Hina-chan in such a friendly manner…. { Even I, the classmate, only call her by surname, yet…}

B1: Here, then, please take care….

< drift…>


Page 16
< SHATTER >


Page 17
B1: Ah….
B2: Um….

< blu~sh >

B1: Your fever’s not down yet. // You shouldn’t overdo it.

B1: …… // yes….

B1: Off with the hugging already!!
< Slam >


Page 18
B1: Hey you, how old?
{ -uch}

B1: Hm? …old?

B1: ….even if you ask…..
B2: Stop playing dumb!!
B3: You’re most certainly a lolicon bastard putting his hands on middle schoolers!! /* or pedo, w/e */

B1: Asking him is useless!
B2: Tadasuke has completely forgotten about himself.
B3: !?

B1: no way…
B2: Amnesia….


Page 19
B1: Huh? You didn’t know?
< aaargh >
B2: Hina-chan’s friends I met before knew about it. { so I assumed…} /* haha kick in the balls */

B1: I see…
B2: an excellent setting!!

B1: A mysterious guy who lost his memories…
B2: { of course } then I, a mere classmate,

{ Have absolutely no chance….} // {setting-wise.}

B1:?
B2: AAaaa….

{ It hurts~}
B1: The glass pieces…
{ Aww~ trouble!? }


Page 20
SIGN: HIna // Itsuka
< ready >

< Open >
{…ah}
B1: Ouka…

B1: What, Tadasuke?
B2: No… I was worried about Hina-chan….
B3: It’s just a cold. It will go away with a good sweat and a nap.

B1: No~w I’ll go take a bath—
B2: Ouka!

B1: Mm?

B1: …..

B1: No… // It’s nothing.
{ Huh? }

{ tsk }


Page 21
{ Why is Asano doing pro-wrestling at a place like this…}
{ He’s right…}

{ I’m only here because of how things turned out….} /* I wasn't sure about this one; brought in by the circumstances isn't really an expression I'm familiar with. Maybe somthing like "I'm only here because of how things turned out" */ /# that sounds better #/
PANEL: TADASUKE
{ And I got used to it before I realized, but….}
{ If I think about it…}

{ Why is Hina-chan…}

{ Why is everyone…}

{ Why is she…}


Page 22
{ Not only about me.}

{ I really don’t know}
{ anything at all….}
Door Sign: Hina // Itsuka

/* did you miss a couple of panels here? or are they on the next page */ /# oops…they are on the non-existent page 23 :P #/
B1: Thanks…sorry for bothering you.
{ Are you okay? }
{ You came to visit Hina, yet…}
{ Argh…}

B1: It ended so simply… { my first love}


Page 23
B1: Please come again~~~
< twitch >

B1: …….
B2: R….really?

B1: Of course~~~ {U—m…}
B2: Sakamoto!!

B1: It’s Sakamoto Hajime!!

B1: Then let’s be friends from now on, Hajime-chan~~
B2: Friends!?

B1: !?

< point >
B1: Mmm?


Page 24
B1: It’s a battle from now on!!
B2: Regardless of setting, I’ll overcome any hurdles!!

B1: Huh? {setting….?}
B2: It’s declaration of war—
B3: It’s youth~~
B4: Weird guy

< ah-choo!! >

### END of Chap 11 ###

Chapter 12- I’m not a Heel!
Page 01
Chapter 12
I’m not a Heel!
TL Note: Heel is a villain character in pro-wrestling http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heel_(professional_wrestling)


Page 02
B1: {Wah!} So small!?
--Magnified Text - -
El∙Palacio
[ El∙Palacio Gym Match ]
◊ May 24th, El Palaci
Audience: 120 (full)
 Shiumisen Ouka (Unable to continue #or TKO…although I think the text has to extend to the bubble
 Bunny Kisaragi (17 minutes)
 El Pala Battle Roya
X Shiyumisen Ouka (2minutes 44seconds)
X Bunny Kisaragi (6
X Makihara Itsuka (10 minutes
O Mari the Kid

Super Smile 10th Anniversary
◊ June 6th Super Smile Parking lot
Unknown Attendance
 Makihara Itsuka (12minutes 28 seconds / Power-
 Mari The Kid ( 8 minutes 4 seconds / Es
 Kisaragi (12minutes 40 Seconds S.F.
- - - - - - - - - - - -

B1: Even though other teams have big pictures …. { in color too}
< flip >

B1: It can’t be helped~~~ for small teams like us.
{ Ah, sorry }
B2: Only popular places get to have big articles…
B3: I see….
B4: It’s mostly for guy teams too---
B5: They also need to run a business. { the world is harsh}

B1: Oh!? { Female Pro-Wrestling is in color too }


Page 03
B1: “H∙E∙At ”…
B2: They’re currently the biggest team in Female Pro-Wrestling.

< Ah >
B1: This person is the team’s ace, AZUMI!
B2: Her suplex is really clean…

B1: You must really likes Pro-Wrestling, Hina-chan!
B2: Eh!
B3: You might be on the front cover one day!!

