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Karin, Volume 6, Chapter 23
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Karin, Volume 6
Page 4 TOC:
Embarrassment #23 A suspicious pair and Kenta's Anxiety
Embarrassment #24 Kenta's confusion and Fumio's agitation
Embarrassment #25 Kenta's distress and Karin runs away from home
Embarrassment #26 Fumio's confession and Kenta's rejection
Chapter 23:
Pages: 5-42
Page5
Frame1
Lady: ( I just found out )
Lady: ( I'm pregnant )
Lady: ( It's our child, Shuu-san, mine and yours )
Frame2
Shuusei: ( uh... ah... )
Frame3
Shuusei: ( Well thats great! )
Lady: ( What the hell are you talking about? )
Lady: ( Think about it )
Lady: ( Who in their right mind would want to have a kid with you, Shuu-san )
@BR: Embarrassment #23 A suspicious pair, and Kenta's Anxiety
Page6
Frame1
Lady: ( I'm going to have an abortion )
Lady: ( So give me money to pay for it )
Frame2
Shuusei: ( Huh!? )
Frame3
Shuusei: ( <italic>You B- )
Lady: ( What, are you going to hit me !? )
Frame4
Shuusei: ( STOP FUCKING WITH ME!
Do *not* accuse me of being kind of guy who would hit a woman in your state )
SFX:DO GAsshan -- crashing sounds
Lady: ( Kyaaaa! )
Page7
Frame1
Shuusei: ( You don't want my child, huh )
Shuusei: ( I can't fucking believe you said that )
Frame2
Shuusei: (... )
Shuusei: ( Fuck )
Frame3
Shuusei: ( huh!? )
Frame4
Shuusei: ( That was close )
Shuusei: ( Here I am, back in front of <italic>her</italic> house again... )
Frame5
Voice: (Enough, cut it out already!)
Voice: ( Has it not been more than half a year now!?)
SIGN: Usui
Frame6
Voice2: ( I'm sorry, Usui-san )
Voice2: ( I lost her trail after Tokyo Station... )
Page8
Frame1
Old Lady: ( I've had enough of you reporting just to pass the time! )
Old Lady: ( I want you to find Fumio (her daughter) as soon as possible... )
Shuusei: ( What is that old lady going on about now...!? )
Frame2
Old Lady: ( Him... It must have been that Iidzuka!) Iidzuka took my daughter away somewhere! )
Shuusei:( ME!?)
Frame3
Shuusei:( <italic>I</italic> took Fumio away somewhere...? What is she talking about...!?)
Page9
Frame1
Embarrassment #23 A suspicious pair, and Kenta's Anxiety
Page10
Frame1
Fumio:( .... ta )
Fumio:( Kenta.... )
Frame2
Fumio:( Wake up )
Kenta: ...Hm...?
Frame3
Kenta: What are you doing this early in the morning Okaa-san...
Kenta: It's too early to do anything...
Kenta: Still....Sleepy...
Page11
Frame1
Kenta: (Huh...?)
Frame2
Kenta: does my room...
Kenta: look like this....?
Frame3
Fumio: ( If you don't wake up soon )
Fumio: ( <bold>That person</bold> is going to catch you... )
Fumio: ( So come on )
Frame4
SFX: ha-- gasp
Frame5
Frame6
SFX: gaba -- waking up sound
Page12
Frame1
Kenta: ( ...Mom... isn't here...)
Kenta: ( She went to the employment office already...)
Frame2
Frame3
Frame4
Kenta: ( Th- that's right...)
Kenta: ( This is an apartment in western Shiihaba city)
Frame5
Kenta: hm?
SFX:chi chi chi -- chirping of alarm
Frame6
Kenta: ( <bold>AAgh! My alarm clock...! )
Frame7
Frame8
Karin: ( Ah , Usui-kun )
Karin: ( You were almost late )
Page13
Frame1
Kenta: ( I.... I made it...)
SFX:zee zee -- wheezing
Karin: ( Hurry up and change okay )
Karin: ( It looks like we're going to have a lot of customers today
because it's the end of the year )
Frame2
SFX: sukon ---
Frame3
Frame4
Frame5
Ladies: ( We'd like separate check's please )
Frame6
Kenta: ( Yes Ma'am )
Kenta: ( You had the Japanese-style set meal and a drink... )
Kante: ( Ah )
SFX: biro biro biro -- tongue sticking out sound (tape)
Page14
Frame1
Manager: ( Usui-kun, you've really gotten used to this job,
Well at least as far as remembering who ordered what but, )
Manager: ( The cash register seems to hate you... )
SFX:pata -- closing register
Kenta: ( I'm... I'm sorry)
Kenta: ( I'm not good with machines )
Kenta: But I didn't mean to hit the wrong buttons...
Frame2
Karin: ( Thats right, the only thing machine-like at your house Usui-kun is the refrigerator )
Kenta: ( No, I finally bought a heater just recently )
Frame3
Kenta: ( But I have no problems with that )
Kenta: ( If you flip the switch it gets warm )
Kenta: But I'm worried about the breakers and electric bill so I keep it on low...
Frame4
Manager: Hold on, hold on- It sounds like Maaka-kun has been over to Usui's house before
Lady: I knew it, those two are dating!
Lady: I thought they were suspicious from before too...
@BB below frame: The same thing even at their work
Frame5
Karin: ( By the way,
Usui-kun, you took a temp job for the winter break, didnt you?)
Frame6
Kenta: ( Of course )
Kenta: ( Break Time is Saving Time )
Page15
Frame1
Kenta: ( I'm working for the moving company Damien's again )
Kenta: ( And on New Years Eve I'll be delivering "Year's End Soba" for a noodle place♡ )
Karin: ( Your schedule is always so tight... )
SFX: hu... huhuhuhu -- contented laughing
Frame2
Kenta: ( Well, I can't work when I'm in school, so vacations are the only time I can earn money and save up)
Karin: ( School is actually more like vacation for Usui-kun... )
@L: Usui Kenta was quite harried
Frame3
@TR: His mother's income had all but stopped since she was fired from the grocery store.
