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Fuuko no Iru Mise 3

いつもとちがう道 - A Different Road than Usual

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+ posted by tsubaimomo as translation on Feb 24, 2010 03:41 | Go to Fuuko no Iru Mise

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Hello, this is my first translation, let's see how it goes. The manga is called Fuuko no Iru Mise, by Iwaaki Hitoshi. I'm not the actual translator for this project, but I simply wanted to try my hands on what seemed to be a simple manga. I am, however, the editor for this project, so if this thing is good enough, it may get used. Give it all the checking it needs...

I've got the transcriptions along with the translation, but you'll probably like to view the raw as well, so you can dl it here:
http://www.mediafire.com/?nwdzmjomtzo



chapter 3 - いつもとちがう道 - A Different Road than Usual
(note: This title translation comes from the previously translated table of contents, so I don't take credit for it)

pg 54
う~~~んバイトの時間まで大分あるなあ......
Well... I have some time before work...
少し別の道を行ってみようかな
I'll try going on a side street.
はっ
hah x4
へえーー...... 少し前までここら辺林だったのに
Ehhh... until just a bit ago, this place was all forests.
でも人はまだ住んでないみたい......
But, it looks like nobody lives here yet...

pg 55
きゃっ
Kyah!
はあ、 はあ、
haa haa
そうだ!
That's it!
きみ頼みがある!
I have request for you!
この手紙とカギすぐ警察に届けてほしいんだ!
Take this letter and key to the police as soon as possible!

pg 56
じゃ頼んだからね!
Well then, I'm counting on you!
うわあっ
Uwaah!
あ!いたぞ!
Ah! There he is!
待て!
Stop!

pg 57
はーーびっくりした
Phew, that surprised me.
コインロッカー......?
A coin Locker...?
なんだか知らないけど物騒な感じ......
Somehow even though I don't know what that was about, I feel unnerved...
早く届ちゃお
Hurry and deliver it.
交番はと......
A police box...
こっちが近道なのよね......
This way should be a shortcut...

pg 58
信用してたんだぜ社長......
Thought we could trust you, manager...
おタクが一番安全だと思ったから預けたのにな
And your place was the safest, that's why we left it with you.
いいかヘロインなんだぞ!...... 持ち逃げしてどうするつもりだったんだ?
Listen up, what about the heroin! What are you tryin' to pull by making
off with it?!
まとまった金がどうしても...... 必要で......
I just needed the money no matter what...
ちっ これだから素人は困るよ!
Tch, I have to be worried over an amateur like this!
へへ...... 所詮 無理だとわかったんでもう......自首しようかと......
Hehe... After all, it was impossible and I knew it... should I give it up...

pg 59
止めろ!
Stop!
自首だと!?
Give it up?!
や やめてくれ!!
St-stop, please!!
てめェ!モンはどこにあるんだ!!
Youuu! Where's the stuff!?!
私の身になにかあったら あんたらすぐ指名手配だぞ!
No matter what happens to me, they'll soon be searching for suspects!
...... そうか? あのガキ......
...So that's it! That kid...
もどれ! さっきの場所だ!
Turn around! That place from earlier!

pg 60
たしか白いマフラーの...... 女子高生だったな......
Must have been... that highschool girl with the white scarf...
よしおまえらは駅までの道をなぞってけ!
Alright, you search up the station street!
へい
'kay.
おまえはそっち
You, that way.
誘拐ですか?
This a kidnapping?
そんな必要はない
That won't be necessary.
おっさんからの預かりモンを取り返しゃいいんだよ
We'll just get what that old man gave her!
あえ お巡りさんがいない......
Oh, the policeman isn't here...
これでいいや......
This should do...
お巡り様 (??)
Sir Policeman (??)

pg 61
『お巡り様』ってのは変だったかな
"Sir Policeman" might have sounded a little odd...
なんだ...... フフ...... まだ近くにいたのか
What... fufu... so you were in this area yet...

pg 62
また会ったね ねえさん
So we meet again, miss.
さっそくなんだけど......
I'll get right to it...
さっきの おじさんから なにか......
That old man from earlier...
預かった物があるだろう?
What exactly did he hand over?
子供相手に手荒なマネはしたくねえんだよ...... な?
You don't want me to be rough towards a kid... do ya?
出しな
Out with it!
あ......
Ah...
あうっあっ こ こここ こっこっこっ
Auh-ah, i-it-it-it-it's-it's-it's- (Auh-ah, t-th-th-th-ther-the-the-)

pg 63
ふざけるな!
Don't fuck around!
あっ!?
Ah?!