B1: N-, No, someone like me…
B2: You can definitely do it if you try hard!! // You “are” still young!!
B3: “You”? /* it's hard to pull off, tbh. I changed it to you, since it could imply she's saying "only her?" */
B4: R….really?

B1: Hahaha!! It’s impossible for Hina!! {It’s 100 years too early!!} /* should it be "I'm" or "It's" ??? */ [# ooops #]
B2: She didn't waste any time crushing a young girl's dream!! /* changed this to something that would make more sense in English */
B3: ……


Page 04
B1: Don’t you have any words of encouragement!
B2: Don’t worry about it, Hina!
B3: It’s not easy enough to succeed just by trying. {This world}

B1: …….. {so snobby}
B2: Even Ouka’s not…

B1: She’s on it!?

B1: It’s nothing to be excited about!
Itsuka: Where?
Bunny: Hoh—
Mari: Wow~~
Hina: Ama-zing!!

B1: { Aww~} It’s Wrestler Ranking “#1” for this half of the year!!
B2: People who are watching properly know the real deal.


Page 05
B1: In the Heel category ♥ /* lol her reaction is priceless */
B2: Ah, but it’s a tie, so there are two people in first place! { In the Heel Category }
< Pffff… >
TL Note: Heel is a villain character in pro-wrestling http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heel_(professional_wrestling)

B1: Why am I a Heel!!

B1: ……..
B2: You weren’t a bad guy?
B3: ……

B1: Are your eyes bad? // Or is your head bad? { Where have you been looking all this time!?}
B2: Arg…h…
B3: She’s a natural villain!!

B1: Heels are people like Mari who use weapons!!
B2: Amazing!! Mariko-san is in 5th place!!
B3: Aww—


Page 06
B1: But--- Ouka has tons of rough fights!

B1:That’s cause you guys are too weak. // If I fought for real, would it even be a proper match!?
B2:I’m not weak!!
B3: Isn’t it because of your image?

B1: Oh---- What kind of image?
{ No…}
B2: Being strong in a black costume…..is villain-like….
B3: It’s not a big deal!! // Whatever the reason, it’s amazing to be in first place!! { although it’s a tie…} /* holy fucking… she's so damn cute!!! */ [#LOL#]


Page 07
B1: I’m not a Heel…. <mumble…>

B1: Why do I have to be on the same page as someone like her…
--Page—
Top: Popular Wrestler
Middle: Heel category First place (female)
Bottom: Death ∙ K
- - - - - - - - - -

B1: Ouka….?

< grin…>

B1: I thought of something great!!
<flap >


Page 08
< Point >

B1: In front of a big audience // I’ll wash off the dishonor of a Heel
B2: And on the front cover, I’ll announce my greatness….
B3: The ultimate plan!!

BOX: What is this…
B1: ….
BOX: I keep getting bad vibes….


Page 09
Small Word below “H” in HEAt: Female Pro-Wrestling

< Roooooooooar>


Page 10
< Shine >

< Slam!! >
< shock >

< Yeaaaaaaaaah >
B1: Referee, what are you doing!!
B2: Hold her back!!
B3: Fight properly!!
/* he's saying hiiiiii or w/e */

B1: !?

B1: Hmm? That wrestler is…
{ I don’t have any weapons // anyway, pull down the Second }
{ You hid it behind your back!! }

B1: It’s the one who tied for first place with Ouka…
< Flip flip >
B2: Yeah…


Page 11
B1: Death Carpenter.

B1: That's what you call a Heel.
< Slam > < Slam > < Slam >
{ Go stop her!! }
B2: AAAAh

B1: {damn} being bunched together with that…. {I don’t like it}

B1: Nevertheless, there are so many spectators~~ {I’m jealous}
Hina: As expected of H∙E∙At!
Itsuka: We should do somewhere like this too!!
B4: Kisaragi-san?
B5: {Hmm} I stand out too much with a mask {It’s full of Pro-Wrestling fans…}

B1: That’s why I’ll do it!


Page 12
B1: What do you mean? We'll be broke if we rent a huge hall like this….
B2: Broke?

B1: In order to gather such an audience, we need something that will attract a lot of attention~~~
B2: { but…} we lack fighters~~ #can’t think of a better word

B1: Then we could just call outsiders or freelancers.
B2: You can’t call them for free.

B1: That’s right, It-chan, and…
{ Humph }
B2: !?

B1: {Ah?} Ouka-san?
B2: ?


Page 13
< SLAM!! >

B1: Hey, Knock it off already!!
B2: Shut up
B3: Aaaaargh

B1: rrgh…
< hold >

B1: Referee- go stop her!!
B2: That’s too much, Carpenter!!

< knock >


Page 14
# NOTHING!! #


Page 15
B1: What…

B1: O-… Ouka!?

B1: Hey, isn’t that… Ouka?
B2: Ouka?
B3: It’s Shiyumisen Ouka.

B1: What is she doing~~~…..
B2: Maybe…

B1: This is the ultimate plan Ouka-san was talking about ….