(And the Hotel where she worked as a cleaner went bankrupt before she could get paid )
@TL: For now, the Usui houshold is nearly completely dependant on Usui-kun's income from his part time job
@Fumio: each one is
0.05 cents...
@BL: Fumio occaisionally does day labor, or at home piece-work
Frame4
@T: The rent for their apartment is ¥15,000, which is very cheap, however
on a high school student's income from a part time job they are barely making it.
Page16
Frame1
Lady: ( I'm sorry )
Lady: ( But we just can't use you at this time.. )
Frame2
SIGN: information desk
Frame3
Fumio: ( I see... )
Frame4
Frame5
Fumio: ( What should I do... )
Fumio: ( What should I do... )
Frame6
Fumio: ( At this rate ....)
Fumio: ( Is it impossible for me to get .... )
Fumio: ( a normal honest job ....)
Page17
Frame1
Fumio: ( But "night" work.... maybe )
SIGN @TR: Free membership
Nurse Cosplay
SIGN @R: Massage
Sensu-
SIGN @L: Private rooms!
Cheap!
SIGNS @farLeft: Spain
Japa-
Frame2
SFX: ha -- gasp
Frame3
Fumio: ( NO! )
Fumio: ( What am I thinking )
Fumio: ( Based upon the experiences I've had so far, nothing good will come of that )
SFX:bun bun -- swish swish
Frame4
Fumio: Plus,
Fumio:I don't want Kenta to look down on me anymore...
Frame5
SFX:puaaaaaan -- sound of bullet train
Page18
Frame1
SFX:daka daka daka -- pounding keyboard
Frame2
Shuusei: ( Hey there)
Shuusei: detective guy )
Frame3
Shuusei: ( I see youre always pounding on your computer there 24/7, but )
Shuusei: ( Is it really that interesting? )
Frame4
Investigator: ( You are really stubborn )
Investigator: ( No matter how far I go, you're always there stalking me )
Frame5
Shuusei: ( That's because you suck at losing tails )
Shuusei: ( Hm? What the hell are you typing ? )
Shuusei: ( "Iidzuka is stubborn... the kind of person I hate", do you mean me? )
Investigator: ( <bold>Stop it please! You shouldn't be peeking at people's memo's! )
Investigator: ( <bold>I'll sue you for interefering with my work! )
Frame6
Investigator: ( <bold>No- I'll turn you in to the police )
Shuusei: ( .... Don't be so stingy. C'mon, we're both trying to find the same woman, aren't we )
Page19
Frame1
Investigator: ( I heard all about you from my client )
Frame2
Investigator: ( Iidzuka Shuusei-san )
Investigator: ( 34. Single.)
Investigator: ( Unemployed )
Frame3
Investigator: ( After all this time.... Why do you want to meet my client's daughter )
SFX: patchi -- latching shut
Frame4
Investigator: ( After what you did to her... And its been over 15 years since you separated, hasn't it? )
Frame5
Shuusei: ( Is asking me about things I cannot change.... )
SFX:gasshi -- grab
Frame6
Shuusei: ( <scary>Endlessly and persistently a hobby of yours, detective!?)
Shuusei: ( <scary>You bastard,...If you think I'm going to put up with that shit forever then youre making a big mistake )
Investigator: ( Ah aaaagh )
Page20
Frame2
SFX: ba -- sudden movement
Frame3
Investigator: ( Please dont chase me anymore )
SFX:da da da da -- running footsteps
Investigator: ( Go away )
Voice: ( Do not run on the platform please )
Frame4
SFX:gatan gatan -- train sounds
SIGN: TRANSFER
Frame5
Shuusei: ( This is pretty far from Tokyo station )
Shuusei: ( How many times have we been down this way already? )
SFX:zee zee -- wheezing for air
SFX:haa haa -- panting
Investigator: ( For the mean time, I'm going around to places where people with the name "Usui" reside... )
Frame6
Shuusei: ( Damn, We're getting nowhere )
Frame7
Shuusei: ( ....She might have changed her last name, ya know...? )
Investigator: ( Maybe so )
Page21
Frame1
SIGN: Sotohama Circuit: Shiihaba Station
Shuusei: ( .... Why )
Shuusei: ( Did she run away in the night anyway )
Investigator: ( My client seems to like to blame you for that )
Investigator: ( I mean, it is your fault after all.... isn't it )
Frame2
Shuusei: ( This is what you get for being so stubborn )
SFX:bakko -- bump
Frame3
Karin: ( Ah, Usui-kun )
Kenta: ( Hm? )
Frame4
Karin: ( Hey, you have to hurry up- or you'll be late for your next job, right ?)
Kenta: ( Nah, I was thinking I'd just walk normally .... )
Frame5
Karin: ( In that case, is it okay if we ... walk together for part of the way?)
Kenta: ( Uh, sure )
Page22
Frame1
Kenta: ( Huh )
Frame2
Kenta: ( You look alot better than yesterday )
Kenta: ( Did you... )
Karin: ( Ah! )
Frame3
Karin: ( Ah, yeah )
Karin: ( I ran into just the right type of person )
Karin: ( So I bit them )
Frame4
Karin: so um ( Pl- )
Karin: ( Please don't worry about me... )
Kenta: ( Oh )
Kenta: ( ....I see.... )
Frame5
Karin: ( Huh? )
Karin: ( Usui-kun seems kind of dissapointed!? )
Page23
Frame1
Kenta: ( You can bite my neck.... )
Kenta: ( As much as you want )
Frame2
SFX:gabin -- surprise
Karin: ( Ah! Could it be..
