Koko ga Uwasa no El-Palacio 17

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Chapter 17- Cause I’m a Heel….


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Page 01
Chapter 16
'Cause I’m a Heel…


Page 02
B1: Aww~~~ Isn’t that cute ♥
B2: They’re all very good~~~
B3: {Eh--} I’m so much better!!
B4: Don’t compare yourself with a kid….

B1: What are these pictures?
B2: The teacher gave us pictures the kids drew.

B1: It’s all Bunny. {Is it fun to draw the same stuff as everyone else?}
B2: It’s because they all like Kisaragi-san.


Page 03
B1: ‘cause kids love masks.
B2: If Ouka-san put a mask on, they’d all be happy.
B3: My popularity point is only the mask!?

B1: Who’d be happy for such beauty being hidden?
B2: Humble as ever! #does this work? /* hmm, not really, at least imo */

B1: …..


Page 04
B1: That’s right!!
B2: !?

B1: I’ll make cookies again, so please give them to everyone ♥
{ As thanks for the pictures ♥}
{ They’ll all be delighted }
B2: Ah, but they’re on summer vacation.

{ Eh!?}
< depressed >
{ I’ll eat them for you!!}
{ Wah…}
B1: She seems really disappointed!

B1: Then can't we just invite them
B2: over here?
{ Eh?}


Page 05
B1: That’s a pretty unusual suggestion coming from you… {something wrong?}

B1: I want to teach those brats what true charm is!
B2: What is she plotting now!?

B1: That’s a great idea~~~☆
{ right?}
B2: Then I’ll try asking them at tomorrow’s match.

B1: I should make them lo~~~ts of tasty stuff ♡ { What would be good?~~}
B2-Hina: Ah, I’ll help you.
B3-Itsuka: I want bucket pudding!! /* never heard of "bucked pudding" before */ [# oops lol #]
B4: You seem…. extremely happy, Mariko-san.

B1: {Hehehe} Because…


Page 06
B1: when I imagine how everyone will be happy…..see ♡

B1: GYaaaaa!!
B2: Bwaaaa!!


Page 07
B1: No--- please stop!!
< squeeze squeeze >
B2: gh…

{ st…}
B1: Stop, dummy!!
B2: Bunny-chan’s gonna die!!
{ don’t give up!!}
{ No---}
{ Bwaaaa}

B1: Please fight properly, Mari-san!!
B2: They're all crying!!
< Gyaaaaa > < Bwaaaa >

B1: Bunny-chan!!
B2: Eat this!!

< Piiiiii >


Page 08
B1: Estoreja!! /* what's that? lol */ [# think it’s the horse’s name :P #]

< toss >
B1: Bite
< toss >
B2: Bite

{ pyaaaa }
{ Pyaaaaa }
B1: It’s not yours!!
B2: H…horse!?

B1: Don’t eat them!!
B2: Mari-san!! Please stop that….

B1: Ooh……
< push >

< roll > < roll >
B1: egh


Page 09
< slam!! >
B1: It’s Ouka!!

B1: Ouka’s interfering!! /* I keep thinking "intruding" isn't the best word here. maybe "barging in", but I don't know… still doesn't sound right */
B2: O…Ouka-san?
B3: BUNNY, ARE YOU OKAY!!
B4: She came to save her!?
B5: Good work, Ouka!!
B6: Praise me more!!

B1: Mari, I won’t tolerate any more of your tyranny!!
B2: You’re one to talk!

< woosh >
B1: !?

B1: Phew
B2: Go take care of her.


Page 10
B1: Oh!
B1: tight
B3: tch…
< Jump!! >

B1: One horsepower isn’t enough to take me down!!
B2: Don’t take me lightly!!
< grab >

B1: Be a good girl and stay there.
B2: Wh….Hey, wait just a sec!!
{ It’s dangerous}
{ Please stay back}

B1: This isn’t…. a proper fight at all!!

B1: Let’s have the first public presentation of Bunny’s bare face!
B2: !?


Page 11
B1: St…
< stretch >

B1: STOOOPPPP
B2: No—stop!!
B3: That’s dirty!!
B4: Don’t take off the mask!!
< Uwahhhhh >

< grab >
B1: Bunny, don’t give up!!
B2: Are you okay~~~!?

B1: Take a hold of….
B2: How barbaric… #or “crude”

B1: Aren’t there more theatrical ways to stop cheating?
< FALL >
B2: bfff..


Page 12
B1: You've still got a lot to learn. /* hell yeah, teach me some more */

B1: gh….

< wooosh >
B1: !?

B1: COUNT!!

B1: O…One, // Two
B2: Three!!

B1: Yeah!!
B2: She won!!
B3: Don’t finish it by yourself!!


Page 13
BOX: Next day.

{ ha~~~ }

B1: You've still got a lot to learn.
B2: Even if you say that….