B1: Trespassing and saving the wrestler from a weapon attack…. // Hero of justice, huh….

B1: H… Hey what’re you doing!! {You…}


Page 16
B1: SHUT UP!
< BAM >

B1: You Bastard!!

B1: I knew you looked familiar. You're El Palacio’s…
{ El Palacio?}
B2: Our ring isn’t cheap enough for small fry like you to barge in!!
B3: Messing up our ring with outdoor shoes // you won’t get away with this!

B1: { Hmph } If you wanna mess with me, don’t restrain yourself and come in.
B2: I’ll take you on!


Page 17
B1: Shiyumisen Ouka…

B1: The weakling who acts all high and mighty in front of amateurs….

B1: Don’t be so full of yourself!!!
< SLAM!! >

< Grab >


Page 18
< Slam!! >

B1: If you can’t fight without wearing a helmet, stop being a Heel! {You chicken}

< crack >

< thud >

B1: You’re….
B2: DEAD

B1: Oh my~~~ What should we do?
{ She seems really angry~~~ }
B2: W-… We should stop her!!
< rise >


Page 19
B1: Oi Oi Oi!!
B2: Touryou, ignore her!
B3: Ohhh Take her down!!

B1: “H∙E∙At” doesn’t need Ouka!!
B2: Go go go!!
B3: He-y, you're blocking my view!!

{ C’mon, bastard!!}
B1: Ouka!!
B2: You…being a nuisance even in other people’s rings!!

B1: What, Tadasuke? I don’t need any help.
{ stupid }
B2: I came here to stop you!! { Get down already!! }

B1: You’re on her side!?
{ Wha }
B2: Hey! Stop!!

< grab >


Page 20
< exposed >

B1: Kyaaaaaa

< grin… >

< grab…>
B1: eek

B1: Nooo!!
< c’mon c’mon c’mon >
{ s….stop this!! }
{ what a bastard…}

B1: {hai--} ya!!
< slam!! >
B2: Argh…


Page 21
B1: You guys are pretty lukewarm for “H∙E∙At”.

B1: Well then, let’s go home!!
{ move}
B2: Stop, y… { argh }
B3: egh…!!

B1: Time for us to retreat too~~ { before they finds us }
B2: Humph—Ouka’s the only one who got the spotlight.
B3: It was right for me to come disguised

B1: Ouka!!
B2: Don’t stop!!
B3: Why did you come here!!


Page 22
B1: {Geez…} What were you thinking.

B1: Rather than relinquishing your dishonor of a villain… // creating complete chaos…..
B2: Now you’re definitely No.1 without competition.

B1: {Hahaha} Just as planned!

B1:Now, next time, the other side // will definitely come to our ring!
B2: Huh?

B1: Then, despite suffering from weapon attacks… // at the end, I’ll put her down with a clean fight.


Page 23
B1: That’s why you provoked her?
B2: But I doubt the opponent will fall for…
B3: She’ll fall for it for sure.

B1: For a wrestler,
B2: “honor” is your life. #not sure what’s better, “honor” or “reputation”. (think both works) /* yeah, both work, but honor rolls off the tongue better; added your, though */ [# thanks #]

B1: What a…
B2: convenient story…. { I guess.. }

BOX: Next morning
B1: WHAT IS THIS!!


Page 24
--Painting—
TOP: You’re // dead meat!
Right: Die
Right-face: Ugly
Left: N~o everyone, don’t look
- - - - - - -

{ Hahahaha }
B1: Ay-ay-ay
B2: Was this in your plans?
B3: She took the bait all right.

B1: I’ll kill her!!
You’re // dead meat!

{ argh…}
{ Why me…}


### END OF CHAPTER 12 ###

Chapter 13- What a fool…
Page 01
< Wha Wha >

B1: Anyway, that’s a pretty big crowd.
< Wha Wha >
B2: T-Shirts, Towels, DVDs!! Anyone?
B3: We also have Bunny-chan’s bunny-ear goods!!

B1: How many years has it been since we had so many? { reporters came too…}
B2: Well, today’s match is…

B1: special!!

Chapter 13 What a fool….


Page 02
Chapter 13
What a fool…


Page 03
B1: Challenge for deciding who's Heel No.1, eh …?

B1: I guess it’s nice and simple for attracting a crowd…
B2: even though she hated being Heel so much.

B1: Didn’t I tell you? Today will be the end of that dishonor!!
B2: I’ll make all these spectators see clearly…

B1: the true me!!
B2: !?

B1: Y….you fool!! What if someone’s watching!!
< hurry >
B2: Ouka-san, please dress properly!! /* I guess you could use change as well… but then I'd suggest something more like "please get changed as you're supposed to" <- long or just "please get changed" */
[# yes sir #]


Page 04
B1: All right, everyone!!