Usui-kun was kind enough to say that to me, but )
Karin: ( I've been doing my best to avoid it )
Karin: ( Maybe I've hurt his feelings !? )
Frame3
Kenta: ( ...because I said... "It's okay if you bite me" .... )
Kenta: ( I wonder if instead she's started being extra careful... )
Frame4
Kenta: There she goes worrying again
SFX:dara dara -- sweating bullets
Kenta: Your feelings show right through... Maaka
Frame5
SFX: teku teku teku -- walking steps
Kenta: .....ummm.....
Page24
Frame1
Karin: ( Ahhhh, how am I supposed to respond in this situation ? )
Kenta: What should I say to her in this situation?
Frame2
Kenta: If I were to say "It's okay if you bite me" again
Kenta: It seems like I'm being pushy about it
Frame3
Kenta: besides,
Kenta: If I did get bitten by her
Kenta: I don't even know what kind of reaction I'd have
Frame4
Kenta: Ahhh, maybe what I said
Kenta: was bit reckless
Kenta: I think....
Page25
Frame1
Kenta: .... No
Kenta: What I have already said, I can't take ba-
Karin: ( U )
Frame2
Karin: ( <bold> Usui-kun, um )
Karin: ( <bold> Before, when you said it was okay to bite you )
Frame3
Frame4
Karin: ( <bold> I made me really happy )
Karin: ( <small> B- but)
Page26
Frame1
Karin: ( I'm happy, but at the same time )
Karin: ( I,
um )
SFX:tara tara -- sweating bullets
Karin: ( well,
A little)
Frame2
Karin: ( Em-
Embarrassed )
Karin: ( I mean,
To bite you Usui-kun )
Frame3
Karin: ( I'd have to put my hands around your neck, and
Karin: ( hold you close to me and stuff.... )
SFX:iiwake iiwake wake wake -- making excuses
Frame4
Karin: ( Up till now I've always avoided biting people who I knew because its so embarrassing, so... )
Frame5
Kenta: ( Bu-)
Karin: ( Huh? )
Kenta: ( Hahahahahahaha )
Page27
Frame1
Karin: ( U- U-
Usui-kun !?)
Kenta: ( My-
my stomach hurts )
SFX: ku ku ku -- laughing
Kenta: ( It's way too late to worry about that... )
Frame2
Kenta: ( You already .. )
Kenta: ( Tackled me to the ground once already )
SFX: bo -- blush
Karin: ( gyaaa! )
Frame3
Karin: ( I was unconscious that time )
Karin: ( Forget about that!
Please! )
Kenta: ( How can I forget such an intense experience )
Kenta: ( No way )
Karin: ( Noooo! Please!)
Page28
Frame1
Karin: ( Uuuugh )
SFX: shuu shuu shuu -- steaming
SFX @L: busshu -- steam hissing
Frame2
Karin: ( Aaaah)
Karin: ( There was something I wanted to ask you, Usui-kun )
Karin: ( Bu- But now I forgot what it was! )
Kenta: ( Seeing her study throughout the second semester I realized this--
Maaka really can't think of two different things at once! )
Frame3
Kenta: ( ....Well, I have to go this way )
Karin: ( Ah, you do? )
Kenta: ( If you want to ask me something, then ask me next time ok )
Frame4
Karin: ( Okay, bye )
Karin: ( I'll see you at Julian's tomorrow )
Frame5
Page29
Frame1
SFX: te te te -- walking steps
Frame2
Text: It's been more than half a year since we came to Shiihaba
Frame3
Text: Alot of things have happened since I met Maaka
Frame4
Text: I thought she was a strange person at first, but I never guessed I would know all her secrets like this
Text: Ignoring her blood increasing problems...
Text: She makes lunches..... she's always very considerate...
Text: She's a really good girl
Frame5
Text: I've never thought about it until now
Text: But I wonder
Frame6
Text: How does Maaka think of me... ?
Frame7
Page30
Frame1
Page31
Frame1
Text @L: Person who froze when she was caught staring
Frame2
Frame3
Frame4
Frame5
SFX:da -- dashing away
Page32
Frame1
Frame2
Karin: ( Ah)
Karin: ( <small>thats right</small> I wanted to ask Usui-kun when his birthday was )
Karin: ( <small>Man....<small> How can I forget things like this )
Karin: ( *sigh* )
Frame3
Karin: ( Well, I've got some time, maybe I should stop by Maki's house)
Frame4
Frame5
Maki: ( Ah, )
Maki: ( Karin! )
Maki: ( Come in! )
Frame6
Page33
Frame1
Karin: ( Ah )
Karin: ( You're minding the store )
Maki: ( Yeah, I do it sometimes )
Maki: Cool, huh ?
BB: ( Maki's house is a bookstore )
Frame2
Maki: ( The new years's issue of Ponpii is out )
Karin: ( Eh, Really♡ )
Maki: ( Because its the end of the year, Magazines which normally come out at the beginning of the month are coming out around now instead )
Frame3
Karin: ( Yaay, is it okay if I have a look? )
@TM: The continuation of Tokimeke☆Smash
Maki: ( Hey, you're supposed to buy it first, right? )
Frame4
SFX: do-- bump
Karin; (Kyaa)
Frame5
Karin; ( Excuse M... )
Karin: ( Huh!? )
Page34
Frame1
Karin: ( Usui-kun !? )
Frame2
SFX: gasshi -- grab
Frame3
Shuusei: ( What did you say? )
Shuusei: ( Little girl..... )
Page35
Frame1
Shuusei: ( You didn't say )
Shuusei: ( "Usui" just then, did ya? )
Frame2
Karin: ( Ah....)
Karin: ( Eh!?)
