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Will o' Wisp 1
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Grandfather: Hannah, that door won’t open.
Text: Chapter 1
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Hannah: But…Grandfather…it’s here, I can hear it…
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Grandfather: You can hear it? Hear what?
Hannah: I don’t know…
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Hannah: But… // Everyone says it’s here…
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Woman: Joseph passed away?
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Hannah: I’m sorry for being late to inform you.
Woman: I see…he died during the epidemic…
There won’t be any more dolls made by him…
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Woman: Hannah, are you alright?
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Hannah: Yes…I don’t think my grandfather would want to see me upset.
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Woman: You’re strong…
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Woman: If you have any trouble, I'm always here.
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Hannah: Thank you very much.
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Box: Running away.
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Text: What will happen to the shop? Will you be taking over?
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Text: Hmm?
Text: The doll Hannah made two years ago was amazing.
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Text: Two years ago…
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Text: It seems like you sold it, I was disappointed… // Please let me know if you make another doll.
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Box 1: Several days ago, my grandfather died of an epidemic. / He was stubborn and antisocial, but he raised me all by myself after my parents died when I was 5.
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Box 2: My grandfather was a skillful doll maker. / Orders came, not only from England, but also from abroad.
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Hannah: A new doll…
Text: If I could, I’d make one. I would…
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Hannah: Grandfather…
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Text: Don’t cry… // Don’t cry… // Don’t cry…
Hannah: Everyone…
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Hannah: Thank you…
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Emily: Lady Hannah…
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Hannah: Emily, what’s wrong?
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Emily: I found this when I was sorting out Lord Joseph’s study.
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Hannah: A key?
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Emily: One of them is probably the key to that door.
Text: Stop…that door won’t open…
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Text: Grandfather…
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Text: Why wasn’t I allowed to open it?
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Text: There’s nothing here, the door won’t open, alright?
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Text: Hannah, you understand, don’t you?
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Hannah: It opened…
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Text: A cellar?
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Text: Here… // I’m here…
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Emily: Lady Hannah…
Text: Since I was a child, the light only I could see… // The voice only I could hear…
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Hannah: There was a room like this down here…
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Hannah: There’s something here…
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Emily: Lady Hannah, it’s dangerous!
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Hannah: It’s okay, Emily. I didn’t have a bad feeling when you called me.
Emily: Lady Hannah…
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Hannah: This is… // a coffin?
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Hannah: Why is this here?
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Emily: Lady Hannah?!
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Text: A doll…
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Hannah: He’s so beautiful…
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Text: Is he one of Grandfather’s dolls? No…
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Text: Could it be…?
Hannah: Emily, give me the other key…
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Hannah: There it is…
Text: A key hole in his back…
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Text: Could it be…?
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Text: He moved!
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Will: Hey.
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Will: Were you the one who woke me?
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Hannah: He spoke! // Emily, what should I do? He spoke!
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Will: Are you listening to me?
Emily: Lady Hannah, it’s dangerous!
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Will: Answer me.
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Will: Are you my owner?
Hannah: Eh?
Text: Owner?
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Will: Why are you surprised? / She’s just like us elemental dolls.
Emily: Lady Hannah, stay back.
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Hannah: Elemental dolls?
Text: What are those?
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Will: This is the first time I’ve seen a doll that can move like us.
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Will: Hey, are you listening?
Emily: Stay back, you rude man!
Text: Us?
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Will: I’m rude? You’re the one who’s rude for not answering my question!
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Emily: I wouldn’t get near someone like you, / someone so rude // and with such a rough expression on his face!
Hannah: Emily…what’s wrong?!
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Hannah: Emily!
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Text: Hey! // Hey! It’s the doll girl!
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Text: You’ll get touched by a doll! // Let’s get out of here!
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Hannah: …
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Grandfather: Hannah…this is where you were…
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Hannah: Everyone calls me “the doll girl”. They don’t want to play with the doll girl.
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Grandfather: Hannah, do you hate dolls?
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Hannah: I don’t hate them. I thought it’d be nice if I could talk to Grandfather’s dolls.
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Grandfather: In that case, I’ll make a friend for you.
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Grandfather: A doll with blue eyes, just like you.
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Hannah: Grandfather…thank you…
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Hannah: Umm… // I want to make dolls too!
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Grandfather: I’ll teach you when you’re a little older.
Hannah: Really…that’s a promise?
Grandfather: Yes…then…
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Text: This time I’ll make a friend by myself.
Hannah: I’ve done it! / My first doll…
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Hannah: My friend…
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Hannah: I’ve got to give her a name!
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Text: Who are you?
Emily: Will you stay by my side?
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No text.
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Hannah: I’m glad you’re awake!
Emily: Lady Hannah…
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Hannah: Emily, I’m sorry…I forgot to wind you up… / Even though I do it every day…
Text: My first friend… That time, Emily said she wanted a body…
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Text: I gave her a doll’s body…
Emily: It’s okay.
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Hannah: Wait, I’ll wind you up a little more…
Emily: Okay…
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Emily: You!
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Will: You’re finally awake…
Text: Well, well…
Text: It’s done~
Emily: Hannah…
Hannah: Emily, Will carried you when you couldn’t move.
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Emily: Will…
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Emily: Are you going to keep that dangerous doll in the house?!
Hannah: Eh?
Will: For a defective doll, you sure have a lot to say! You can’t even move if you don’t get wound up every day…
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Text: A defective doll?
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Text: Emily is…?
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Hannah: Emily’s not defective! / Don’t say bad things about my friend!
Emily: Lady Hannah…
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Will: Your friend? // Once someone winds me up, until the person who winds me up… / my owner dies, I’ll keep moving.
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Will: In other words, until you die…
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Will: Once my owner dies, I’ll sleep once more. / I’ll become unable to move, just like that expressionless doll.
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Hannah: What on earth is Will made of?
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Emily: It doesn’t matter about me, but I won’t forgive you for insulting Lady Hannah!
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Will: Who insulted who?!
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Emily: You insulted Lady Hannah.
Will: What?
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Emily: It was Hannah who made me.
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Will: It can’t be… / You’ve got Shamrock’s…
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Hannah: Shamrock?
Will: Nothing…
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Text: Will?
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Emily: That dangerous doll decided to stay in one of the spare rooms.
Hannah: Thank you, Emily.
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Emily: Even if he does have a bad attitude, there’s a limit to how rude he can be!
Hannah: He certainly is quite scary…
Emily: Lady Hannah…what’s that?
Hannah: I found it in the cellar, it looks like there’s something about elemental dolls…
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Hannah: Dolls like Will and Emily are called elemental dolls…
Text: A doll maker with special abilities made these dolls by sealing a soul inside of a doll. // Just like a living doll, these dolls move, speak and possess feelings.
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Text: Those lights were a soul?
Hannah: Emily, you were a soul, too?
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Emily: I… // never felt strongly that I wanted to be by your side. / The truth is that you have the ability to hear our voices.
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Emily: It’s thanks to that I have my own body.
Hannah: Emily…
Text: I wonder if the doll maker who created Will was able to hear the souls’ voices too…
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Text: For a change, I went out at night to get some fresh air. // That night, the lights were brighter than usual.
Hannah: It’s because Will’s here…
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Hannah: That’s…
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Text Will…
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Text: He can make that sort of expression too…
Will: I see…
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Will: Then everyone’s nearby…
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Text: Everyone?
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Will: Ignis is…
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Will: You like spying on people, huh?
Hannah: No! I just came to get some fresh air…
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Will: You…what happened to my key?
Hannah: Your key?!
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Hannah: I’ve got it. This is it, right?
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Will: Don’t move.
Text: Eh…
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Hannah: Will…?
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Will: Don’t lose it.
Hannah: Y-Yes!