B1: Today’s a big day for us too!!
B2: In order to prove that Ouka-chan is the most wicked, // let’s give her our best!! #In original text, the “wicked” part reads as “saikyou” with kanji as wicked rather than strongest (sounds the same) I figured it’s better to go with “wicked” although it will sound like “strongest” when the person is actually saying it loud #. /* wicked can still kind of mean strongest/best */
< YEAH>
B3: Everyone’s getting heated up~~~ { how nice } /* grateful didn't make sense to me in this context */

B1: Puny indie team!! // Be thankful that Carpenter’s keeping you company!!
{ What did you say!!}
B2: El Palacio’s already done for!!
B3: Why’s Carpenter even going up on this ring?

B1: Stupid Bastard! Don’t you know Ouka-chan’s dreadfulness!?
B2-below: There’s no one in this town who hasn't suffered any damage from her!!
B3-Tadasuke: Are they…cheering?
B4: Don’t lump Carpenter with an amateur!!

B1: And now, today’s final match… the Ultimate Heel Challenge will begin!! /* I'll stick with Challenge, Determination match just didn't sound right to me */
< psssshhhhh >
B2: In the Blue corner, the walking murderer of “H∙E∙At”… # it’s “Murder Workman” in original text, but I think this is better /* nods in agreement */


Page 05
B1: Death Carpenter player’s eeeeeentraaaaaance!! /* maybe use something like eeeentraaaaaance */

< slash slash slash slaaash >

B1: Ohhhh, she’s all ready to kill!! /* thought about it, I think it's ok as it is */
B2: Cut off Ouka’s head for real!!

B1: No way…. She won’t use that in the match, will she….?

B1: ?
B2: In the Red corner, El Palacio’s tyrant…ah, no…


Page 06
B1:El Palacio’s angel…. Shiyumisen Ouka’s desce~~nt

< whiiiiiiine >

B1: What happened, Ouka-chan!?
< rustle > < rustle > < rustle >
B2: You’re different from usual!!
B3: ……

B1: Why so surprised? This is…
B2: My true self.

B1: !? // a fallen angel!?
{ to oppose even the gods }
B2: It’s a Satan!!
{ Nooo!! }
B3: She’s trying to send Carpenter to the underworld!!


Page 07
B1: !?

< rattle >
B1: Wah, hey, stop!!

< brrrrrr >
B1: { Hey, } she started making something.
< tap tap tap >

B1: This is for you.
< BAM >
B2: As expected, she’s planning to burry Ouka!!
B3: She came to take revenge for that intrusion from last time!!

B1: Tadasuke.
B2: Regardless of what happens, don’t try doing something lame like stopping the match in the middle. // Let her do whatever she wants today.
B3: Don’t be stupid! If I do that, the match is going to be a mess….


Page 08
B1: rgh…
< hit!! >

< SLAM >

B1: !?
B2: Ouka-san!!
B3: That’s dirty!!
B4: sound the gong ♥
{ Yes! }


Page 09
< ring >
B1: grab

< whoosh >

< hold >

< crash >


Page 10
< fall >

< step >

< SLAM >
B1: Argh…!!

B1: rgh….

B1: Hey!! Enough with the dirty tricks!!


Page 11
B1: Have a clean match… /* you could also use "clean" instead of "proper", depending on what you're trying to say */
< bang bang >

B1: Shut up.
< bam >
B2: uch…
< roll roll >

B1: { hey, hey } It’s not like you, Ouka-chan!! // You keep getting owned!!
B2: Fight back!! /*get her back is a bit… I know what it means, but it sounds off */

B1: It’s okay! Let her cheat all she wants for now…
B2: After I've endured everything, I’ll be the one who grabs victory!!

B1: That is the fighting style of a “Baby Face”!!
< bang bang >
{ Hahahaha…. }
B2: She’s laughing as she bleeds.
B3: She’s delighted of seeing blood!!


Page 12
B1: You won’t be laughing for long….

< squeeze…>

B1: I’ll teach your body what happens….
B2: when you pick a fight with “H∙E∙At”.
< squeeze…>

B1: Tadasuke!!
< bang bang >
B2: Please wake up!!
< flicker >

B1: Are you okay!?
{ Ah…yeah }
B2: Go stop her, now!!


Page 13
B1: Yeeeeeaaaaaah…..
< flip >

B1: You guys, I repeat…..

< SLAM!! >

B1: If you do that again, I’ll disqualify you for cheating!!
B2: As you wish

B1: Hey! Come back!!
< drag >
B2: We’ll treat you nicely

B1: Those guys!!
< rise >


Page 14
B1: Please get back!! It’s very dangerous!! Please don’t touch the players!!
< Wha- > < Wha- >
B2: Don’t look down on H∙E∙At!!
B3: Stop! You guys have gone too far!!
B4: That’s the limit!!
B5: It’s dangerous, so please stay back.
{ Bunny- get rid of them! }

{ Ohhh } { Wha--- } { Ohhhhh }
B1: That’s dirty!! Fight one-on-one properly!!
B2: Are you scared??
{ It’s dangerous!! }
B3: This is how Heel fights are!!

< Bang >
B1: Ouka!! How long are you planning to go on with….

B1: ……


Page 15
B1: {G-…} Gong!! Stop the match!!
B2: All right!!

< pick >

B1: Mariko-san!!

