Belmonde le VisiteuR 5

I changed (or should say corrected) the names as per the comments in the last thread. please see the last chapter translation thread to read the details. Basically the new characters' names are all puns.

01
-Get a grip on yourself, balayeur!
-If I slow down and think it through, I can make sense of this situation

-Tonight...I came to kill a "Belmonde" who lived in this cloister...
-Man, that face of his pisses me off

-But I couldn't read the movements of his sword...
-So--

left: What is he looking at??

02
-ARGHH! I CAN'T UNDERSTAND A DAMN THING!!
-WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED?? HOW DID THINGS TURN OUT LIKE THIS!?

-What do you mean "what happened"?
-When you chop something up with this sword, that's what happens

-Normal people don't really have that ability...
技術的にも　性格的にも
-Nor that terrible personality!!

03
top left: The 5th Act - The neat freak
below title, small: A mysterious tale of Baroque torture
below title, large: There's times of peace and quiet, even for those deep underground...

04
-Better put all your strength into holding up your ass //t/n - this is literally what he says
-If you slip up for a second, that body of yours that's barely connected will fall to pieces
-And you'll die

-If you want me to save you, then you'd better tell me everything
-Where you heard about my secret existence, and why you came to take my life

-Hmm...
-I can't seem to remember...

-Really...what a shame, I guess I'll just have to let you die
-But you know, I'm a very merciful guy

-That's why I'll give you one last chance to live
-I have just the perfect game for someone who loves to be as clean as yourself

05
-Ww-what are you doing!? What are you plaining to do with that vermin!?! 汚物

-Ew! I hate rats more than anything else!!
-Celine, you're afraid of them?
-I ate them when I was on the streets...
-EEEH?!
-You're lying! (small - no way!)

-What?? What'd you put on my head!!
-One of Chloe's handmade meatballs. It doesn't taste as good as it smells, though [香りの割りに味は今一だがな」
-Oh my...(blush)
-IT'S NOT A COMPLIMENT!!

-Well then, I'll just let this little guy down by your feet
-Drawn by the smell of the meatball, he'll climb up your body's staircase...

06
-And he'll eat the meatball on top of your head
-If you can hold out the whole time, you win
-I'll put your body back to normal

-Me and these three promise not to interfere
-Well? wanna play?

-He means to let that vermin crawl all over my head!?
-Who the hell would accept that challenge?!

-...that's what I want to say, anyway...but at this rate I'm going to lose my grip and die!
-Okay, I'll do it
-Oh? I'm glad
-umu (=chuckle) Because I'd hate to see someone die a needless death (small - probably)

-He's not treating him like a prisoner...this is just like his usual interrogations
-Belmonde is trying to find out everything he knows...

07
-Yosh! Here we go! チューベルグ Chuuberugu! (Any clues as to what his name might mean? Is it a french word? Chuu would be squeak in japanese...+ berge ...??)

-He named it...

-sniff
-sniff

-C'mon!! N-no wait, stay away!!
-N-never mind...just come!! small - damn

-I-it's coming!! The vermin is headed this way!!

08
-It's already figured out where the meat is!! That little pig!! 卑しん坊
-Just like you... (small - quietly (?) )
-If anyone's a pig, it's definitely you Chloe!!
-.........i suppose so (small: i can see why)
-She admits it?!

-You can do it you can do it you can do it!!
-It can't last more than 30 seconds!

-uhehehehehee!!
-T-Tickles!! Every section (切断面) it touches just tickles too much!! I'm losing my grip!!

-Are you alright? Looking pretty shaky there! プルプル (don't know what this means)

09
-Damn...so this is what he meant?
-How the hell is this being "merciful"?! He's evil!!
-Uhehehe!!

-uh huh
-Just keep it up!

-Uhehehee! Uhehehe!
-Gotta endure it!! The meatball is going to fall! Don't give up!! My body will fall apart!!

-It stopped...that's where his dick is, right?
-You don't need to use that word!!

10
-wH-WHAT SMELL ARE YOU GOING AFTER?!

-buHWAAHA!! It smells? It smells down there?!
-I thought you were Mr. clean!!

-Monsieur Belle is so vulgar! Laughing at jokes like that...
-There are plenty of men who aren't aware of their odor...(small: it must be strong...)
-I think I'm fine...

-...ung
-ughnghh!!
-...ch...OI!!

11
-BUWAHAHAHAHAAH!!!
-I didn't know you two were that close!

-Oh!
-He started climbing again!

-uhehehehe! uhehehe!
-You little furball! I'm going to mince you to bits later!!

-Gah...a...aah!! This is bad...I can't hold back from laughing...I'm at my limit!
bottom corner: uhehehe! uhehehe
-I'm slowly losing my grip!!
-Ah...only three more seconds...!
-UHEHEHE!!

-all the bubbles here "uhehehe"
leftmost: D-damn...this is it!!!

12
-I-it jumped!!

-H-hey!! This...
-this fleabag is on my face!!
-...but...

-Je t'ai-------me!! (I love you!!)
-I would never have guessed I loved rats this much!!
(t/n - i hope it's clear he's just happy at the fact he's almost free...strange wording here)

-Yosh!! Just a little more!! A little more!!

13
-Ah!! It's almost there!

-YOSH! I WIN!!

-What's wrong?! Why'd you stop!?

-Why are you shaking!?
-Hurry up and grab it!! GO!!!

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15
-What's this? I wonder what happened to Chuuberugu

-Aha!!
no bubble: Camus is such a good boy
-Belmonde said he wouldn't interfere...so this is what he meant

-Why?! What's happening?!
-EAT IT!

-what are you doing, takin' a leak!?
-Quit spreading your filth, you piece of trash!! (汚物が汚物を出すな！）

-Hah...!!
-I moved too fa...
-st!!!

-agu---!!

-Hahaha!
-Your loss!
-Then, I'll be taking a peek at your memories

-OUVRIR! (unlock)

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17
-hmm
-This is going to be more troublesome than I though

-A BAND OF FIVE?!
-You mean, there's four left?!

-Uh huh. They're all split up searching throughout the building
-They don't know my exact location yet
-The band's name is "Teifuo" (t/n - what is this name?)
-It's a group of mercenaries that got together and formed a team

-They're after your life, monsieur belle?
-But where did they get the information about you?

-They're after money
-The first one to kill me is supposed to receive a reward from their client
-The source of their information was the client. His name seems to be "Lumasque"

18
-Still, I have no idea who this Lumasque is nor why he wants me dead
-This guy wasn't told anything
-There must have been another member who handled the negotiations

-So that means we have no idea who the ringleader is
-What should we do...

-Easy. If we wait, the other members will show up one by one
-If we take them out one by one,
-Then eventually we'll get the guy who knows about Lumasque

-I can't believe you can stay so calm in an emergency like this...

-Aah...I'm enjoying myself...after all, there's few who'd come just to challenge me
-Plus, it's different from my interrogations with prisoners
-Because I can kill them without a problem

19
-Ch...The first one here was balayeur?
-But looks like he bit the dust

-The 2nd one's here?!

-Did you tell balayeur about Belmonde's strange powers?
-Droidroite?
-No, I didn't, Gaugauche
-After all, I really hated him

-Ah! Me too!! We really are alike in every way!

-T-two at once!? (small: twins?)
-And this time it looks like they know about Belmonde's power!

-Four to go...
-The problem is whether or not my magic will last till the end...

the 5th act/end
next time: Belmonde decides to go two-on-two!! Who's his partner?!

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Thanks for waiting, everyone. I was feeling under the weather today so I've been extremely slow and had to take breaks.