Karin 24

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Karin, Volume 6

Chapter 24: Kenta's confusion and Fumio's agitation
Pages: 43-80

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@T: Embarrassment #24 Kenta's confusion and Fumio's agitation

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SFX: ki kiki -- bat's screeches
Frame 2
Karin: ( ....Uuuuh )
@ Magazine: Tokimeke ☆ Smash (3)
Frame 3
Shuusei: ( You didn't say )
Shuusei: ( "Usui" just then, did ya? )
Frame 4
SFX: goron goron -- falling down
Karin: ( I can't stop thinking about that )
Frame 5
Karin: ( That guy... )
Karin: He really resembles Usui-kun alot...

Page 45
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Karin: ( I should ask Usui-kun about it tomorrow... )
Karin: ( There is no use in just thinking about it without asking him... )
Frame 2
Karin: ( Must sleep... )
Frame 3
Investigator: ( Uh )
Frame 4
Investigator: ( Uuuh )
Frame 5
Shuusei: ( Oh, woken up, have you? )
Frame 6

Page 46
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SFX: bugyaaaa -- scream in horror
Frame 2
Shuusei: ( What the hell was that, screaming like you saw a monster or something )
Shuusei: ( I should have let you sleep on the floor )
Frame 3
Shuusei: ( But you kept complaining about the cold )
Shuusei: ( So I let you in the bed even though there's not a lot of room )
Frame 4
Shuusei: ( I still have alot of work for you to do, dectective, so I can't have you coming down with a cold )
Shuusei: ( You should thank me )
Frame 5
Investigator: (<bold> What the hell are you saying while wearing <italic>my</italic> bathrobe <italic>in</italic> my hotel room ? )
@BB: Pusuuun -- smoke coming out sound

Page 47
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Investigator: ( <bold>Ahh! My computer! )
@computer: blank screen, silent
Frame 2
Shuusei: (Ahh, that)
Shuusei: ( I tried to take a peek at its insides, and then it just stopped working )
Frame 3
Frame 4
Shuusei: ( What a hysteric )
Shuusei: ( It's okay, I've already got a good idea where to look anyways )
Frame 5

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SFX: niko niko -- smiling
Frame 2
Shuusei: ( Hey, I'm really sorry about yesterday.... )
Maki: ( If you arent going to buy a book then please leave )
Frame 3
Frame 4
Shuusei: ( Actually, )
Shuusei: ( I wanted to ask you about- )
Maki: ( If you arent buying a book then leave )
Frame 5
Frame 6
Shuusei: ( I said I wanted to ask you a question goddammit! )
SFX: ban -- dramatic lurching forward sound
Maki: (<bold> DAD, there is a strange guy in the store! )

Page 49
Frame 1
Maki's Dad: ( What's the matter, Maki? )
SFX: noso -- slowly
Maki:( Dad, )
Maki:( That guy was loitering in front of the register... )
Frame 2
Frame 3
Karin:( Ah)
Karin:( Usui-kun )
Frame 4
Frame 5
Karin:( You are pretty early as usual today... )
SFX: ba- surprise

Page 50
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Karin: ( ....What's wrong?.....)
Kenta: ( Eh )
Kenta: ( Ah )
Kenta: ( Nothing )
Frame 2
Kenta: ( Nothing at all )
Frame 3
Frame 4
Frame 5

Page 51
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Kenta: Are you ready to order?
Customer: Lets see ...
Frame 2
Frame 3
Karin: ( Usu.... )
SFX: zusasasasa --scuttling away
Frame 4
Frame 5
Kenta: What
Kenta: What am I so nervous about?
Kenta: I'm
SFX: do -- heartbeat
Kenta: ( Maaka is the same as ever, right? )
Frame 6
Kenta: The same as...
Frame 7
Frame 8
Kenta: Ever....