B1: If you stop the match now, you’ll get killed by Ouka-chan later~~~
B2: What are you talking about!! {at a time like this}
B3: This isn’t even a proper match!!
B4: Are you sure~~

B1: Getting injured for this… // would be foolish!!
B2: You’re right…

B1: We wrestlers…
B2: are fools. /* We -> doing the action Us -> object of the action */


Page 16
B1: rgh…

B1: !?

B1: Hmm? Protecting her?

B1: Are you backing your teammate even though you’re a referee!!
{ bastard}

B1: If it’s on the ring….
B2: I’ll judge you equally!!


Page 17
B1: Good job—ref!!
B2: Finish it up on the ring!!
B3: Carpenter, finish her!!

B1: Everyone’s….. heated up….

B1: We wrestlers….are fools.

{ If there is an audience…. }

{ we can withstand anything…} /* I would use "endure", but you did use it earlier, so whatever */
B1:Be a good girl and rest in your coffin!!

B1: Ouka!!
{ If we hear the crowd’s voice…}


Page 18
{ We can do anything!! } /* epic */

B1: She flipped it over!!
B2: Time for a counterattack!!

< wobble… >
< damn >
B1: What a tough bitch…. /* bastard is usually for guys only… */

B1: Bring me fire.
B2: Yes!

B1: Shit~~~
B2: The blood is blocking my eyes….


Page 19
B1: !!

B1: Heeeey! Gimme that!!
< grab >

B1: If I wash off the blood with water….
< splash > <splash>

B1: Arghhhhhh, it stings----
< roll roll >
B2: {wha..} she poured alcohol….

B1: If she took a flame attack in that state…
B2: She’d burn for real!!

B1: Is that why!? // To prevent me from using a flame attack….

B1: What the heck is this!!
< spill >
B2: pfff!!


Page 20
< BURRRN!! >
B1: Argh…!!

B1: Ohhh, she’s serious!!
B2: That Ouka bitch tried to burn Capenter!!
B3: So that’s why she took the bottle!!

B1: To go to that extent!!
B2: The ring is burning!!
B2: FIRE!!
< burrrrn >
B4: No…. No joke!!

B1: I can’t fight with this fool!!


Page 21
< tight >

B1: {How is it? } Compared to yours….
B2: !?

B1: “El Palacio”’s ring is…..

B1: MUCH HOTTER!!


Page 22
B1: That’s amazing! Going beyond specialty magazines and getting on a sports newspaper!! {Daily morning issue too}
-- Newspaper –
TOP: _year) _ month __ day Tudesday Thank You Sports
Header Left: For real! // Work of a devil!!!
Header Center: Fire on Pro-Wrestling ground!!
Left-Picture: Luckily, no one got hurt.
Bottom-Picure: Terrible Accident!? Audience running away from a genuine fire (picture)

{ Hmph }
B1: Finally, a newspaper debut…
B2: That sort of article… Is completely pointless!


Page 23
B1: But…at least it earned us some attention.

B1: I too… Should learn more about being a referee!
{ You’re finally motivated!! }

B1: …….

B1: What? /* cute */

B1: {No…} I was thinking……If I had been a better referee....


Page 24 /* cute x2*/
B1: This has nothing to do with it! Stupid!!
< bang >
B2: argh…

B1: Ouch!

B1: Are you okay, Hina?
B2: If it’s bothering you, you can go join Ouka.
B3: Awwww.
B4: I-… I’m busy right now!

### END of Chapter 13 ####

Chapter 14- My first House-Watching

Page 01
Chapter 14
My First House-Watching


Page 02
B1: Hmm-----
B2: a picnic!?

B1: Bunny-chan is so~ popular~~ Getting calls for so many different events ♥
B2: Here’s the lunchbox.
B3: Today, they’re going sweet potato picking.
B4: {Aww~} I should go too!!
{ Eh!?}

B1: It-chan has school!! // It’s almost final exam season!!
{ No----}
B2: But a picnic is much more f~u~n. /* I'll leave it as is */

B1: { I see…} then if you get a 100 on the test, // we’ll go anywhere Itsuka-chan wants ♥
B2: Really!!
{ It’s a promise!! }
B2: Such a carefree life. {impressive} /* I like this phrasing better, I think it's similar to what you wanted to say. */ [# agreed #]


Page 03
B1: Hey, Mari—Isn’t it time to go?

B1: You guys are going out too?
B2: We need to meet the shop owners to discuss the summer festival~~~
{ Ah—that thing }
B3: Therefore….

B1: Clean up your master’s room while we’re gone!!
{ O…Ouka-san}
B2: ……

B1: You should clean your own room by yourself!
B2: Always asking Tadasuke-san to do it….

B1: I’m not asking! // It’s an ORDER!!
< grab >
{ Ahh~}
B2: I’ll do it, so hurry up and go!!

B1: {Well,} You have nothing better to do, so why not clean all of our rooms?
{ Then Hina won’t have any complaints, right? }
B2: Got it! Yes, ma’am! Your wish is my command!!
B3: No….I’ll feel bad!!