B1: Yesterday’s fight could have turned out like Carpenter’s fight…
---Background---
Top: Gah…
Left: Fight properly….
-----------

B1: Ahhhhh I don’t get it!!
{ Why’s everyone breaking the rules so easily!! }
B2: Bunny-chan!!


Page 14
B1: Welcome, everyone!
{ We’re here}
{ Yay--- Bunny-cha~n}

B1: {Ah} That’s right, we talked about it before…
{ Bunny-chan, look, look!!}
{ We all brought carrots}
{ We have tons}
B2: Th- thank you…. But there are other stuff to eat this time…

B1: Wow!!
B2: Awe~some!!

B1: Everyone, don’t hold back!
B2: First come, first serve!!
B3: But It-chan should hold back!
B3: I don’t think she’s listening….
< Ya~~~~Y >

B1: Wa~it!! If you wanna eat…
< Slide >


Page 15
B1: Do it after drawing my picture!! /* added picture. */

< Pose…>

B1: Thanks for the meal!!
{ Thanks for the me~al}
< Yay--->

B1: Bastard!!
< whirl whirl whirl >
B2: Uheeeee

B1: Wha----- I wanna roll!!
B2: Me too!!
{ mm}

B1: Ora ora ora ora ora ora ora ora ora ora!!
{ Kya--}
< round round round >
{ Ahahaha}
{Yay- }
B2: Shouldn’t we stop her!?
B3: They seem….happy.
B4: Kids are amazing….


Page 16
{ Me Next!!}
{ Ahahahaha}
B1: I guess it’s fine if they play and get hungry.
B2: since Mariko-san went way overboard….

{ Let’s hurry up and eat!!}
B1: Now that I think about it….. // Where’s Mariko-san?

B1: She went out saying she’s going shopping…. {Looks like she forgot something}
B2: Shopping?
B3: Eh? Why at such a time…? { she could’ve just told me…}

B1: Tadasuke-san!?
< run.. >


Page 17
Sign: Steptown

< ring ring >
B1: Welco~me

{ha} {ha}
B1: {phew…} I knew it….

B1: Oh my, Tadasuke-chan!?
B2: What are you doing in such a place!
B3: That’s rude

B1: They 're all there! // If you don’t go back soon…


Page 18
B1: Just as I thought, you went out on purpose by saying you’re going shopping.
B2: You were looking so forward to it, but why…

B1: Well, you see~~~
< clang >

B1: The kids will be te~rrified if Mari the Kid shows up.
B2: But Mariko-san and Mari-san are different.
B3: The grown up fans would understand … but they’re just kids.

< Ha…. >

B1: Then… you shouldn’t do those rough fights..
B2: My job would also be so much easier…

B1: !?
< chang >


Page 19
B1: Mari the Kid is a heel*.
*TL Note: As mentioned before, heels are villain characters in pro-wrestling

B1: That is true… // but the real Mariko-san…
B2: Is kind and loves kids…. You're everyone’s mother…

B1: Everyone’s big sister!!
< chung >


Page 20
< grab >

B1: Let’s go!!
B2: Eh?

B1: It’s okay, they’ll understand…
B2: They will. /* otherwise it just sounds weird */

B1: Wait….Tadasuke-chan!!

{ Tadasuke-chan}
{ Is becoming a very nice guy } /* watch your back, Tadasuke! Don't drop the soap. */


Page 21
< slide >

B1: W-… we’re back!!
B2: Tadasuke-san! // Mariko-san too!!

B1: Where have you been?

B1: S-…. Sorry!!

B1: Everyone… welcome….
B2: Ah-----


Page 22
B1: It’s Mari the Kid!!
< she appeared >
< waaahhhh >
< Kya-- >
B2: It’s okay! Normal Mari-san is….

B1: { Haha} I can easily take out Mari for you!
B2: You’re a dumbass!!
< Bwaaaa > < Pyaaaa >

B1: Umm, everyone…. This is Mariko-san and…
B2: Although they look alike, she’s completely different from Mari the Kid….


Page 23
B1: Wai…. Mariko-san….

< Shhhh >


Page 24
B1: See kids! The evil has been vanquished!! /* just making it fancier lol */ [# lol nice #]
< Yay! >
B2: ………

B1: But, that Mari the Kid was different from usual
< yeah >
B2: She seemed like a Granny #a bit exaggerated, but I don’t think there’s a more suitable word.

B1: It’s Granny the Kid

B1: Definitely a granny!
{ Ahahahaha }
B2: ……

B1: !?
{ Yup, that was a granny }
{ Granny! }
{ Stinky Granny }

B1: Who’s a granny, you damn brats!!
B2: No, stop, Mariko-san!!
{ BWaaaaah }
B3: Amusing… bring it on!!

### End of Chapter 17 ###