Will: Carry it with you all the time.
Hannah: O-Okay!
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Will: Elemental dolls each have their own key.
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Will: If someone winds them up using that key, they become the doll’s owner.
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Hannah: Anyone?
Will: That’s right.
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Will: If the key is stolen and someone else winds me up…
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Will: They’ll become my owner.
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Will: In other words, if you don’t like me, you can get someone else to become my owner.
Hannah: I won’t do that!
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Hannah: I’m glad I met you, Will. / If you could become my friend like Emily…
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Will: Is that an order?
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Hannah: An order?
Will: An owner can order their doll to do something. / The doll has to follow that order.
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Hannah: What’s that?
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Will: The price we pay for having a body is that we’re unable to disobey our owner’s orders. / It’s that kind of contract.
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Text: That’s…
Hannah: So, if another person becomes your owner, then you have to listen to what they say?
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Will: That’s right.
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Will: Well…was what you said earlier an order?
Hannah: No…
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Hannah: It was // a request…
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Will: I refuse to do it.
Hannah: Eh?
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Will: Don’t think that I’ll get on with just anybody, like that emotionless doll. / As long as it’s not an order, I can do what I like. I don’t want you interfering either.
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Text: It’s annoying.
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Will: Anyway, you can make as many other “friends” as you want, right?
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Will: Sorry. / I shouldn’t have said that.
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Hannah: My grandfather made me stop making dolls.
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Hannah: I haven’t made any dolls since Emily.
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Hannah: Even though I was happy to have met Emily, / my grandfather seemed really upset.
Text: What’s the meaning of this? You think this is acceptable?
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Text: Hannah, listen carefully.
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Grandfather: You must not make any more dolls. / Never again…
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Text: He was so happy when I said I wanted to be a doll maker.
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Will: You’re getting cold. // Go inside and get some sleep soon. Humans need sleep.
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Text: Will…
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Hannah: Good morning…
Will: Yeah…you get breakfast pretty late, don’t you?
Emily: I see the dangerous doll doesn’t even know how to greet someone properly.
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Will: Hey.
Text: See!
Hannah: If it’s the key, then I’ve got it with me.
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Will: It’s not that. This was delivered by a page boy this morning.
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Hannah: It’s an invitation from Lady Gloria.
Will: Gloria?
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Hannah: Lady Gloria is the daughter of an earl and one of my Grandfather’s regular customers. // Even though she’s a noble, she still treats me kindly…
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Text: You told me of your grandfather’s passing, // it must have troubled you…
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Will: Well, what did Gloria say?
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Text: Someone she wants me to meet?
Hannah: Umm… / There’s someone I want you to meet, so please come to visit.
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Hannah: What could it be?
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Emily: Hannah, you have a visitor.
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Hannah: I’m sorry to keep you waiting…
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Hobbyrdy: Excuse me, young lady. / My master wanted to see your dolls, so we stopped by at his orders.
Text: He’s beautiful…
Hannah: Like the princes you see in fairy tales…
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Text: But…what is this strange feeling? // I’ve felt it before…
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Hobbyrdy: This is Baron Beckford’s son, Lord Irvine.
Text: A noble!
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Hannah: Pleased to meet you…
Hobbyrdy: Lord Irvine’s hobby is collecting rare dolls. He said that Joseph’s dolls were wonderful.
Irvine: Umm…well…
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Hobbyrdy: Lord Irvine, you’re embarrassing the young lady.
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Hobbyrdy: I told you yesterday, didn’t I?
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Bobbyrdy: This is how to greet a lady…
Text: Eh?!
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Hannah: Umm…you are?
Hobbyrdy: My name is of little importance…but if you were to call my name in that charming voice… / please call me “Rudy”…
Will: Heh… / Hey, Hobb. I was wondering who it was, and it’s you…
Hobbyrdy: Will!
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Hobbyrdy: Master Will…you’re awake!
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Hannah: Is he someone you know?
Will: Someone I know? Haven’t you noticed?
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Will: He’s the same as me.
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Text: The same as Will?
Hannah: Could he be…
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Text: He’s an elemental doll too!
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Will: I know him as “Hobbyrdy” though…
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Hobbyrdy: I would have preferred to reveal it in a memorable scene, rather than doing it dramatically, but that came to nothing.
Will: As I’d know what you’re thinking!
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Text: There are other elemental dolls apart from Will…?
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Irvine: Hob…byrdy? / You told me your name was Rudy…
Hobbyrdy: Ah…please forgive me, Lord Irvine. It was all down to my whim. / It’s an embarrassing story, but the meaning of the name Hobbyrdy isn’t a good one. / It’s too painful for me to be called by that name, I wanted my precious owner to call me “Rudy”…
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Irvine: If that’s the case…then Rudy is fine…
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Hannah: Umm…I’m sorry… / As you can see, my grandfather passed away, so the shop is closed at the moment.
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Irvine: I should be the one apologising!
Hannah: N-No…!
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Hobbyrdy: Well, Lord Irvine, why don’t you invite her to the mansion? She’s a doll maker, so it’d be good for her to see Lord Irvine’s collection.
Irvine: That’s great! By all means!
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Hannah: I am a doll maker, but I’m just an apprentice…
Text: I had to stop making dolls too…
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Hobbyrdy: Don’t be modest… / We know that you’re a special doll maker… // A doll maker with the power of Shamrock…
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Hannah: Shamrock…
Text: “It can’t be…you have Shamrock’s…”
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Hannah: Rudy…what is Shamrock?
Hobbyrdy: Young lady…you called me Rudy…how kind of you…
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Hobbyrdy: Shamrock is… / the doll maker who created us…
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Text: The doll maker who created Will and Rudy…
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Text: Just like I thought, he could hear the souls’ voices… // He gave Will and Rudy bodies…
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Hobbyrdy: Will… // I’ll tell you something since you’ve been sleeping all this time…
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Hobbyrdy: Ignis desires release…
Will: What?!
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Text: Ignis?
Hobbyrdy: Well then, we’ll invite you another time…
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Hannah: Of course, it’s an amazing house… // I’m nervous…
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Man: You’re Lady Ellington, aren’t you? I’ll show you the way.
Hannah: Y-Yes…
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Text: I knew I should have gotten Will to come…
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Text: It would have been best if Emily were able to go out, but with the body I made, people will know she’s a doll… // If I were a better doll maker, then maybe I’d be able to make Emily a body like Will’s…
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Text: That light again… // I’m sure it’s coming from the direction of Lady Gloria’s rose garden…
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Text: How beautiful…
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Man: Is something the matter?
Hannah: Hmm? Ah…I’m sorry…
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Text: Who was that?
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Gloria: Hannah, it’s been a long time. // I’m glad you’re doing better than I thought you would be.
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Hannah: Thank you for inviting me, Lady Gloria. I made you worry…
Text: It seems as if Lady Gloria has become more beautiful…
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Gloria: When I heard that Joseph passed away, I thought that you wouldn’t leave the house.
Hannah: Oh…
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Gloria: But you seem really happy now… // Could it be that you’ve found someone to support you?
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Hannah: Eh…? // N-No…
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Gloria: Ah! Your face is all red! That’s suspicious…tell me everything!
Hannah: No, there isn’t anyone!
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Gloria: Even though I was just getting to the good part! // Please, come in.
Gyl: Excuse me.
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Text: The person from the rose garden!
Gloria: Gyl, you came at just the right time. There’s someone I must introduce you to.
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Gyl: Is this the doll maker you spoke of before?
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Text: They’re tall… // and have a low voice…
Gyl: I’m pleased to make your acquaintance. Please call me Gyl.
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Text: Could it be that he’s…?
Gyl: Is something the matter?
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Gloria: Perhaps she mistook Gyl for a woman.