Karin: ( Who is he!? )
Frame3
SFX: gui -- grabbing
Shuusei: ( Come with me for a minute )
Karin: ( Ah )
Frame4
Karin: ( I'm sorry, I mistook you for someone else )
Shuusei: ( Just come on! )
Frame5
SFX: doku -- heartbeat
Page36
Frame1
Karin: ( NO! Stop it )
Karin: ( You're hurting me )
Shuusei: ( I'm going to ask you a few questions, that's all )
Frame2
Shuusei: ( You recognize my face, don't you young lady )
Frame3
Karin: ( ..... oh no )
Karin: ( He really does resemble Usui-kun, doesn't he )
Frame4
Maki: ( <bold> SOMEBODY HELP! A strange guy is attacking a high school girl!! )
Page37
Frame1
SFX: zawa zawa -- crowd noises
@MR: What's going on?
@ML: There is a suspicious guy at Maki-chan's bookstore
Frame2
@BR: I've never seen him before
Shuusei: ( Urk )
@BL: He must be an outsider
Frame3
Frame4
Maki: ( <small>Oh my god .....Usui-kun....? )
Frame5
Frame6
Investigator: (....Eep!)
Frame7
Shuusei:( Ah!)
SFX: da -- dasting away
Page38
Frame1
Shuusei: ( Wait Dammit! Don't leave me here! )
Investigator: ( Don't follow me, they'll think we're friends )
Frame2
Shuusei: ( It's your fault this happened- I was waiting for you to come back from town hall )
Investigator: ( Please stop blaming everything on other people! )
Frame3
@BR: Oh Well
@BL: At least nothing bad happened
Frame4
SFX:zoro zoro -- crowd sounds
Maki: ( K-
Karin
You okay? )
Karin: ( Uh..... Yeah.....)
Frame5
Karin: ( Maki... Did you ....see that guy? )
Maki: ( Yeah.....
The reselmblance is too strong for him to be unrelated...)
SFX:do do do -- heavy footsteps
Page39
Frame1
Karin: (...... Could that be )
Karin: ( Usui-kun's .... )
Maki: ( Naaah, there's no way, not a low life that that )
Maki: Saying that isnt fair to Usui-kun
Maki: ( They say there are always three people in the world with the same face )
Frame2
Karin: (But.....)
Shuusei: You didn't say
Shuusei: "Usui" just then, did ya?
Frame3
Karin: When that guy grabbed my arm
Karin: My blood started increasing
Karin: The same way as with Usui-kun
Frame4
Page40
Frame1
SFX: shaa -- running water
Frame2
Fumio: ( *Sigh*...
Ive even run out of housework to do.....)
Frame3
Fumio: ( I wonder if Kenta is coming home late today.... )
Guy: Usui
Guy: Take care of the living room next
Kenta: Okay
Frame4
SFX: goso goso -- rummaging
Frame5
SFX: su -- sliding out
Frame6
Page41
Frame1
SFX gusu -- sniffle
SFX poro -- tear rolling
Frame2
SFX gusu gusu -- sniffle
SFX poro poro -- teardrops rolling
Frame3
Fumio: ( I want to make everything right, but )
Fumio: ( Why do things always end up this way.... )
Frame4
Fumio: ( Shuusei-san )
Frame5
SIGN: Business Hotel - New Mexico
Frame6
Investigator: ( This is a single room ! )
Investigator: ( Don't come in ! )
SFX: gugigi gi - straining of door
Shuusei: ( You're not telling me to sleep out under the cold cold sky are you? )
Shuusei: ( Please, let me in♡ )
Investigator: ( Nooooo! )
SFX: Mishi -- creak
Page42
Frame1
SFX baki -- thud
Frame2
SFX: gubi gubi -- gulp gulp
Shuusei: ( Man.... What a lousy Investigator )
Shuusei: ( It took him so much time to finally get here )
Frame3
Shuusei: ( Now there is no doubt those two are somewhere in this town )
Shuusei: ( I guess I'll stop by that bookstore again tomorrow )
@B: Embarrassment 23, Over
Comments and criticism are very welcome
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Karin, Volume 6
Page 4 TOC:
Embarrassment #23 A suspicious pair and Kenta's Anxiety
Embarrassment #24 Kenta's confusion and Fumio's agitation
Embarrassment #25 Kenta's distress and Karin runs away from home
Embarrassment #26 Fumio's confession and Kenta's rejection
Chapter 23:
Pages: 5-42
Page5
Frame1
Lady: ( I just found out )
Lady: ( I'm pregnant )
Lady: ( It's our child, Shuu-san, mine and yours )
Frame2
Shuusei: ( uh... ah... )
Frame3
Shuusei: ( Well thats great! )
Lady: ( What the hell are you talking about? )
Lady: ( Think about it )
Lady: ( Who in their right mind would want to have a kid with you, Shuu-san )
@BR: Embarrassment #23 A suspicious pair, and Kenta's Anxiety
Page6
Frame1
Lady: ( I'm going to have an abortion )
Lady: ( So give me money to pay for it )
Frame2
Shuusei: ( Huh!? )
Frame3
Shuusei: ( <italic>You B- )
Lady: ( What, are you going to hit me !? )
Frame4
Shuusei: ( STOP FUCKING WITH ME!
Do *not* accuse me of being kind of guy who would hit a woman in your state )
SFX:DO GAsshan -- crashing sounds
Lady: ( Kyaaaa! )
Page7
Frame1
Shuusei: ( You don't want my child, huh )
Shuusei: ( I can't fucking believe you said that )
Frame2
Shuusei: (... )
Shuusei: ( Fuck )
Frame3
Shuusei: ( huh!? )
Frame4
Shuusei: ( That was close )
Shuusei: ( Here I am, back in front of <italic>her</italic> house again... )
Frame5
Voice: (Enough, cut it out already!)
Voice: ( Has it not been more than half a year now!?)
SIGN: Usui
Frame6
Voice2: ( I'm sorry, Usui-san )
Voice2: ( I lost her trail after Tokyo Station... )
Page8
Frame1
Old Lady: ( I've had enough of you reporting just to pass the time! )
Old Lady: ( I want you to find Fumio (her daughter) as soon as possible... )
Shuusei: ( What is that old lady going on about now...!? )
Frame2
Old Lady: ( Him... It must have been that Iidzuka!) Iidzuka took my daughter away somewhere! )
Shuusei:( ME!?)
