Announcements
Welcome to MangaHelpers! Check out the forums for the latest discussions.
translation-needs-checked translation-needs-proofread

Desire 21

CUP IN

en
+ posted by StrangerAtaru as translation on Aug 23, 2009 01:06 | Go to Desire

-> RTS Page for Desire 21

Going to new places and making new experiences should make you worldly, but it also makes one forget the good of home! When a girl living abroad comes home for a round of golf, her "worldly knowledge" may give Takashi quite a ride!

File: 21: CUP IN

53.
Takashi: I came to undertake an invitation for golf from the married department heads of major appliance maker SONIC, who are our customers.

54.
Ayumi: Nice to meet you, I'm Ayumi. Please to meet you today.
Takashi: Ah, thanks. I'm Fujii. (narrating) I didn't hear until that morning that they were coming with their daughter.
Mr. Ozaki: I thought we would be together as a family for her last break day before she returned to overseas study in L.A. tomorrow. She's our only child.
Takashi: OZAKI Ayumi, 21 yeards old, enrolled at University of California.
(TN: Considering that University of California is a system of public universities and they specfically mention LA, it's easy to say that she's probably enrolled at UCLA)

55.
Mr. Ozaki: While we are employed as the heads of a global enterprise, our English isn't that good. Somehow we feel it's embarrasing. Since our daughter didn't want to feel that way, she's been abroad since high school.
Ayumi: Since I've heard you are a Tokyo U. graduated elite salaryman, I did imagine you, but my impressions were extremely...
Takashi: Huh...you were wrong?
Ayumi: Well, it really seems like it. (I'm sorry)
Ayumi: ......
Takashi: She was a beautiful woman who I felt had good breeding.

56.
Caption: SHIZUOKA PREFECTURE - MT. SIDE C.C.
(TN: While I don't know if Mt. Side exists, Shizuoka is located in Chubu, in an area between the Pacific Ocean and the foot of the Japan Alps including Mt. Fuji)
Takashi: Nice shot!!
Mr. Ozaki: Wel--Ayumi is skilled at this.
Ayumi: Since there are many cheap public courses in LA, I've been really going through them.

57.
Ayumi: Since I'm together with such a dreamy guy like Fujii-san, today will be fun.
Takashi: I'm thankful for the honor. Similarly for me, I'll do my best with a pretty girl like the miss.
Mr. Ozaki: Nice putt.
Takashi: Oh no! That was a chance for birdie.

58.
Takashi: I'm so dazzled by Ayumi-san that my usual skill is out of order.
Ayumi: Did my pussy make you out of bearings? (Are you dazzled by my pussy?)
(TN: There's going to be plenty of "Engrish"...to say the least, so I'll be making a meaning of the actual Japanese alongside "this")
Takashi: ......!?
Takashi: ......
Ayumi: Tell me how big dick is. I wanna try it once in the backsaddle. (How big is your cock? I want you to thrust it from behind once)
Takashi: ......!!

59.
Ayumi: Papa, if I win, can you buy me a car? A BMW.
Mr. Ozaki: Aah! I haven't lost to you yet.
Takashi: What's going on? Suddenly she's speaking vulgar English...what exactly is she thinking...

60.
Takashi: ......
Takashi: That vulgar slang you're saying since your parents don't understand; it's best you don't keep firing it out.
Ayumi: !!
Ayumi: Well...it's not a big deal to know some slang.
Takashi: I don't get your true intention, even if I get the meaning of the English.
Ayumi: ......
Ayumi: Show me your score card.
Mrs. Ozaki: Are those two having a coversation in English!?
Mr. Ozaki: Seems like it. How enviable.

61.
Note:
I want your cock!
I want you to make me high!
I wait for you in my car at the parking after lunch.
Actual Meaning:
I want your cock! (well that part is the same)
I want to feel you.
When lunch is over, meet me in the car in the parking lot.
Takashi: ......
Ayumi: Thanks for the meal. Papa, can you give me the key, I forgot my makeup in the car.
Mr. Ozaki: Alright.
Takashi: Is she serious!?

62.
Takashi: .........
Takashi: Well are you playing with me, thinking that I won't speak about it?
Ayumi: I'm playing around; I hate when it's dull. My last day in Japan in in this place now...will be the ultimate thrilling experience.
Takashi: ............