Hannah: S-Sorry…
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Text: Even next to Gloria, he’s still incomparably beautiful…
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Text: That feeling too…
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Hannah: Umm…Lord Gyl is…
Gloria: Lord…Gyl?
Gyl: Young lady…I’m not deserving of that title…
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Gyl: As you are a doll maker with an unusual power, it should be me who is respectful towards you.
Hannah: As I thought… // You’re an elemental doll too…
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Gyl: I’m one of the five elemental dolls created by Shamrock. // I’m currently serving Lady Gloria.
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Hannah: Five dolls?
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Text: Will, Rudy and Gyl… // That means there are two more dolls, doesn’t it? // Gyl is the third elemental doll. // To meet them one after another like this… // I wonder if the other two have awoken?
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Text: It would be amazing to meet them…
Gyl: Will you really be returning home alone?
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Gyl: I’d like to walk you home…
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Hannah: No…walking me to the gate is enough. // There’s somewhere I’d like to visit anyway.
Text: He’s kind…
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Hannah: I wonder if I can get along with him, like Gyl and Gloria get along with each other…
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Gyl: Is there someone you want to understand better?
Hannah: Eh?! No, it’s nothing like that!
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Will: Hey.
Hannah: Will! What are you doing here?
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Will: When we’re home, tell that emotionless doll not to interfere with what I’m doing…
Hannah: Emily…
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Gyl: Will… // I see, she’s your owner. Well then, I’ll leave her with you.
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Gyl: You wanted to get along better with him?
Hannah: Eh?
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Text: Just like I thought, they know each other.
Will: Gyl, you haven’t changed at all.
Gyl: There’s nothing wrong with me being truly happy to meet you again, is there?
Will: Who knows? That’s not for me to decide.
Gyl: I’ll warn you about one thing.
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Will: About Ignis? // I met Hobb yesterday.
Gyl: In that case, this won’t take long.
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Gyl: A doll maker with Shamrock’s power appeared. // You awakened. // Don’t forget what these coincidences may lead to.
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Will: Yeah…
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Text: Ignis…again?
Hannah: Hey… / Who’s Ignis?
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Will: It’s got nothing to do with you.
Hannah: B-But I’m your owner…
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Will: If you really want to hear it, then just order me to tell you.
Hannah: Uh…
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Will: Come on, let’s go home already.
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Gyl: Will…treating your owner like that, even for an instant…
Will: Everyone’s different…
Gyl: You shouldn’t worry either. / For a doll, there’s nothing greater than having a doll maker as their owner.
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Text: A doll maker... // As I thought, the elemental dolls see me as a doll maker…
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Will: It’s like you don’t like other people calling you a doll maker.
Hannah: It’s not like that… // It’s just that I’m only an apprentice.
Will: What do you want to do?
Hannah: Hmm?
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Will: Whether you want to make dolls // is up to you.
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Will: Don’t you want to know the reason why you have no doubts / about being forced to stop making dolls?
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Text: What I want to do?
Hannah: I…
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Will: Hey. Don’t go any further.
Hannah: What is it?
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Hannah: Will, what’s wrong?
Will: You can’t go that way.
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Hannah: Oh…but that’s… / the fastest way…
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Text: He disappeared?
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Will: Hannah?! // Damn it! We were ambushed!
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Hannah: Oh…?
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Hannah: Will…?
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Text: The fog…
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Text: Something’s strange…
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Hannah: Will…where are you?
Text: There’s no one here…
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Text: Footsteps…
Hannah: Will…is that you?
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Text: No…it’s not Will!
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Text: I’ve got to go home…
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Hannah: If I turn around this corner, the shop should be…
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Text: It’s not here…
Hannah: Where am I?
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Text: There’s so many…
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Hannah: What’s wrong, everyone?
Text: They’re different from usual…
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Hannah: Who are you?
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Ignis: I’ve been waiting for you, the doll maker’s daughter.
Text: This feeling…it can’t be…
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Text: An elemental doll?!
Hannah: Do you want something from me?
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Text: I have a really bad feeling about this. The other elemental dolls didn’t feel the same as this.
Ignis: That’s right…I do want something…
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Ignis: Right now, I’ll bring an end to that bloodline. / The cursed power of Shamrock…
Text: W-What?
Ignis: Doll maker’s daughter…you must die!
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Will: You idiot! / Don’t just stand there! You don’t want to die, do you?!
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Hannah: Will…
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Ignis: It can’t be…is that you, Will?!
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Ignis: Someone else can see me?!
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Will: First of all, put that dangerous sword away, Ignis!
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Text: He’s Ignis!
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Ignis: To think that you had awakened…
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Will: Why did you try to kill her?! // That shouldn’t be your aim! Were you ordered to do that by your owner?!
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Ignis: Owner? / I don’t have one.
Will: That’s impossible…
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Ignis: Killing that girl is my will alone. / A doll maker is the remnants of sin, the inheritor of Shamrock’s powers…
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Ignis: That destruction is my duty.
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Grandfather: Hannah, that door won’t open.
Text: Chapter 1
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Hannah: But…Grandfather…it’s here, I can hear it…
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Grandfather: You can hear it? Hear what?
Hannah: I don’t know…
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Hannah: But… // Everyone says it’s here…
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Woman: Joseph passed away?
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Hannah: I’m sorry for being late to inform you.
Woman: I see…he died during the epidemic…
There won’t be any more dolls made by him…
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Woman: Hannah, are you alright?
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Hannah: Yes…I don’t think my grandfather would want to see me upset.
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Woman: You’re strong…
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Woman: If you have any trouble, I'm always here.
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Hannah: Thank you very much.
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Box: Running away.
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Text: What will happen to the shop? Will you be taking over?
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Text: Hmm?
Text: The doll Hannah made two years ago was amazing.
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Text: Two years ago…
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Text: It seems like you sold it, I was disappointed… // Please let me know if you make another doll.
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Box 1: Several days ago, my grandfather died of an epidemic. / He was stubborn and antisocial, but he raised me all by myself after my parents died when I was 5.
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Box 2: My grandfather was a skillful doll maker. / Orders came, not only from England, but also from abroad.
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Hannah: A new doll…
Text: If I could, I’d make one. I would…
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Hannah: Grandfather…
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Text: Don’t cry… // Don’t cry… // Don’t cry…
Hannah: Everyone…
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Hannah: Thank you…
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Emily: Lady Hannah…
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Hannah: Emily, what’s wrong?
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Emily: I found this when I was sorting out Lord Joseph’s study.
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Hannah: A key?
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Emily: One of them is probably the key to that door.
Text: Stop…that door won’t open…
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Text: Grandfather…
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Text: Why wasn’t I allowed to open it?
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Text: There’s nothing here, the door won’t open, alright?
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Text: Hannah, you understand, don’t you?
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Hannah: It opened…
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Text: A cellar?
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Text: Here… // I’m here…
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Emily: Lady Hannah…
Text: Since I was a child, the light only I could see… // The voice only I could hear…
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Hannah: There was a room like this down here…
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Hannah: There’s something here…
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Emily: Lady Hannah, it’s dangerous!
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Hannah: It’s okay, Emily. I didn’t have a bad feeling when you called me.
Emily: Lady Hannah…
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Hannah: This is… // a coffin?
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Hannah: Why is this here?
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Emily: Lady Hannah?!
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Text: A doll…
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Hannah: He’s so beautiful…
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Text: Is he one of Grandfather’s dolls? No…
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Text: Could it be…?
Hannah: Emily, give me the other key…
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Hannah: There it is…
Text: A key hole in his back…
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Text: Could it be…?
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Text: He moved!
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Will: Hey.
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Will: Were you the one who woke me?
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Hannah: He spoke! // Emily, what should I do? He spoke!