Frame3
Shuusei:( <italic>I</italic> took Fumio away somewhere...? What is she talking about...!?)
Page9
Frame1
Embarrassment #23 A suspicious pair, and Kenta's Anxiety
Page10
Frame1
Fumio:( .... ta )
Fumio:( Kenta.... )
Frame2
Fumio:( Wake up )
Kenta: ...Hm...?
Frame3
Kenta: What are you doing this early in the morning Okaa-san...
Kenta: It's too early to do anything...
Kenta: Still....Sleepy...
Page11
Frame1
Kenta: (Huh...?)
Frame2
Kenta: does my room...
Kenta: look like this....?
Frame3
Fumio: ( If you don't wake up soon )
Fumio: ( <bold>That person</bold> is going to catch you... )
Fumio: ( So come on )
Frame4
SFX: ha-- gasp
Frame5
Frame6
SFX: gaba -- waking up sound
Page12
Frame1
Kenta: ( ...Mom... isn't here...)
Kenta: ( She went to the employment office already...)
Frame2
Frame3
Frame4
Kenta: ( Th- that's right...)
Kenta: ( This is an apartment in western Shiihaba city)
Frame5
Kenta: hm?
SFX:chi chi chi -- chirping of alarm
Frame6
Kenta: ( <bold>AAgh! My alarm clock...! )
Frame7
Frame8
Karin: ( Ah , Usui-kun )
Karin: ( You were almost late )
Page13
Frame1
Kenta: ( I.... I made it...)
SFX:zee zee -- wheezing
Karin: ( Hurry up and change okay )
Karin: ( It looks like we're going to have a lot of customers today
because it's the end of the year )
Frame2
SFX: sukon ---
Frame3
Frame4
Frame5
Ladies: ( We'd like separate check's please )
Frame6
Kenta: ( Yes Ma'am )
Kenta: ( You had the Japanese-style set meal and a drink... )
Kante: ( Ah )
SFX: biro biro biro -- tongue sticking out sound (tape)
Page14
Frame1
Manager: ( Usui-kun, you've really gotten used to this job,
Well at least as far as remembering who ordered what but, )
Manager: ( The cash register seems to hate you... )
SFX:pata -- closing register
Kenta: ( I'm... I'm sorry)
Kenta: ( I'm not good with machines )
Kenta: But I didn't mean to hit the wrong buttons...
Frame2
Karin: ( Thats right, the only thing machine-like at your house Usui-kun is the refrigerator )
Kenta: ( No, I finally bought a heater just recently )
Frame3
Kenta: ( But I have no problems with that )
Kenta: ( If you flip the switch it gets warm )
Kenta: But I'm worried about the breakers and electric bill so I keep it on low...
Frame4
Manager: Hold on, hold on- It sounds like Maaka-kun has been over to Usui's house before
Lady: I knew it, those two are dating!
Lady: I thought they were suspicious from before too...
@BB below frame: The same thing even at their work
Frame5
Karin: ( By the way,
Usui-kun, you took a temp job for the winter break, didnt you?)
Frame6
Kenta: ( Of course )
Kenta: ( Break Time is Saving Time )
Page15
Frame1
Kenta: ( I'm working for the moving company Damien's again )
Kenta: ( And on New Years Eve I'll be delivering "Year's End Soba" for a noodle place♡ )
Karin: ( Your schedule is always so tight... )
SFX: hu... huhuhuhu -- contented laughing
Frame2
Kenta: ( Well, I can't work when I'm in school, so vacations are the only time I can earn money and save up)
Karin: ( School is actually more like vacation for Usui-kun... )
@L: Usui Kenta was quite harried
Frame3
@TR: His mother's income had all but stopped since she was fired from the grocery store.
(And the Hotel where she worked as a cleaner went bankrupt before she could get paid )
@TL: For now, the Usui houshold is nearly completely dependant on Usui-kun's income from his part time job
@Fumio: each one is
0.05 cents...
@BL: Fumio occaisionally does day labor, or at home piece-work
Frame4
@T: The rent for their apartment is ¥15,000, which is very cheap, however
on a high school student's income from a part time job they are barely making it.
Page16
Frame1
Lady: ( I'm sorry )
Lady: ( But we just can't use you at this time.. )
Frame2
SIGN: information desk
Frame3
Fumio: ( I see... )
Frame4
Frame5
Fumio: ( What should I do... )
Fumio: ( What should I do... )
Frame6
Fumio: ( At this rate ....)
Fumio: ( Is it impossible for me to get .... )
Fumio: ( a normal honest job ....)
Page17
Frame1
Fumio: ( But "night" work.... maybe )
SIGN @TR: Free membership
Nurse Cosplay
SIGN @R: Massage
Sensu-
SIGN @L: Private rooms!
Cheap!
SIGNS @farLeft: Spain
Japa-
Frame2
SFX: ha -- gasp
Frame3
Fumio: ( NO! )
Fumio: ( What am I thinking )
Fumio: ( Based upon the experiences I've had so far, nothing good will come of that )
SFX:bun bun -- swish swish
Frame4
Fumio: Plus,
Fumio:I don't want Kenta to look down on me anymore...
Frame5
SFX:puaaaaaan -- sound of bullet train
Page18
Frame1
SFX:daka daka daka -- pounding keyboard
Frame2
Shuusei: ( Hey there)
Shuusei: detective guy )
Frame3
Shuusei: ( I see youre always pounding on your computer there 24/7, but )
Shuusei: ( Is it really that interesting? )
Frame4
Investigator: ( You are really stubborn )
Investigator: ( No matter how far I go, you're always there stalking me )
Frame5
Shuusei: ( That's because you suck at losing tails )
Shuusei: ( Hm? What the hell are you typing ? )
Shuusei: ( "Iidzuka is stubborn... the kind of person I hate", do you mean me? )
Investigator: ( <bold>Stop it please! You shouldn't be peeking at people's memo's! )
Investigator: ( <bold>I'll sue you for interefering with my work! )
Frame6
Investigator: ( <bold>No- I'll turn you in to the police )
Shuusei: ( .... Don't be so stingy. C'mon, we're both trying to find the same woman, aren't we )
Page19
Frame1
Investigator: ( I heard all about you from my client )
Frame2
Investigator: ( Iidzuka Shuusei-san )
Investigator: ( 34. Single.)