Page 52
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Kenta: .....That had to be just my imagination....
Frame 2
Kenta: ( Maaka couldn't seriously... be interested in.... )
Kenta: ( It can't be )
SFX: bun bun -- head swaying back and forth
Kenta: ( It's just my imagination )
Kenta: ( It's all in my head )
Kenta: ( It's just )
Karin; ( Usui-kun)
Karin; ( Usui-kun! )
Frame 3
Kenta: ( Wh- )
Kenta: ( What? )
SFX; giku -- surprise
Frame 4
Karin; ( I've been trying to ask you, what's wrong? )
Frame 5
Kenta: ( ....No )
Kenta: ( Nothing at all )
Kenta: ( ....Why? )

Page 53
Frame 1
Karin: How should I break this to him...
Karin: ( Ummm, )
Frame 2
Karin: ( About yesterday afternoon )
SFX: doki -- heartbeat
Frame 3
Karin: ( In the shopping district, um.... I met a person who looked exactly like you, Usui-kun )
Kenta: ( Ah )
Kenta: ( ... oh )
Kenta: ( Ahh )
Frame 4
Kenta: ( ....There's another person who looks just like me.... in this town? )
Karin: ( Well.... Maki told me that sometimes people just randomly look similar, but )
Frame 5
Karin: ( The only differences between him and you are that he is over 30 years old and on his face about right here )
Karin: ( He has a big scar... )

Page 54
Frame 1
Karin: ( And it seemed like he was searching for you, Usui-kun )
Karin: ( So I was just wondering... )
Frame 3
Karin: ( He couldn't by any chance, )
Karin: ( Be your father, Usui-kun.... he couldn't be.... right? )

Page 55
Frame 1
Kenta: ( .....I dont have a father )
Frame 2
SFX:biku -- surprise
SFX:doku -- big heartbeat
Frame 3
Karin: ( Ah)
Karin: ( I- Is that so...)
Karin: ( I'm-)
Karin: ( I'm sorry )
SFX:do do do -- pounding heart
Frame 4
Kenta: ( ...Maaka. Did you tell that guy whe looks like me ...anything about me....?)
Karin: ( ...Eh? ... Um...No! )
Karin: ( He had just asked me when Maki chased him away )
Frame 5
Kenta: ( I see )
Kenta: ( Nevermind then )
Frame 6
Karin: (Ah )

Page 56
Frame 1
Karin: ( HAghhh )
SFX: DOKKU -- big heartbeat
SFX: yoro -- stagger
Frame 2
Karin: ( Did -Did I say something that hurt his feelings...? )
Karin: ( My blood is .... )
Karin: ( Having no father- )
Karin: ( Could that be the source of Usui-kun's misfortune...? )
SFX:doku doku doku -- heart pounding
Frame 3
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Frame 5
Kenta: ( ... It can't be.... )
Frame 6
Frame 7
Kenta: ( He could'nt have... )
Kenta: ( Why would <i>he</i> come here !! )

Page 57
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Karin: ( He couldn't by any chance be your father, Usui-kun.... )
Frame 2
Frame 3
Kenta: ( That guy is not... my father )

Page 58
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SFX: niko niko -- smiling
Frame 2
Frame 3
Fumio: ( If you are selling something we don't want any )
SFX: batan -- slam
Frame 4
Investigator: ( <bold> Ah- I'm sorry, thats not it )
Investigator: ( <bold> I just - I just want to talk)
Frame 5
SFX: gi -- creak
Frame 6
Investigator: Yes!
Investigator: ( Its definitely you )


Page 59
Frame 1
Investigator: ( You are Usui Fumio, right? )
Investigator: ( I was hired by your mother to bring you a message... )
Frame 2
Investigator: ( I work for the Oono Private Detective Agency, my name is Yonehara .... Ah! )
SFX:BAN --slam
SFX:gachi -- latch clicking
Frame 3
Investigator: ( Usui-san! )
Investigator: ( Usui-san! )
SFX: don don -- knock
Investigator: ( I finally found you, please at least listen to what I have to say... )
Frame 4
Fumio: Okaa-san
Fumio: ( Kenta)
Fumio: ( Wake up )

Page 60
Frame 1
SFX: noso -- slowly
Kenta: (What?)
Fumio: ( Umm )
Frame 2
Fumio: ( I'm going to go shopping for a bit, I want you to come with me )
Kenta: ( At this time of day!? )
Kenta: ( Right now!? )
Frame 3
Fumio: ( If we don't leave early there is no point in going )
Frame 4
Kenta: ( ... Okaasan )
Kenta: ( If we are going shopping, why are we bringing all this luggage? )
SIGN: Ticket Counter
Fumio: ( Hmmmm )
Frame 5
Kenta: ( ... Okaasan, where are we riding the train to? )
Fumio: ( Far away )
Frame 6
Fumio: ( Because we are running away from home )

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Kenta: Running aw-... EEH?
Frame 2
Fumio: ( I'm glad I didn't tell you the truth when we were leaving )
Fumio: ( You would have yelled like that and ruined everything )
Frame 3
Kenta: ( Why are we doing this!? )
Kenta: ( Kaa-san!)
Frame 4
Frame 5
Fumio: ( ....Kenta... )
Frame 6
Fumio: ( You don't want to live together with me, just the two of us? )