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Will: Are you listening to me?
Emily: Lady Hannah, it’s dangerous!
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Will: Answer me.
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Will: Are you my owner?
Hannah: Eh?
Text: Owner?
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Will: Why are you surprised? / She’s just like us elemental dolls.
Emily: Lady Hannah, stay back.
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Hannah: Elemental dolls?
Text: What are those?
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Will: This is the first time I’ve seen a doll that can move like us.
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Will: Hey, are you listening?
Emily: Stay back, you rude man!
Text: Us?
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Will: I’m rude? You’re the one who’s rude for not answering my question!
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Emily: I wouldn’t get near someone like you, / someone so rude // and with such a rough expression on his face!
Hannah: Emily…what’s wrong?!
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Hannah: Emily!
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Text: Hey! // Hey! It’s the doll girl!
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Text: You’ll get touched by a doll! // Let’s get out of here!
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Hannah: …
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Grandfather: Hannah…this is where you were…
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Hannah: Everyone calls me “the doll girl”. They don’t want to play with the doll girl.
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Grandfather: Hannah, do you hate dolls?
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Hannah: I don’t hate them. I thought it’d be nice if I could talk to Grandfather’s dolls.
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Grandfather: In that case, I’ll make a friend for you.
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Grandfather: A doll with blue eyes, just like you.
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Hannah: Grandfather…thank you…
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Hannah: Umm… // I want to make dolls too!
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Grandfather: I’ll teach you when you’re a little older.
Hannah: Really…that’s a promise?
Grandfather: Yes…then…
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Text: This time I’ll make a friend by myself.
Hannah: I’ve done it! / My first doll…
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Hannah: My friend…
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Hannah: I’ve got to give her a name!
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Text: Who are you?
Emily: Will you stay by my side?
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No text.
Page 21:
Hannah: I’m glad you’re awake!
Emily: Lady Hannah…
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Hannah: Emily, I’m sorry…I forgot to wind you up… / Even though I do it every day…
Text: My first friend… That time, Emily said she wanted a body…
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Text: I gave her a doll’s body…
Emily: It’s okay.
--
Hannah: Wait, I’ll wind you up a little more…
Emily: Okay…
Page 22:
Emily: You!
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Will: You’re finally awake…
Text: Well, well…
Text: It’s done~
Emily: Hannah…
Hannah: Emily, Will carried you when you couldn’t move.
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Emily: Will…
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Emily: Are you going to keep that dangerous doll in the house?!
Hannah: Eh?
Will: For a defective doll, you sure have a lot to say! You can’t even move if you don’t get wound up every day…
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Text: A defective doll?
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Text: Emily is…?
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Hannah: Emily’s not defective! / Don’t say bad things about my friend!
Emily: Lady Hannah…
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Will: Your friend? // Once someone winds me up, until the person who winds me up… / my owner dies, I’ll keep moving.
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Will: In other words, until you die…
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Will: Once my owner dies, I’ll sleep once more. / I’ll become unable to move, just like that expressionless doll.
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Hannah: What on earth is Will made of?
Page 24:
Emily: It doesn’t matter about me, but I won’t forgive you for insulting Lady Hannah!
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Will: Who insulted who?!
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Emily: You insulted Lady Hannah.
Will: What?
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Emily: It was Hannah who made me.
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Will: It can’t be… / You’ve got Shamrock’s…
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Hannah: Shamrock?
Will: Nothing…
--
Text: Will?
Page 25:
Emily: That dangerous doll decided to stay in one of the spare rooms.
Hannah: Thank you, Emily.
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Emily: Even if he does have a bad attitude, there’s a limit to how rude he can be!
Hannah: He certainly is quite scary…
Emily: Lady Hannah…what’s that?
Hannah: I found it in the cellar, it looks like there’s something about elemental dolls…
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Hannah: Dolls like Will and Emily are called elemental dolls…
Text: A doll maker with special abilities made these dolls by sealing a soul inside of a doll. // Just like a living doll, these dolls move, speak and possess feelings.
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Text: Those lights were a soul?
Hannah: Emily, you were a soul, too?
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Emily: I… // never felt strongly that I wanted to be by your side. / The truth is that you have the ability to hear our voices.
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Emily: It’s thanks to that I have my own body.
Hannah: Emily…
Text: I wonder if the doll maker who created Will was able to hear the souls’ voices too…
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Text: For a change, I went out at night to get some fresh air. // That night, the lights were brighter than usual.
Hannah: It’s because Will’s here…
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Hannah: That’s…
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Text Will…
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Text: He can make that sort of expression too…
Will: I see…
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Will: Then everyone’s nearby…
--
Text: Everyone?
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Will: Ignis is…
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Will: You like spying on people, huh?
Hannah: No! I just came to get some fresh air…
Page 28:
Will: You…what happened to my key?
Hannah: Your key?!
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Hannah: I’ve got it. This is it, right?
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Will: Don’t move.
Text: Eh…
--
Hannah: Will…?
Page 29:
Will: Don’t lose it.
Hannah: Y-Yes!
Will: Carry it with you all the time.
Hannah: O-Okay!
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Will: Elemental dolls each have their own key.
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Will: If someone winds them up using that key, they become the doll’s owner.
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Hannah: Anyone?
Will: That’s right.
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Will: If the key is stolen and someone else winds me up…
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Will: They’ll become my owner.
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Will: In other words, if you don’t like me, you can get someone else to become my owner.
Hannah: I won’t do that!
Page 30:
Hannah: I’m glad I met you, Will. / If you could become my friend like Emily…
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Will: Is that an order?
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Hannah: An order?
Will: An owner can order their doll to do something. / The doll has to follow that order.
--
Hannah: What’s that?
Page 31:
Will: The price we pay for having a body is that we’re unable to disobey our owner’s orders. / It’s that kind of contract.
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Text: That’s…
Hannah: So, if another person becomes your owner, then you have to listen to what they say?
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Will: That’s right.
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Will: Well…was what you said earlier an order?
Hannah: No…
Page 32:
Hannah: It was // a request…
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Will: I refuse to do it.
Hannah: Eh?
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Will: Don’t think that I’ll get on with just anybody, like that emotionless doll. / As long as it’s not an order, I can do what I like. I don’t want you interfering either.
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Text: It’s annoying.
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Will: Anyway, you can make as many other “friends” as you want, right?
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Will: Sorry. / I shouldn’t have said that.
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Hannah: My grandfather made me stop making dolls.
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Hannah: I haven’t made any dolls since Emily.
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Hannah: Even though I was happy to have met Emily, / my grandfather seemed really upset.
Text: What’s the meaning of this? You think this is acceptable?
--
Text: Hannah, listen carefully.
Page 34:
Grandfather: You must not make any more dolls. / Never again…
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Text: He was so happy when I said I wanted to be a doll maker.
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Will: You’re getting cold. // Go inside and get some sleep soon. Humans need sleep.
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Text: Will…
Page 35:
Hannah: Good morning…
Will: Yeah…you get breakfast pretty late, don’t you?
Emily: I see the dangerous doll doesn’t even know how to greet someone properly.
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Will: Hey.
Text: See!
Hannah: If it’s the key, then I’ve got it with me.
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Will: It’s not that. This was delivered by a page boy this morning.
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Hannah: It’s an invitation from Lady Gloria.
Will: Gloria?
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Hannah: Lady Gloria is the daughter of an earl and one of my Grandfather’s regular customers. // Even though she’s a noble, she still treats me kindly…
Page 36:
Text: You told me of your grandfather’s passing, // it must have troubled you…
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Will: Well, what did Gloria say?
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Text: Someone she wants me to meet?
Hannah: Umm… / There’s someone I want you to meet, so please come to visit.
--
Hannah: What could it be?