Page 04
B1: No problem! I won’t break anything, so leave it to me!! #Slightly different from the original, but this feels better…
< thud >
B2: But….

{ I’ll leave it to you, then-- }
B1: It’s a rare favor, so guess I’ll take it….
B2: But don’t touch more than you need to. /* not really right, but I'll leave it; something like "but don't touch more than you need to" would be more correct imo */ [# that’s better. I was looking for something better, but couldn’t come up with one :P #]
B3: ?

B1: Girls have many secrets….
B2: right ♥

B1: …….

< Beep >

B1: No worries!! I won’t touch those stuff!!
{ Eh? What sort of…}
{ Hehehe}


Page 05
B1: All….right.

B1: Ouka’s room will suck up the most time, so….. // I’ll take care of the other rooms first!!
Door Sign: Hina // Itsuka
-- Floor Plan –
2F Top View
Hina & Itsuka
Bunny
Mari
Biggest-room(left): Ouka
- - - - -

B1: As expected…. Hina-chan’s side is properly organized.
B2: This side is…. Itsuka-chan’s territory….


Page 06
B1: Although it’s pretty cute compared to Ouka’s ….
< thud thud >

B1: { Argh } Washed clothes and used clothes are all mixed up…

B1: If they're not folded properly, they'll get wrinkled.
{ I wonder which one is Itsuka-chan’s…? }

< Open > /* lol */

< Slam !! >

B1: Hina-chan’s…. right?
{ It’s organized nicely }


Page 07
-- Floor Plan –
Hina & Itsuka
Bunny
Mari
Biggest-room(left): Ouka
- - - - -
Door Sign: Kisaragi
B1: I’ve never been in Kisaragi-san’s room before….

B1: Kisaragi-san always has her mask on, so I wonder what her room looks like….. // To be honest, my curiosity is tingling…
< open >
< Peeek >
{ Pardon my intrusion}

< BAM!! >

{ Well…. }
{ I saw it coming…}

B1: Oh!


Page 08
B1: That’s a pretty nice sewing machine.

B1: {Ah, that’s right} Kisaragi-san made her mask and all the costumes.
{ Bunny's mask is handmade…}
{ Bun-chan made it for me---}

B1: It’s pretty amazing, but I guess I shouldn’t touch anything…

B1: mm?
B2: Ouka…? 75 of E....


Page 09
B1: She’s was STRIPPED of all her data!! /* not sure if that's the correct verb to use… it doesn't sound quite right… maybe "she was stripped of all her data!!" */
--Left Table –
a | Under Bust | 75(E)
b | Chin to Bust | 23 cm # it’s the distance between neck bone and breast. Is there a word for it?
c | Nipple Distance | 18.6 cm #.....is there a word for this one too??? /* sorry, I don't know either… you can use "chin to bust" for chisagari or something */
- - - - - -
-- Right Table –
Ouka-san | Date: 201-
1 | Height | 178 cm
2 | Weight | 60.5 kg
3 | Feet to Shoulder | 152.5 cm
4 | Upper Body Length | 63.5 cm /* what exactly is this, lol, isn't it the same as height? */ [# it’s the height when one’s sitting guess Upper Body Length is better#]
5 | Leg Length | 89 cm
6 | Head | 31.1 cm /* you should use something better than size, like diameter or circumference */
7 | Chest | 95 cm /* again, probably better to use diameter */
8 | Waist | 63 /* ditto */
9 | Lower Abdomen
------------------

B1: A…anyway, I better hurry up and clean…
{ E cup… }

-- Floor Plan –
Hina & Itsuka
Bunny
Mari
Biggest-room(left): Ouka
- - - - -
Door Sign: Mariko

{ Mariko-san’s room… }
{ I peeked a little before…}

B1: Stuff other than the room…
< Open >
{ Pardon the intru~sion }


Page 10
B1: Eeh!?

B1: S….so fancy!!


Page 11
B1: Such a cute pajama… {aww- aww-} {Mariko-san?}

B1: I wonder if she hugs it to sleep…. #is there such a phrase? /*yes, though it's usually "hug myself to sleep" */
B2: Scatter Scatter // Scatter…

B1: ?

B1: !?

B1: I don’t think…I should carelessly tamper with anything in this room.


Page 12
-- Floor Plan –
Hina & Itsuka
Bunny
Mari
Biggest-room(left): Ouka
- - - - -
SKULL-Head: Ouka

< MESS >
B1: Honestly…

B1: No matter how many times I clean it, it’s always a disaster… {geez}

B1: If only she threw away the trash,
B2: tied up discarded magazines….