Investigator: ( Unemployed )
Frame3
Investigator: ( After all this time.... Why do you want to meet my client's daughter )
SFX: patchi -- latching shut
Frame4
Investigator: ( After what you did to her... And its been over 15 years since you separated, hasn't it? )
Frame5
Shuusei: ( Is asking me about things I cannot change.... )
SFX:gasshi -- grab
Frame6
Shuusei: ( <scary>Endlessly and persistently a hobby of yours, detective!?)
Shuusei: ( <scary>You bastard,...If you think I'm going to put up with that shit forever then youre making a big mistake )
Investigator: ( Ah aaaagh )
Page20
Frame2
SFX: ba -- sudden movement
Frame3
Investigator: ( Please dont chase me anymore )
SFX:da da da da -- running footsteps
Investigator: ( Go away )
Voice: ( Do not run on the platform please )
Frame4
SFX:gatan gatan -- train sounds
SIGN: TRANSFER
Frame5
Shuusei: ( This is pretty far from Tokyo station )
Shuusei: ( How many times have we been down this way already? )
SFX:zee zee -- wheezing for air
SFX:haa haa -- panting
Investigator: ( For the mean time, I'm going around to places where people with the name "Usui" reside... )
Frame6
Shuusei: ( Damn, We're getting nowhere )
Frame7
Shuusei: ( ....She might have changed her last name, ya know...? )
Investigator: ( Maybe so )
Page21
Frame1
SIGN: Sotohama Circuit: Shiihaba Station
Shuusei: ( .... Why )
Shuusei: ( Did she run away in the night anyway )
Investigator: ( My client seems to like to blame you for that )
Investigator: ( I mean, it is your fault after all.... isn't it )
Frame2
Shuusei: ( This is what you get for being so stubborn )
SFX:bakko -- bump
Frame3
Karin: ( Ah, Usui-kun )
Kenta: ( Hm? )
Frame4
Karin: ( Hey, you have to hurry up- or you'll be late for your next job, right ?)
Kenta: ( Nah, I was thinking I'd just walk normally .... )
Frame5
Karin: ( In that case, is it okay if we ... walk together for part of the way?)
Kenta: ( Uh, sure )
Page22
Frame1
Kenta: ( Huh )
Frame2
Kenta: ( You look alot better than yesterday )
Kenta: ( Did you... )
Karin: ( Ah! )
Frame3
Karin: ( Ah, yeah )
Karin: ( I ran into just the right type of person )
Karin: ( So I bit them )
Frame4
Karin: so um ( Pl- )
Karin: ( Please don't worry about me... )
Kenta: ( Oh )
Kenta: ( ....I see.... )
Frame5
Karin: ( Huh? )
Karin: ( Usui-kun seems kind of dissapointed!? )
Page23
Frame1
Kenta: ( You can bite my neck.... )
Kenta: ( As much as you want )
Frame2
SFX:gabin -- surprise
Karin: ( Ah! Could it be..
Usui-kun was kind enough to say that to me, but )
Karin: ( I've been doing my best to avoid it )
Karin: ( Maybe I've hurt his feelings !? )
Frame3
Kenta: ( ...because I said... "It's okay if you bite me" .... )
Kenta: ( I wonder if instead she's started being extra careful... )
Frame4
Kenta: There she goes worrying again
SFX:dara dara -- sweating bullets
Kenta: Your feelings show right through... Maaka
Frame5
SFX: teku teku teku -- walking steps
Kenta: .....ummm.....
Page24
Frame1
Karin: ( Ahhhh, how am I supposed to respond in this situation ? )
Kenta: What should I say to her in this situation?
Frame2
Kenta: If I were to say "It's okay if you bite me" again
Kenta: It seems like I'm being pushy about it
Frame3
Kenta: besides,
Kenta: If I did get bitten by her
Kenta: I don't even know what kind of reaction I'd have
Frame4
Kenta: Ahhh, maybe what I said
Kenta: was bit reckless
Kenta: I think....
Page25
Frame1
Kenta: .... No
Kenta: What I have already said, I can't take ba-
Karin: ( U )
Frame2
Karin: ( <bold> Usui-kun, um )
Karin: ( <bold> Before, when you said it was okay to bite you )
Frame3
Frame4
Karin: ( <bold> I made me really happy )
Karin: ( <small> B- but)
Page26
Frame1
Karin: ( I'm happy, but at the same time )
Karin: ( I,
um )
SFX:tara tara -- sweating bullets
Karin: ( well,
A little)
Frame2
Karin: ( Em-
Embarrassed )
Karin: ( I mean,
To bite you Usui-kun )
Frame3
Karin: ( I'd have to put my hands around your neck, and
Karin: ( hold you close to me and stuff.... )
SFX:iiwake iiwake wake wake -- making excuses
Frame4
Karin: ( Up till now I've always avoided biting people who I knew because its so embarrassing, so... )
Frame5
Kenta: ( Bu-)
Karin: ( Huh? )
Kenta: ( Hahahahahahaha )
Page27
Frame1
Karin: ( U- U-
Usui-kun !?)
Kenta: ( My-
my stomach hurts )
SFX: ku ku ku -- laughing
Kenta: ( It's way too late to worry about that... )
Frame2
Kenta: ( You already .. )
Kenta: ( Tackled me to the ground once already )
SFX: bo -- blush
Karin: ( gyaaa! )
Frame3
Karin: ( I was unconscious that time )
Karin: ( Forget about that!