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Emily: Hannah, you have a visitor.
Page 37:
Hannah: I’m sorry to keep you waiting…
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Hobbyrdy: Excuse me, young lady. / My master wanted to see your dolls, so we stopped by at his orders.
Text: He’s beautiful…
Hannah: Like the princes you see in fairy tales…
--
Text: But…what is this strange feeling? // I’ve felt it before…
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Hobbyrdy: This is Baron Beckford’s son, Lord Irvine.
Text: A noble!
--
Hannah: Pleased to meet you…
Hobbyrdy: Lord Irvine’s hobby is collecting rare dolls. He said that Joseph’s dolls were wonderful.
Irvine: Umm…well…
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Hobbyrdy: Lord Irvine, you’re embarrassing the young lady.
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Hobbyrdy: I told you yesterday, didn’t I?
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Bobbyrdy: This is how to greet a lady…
Text: Eh?!
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Hannah: Umm…you are?
Hobbyrdy: My name is of little importance…but if you were to call my name in that charming voice… / please call me “Rudy”…
Will: Heh… / Hey, Hobb. I was wondering who it was, and it’s you…
Hobbyrdy: Will!
Page 39:
Hobbyrdy: Master Will…you’re awake!
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Hannah: Is he someone you know?
Will: Someone I know? Haven’t you noticed?
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Will: He’s the same as me.
--
Text: The same as Will?
Hannah: Could he be…
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Text: He’s an elemental doll too!
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Will: I know him as “Hobbyrdy” though…
Page 40:
Hobbyrdy: I would have preferred to reveal it in a memorable scene, rather than doing it dramatically, but that came to nothing.
Will: As I’d know what you’re thinking!
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Text: There are other elemental dolls apart from Will…?
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Irvine: Hob…byrdy? / You told me your name was Rudy…
Hobbyrdy: Ah…please forgive me, Lord Irvine. It was all down to my whim. / It’s an embarrassing story, but the meaning of the name Hobbyrdy isn’t a good one. / It’s too painful for me to be called by that name, I wanted my precious owner to call me “Rudy”…
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Irvine: If that’s the case…then Rudy is fine…
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Hannah: Umm…I’m sorry… / As you can see, my grandfather passed away, so the shop is closed at the moment.
Page 41:
Irvine: I should be the one apologising!
Hannah: N-No…!
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Hobbyrdy: Well, Lord Irvine, why don’t you invite her to the mansion? She’s a doll maker, so it’d be good for her to see Lord Irvine’s collection.
Irvine: That’s great! By all means!
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Hannah: I am a doll maker, but I’m just an apprentice…
Text: I had to stop making dolls too…
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Hobbyrdy: Don’t be modest… / We know that you’re a special doll maker… // A doll maker with the power of Shamrock…
--
Hannah: Shamrock…
Text: “It can’t be…you have Shamrock’s…”
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Hannah: Rudy…what is Shamrock?
Hobbyrdy: Young lady…you called me Rudy…how kind of you…
Page 42:
Hobbyrdy: Shamrock is… / the doll maker who created us…
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Text: The doll maker who created Will and Rudy…
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Text: Just like I thought, he could hear the souls’ voices… // He gave Will and Rudy bodies…
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Hobbyrdy: Will… // I’ll tell you something since you’ve been sleeping all this time…
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Hobbyrdy: Ignis desires release…
Will: What?!
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Text: Ignis?
Hobbyrdy: Well then, we’ll invite you another time…
Page 43:
Hannah: Of course, it’s an amazing house… // I’m nervous…
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Man: You’re Lady Ellington, aren’t you? I’ll show you the way.
Hannah: Y-Yes…
--
Text: I knew I should have gotten Will to come…
--
Text: It would have been best if Emily were able to go out, but with the body I made, people will know she’s a doll… // If I were a better doll maker, then maybe I’d be able to make Emily a body like Will’s…
--
Text: That light again… // I’m sure it’s coming from the direction of Lady Gloria’s rose garden…
Page 44:
Text: How beautiful…
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Man: Is something the matter?
Hannah: Hmm? Ah…I’m sorry…
--
Text: Who was that?
Page 45:
Gloria: Hannah, it’s been a long time. // I’m glad you’re doing better than I thought you would be.
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Hannah: Thank you for inviting me, Lady Gloria. I made you worry…
Text: It seems as if Lady Gloria has become more beautiful…
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Gloria: When I heard that Joseph passed away, I thought that you wouldn’t leave the house.
Hannah: Oh…
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Gloria: But you seem really happy now… // Could it be that you’ve found someone to support you?
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Hannah: Eh…? // N-No…
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Gloria: Ah! Your face is all red! That’s suspicious…tell me everything!
Hannah: No, there isn’t anyone!
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Gloria: Even though I was just getting to the good part! // Please, come in.
Gyl: Excuse me.
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Text: The person from the rose garden!
Gloria: Gyl, you came at just the right time. There’s someone I must introduce you to.
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Gyl: Is this the doll maker you spoke of before?
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Text: They’re tall… // and have a low voice…
Gyl: I’m pleased to make your acquaintance. Please call me Gyl.
Page 47:
Text: Could it be that he’s…?
Gyl: Is something the matter?
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Gloria: Perhaps she mistook Gyl for a woman.
Hannah: S-Sorry…
--
Text: Even next to Gloria, he’s still incomparably beautiful…
--
Text: That feeling too…
--
Hannah: Umm…Lord Gyl is…
Gloria: Lord…Gyl?
Gyl: Young lady…I’m not deserving of that title…
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Gyl: As you are a doll maker with an unusual power, it should be me who is respectful towards you.
Hannah: As I thought… // You’re an elemental doll too…
Page 48:
Gyl: I’m one of the five elemental dolls created by Shamrock. // I’m currently serving Lady Gloria.
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Hannah: Five dolls?
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Text: Will, Rudy and Gyl… // That means there are two more dolls, doesn’t it? // Gyl is the third elemental doll. // To meet them one after another like this… // I wonder if the other two have awoken?
Page 49:
Text: It would be amazing to meet them…
Gyl: Will you really be returning home alone?
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Gyl: I’d like to walk you home…
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Hannah: No…walking me to the gate is enough. // There’s somewhere I’d like to visit anyway.
Text: He’s kind…
--
Hannah: I wonder if I can get along with him, like Gyl and Gloria get along with each other…
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Gyl: Is there someone you want to understand better?
Hannah: Eh?! No, it’s nothing like that!
--
Will: Hey.
Hannah: Will! What are you doing here?
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Will: When we’re home, tell that emotionless doll not to interfere with what I’m doing…
Hannah: Emily…
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Gyl: Will… // I see, she’s your owner. Well then, I’ll leave her with you.
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Gyl: You wanted to get along better with him?
Hannah: Eh?
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Text: Just like I thought, they know each other.
Will: Gyl, you haven’t changed at all.
Gyl: There’s nothing wrong with me being truly happy to meet you again, is there?
Will: Who knows? That’s not for me to decide.
Gyl: I’ll warn you about one thing.
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Will: About Ignis? // I met Hobb yesterday.
Gyl: In that case, this won’t take long.
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Gyl: A doll maker with Shamrock’s power appeared. // You awakened. // Don’t forget what these coincidences may lead to.
Page 52:
Will: Yeah…
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Text: Ignis…again?
Hannah: Hey… / Who’s Ignis?
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Will: It’s got nothing to do with you.
Hannah: B-But I’m your owner…
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Will: If you really want to hear it, then just order me to tell you.
Hannah: Uh…
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Will: Come on, let’s go home already.
Page 53:
Gyl: Will…treating your owner like that, even for an instant…
Will: Everyone’s different…
Gyl: You shouldn’t worry either. / For a doll, there’s nothing greater than having a doll maker as their owner.