B1: and took out the laundry on time, it wouldn't be such a mess…
B2: !?
< toss >
< grab grab >


Page 13
B1: …..
{ Welcome to the rumored E-Cup-acio } /* lol… maybe make it "Welcome to the E-cup-accio" or something to make the joke more obvious */ [# LOL you’re a genius #]

{ Ah }

B1: {d…damn} If you’re gonna make me clean, at least hide the underwear!!
B2: If Ouka had even the tiniest bit of shame…

{ Huh…}

B1: I’m finally done…

B1: But it’s already evening…


Page 14
{ Photo…? } /* good one too */


Page 15
{ Why’s it ripped… }

{ Photo with an ex-boyfriend…}
{ … something like that… }


Page 15
B1: I’m home!! {sorry I’m late! }

B1: Welcome back, Hina-chan!

B1: Tadasuke!! Did you finish cleaning?

B1: !?
B2: O..Ouka!?

B1: We all met outside, so we had some tea together!!
B2: Seems like Bunny-chan’s not back yet~
B3: A, aaah…. So that’s why everyone…

B1: …… // something wrong?
B2: Eh!? W…why?


Page 16
B1: { I see…} Did you see something you shouldn’t have while cleaning?
B2: !?
{ Startle }

B1: …..

B1: I…I’ll go and change…
< run >
B2: ?
B3: Hina-chan?

B1: Did you steal Hina’s underwear?
{ What…}
B2: I wouldn't do such a thing!!

Sign: Hina // Itsuka


Page 17
B1: Where did you hide the underwear? {spit it out}
{ Stop, stop, stop----}
B2: There’s no way I'd steal it!!

### End of Chapter 14 (that was short…page-wise ) ###

Chapter 15- After the Festival…

Page 01
Chapter 15
After the Festival…


Page 02
B1: Tadasuke!! Let’s go to the summer festival!!
B2: Sorry for the wait.

B1: Wow! You guys look great!!
{ Hehe, right? }
{ Aww~ Tadasuke-chan’s quite the smooth talker~~ }
B2: T…Thank you so much.


Page 03
B1: You guys don’t look like Pro-Wrestlers at all.
{ Just like normal, cute young ladies… }

B1: That’s not a compliment. {For us…}
{ No… }
B2: Kisaragi-san, I can’t see you as anything other than a wrester… { even with traditional clothes } # too wordy, maybe? /* there aren't really many alternatives; you could say "still wearing that mask" or something, but that's about it */ [# maybe that works better #]

< thud >
B1: pfff…

B1: Tadasuke, hurry up and get ready!


Page 04
B1: Why are you dosing off? { Hurry up and change }
< roll roll… >
B2: Ou ou ouch!!

B1: {ch~} Can’t you act more like a girl at least when wearing a Yukata*?
*TL Note: Yukata is Japanese traditional clothing…google it!
< sting sting >

< grab >

B1: !?
< tight >


Page 05
B1: Wah…
B2: Wha….

B1: Didn’t I tell you before?
B2: You’re a referee, so…

B1: Don’t see us as women!!
{ Ouka Breaker- // Die--- }
< squeeze squeeze >
B2: -----ch!!!
B3: Tadasuke-san!?

< bam bam bam > #is this drum SFX?
--Lantern Letters—
Left: BarBeer Shouhei*
Middle: Fu Jin Kan (不沈館) #I have no clue what this place is. Some place that doesn’t sink???
Right: Step Village Shop
- - - - - - - - - - - - -


Page 06
B1: Wow!!
< bam bam baam>

< yay yay >
--Shop title—
Right: Gold Fish Scooping
Middle: Yakisoba #or “Fried Noodles”
Left: _kisoba
---------

< yay yay >
--Shop title—
Right: Apple Candy
Middle: Dai Han Ya(大判焼) #Big fry of Judgement???
Left: _kuji
---------

Page 07
B1: All ri~~ght, let’s eat!!
--Shop title—
Left: Fried Squids
Right: _fry
- - - - - -
< Yeah~~ >

B1: {Ah,} Bunny-cha~n!
{ Look--}
{ I got a big one!! }
B2: We’re all doing it over there.

B1: Hey, Ouka-chan, Mariko-chan!
B2: {Aww~} Mr. Head Merchant, how do you do~~~.
B3: Yo!

B1: You’ve got a pretty nice crowd!

< Sta~~~re > #or dumb folded

B1: Okay then…I’ll start // looking around slowly.
B2: How about you, Hina-chan? {aren’t your friends around?}
B3: Eh…// Ah….


Page 08
B1: Um….
B2: { Then…} I’ll come with you…. /* wow. */

--Lantern Letters—
Left: Shop Organization
Right: Step Village Shop
- - - - - - - - - - - - -

{ Tadasuke-san…}
{ He’s the same as usual…}


Page 09
{ Just as I thought…. He didn’t see it…}
{ That photo }
{ If he'd seen it, he would have definitely noticed my feelings…}

{ If that happened…}

{ We wouldn't be able to….}

B1: Hina-chan, now!!
< startle >


Page 10
B1: Ah…

< giggle >

{ I failed}
< Ahahaha >

B1: All right! I’ll take revenge…
B2: Hina!! Tadasuke!!

B1: Quit playing.
B2: Time for Work!!