63.
Ayumi: Ahahaha
Takashi: .........
Ayumi: Japanese men really don't have any guts. If you were American, you'd respond immediately to that sort of approach.
Ayumi: CANDY ASS! (Coward)
Takashi: She's really looking down on Japanese men.

64.
Takashi: She didn't provoke me again until the final hole.
Ayumi: AH~~~! WOW, I GOT A BMW~~
Takashi: She continued to play as a good daughter in front of her parents.
Ayumi: THANK YOU, PAPA
Mr. Ozaki: Yeah, yeah.
Mrs. Ozaki: Ayumi, are you asleep?
Mr. Ozaki: Didn't she seem be having fun by raising up her English? We were right to show off Fujii-kun.
Mrs. Ozaki: Isn't this music fine? Mahler is the greatest.
(TN: The Ozakis are making mention to Gustav Mahler, a Bohemian composer and conductor known as crucial in late-Romantic/early-Modernist music)
Mr. Ozaki: Ah, yes. I'm a fan of the classics too.

65.
SFX: Slip
Ayumi: !!
Ayumi: Are you sane to do it here!!

66.
Takashi: If your approach is serious, then I want to answer it here and now.
Ayumi: ......
Takashi: If you raise your voice, I'll ruin you. Does this make me a coward?
Ayumi: ......
Takashi: It's alright. They won't notice. They've been completely erased in Mahler's symphony.

67.
Ayumi: !!
Ayumi: ......

68.
(No dialogue)

69.
Mrs. Ozaki: Ayumi, you look terrible?
SFX: huh
Ayumi: Ah...I'm just a bit tired.
Mr. Ozaki: Then how about we take a break? I'm a bit tired too.
(TN: The sign points to Ebino, which actually is a city in southern Kyuushu in Miyazaki Prefecture...which is a tad strange considering their previous location)
Mr. Ozaki: We're going in, got no choice in it.

70.
Mr. Ozaki: Ayumi, how about some coffee?
Ayumi: I'll stay in here since I'm tired.
Mr. Ozaki: Fujii-kun?
Takashi: Since something could happen if Ayumi-san is left alone, I'll stay too.
Mr. Ozaki: Then, pardon us if you may.
Takashi: What do you do!?
Ayumi: You're worse than the Americans!!

71.
Passer: ......

72.
(Nothing to say)

73.
Ayumi: AHAA
Takashi: .........

74.
Ayumi: So there are tough guys like you in Japan.
Ayumi: You've altered my understanding.
Mr. Ozaki: Sorry for waiting, we were really confused at the restaurant.
Takashi: Thank you for everything today.
Ayumi: When I graduate college and return to Japan, can I see you again?
Takashi: OK! Have fun living overseas!
Ayumi: Pa!

TN: Yeah...Candy Ass...that's all you need to know of this chapter. It's crazy enough to translate Engrish (including the infamous "Bob Marley" quote from chp. 2), but to have "dirty talk" in Engrish just like Ayumi said...that was even weirder than a typical chapter and sort of made me dread doing it! Ultimately, the girl was cute and the chapter was probably a bit typical akin to a few others involving Takashi proving himself, but...all you really need to know for this chapter was pretty much Ayumi's Engrish.

Have you shown your appreciation today? Click the thanks button or write your appreciation below!

0 members and 4 guests have thanked StrangerAtaru for this release
Comments
Add your comment:

Login or register to comment

Benefits of Registration:
    * Interact with hundreds of thousands of other Manga Fans and artists.
    * Upload your own Artwork, Scanlations, Raws and Translations.
    * Enter our unique contests in order to win prizes!
    * Gain reputation and become famous as a translator/scanlator/cleaner!
No comments have been made yet!

About the author:

Alias: StrangerAtaru
Message: Pm

Author contributions

Translations: 1319
Forum posts: 1452

Quick Browse Manga

Latest Site Releases

Date Manga Ch Lang Uploader
Apr 14 MH Yearbook 2019 Mangahe...
Feb 15 MH Yearbook 2018 Mangahe...
Mar 1 MH Yearbook 2013 Mangahe...
Jan 19 MH Yearbook 2012 Mangahe...

Latest Translations

Date Manga Ch Lang Translator
Feb 7, 2025 Berserk 124 es 4M4M
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 13 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 12 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 11 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 10 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 9 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 8 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 6 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 5 tr McMaster68
Jan 4, 2025 Dororo 4 tr McMaster68