Please! )
Kenta: ( How can I forget such an intense experience )
Kenta: ( No way )
Karin: ( Noooo! Please!)
Page28
Frame1
Karin: ( Uuuugh )
SFX: shuu shuu shuu -- steaming
SFX @L: busshu -- steam hissing
Frame2
Karin: ( Aaaah)
Karin: ( There was something I wanted to ask you, Usui-kun )
Karin: ( Bu- But now I forgot what it was! )
Kenta: ( Seeing her study throughout the second semester I realized this--
Maaka really can't think of two different things at once! )
Frame3
Kenta: ( ....Well, I have to go this way )
Karin: ( Ah, you do? )
Kenta: ( If you want to ask me something, then ask me next time ok )
Frame4
Karin: ( Okay, bye )
Karin: ( I'll see you at Julian's tomorrow )
Frame5
Page29
Frame1
SFX: te te te -- walking steps
Frame2
Text: It's been more than half a year since we came to Shiihaba
Frame3
Text: Alot of things have happened since I met Maaka
Frame4
Text: I thought she was a strange person at first, but I never guessed I would know all her secrets like this
Text: Ignoring her blood increasing problems...
Text: She makes lunches..... she's always very considerate...
Text: She's a really good girl
Frame5
Text: I've never thought about it until now
Text: But I wonder
Frame6
Text: How does Maaka think of me... ?
Frame7
Page30
Frame1
Page31
Frame1
Text @L: Person who froze when she was caught staring
Frame2
Frame3
Frame4
Frame5
SFX:da -- dashing away
Page32
Frame1
Frame2
Karin: ( Ah)
Karin: ( <small>thats right</small> I wanted to ask Usui-kun when his birthday was )
Karin: ( <small>Man....<small> How can I forget things like this )
Karin: ( *sigh* )
Frame3
Karin: ( Well, I've got some time, maybe I should stop by Maki's house)
Frame4
Frame5
Maki: ( Ah, )
Maki: ( Karin! )
Maki: ( Come in! )
Frame6
Page33
Frame1
Karin: ( Ah )
Karin: ( You're minding the store )
Maki: ( Yeah, I do it sometimes )
Maki: Cool, huh ?
BB: ( Maki's house is a bookstore )
Frame2
Maki: ( The new years's issue of Ponpii is out )
Karin: ( Eh, Really♡ )
Maki: ( Because its the end of the year, Magazines which normally come out at the beginning of the month are coming out around now instead )
Frame3
Karin: ( Yaay, is it okay if I have a look? )
@TM: The continuation of Tokimeke☆Smash
Maki: ( Hey, you're supposed to buy it first, right? )
Frame4
SFX: do-- bump
Karin; (Kyaa)
Frame5
Karin; ( Excuse M... )
Karin: ( Huh!? )
Page34
Frame1
Karin: ( Usui-kun !? )
Frame2
SFX: gasshi -- grab
Frame3
Shuusei: ( What did you say? )
Shuusei: ( Little girl..... )
Page35
Frame1
Shuusei: ( You didn't say )
Shuusei: ( "Usui" just then, did ya? )
Frame2
Karin: ( Ah....)
Karin: ( Eh!?)
Karin: ( Who is he!? )
Frame3
SFX: gui -- grabbing
Shuusei: ( Come with me for a minute )
Karin: ( Ah )
Frame4
Karin: ( I'm sorry, I mistook you for someone else )
Shuusei: ( Just come on! )
Frame5
SFX: doku -- heartbeat
Page36
Frame1
Karin: ( NO! Stop it )
Karin: ( You're hurting me )
Shuusei: ( I'm going to ask you a few questions, that's all )
Frame2
Shuusei: ( You recognize my face, don't you young lady )
Frame3
Karin: ( ..... oh no )
Karin: ( He really does resemble Usui-kun, doesn't he )
Frame4
Maki: ( <bold> SOMEBODY HELP! A strange guy is attacking a high school girl!! )
Page37
Frame1
SFX: zawa zawa -- crowd noises
@MR: What's going on?
@ML: There is a suspicious guy at Maki-chan's bookstore
Frame2
@BR: I've never seen him before
Shuusei: ( Urk )
@BL: He must be an outsider
Frame3
Frame4
Maki: ( <small>Oh my god .....Usui-kun....? )
Frame5
Frame6
Investigator: (....Eep!)
Frame7
Shuusei:( Ah!)
SFX: da -- dasting away
Page38
Frame1
Shuusei: ( Wait Dammit! Don't leave me here! )
Investigator: ( Don't follow me, they'll think we're friends )
Frame2
Shuusei: ( It's your fault this happened- I was waiting for you to come back from town hall )
Investigator: ( Please stop blaming everything on other people! )
Frame3
@BR: Oh Well
@BL: At least nothing bad happened
Frame4
SFX:zoro zoro -- crowd sounds
Maki: ( K-
Karin
You okay? )
Karin: ( Uh..... Yeah.....)
Frame5
Karin: ( Maki... Did you ....see that guy? )
Maki: ( Yeah.....
The reselmblance is too strong for him to be unrelated...)
SFX:do do do -- heavy footsteps
Page39
Frame1
Karin: (...... Could that be )
Karin: ( Usui-kun's .... )
Maki: ( Naaah, there's no way, not a low life that that )
Maki: Saying that isnt fair to Usui-kun
Maki: ( They say there are always three people in the world with the same face )
Frame2
Karin: (But.....)
Shuusei: You didn't say
Shuusei: "Usui" just then, did ya?
Frame3
Karin: When that guy grabbed my arm
Karin: My blood started increasing
Karin: The same way as with Usui-kun
Frame4
Page40
Frame1
SFX: shaa -- running water
Frame2
Fumio: ( *Sigh*...
Ive even run out of housework to do.....)