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Text: A doll maker... // As I thought, the elemental dolls see me as a doll maker…
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Will: It’s like you don’t like other people calling you a doll maker.
Hannah: It’s not like that… // It’s just that I’m only an apprentice.
Will: What do you want to do?
Hannah: Hmm?
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Will: Whether you want to make dolls // is up to you.
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Will: Don’t you want to know the reason why you have no doubts / about being forced to stop making dolls?
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Text: What I want to do?
Hannah: I…
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Will: Hey. Don’t go any further.
Hannah: What is it?
--
Hannah: Will, what’s wrong?
Will: You can’t go that way.
Page 56:
Hannah: Oh…but that’s… / the fastest way…
--
Text: He disappeared?
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Will: Hannah?! // Damn it! We were ambushed!
Page 57:
Hannah: Oh…?
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Hannah: Will…?
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Text: The fog…
--
Text: Something’s strange…
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Hannah: Will…where are you?
Text: There’s no one here…
--
Text: Footsteps…
Hannah: Will…is that you?
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Text: No…it’s not Will!
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Text: I’ve got to go home…
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Hannah: If I turn around this corner, the shop should be…
--
Text: It’s not here…
Hannah: Where am I?
--
Text: There’s so many…
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Hannah: What’s wrong, everyone?
Text: They’re different from usual…
Page 59:
Hannah: Who are you?
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Ignis: I’ve been waiting for you, the doll maker’s daughter.
Text: This feeling…it can’t be…
Page 60:
Text: An elemental doll?!
Hannah: Do you want something from me?
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Text: I have a really bad feeling about this. The other elemental dolls didn’t feel the same as this.
Ignis: That’s right…I do want something…
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Ignis: Right now, I’ll bring an end to that bloodline. / The cursed power of Shamrock…
Text: W-What?
Ignis: Doll maker’s daughter…you must die!
Pg 61:
Will: You idiot! / Don’t just stand there! You don’t want to die, do you?!
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Hannah: Will…
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Ignis: It can’t be…is that you, Will?!
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Ignis: Someone else can see me?!
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Will: First of all, put that dangerous sword away, Ignis!
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Text: He’s Ignis!
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Ignis: To think that you had awakened…
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Will: Why did you try to kill her?! // That shouldn’t be your aim! Were you ordered to do that by your owner?!
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Ignis: Owner? / I don’t have one.
Will: That’s impossible…
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Ignis: Killing that girl is my will alone. / A doll maker is the remnants of sin, the inheritor of Shamrock’s powers…
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Ignis: That destruction is my duty.
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Page 2:
Grandfather: Hannah, that door won’t open.
Text: Chapter 1
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Hannah: But…Grandfather…it’s here, I can hear it…
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Grandfather: You can hear it? Hear what?
Hannah: I don’t know…
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Hannah: But… // Everyone says it’s here…
Page 3:
Woman: Joseph passed away?
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Hannah: I’m sorry for being late to inform you.
Woman: I see…he died during the epidemic…
There won’t be any more dolls made by him…
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Woman: Hannah, are you alright?
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Hannah: Yes…I don’t think my grandfather would want to see me upset.
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Woman: You’re strong…
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Woman: If you have any trouble, I’m always here.
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Hannah: Thank you very much.
Page 4:
Box: Running away.
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Text: What will happen to the shop? Will you be taking over?
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Text: Hmm?
Text: The doll Hannah made two years ago was amazing.
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Text: Two years ago…
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Text: It seems like you sold it, I was disappointed… // Please let me know if you make another doll.
Page 5:
Box 1: Several days ago, my grandfather died of an epidemic illness (delete). / He was stubborn and antisocial, but he raised me all by myself after my parents died when I was 5 years old (delete).
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Box 2: My grandfather was a skillful doll maker. / Orders came, not only from England, but also from abroad.
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Hannah: A new doll…
Text: If I could, I’d want to (delete) make one. I would…
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Hannah: Grandfather…
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Text: Don’t cry… // Don’t cry… // Don’t cry…
Hannah: Everyone…
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Hannah: Thank you…
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Emily: Lady Hannah…
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Hannah: Emily, what’s wrong?
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Emily: I found this when I was sorting out Lord Joseph’s study.
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Hannah: A key?
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Emily: One of them is probably the key to that door.
Text: Stop…that door won’t open…
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Text: Grandfather…
Page 8:
Text: Why wasn’t I allowed to open it?
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Text: There’s nothing here, the door won’t open, alright?
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Text: Hannah, you understand, don’t you?
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Hannah: It opened…
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Text: A cellar?
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Text: Here… // I’m here…
Page 9:
Emily: Lady Hannah…
Text: Since I was a child, the light only I could see… // The voice only I could hear…
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Hannah: There was a room like this down here…
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Hannah: There’s something here…
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Emily: Lady Hannah, it’s dangerous!
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Hannah: It’s okay, Emily. I didn’t feel anything bad when you called me. (p/r note: Recheck this line.)
Emily: Lady Hannah…
Page 10:
Hannah: This is… // a coffin?
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Hannah: Why is this here?
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Emily: Lady Hannah?!
Page 11:
Text: A doll…
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Hannah: He’s so beautiful…
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Text: Is he one of Grandfather’s dolls? No…
Page 12:
Text: Could it be…?
Hannah: Emily, give me the other key…
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Hannah: There it is…
Text: A key hole in his back…
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Text: Could it be…?
Page 13:
Text: He moved!
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Will: Hey.
Page 14:
Will: Were you the one who woke me?
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Hannah: He spoke! // Emily, what should I do? He spoke!
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Will: Are you listening to me?
Emily: Lady Hannah, it’s dangerous!
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Will: Answer me.
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Will: Are you my owner?
Hannah: Eh?
Text: Owner?
Page 15:
Will: Why are you surprised? / She’s just like us elemental dolls.
Emily: Lady Hannah, stay back.
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Hannah: Elemental dolls?
Text: What are those?
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Will: This is the first time I’ve seen a doll that can move like us.
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Will: Hey, are you listening?
Emily: Stay back, you rude man!
Text: Us?
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Will: I’m rude? You’re the one who’s rude for not answering my question!
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I wouldn’t get near someone like you, / someone so rude // and with such a rough expression on her face!
Emily…what’s wrong?!
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Emily!
Page 17:
Text: Hey! // Hey! It’s the doll girl!
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Text: You’ll get touched by a doll! // Let’s get out of here!
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Hannah: …
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Grandfather: Hannah…this is where you were…
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Hannah: Everyone calls me “the doll girl”. They don’t want to play with the doll girl.
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Grandfather: Hannah, do you hate dolls?
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Hannah: I don’t hate them. I thought it’d be nice if I could talk to Grandfather’s dolls.
Page 18:
Grandfather: In that case, I’ll make a friend for you.
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Grandfather: A doll with blue eyes, just like you.
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Hannah: Grandfather…thank you…
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Hannah: Umm… // I want to make dolls, too!
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Grandfather: I’ll teach you when you’re a little older.
Hannah: Really…that’s a promise?
Grandfather: Yes…then…
Page 19:
Text: This time I’ll make a friend by myself.
Hannah: I’ve done it! / My first doll…
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Hannah: My friend…
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Hannah: I’ve got to give her a name!
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Text: Who are you?
Emily: Will you stay by my side?
Page 20:
No text.
Page 21:
Hannah: I’m glad you’re awake!
Emily: Lady Hannah…
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Hannah: Emily, I’m sorry…I forgot to wind you up… / Even though I do it every day…
Text: My first friend… That time, Emily said she wanted a body…
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Text: I gave her a doll’s body…
Emily: It’s okay.
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Hannah: Wait, I’ll wind you up a little more…
Emily: Okay…
Page 22:
Emily: You!