Page 62
Frame 1
Investigator: ( Usui-san, )
Investigator: ( I'm supposed to bring you back with me )
Frame 2
Investigator: ( I'm going to keep coming back until you hear me out )
Fumio: ( Please Go away!! )
Fumio: ( I don't want to hear what you have to say! )
Frame 3
Frame 4
Investigator: ( Well then... )
Investigator: ( Please excuse me )
Frame 5
Investigator: ( It's going to take a long time to win her over... )
Frame 6
Investigator: ( At least I didn't have Iidzuka hanging all over me today... )
Investigator: ( If he comes back again tomorrow )
Investigator: ( It's going to be a long day )

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Shuusei: ( ... The streets in this town are pretty confusing...)
arrow: He's lost ->
Frame 3
Shuusei: ( Hmmm? )
Frame 4
Shuusei: ( Helloo&#9825; )
Shuusei: ( You're that girl from the other day, right? )
Karin: (<bold> Eep!? )
Frame 5
Shuusei: ( Last time that bookstore girl got in the way and I never got the answer to my question )
Shuusei: ( I'm so glad I ran into you again )
SFX:haa haa haa -- panting
Karin: ( Ummmm, uh..)
SFX:awa awa -- freaking out
SFX:zun zun -- bearing down
Frame 6
Kenta: ( Maaka? )

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Page 65
Frame 1
SFX:dokuuuu -- massive heartbeat
SFX: biku -- surprise

Page 66
Frame 1
Karin: ( Usui-kun !?)
Frame 2
Frame 3
Shuusei: ( Kenta )
Shuusei: ( It's been 5 years )
Frame 4
Shuusei: ( You used to be a brat this tall back then )
Shuusei: ( You've really gotten big... as big as me )
Frame 5
Kenta: ( You-)
Kenta: ( <bold>I dont even know who you are! )
Kenta: ( <bold and bigger>You're just a stranger!! )
Frame 6
Frame 7
Frame 8
SFX:gui -- grab
Karin: ( Ah! )
Kenta: ( Lets go , Maaka )

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Frame 1
SFX:dokkun -- heartbeat
Karin: ( Ugh )
Frame 2
Karin: ( No way, my blood has already increased this much!?)
Karin: ( But I just bit someone 3 days ago (On Christmas) !)
Frame 3
Karin: ( U- Usui-kun )
Karin: ( Wait )
Frame 4
Frame 5
Kenta: ( <bold>I dont even know who you are! )
Kenta: ( <bold and bigger>You're just a stranger!! )
Frame 6
Shuusei: ( He's right )
Shuusei: ( I'm may be stranger after all )
Frame 7
Shuusei: ( At least according to the family register... )
Shuusei: ( Well, I didn't expect this to be easy... )
Shuusei: ( At least, if stay close to that detective, I should get another chance to meet him soon.. )

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Frame 1
Karin: ( U- Usui-kun. That guy is gone already! )
Karin: ( Let go of my hand! )
Frame 2
Kenta: ( I'm sorry )
SFX: pa -- blush
Frame 3
Karin: ( Usui-kun )
Karin: ( Who in the world was that guy...? )
Frame 4
Kenta: ( He's probably... )
Kenta: ( Searching for me and my mom )
Frame 5
Karin; ( Searching .... for you.... ? )
Frame 6
Karin; ( ...I knew it...
...He must be your ....)
Kenta: ( <bold>He is not my family!)

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Kenta: ( .....damn )
Kenta: ( What did he come here for.... )
Frame 2
Kenta: ( He isn't.... )
Kenta: ( Planning to take us back there, is he.... )
Frame 3
Frame 4
Karin: (Eh? )

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Karin: ( ...Does that mean Usui-kun )
Karin: ( Isn't going to live here anymore!? )
SFX:gaaaan -- realization
Frame 2
Karin @TR: I... I don't...
Karin @BL: I don't want him to go!!
Frame 3
Kenta: ( And I was just starting to get used to it here too )
Kenta: ( Dammit....! )