Frame3
Fumio: ( I wonder if Kenta is coming home late today.... )
Guy: Usui
Guy: Take care of the living room next
Kenta: Okay
Frame4
SFX: goso goso -- rummaging
Frame5
SFX: su -- sliding out
Frame6
Page41
Frame1
SFX gusu -- sniffle
SFX poro -- tear rolling
Frame2
SFX gusu gusu -- sniffle
SFX poro poro -- teardrops rolling
Frame3
Fumio: ( I want to make everything right, but )
Fumio: ( Why do things always end up this way.... )
Frame4
Fumio: ( Shuusei-san )
Frame5
SIGN: Business Hotel - New Mexico
Frame6
Investigator: ( This is a single room ! )
Investigator: ( Don't come in ! )
SFX: gugigi gi - straining of door
Shuusei: ( You're not telling me to sleep out under the cold cold sky are you? )
Shuusei: ( Please, let me in♡ )
Investigator: ( Nooooo! )
SFX: Mishi -- creak
Page42
Frame1
SFX baki -- thud
Frame2
SFX: gubi gubi -- gulp gulp
Shuusei: ( Man.... What a lousy Investigator )
Shuusei: ( It took him so much time to finally get here )
Frame3
Shuusei: ( Now there is no doubt those two are somewhere in this town )
Shuusei: ( I guess I'll stop by that bookstore again tomorrow )
@B: Embarrassment 23, Over
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1. There should be no Commata in the TOC in front of "and"
2. P14, F3 electric -> electricity
That's all from my rookie point of view :p
Thank you!
I dropped the comma's.
About "electricity bill" I've never heard anyone say that before.
Everyone I know says "electric bill" :P
Fushigi :)
Let's proof:
page/frame/line/suggestion
p05/f1/l1: add "that" to the end
p05/f3/l1: thats => that's
p05/f3/l3: add "..." to the end
p05/f3/l4: add "??" to the end
p06/f1/l2: add "." to the end
p06/f4/l2: kind => "the kind"
p07/f1/l2: add "." to the end
p07/f2/l2: add "!!!" to the end
p07/f4/l1: add "." to the end
p08/f2/l1: "!)" => "!"
p13/f1/l3: "change okay" => "change, okay?"
p13/f1/l5: add "." to the end
p13/f5/l1: "check's please" => "check's, please!"
p13/f6/l1: "Yes Ma'am" => "Yes, Ma'am!"
p14/f1/l5: add "!" to the end
p14/f1/l6: add "," to the end
p14/f3/l3: electric => electricity
p15/f2/l1: time => "time that"
p15/f3/l3: "is nearly completely dependant" => "depends nearly completely"
p15/f3/l3: income => earnings (just to avoid repetition)
p15/f4/l2: income => pay
p17/f3/l3: come => "come out"
p17/f3/l3: add "." to the end
p18/f3/l1: youre => you're
p18/f3/l1: pounding => hammering
p18/f6/l1: "in to" => into
p18/f6/l2: add "?" to the end
p19/f1/l1: add ":" to the end
p19/f3/l1: add "?" to the end
p19/f6/l2: youre => you're
p20/f3/l1: dont => don't
p20/f3/l4: please => please!
p21/f1/l3: add "?" to the end
p21/f1/l4: "to blame" => blaming
p21/f1/l5: add "?" to the end
p21/f5/l2: add "!" to the end
p22/f1/l1: add "!?" to the end
p22/f2/l1: add "." to the end
p22/f2/l1: add "?" to the end
p22/f3/l1: add "!" to the end
p22/f3/l3: add "." to the end
p27/f3/l3: add "?" to the end
p27/f3/l4: add "!" to the end
p28/f3/l3: "time ok" => "time, ok?"
p28/f4/l1: "Okay bye" => "Okay, bye!"
p32/f2/l2: add "?" to the end
p36/f2/l1: add "?" to the end
p38/f1/l1: "Wait Dammit" => "Wait, dammit"
p38/f2/l1: "this" => "that this"
p40/f2/l1: Ive => I've
p40/f3/l1: add "," to the end
p40/f3/l2: add "!" to the end
p40/f3/l3: add "!" to the end
p41/f4/l1: add "!" to the end
p42/f2/l1: add "!" to the end
p42/f3/l1: doubt => "doubt that"
Srin Tuar, want me to leave out all the punctuations ?
About "electricity bill" or "electric bill", I'm sure it's "electricity" in the UK, not sure about other places.
Lastly, Nice translation...good start for a New Year :smile-big
"electric bill" sounds kinda weird to me, like you would get a shock when touching it.
Ah and i forgot: Thanks for translating this, it's nice to see some progress in my beloved series :)
/edit: And one more thing: Thanks to our skilled proofer for noticing THAT much! Guess this shows the difference in skills :amuse
Im terrible with punctuation T_T. (Hehe, it takes me a concerted effort to even use uppercase)
I'll come back and edit them in soon, might as well have a clean copy in the first post :)
[br]Posted on: February 18, 2007, 11:16:25 PM_________________________________________________
Wow, I went to put in your punctuation changes, and I realized that allthough they make perfect sense in English, they really differ from the way the Japanese is written.
Punctuation, especially question marks, ellipsis, and exclamation points affect the pitch and timing of speech in both Japanese and English the same way. So going all the way to the standard english style would change the tone of the story too much for me to stomach.
For example "Hurry up and change, okay?" in english would have a rising tone at the end, that would not be present in the Japanese version. Without the question mark its more of a level plat tone in both languages.
Also, "p07/f2/l2", shuusei is very calmly saying that, so exclamation points would give the wrong intensity.
Anyway 0_o I'll leave it to yfantgirl to decide how she wants to punctuate.
edit: read the chapter, p07/f2/l2, Shuusei really did say "F***" calmly, it was just my preference that swearing comes with strong emotion :smile-big.
I think the tone of the speaking depends on both the punctuation AND the actual context the sentence/phrase/clause is in so you could say one line with several emphases depending on where you stress. That means you can have it make sense and sound right at the same time.