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Will: You’re finally awake…
Text: Well, well…
Text: It’s done~
Emily: Hannah…
Hannah: Emily, Will carried you when you couldn’t move.
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Emily: Will…
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Emily: Are you going to keep that dangerous doll in the house?!
Hannah: Eh?
Will: For a defective doll, you sure have a lot to say! You can’t even move if you don’t get wound up every day…
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Text: A defective doll?
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Text: Emily is…?
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Hannah: Emily’s not defective! / Don’t say bad things about my friend!
Emily: Lady Hannah…
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Will: Your friend? // Once someone winds me up, until the person who winds me up… / my owner dies, I’ll keep moving.
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Will: In other words, until you die…
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Will: Once my owner dies, I’ll sleep once more. / I’ll become unable to move, just like that expressionless doll.
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Hannah: What on earth is Will made of?
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Emily: It doesn’t matter about me, but I won’t forgive you for insulting Lady Hannah!
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Will: Who insulted who?!
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Emily: You insulted Lady Hannah.
Will: What?
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Emily: It was Hannah who made me.
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Will: It can’t be… / You’ve got Shamrock’s…
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Hannah: Shamrock?
Will: Nothing…
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Text: Will?
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Emily: That dangerous doll decided to stay in one of the spare rooms.
Hannah: Thank you, Emily.
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Emily: Even if he does have a bad attitude, there’s a limit to how rude he can be!
Hannah: He certainly is quite scary…
Emily: Lady Hannah…what’s that?
Hannah: I found it in the cellar, it looks like there’s something about elemental dolls…
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Hannah: Dolls like Will and Emily are called elemental dolls…
Text: A doll maker with special abilities made these dolls by sealing a soul inside of a doll. // Just like a living doll, these dolls move, speak, and possess feelings.
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Text: Those lights were a soul?
Hannah: Emily, you were a soul, too?
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Emily: I… // never felt strongly that I wanted to be by your side. / The truth is that you have the ability to hear our voices.
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Emily: It’s thanks to that I have my own body.
Hannah: Emily…
Text: I wonder if the doll maker who created Will was able to hear the souls’ voices, too…
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Text: For a change, I went out at night to get some fresh air. // That night, the lights were brighter than usual.
Hannah: It’s because Will’s here…
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Hannah: That’s…
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Text Will…
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Text: He can make that sort of expression, too…
Will: I see…
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Will: Then everyone’s nearby…
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Text: Everyone?
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Will: Ignis is…
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Will: You like spying on people, huh?
Hannah: No! I just came to get some fresh air…
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Will: You…what happened to my key?
Hannah: Your key?!
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Hannah: I’ve got it. This is it, right?
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Will: Don’t move.
Text: Eh…
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Hannah: Will…?
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Will: Don’t lose it.
Hannah: Y-Yes!
Will: Carry it with you all the time.
Hannah: O-Okay!
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Will: Elemental dolls each have their own key.
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Will: If someone winds them up using that key, they become the doll’s owner.
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Hannah: Anyone?
Will: That’s right.
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Will: If the key is stolen and someone else winds me up…
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Will: They’ll become my owner.
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Will: In other words, if you don’t like me, you can get someone else to become my owner.
Hannah: I won’t do that!
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Hannah: I’m glad I met you, Will. / If you could become my friend like Emily…
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Will: Is that an order?
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Hannah: An order?
Will: An owner can order their doll to do something. / The doll has to follow that order.
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Hannah: What’s that?
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Will: The price we pay for having a body is that we’re unable to disobey our owner’s orders. / It’s that kind of contract.
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Text: That’s…
Hannah: So, if another person becomes your owner, then you have to listen to what they say?
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Will: That’s right.
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Will: Well…was what you said earlier an order?
Hannah: No…
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Hannah: It was // a request…
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Will: I refuse to do it.
Hannah: Eh?
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Will: Don’t think that I’ll get on with just anybody, like that emotionless doll. / As long as it’s not an order, I can do what I like. I don’t want you interfering, either.
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Text: It’s annoying.
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Will: Anyway, you can make as many other “friends” as you want, right?
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Will: Sorry. / I shouldn’t have said that.
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Hannah: My grandfather made me stop making dolls.
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Hannah: I haven’t made any dolls since making (delete) Emily.
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Hannah: Even though I was happy to have met Emily, / my grandfather seemed really upset.
Text: What’s the meaning of this? You think this is acceptable?
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Text: Hannah, listen carefully.
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Grandfather: You must not make any more dolls. / Never again…
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Text: He was so happy when I said I wanted to be a doll maker.
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Will: You’re getting cold. // Go inside and get some sleep soon. Humans need sleep.
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Text: Will…
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Hannah: Good morning…
Will: Yeah…you get breakfast pretty late, don’t you?
Emily: I see the dangerous doll doesn’t even know how to greet someone properly.
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Will: Hey.
Text: See!
Hannah: If it’s the key, then I’ve got it with me.
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Will: It’s not that. This was delivered by a page boy this morning.
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Hannah: It’s an invitation from Lady Gloria.
Will: Gloria?
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Hannah: Lady Gloria is the daughter of an earl and one of my Grandfather’s regular customers. // Even though she’s a noble, she still treats me kindly…
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Text: You told me of your grandfather’s passing, // it must have troubled you…
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Will: Well, what did Gloria say?
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Text: Someone she wants me to meet?
Hannah: Umm… / There’s someone I want you to meet, so please come to visit.
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Hannah: What could it be?
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Emily: Hannah, you have a visitor.
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Hannah: I’m sorry to keep you waiting…
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Bobbyrdy: Excuse me, young lady. / My master wanted to see your dolls, so we stopped by at his orders.
Text: He’s beautiful…
Hannah: Like the princes you see in fairy tales…
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Text: But…what is this strange feeling? // I’ve felt it before…
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Bobbyrdy: This is Baron Beckford’s son, Lord Irvine.
Text: A noble!
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Hannah: Pleased to meet you…
Bobbyrdy: Lord Irvine’s hobby is collecting rare dolls. He said that Joseph’s dolls were wonderful.
Irvine: Umm…well…
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Bobbyrdy: Lord Irvine, you’re embarrassing the young lady.
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Bobbyrdy: I told you yesterday, didn’t I?
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Bobbyrdy: This is how to greet a lady…
Text: Eh?!
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Hannah: Umm…you are?
Bobbyrdy: My name is of little importance…but if you were to call my name in that charming voice… / please call me “Rudy”…
Will: Heh… / Hey, Bob. I was wondering who it was, and it’s you…
Bobbyrdy: Will!
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Bobbyrdy: Master Will…you’re awake!
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Hannah: Is he someone you know?
Will: Someone I know? Haven’t you noticed?
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Will: He’s the same as me.
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Text: The same as Will?
Hannah: Could he be…
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Text: He’s an elemental doll too!
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Will: I know him as “Bobbyrdy” though…
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Bobbyrdy: I would have preferred to reveal it in a memorable scene, rather than doing it dramatically, but that came to nothing.
Will: As I’d know what you’re thinking!
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Text: There are other elemental dolls apart from Will…?
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Irvine: Bob…byrdy? / You told me your name was Rudy…
Bobbyrdy: Ah…please forgive me, Lord Irvine. It was all down to my whim. / It’s an embarrassing story, but the meaning of the name Bobbyrdy isn’t a good one. / It’s too painful for me to be called by that name, I wanted my precious owner to call me “Rudy”…
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Irvine: If that’s the case…then Rudy is fine…
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Hannah: Umm…I’m sorry… / As you can see, my grandfather passed away, so the shop is closed at the moment.
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Irvine: I should be the one apologising!
Hannah: N-No…!