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Kenta: ( ...How can I... )
Kenta: ( Make him go away.... )
Frame 2
SFX:dokkun -- heartbeat
Frame 3
SFX:dokkun -- heartbeat
SFX:dokku -- heartbeat
Frame 4
Karin: ( Usui-kun )
SFX:goku - gulp
Frame 5
Karin: ( If you and your mom were to hide somewhere....
until that guy goes back to his home... )
Karin: ( ...That should do it, right? )
Frame 6
Kenta: (Eh?)
SFX: ha -- surprise
Frame 7
Kenta; ( Uh....yeah... )

Page 72
Frame 1
Karin: ( There is one place )
Karin: ( A place where other humans definitely can't come in....! )
Frame 2
Karin: ( Usui-kun, why don't you stay at my house for a while? )
Kenta: ( Ah.... There...!? )
Frame 3
Kenta: ( But Maaka- I can't... )
Karin: ( Don't worry about my parents, I'll convince them! )
Frame 4
Karin: ( I mean... You are always helping me all the time, and )
Karin: ( When youre having trouble like this, its the least I can do... )

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Frame 1
Karin: ( Plus, Usui-kun, I- I don't )
Karin: ( want you to leave... )
Frame 2
Kenta: (... Maaka... )
Frame 3
Kenta: ( Th-.... )
Kenta: ( Thank you.... )
Frame 4
Frame 5
Kenta: ( <big> Kaa-san!!)
SFX: patan -- slamming door open
SFX: biku -- surprise
Frame 6
Frame 7
SFX:zubi -- blowing nose
Fumio: (Ah)

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Frame 1
Kenta: ( .... Kaa-san )
Fumio: ( I- I'm ok, don't mind me. )
SFX:goshi goshi -- wiping face
Frame 2
Kenta: (Did... he.... come here....? )
Frame 3
Fumio: ( Eh? You saw him too, Kenta?)
SFX:zubi -- blowing nose
Frame 4
Kenta: This isn't a joke
Kenta: ....If he comes here everything's going to fall apart!
Frame 5
SFX:oro oro -- nervous fidgeting
Frame 6
Frame 7
Karin: ( Usui-kun,
its almost dark, Any minute now Papa will be.... )
Kenta: ( Got it )
Kenta: ( I'm sorry, Kaa-san )
Frame 8
Kenta: ( I'll be right back, so wait for me okay )
Kenta: ( Lock the door, and don't open it no matter what! )
SFX: batan -- door slamming

Page 75
Frame 1
Frame 2
Henri: ( Hmmmmm )
Frame 3
Henri: ( That's not going to be possible....
In our house....
there are some things that we can, and some we just cannot do...)
Frame 4
Karin: ( Papa, Please!)
Karin: ( Think of it as paying him back for all the help he has given me! )
Frame 5
Henri: ( No, we cannot allow it! )
Henri: ( Nevermind yourself, since you already know our secret, but we cannot allow your mother to enter our house! )

Page 76
Frame 1
Henri: ( This is a Vampire household )
Frame 2
Henri: ( Think about it.... You wouldn't want to put your mother in danger of having her memory wiped blank, do you? )
Karin: ( Papa! )
Frame 3
Henri: ( Usui-kun... I want to help you as much as I can, however )
Henri: ( This I cannot do for you )
Henri: ( Besides, this is your family's problem, right? )
Kenta: (... Y- yes...)
Frame 4
SFK do-- heartbeat
Karin: ( Urk )
Frame 5
Frame 6
Anju: ( Wait! )
Anju: ( Something is wrong with Onee-chan )

Page 77
Frame 1
SFX:gaku -- collapse
Frame 2
Henri: ( KARIN!?)
Kenta: ( Ma - Maaka!?)
Frame 3
SFX:bikkun -- jerking back

Page 78
Frame 1
SFX:ba -- explosion
Frame 2
Anju: ( Onee-chan )
SFX:dosa --thud
Someone: ( Karin!! )

Page 79
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SFX:biku biku -- twitching
SFX:boto boto -- Gushing out
Frame 2
Carrera: ( What's going on...!? .....The blood won't stop.... )
Anju: ( It can't be... it's too early... )
Anju: ( She just bit someone 3 days ago )
Frame 3
Henri: ( This ... )
Henri: ( This is... )
Frame 4
Frame 5
BB: ( Could it be... )

Page 80
Frame 1
BB: ( That this Usui boy, who stimulates her blood production )
Frame 2
Frame 3
Henri: ( This is ...
Your fault, isnt it....!? )
SFX:giro -- glaring
@B: Embarrassment 24, Over
Frame 4
BB: ( Is, in fact, dangerous to Karin...? )
Kenta: (...Uh )