pg 64
くそっ
Shit!
ちっ
Tch
はあっ はあ
haah haa
やだ...... なんだか知らないけど やだ! こわい!
No... what is it? I don't know anything, but. No! I'm scared!
ぐっ
Guh!

pg 65
くう~~~
Kuuu
へへへ
Hehehe
おう 捕まえたか
Oh, you were able to get her?
どうします?
What should I do?
ごえっ
Goeh
裸にしてみますか
Strip her and see?
おい 気をつけろ!息が止まるぞ
Oi, watch it! Her breathing stopped!
あ......
Ah...
おい......
Oi...

pg 66
わああ
Waaa
このガキ!
This kid!

pg 67
はっ
Hah
はっ
Hah
待て!まずい
Wait! This is bad.
人通りで騒がれちゃかなわん
Can't be sure with this pedestrian commotion.
くそ......
Damn...

pg 68
あ フーちゃん 遅刻だぜ~~
Ah, Fuu-chan, you're a bit late...
マ ママママ マスター!!
Ma-ma-ma-ma-ma-master!!
ひいっ
Hiih
なんだ?
What was that?

pg 69
いらっしゃいませ
Welcome.
おまえは外から店の裏側を見張れ
Go guard the back of the shop.
へい
'kay
フ......
Hmph...

pg 70
コーヒー
Coffee.
はい
Yes.
あれ? 長えなあ
Hm? Sure is taking a while...
風子のやつおをいな......
Fuuko, you sure are being slow...
おい...... なにやってんだ?
Oi... what're you up to?
あれ...... あかない
Huh... it won't open.
もう待てねえな
I can't wait any more.

pg 71
おい いくら頑張っても無駄だぞ!
Oi, how long are you gonna pointlessly stay in there!
おとなしく出てきな
Just get out here quietly.
あの なんでしたら......
Um, would you...
となりの店でも借りられますけど?
borrow the one in the shop next door?
トイレ......
Their bathroom...
うるせえ
Shut it!

pg 72
もう観念しろ!外にも見張りがいるんだ
Accept it already! The back exit is covered too!
はあ......?
Huuh...?
十数える間に出てこなけりゃ蹴破るからな
If you're not outta there by the time I count to ten, I'm gonna smash that
door in!
ええ~~!?
Eehhh?!
ちょっとお客さん
Just a minute sir.
いち......
One...
あ も...... もしもし......
Ah, he... hello...
に
Two
さん......
Three...
はい...... ええ...... こ ここですか?喫茶『ロドス』......... はい
Yes... ya... he-here? The Coffee shop Rhodos... yes.
ろく
Six
しち
Seven
はち
Eight

pg 73
く......
Nine...
そ そうです 駅前のこっ 交番に...... はい!
Th-that's right. The p-police box in front of the station... yes!
交番......
Police box...
フッ まさかウウエートレスだったとはな!
Hmph, Don't tell me you're a waitress here!
お お おそいわ!
T-to-too slow!
もう電話したもん......
I already called on the phone...
カ カ カギと手紙は最初から交番にと 届けてあったのよ!
Th-the k-key and letter were at the police box from the beginning!
なんだと!?
What?!

pg 75
フン...... 心配するな
Hmph... don't worry.
もう おまえに 用はない
We have no more business with you.
まっ先に交番か......
Hm, the police box from earlier...
偉いね お嬢ちゃん
Excellent job miss.
おい なんなんだ? 今のは......
Oi, what the heck was that just now...?
あたしにも よく...... わかんない......
I don't get it at all either...

pg 76
ひどいわねぇっ 出ろ 出ろって...... 人が便秘で 苦しんでんのに......
How awful, saying get out, get out... even when people are constipated...
や......
Oh...
あ あたしが 長がったから......?
Did I take too long...?
うそォ......
Couldn't be...
なにも...... ひとりだけで おまえ......
It's nothing... You did that on your own...


-tsubaimomo

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#1. by mako1138 ()
Posted on Mar 13, 2010
I'm presently about a third of the way through. I'll finish within a few days but this should give you an idea of the changes I would make.

http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AanpcaD4l7BLZGY3aHpqbXhfMWd0cXBkc2Rx&hl=en
#2. by tsubaimomo ()
Posted on Mar 13, 2010
Ah, that sounds much better...

Areas to check:

The bigger sentences are probably more likely to be incorrect.

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