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Bobbyrdy: Well, Lord Irvine, why don’t you invite her to the mansion? She’s a doll maker, so it’d be good for her to see Lord Irvine’s collection.
Irvine: That’s great! By all means!
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Hannah: I am a doll maker, but I’m just an apprentice…
Text: I had to stop making dolls, too…
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Bobbyrdy: Don’t be modest… / We know that you’re a special doll maker… // A doll maker with the power of Shamrock…
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Hannah: Shamrock…
Text: “It can’t be…you have Shamrock’s…”
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Hannah: Rudy…what is Shamrock?
Bobbyrdy: Young lady…you called me Rudy…how kind of you…
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Bobbyrdy: Shamrock is… / the doll maker who created us…
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Text: The doll maker who created Will and Rudy…
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Text: Just like I thought, he could hear the souls’ voices… // He gave Will and Rudy bodies…
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Bobbyrdy: Will… // I’ll tell you something since you’ve been sleeping all this time…
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Bobbyrdy: Ignis desires release…
Will: What?!
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Text: Ignis?
Bobbyrdy: Well then, we’ll invite you another time…
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Hannah: Of course, it’s an amazing house… // I’m nervous…
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Man: You’re Lady Ellington, aren’t you? I’ll show you the way.
Hannah: Y-Yes…
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Text: I knew I should have gotten Will to come…
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Text: It would have been best if Emily were able to go out, but with the body I made, people will know she’s a doll… // If I were a better doll maker, then maybe I’d be able to make Emily a body like Will’s…
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Text: That light again… // I’m sure it’s coming from the direction of Lady Gloria’s rose garden…
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Text: How beautiful…
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Man: Is something the matter?
Hannah: Hmm? Ah…I’m sorry…
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Text: Who was that?
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Gloria: Hannah, it’s been a long time. // I’m glad you’re doing better than I thought you would be.
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Hannah: Thank you for inviting me, Lady Gloria. I made you worry…
Text: It seems as if Lady Gloria has become more beautiful…
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Gloria: When I heard that Joseph passed away, I thought that you wouldn’t leave the house.
Hannah: Oh…
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Gloria: But you seem really happy now… // Could it be that you’ve found someone to support you?
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Hannah: Eh…? // N-No…
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Gloria: Ah! Your face is all red! That’s suspicious…tell me everything!
Hannah: No, there isn’t anyone!
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Gloria: Even though I was just getting to the good part! // Please, come in.
Gyl: Excuse me.
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Text: The person from the rose garden!
Gloria: Gyl, you came at just the right time. There’s someone I must introduce you to.
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Gyl: Is this the doll maker you spoke of before?
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Text: They’re tall… // and have a low voice…
Gyl: I’m pleased to make your acquaintance. Please call me Gyl.
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Text: Could it be that he’s…?
Gyl: Is something the matter?
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Gloria: Perhaps she mistook Gyl for a woman.
Hannah: S-Sorry…
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Text: Even next to Gloria, he’s still incomparably beautiful…
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Text: That feeling, too…
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Hannah: Umm…Lord Gyl is…
Gloria: Lord…Gyl?
Gyl: Young lady…I’m not deserving of that title…
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Gyl: As you are a doll maker with an unusual power, it should be I who is respectful towards you.
Hannah: As I thought… // You’re an elemental doll, too…
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Gyl: I’m one of the five elemental dolls created by Shamrock. // I’m currently serving Lady Gloria.
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Hannah: Five dolls?
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Text: Will, Rudy and Gyl… // That means there are two more dolls, doesn’t it? // Gyl is the third elemental doll. // To meet them one after another like this… // I wonder if the other two have awoken?
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Text: It would be amazing to meet them…
Gyl: Will you really be returning home alone?
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Gyl: I’d like to walk you home…
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Hannah: No…walking me to the gate is enough. // There’s somewhere I’d like to visit anyway.
Text: He’s kind…
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Hannah: I wonder if I can get along with him, like Gyl and Gloria get along with each other…
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Gyl: Is there someone you want to understand better?
Hannah: Eh?! No, it’s nothing like that!
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Will: Hey.
Hannah: Will! What are you doing here?
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Will: When we’re home, tell that emotionless doll not to interfere with what I’m doing…
Hannah: Emily…
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Gyl: Will… // I see, she’s your owner. Well then, I’ll leave her with you.
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Gyl: You wanted to get along better with him?
Hannah: Eh?
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Text: Just like I thought, they know each other.
Will: Gyl, you haven’t changed at all.
Gyl: There’s nothing wrong with me being truly happy to meet you again, is there?
Will: Who knows? That’s not for me to decide.
Gyl: I’ll warn you about one thing.
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Will: About Ignis? // I met Bob yesterday.
Gyl: In that case, this won’t take long.
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Gyl: A doll maker with Shamrock’s power appeared. // You awakened. // Don’t forget what these coincidences may lead to.
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Will: Yeah…
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Text: Ignis…again?
Hannah: Hey… / Who’s Ignis?
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Will: It’s got nothing to do with you.
Hannah: B-But I’m your owner…
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Will: If you really want to hear it, then just order me to tell you.
Hannah: Uh…
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Will: Come on, let’s go home already.
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Gyl: Will…treating your owner like that, even for an instant…
Will: Everyone’s different…
Gyl: You shouldn’t worry, either. / For a doll, there’s nothing greater than having a doll maker as their owner.
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Text: A doll maker... // As I thought, the elemental dolls see me as a doll maker…
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Will: It’s like you don’t like other people calling you a doll maker.
Hannah: It’s not like that… // It’s just that I’m only an apprentice.
Will: What do you want to do?
Hannah: Hmm?
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Will: Whether you want to make dolls or not (delete) // is up to you.
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Will: Don’t you want to know the reason why you have no doubts / about being forced to stop making dolls?
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Text: What I want to do?
Hannah: I…
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Will: Hey. Don’t go any further.
Hannah: What is it?
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Hannah: Will, what’s wrong?
Will: You can’t go that way.
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Hannah: Oh…but that’s… / the fastest way…
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Text: He disappeared?
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Will: Hannah?! // Damn it! We were ambushed!
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Hannah: Oh…?
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Hannah: Will…?
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Text: The fog…
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Text: Something’s strange…
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Hannah: Will…where are you?
Text: There’s no one here…
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Text: Footsteps…
Hannah: Will…is that you?
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Text: No…it’s not Will!
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Text: I’ve got to go home…
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Hannah: If I turn around this corner, the shop should be…
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Text: It’s not here…
Hannah: Where am I?
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Text: There’s so many…
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Hannah: What’s wrong, everyone?
Text: They’re different from usual…
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Hannah: Who are you?
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Ignis: I’ve been waiting for you, the doll maker’s daughter.
Text: This feeling…it can’t be…
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Text: An elemental doll?!
Hannah: Do you want something from me?
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Text: I have a really bad feeling about this. The other elemental dolls didn’t feel the same as this.
Ignis: That’s right…I do want something…
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Ignis: Right now, I’ll bring an end to that bloodline. / The cursed power of Shamrock…
Text: W-What?
Ignis: Doll maker’s daughter…you must die!
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Will: You idiot! / Don’t just stand there! You don’t want to die, do you?!
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Hannah: Will…
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Ignis: It can’t be…is that you, Will?!
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Ignis: Someone else can see me?!
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Will: First of all, put that dangerous sword away, Ignis!
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Text: He’s Ignis!
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Ignis: To think that you had awakened…
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Will: Why did you try to kill her?! // That shouldn’t be your aim! Were you ordered to do that by your owner?!
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Ignis: Owner? / I don’t have one.
Will: That’s impossible…
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Ignis: Killing that girl is my will alone. / A doll maker is the remnants of sin, the inheritor of Shamrock’s powers…
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Ignis: That destruction is my duty.
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