Page 11
B1: At this time, the All-Stars of El Palacio will…
B2: start the “Yukata Battle Royal”!!
< yay- // yay >

B1: Wait…
B2: Any player who gets a ring out or a three count will be eliminated…

B1: Hey, I wasn't told about this!! {ridiculous}
{ Huh, really? }

B1: Ouka!!
B2: Bunny-chan!!
B3: The last one standing is the win~ner!!
B4: Go, fight!!


Page 12
B1: Then….START!!
< BAM >

B1: Hina and Bun-chan, let’s cooperate for now!!
B2: y…yeah!

B1: Mari-sa~n!!

B1: Taking down the strongest first is the standard tactic in a Battle Royal.
B2: I’m in, too.

B1: Sounds fun… /* cool font */
< Dooooom >


Page 13
B1: I’ll take you all down.

B1: Wow--- a 4-vs-1 right off the bat!!
B2: Hina-tan, be careful!!
{ All right, let’s go!}
B3: Ouka!!
B4: G~~o, go crush Ouka first!!

B1: Orya!!
B2: Hmmph!!
< Grab >
B3: Even if you guys team up…

B1: You’re still no match for me. /* what was there before didn't really make sense to me */
< toss >
B2: Kya…

B1: Wah--- Hina-tan gets a ring out right from the get-go!? /* gecko is something else lol */ [# oops…I used it a lot though :P #]
B2: She’s falling!!
B3: We’ll catch you!!

B1: Kyaaa!!


Page 14
B1: gh!

< Squeeze >

B1: Kyaaaaa
{ S….sorry}
B2: Referee, what are you doing!!
B2: You bastard, where’re you touching!!

B1: It’s okay….I’m fine.
B2: I’m really sorry…
< Hey >
B3: It’s dangerous to fall from here!!
B4: Are you looking down on Pro-Wrestling?

B1: Banned!! Ring out is banned!!
B2: Huh?
B3: Well, it’s no big deal…


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B1: then….
< hit >

< bam!! >
B1: ch…

B1: Now!!
B2: Everyone, fall!!

B1: 1! // 2!
B2: 3!!
B3: Argh…
B4: We’ll finish it with a 3-count.

B1: Player Shiyumisen Ouka, eliminated!!
B2: Ouka’s gone!!
B3: Great job, Mari!!
{ Roooar }
B4: What’s going on?
B5: Pro-Wrestling?


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< Yay Yay >

B1: {‘amn} I was so close to winning
{ Bun-chan is a traitor…}
{ It couldn't be helped..}
B2: You and Kisaragi-san were the only ones left
{hmm}
B3: Treasure that feeling.

B1: {hey~} Good work. // Here, you should have some too!
B2: Eh…no…
B3: I wonder if it’s fine…for me to drink alcohol…
{ Here, have some more }
{ Oh---- Thanks, Mari-chan }

B1: You~’re right…. Tadasuke-chan has no memories…..
{ We don’t know if he’s legal~~~}

B1: {Then} You’ll know if you try some, right?
{ Yeah Yeah }
B2: Let's see if you’re a brat who can’t even drink! /* I don't like Whether in the start of a sentence, mostly since it's a fragment */ [# Aye aye sir! #]


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< gulp gulp gulp gulp >

< phaaaaa >

B1: It’s good….

B1: Haha!! You must’ve been quite a heavy drinker!!
{ That’s…}
B2: I’m not sure if I should be happy or sad….

B1: Aww~ that’s another important aspect of yourself
B2: Right?
B3: Eh?


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B1: Wah….
< SLAM >

B1: Then…
B2: It’s important to know your limits!

B1: Mari!
< Bang >

< Gulp gulp gulp gulp gulp >
B1: Ouka-chan is a good drinker.
B2: Pff
B3: Pfff
{ Aah }
B4: What a waste! Drink, drink!!
< Splash splash >


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B1: MM? Done already?

{ urgh~}
B1: Tadsuke-san!?

B1: Are you all right!?
B2: Hit your limit already?

B1: Tadasuke-san!
B2: Here, I’ll carry you…

B1: …..mm?

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< bu-dump>

{ W….why….} /* them legs~ */


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B1: Zzz---
B2: Zz----

{ That photo… // Even Ouka….}
{ Had a guy she liked….}

B1: Don’t see us as women!!

{ That’s right…}
{ It has nothing to do with me….at all….}

{ Nothing to do….. // with me….}


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{ But why am I so….}

B1: What!?

B1: W…why’s she sleeping like this.


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< slide….>

B1: He’s still sleeping….is he okay?
B2: Tadasuke-san.

B1: Tadasuke-san, are you awake…?

B1: Tadasuke-sa….


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B1: U…..
B2: Um….

B1: Ah…no, this is….

B1: Excuse me!!
< run >
< spill >
B2: Wai….. Hina-chan, this is a misunderstanding….

{ Pwaaaa~~}
{ What’s this, shut up! }
{ Urgh}
{ My chest hearts…}
{ Slam }

--Caption at side—
- Welcome to the El-Palacio 2 ∙ Complete –
- - - - - - - - -- -


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Wordz around Hina: Asano // Hina


### End of Chap 15… and vol 2 :D ###














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