Negaigoto 300000 km/s Oneshot : Negaigoto 300000 km/s Oneshot

awsome!! thx alot

I suggest changing a word, deleting another, and adding a comma. Again, great job!

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For imangascans.

1.

Text 1: A heart-warming story of pure love, by Megumi Kouji, mangaka of “Bloody Monday”!

Text 2: We wished upon a star as children…

2.

Text: The starry sky will always bind us together…

3.

Taichi: Dad… // Is that all the garbage?

Dad: Yeah…thanks.

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Taichi: Ah… // What’s up? I was just about to go over to yours…

Meguru: Hey… / Taichi…

4.

Taichi: Tomorrow…that’s the day you leave for Tokyo… / Are you ready?

Meguru: Yes. / I already sent my things ahead.

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Taichi: Tomorrow you’ll become a city girl!

Meguru: [aside: Hahaha…] What are you talking about?

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Meguru: Well…the next time we meet… // being there will have made me more worldly!

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Taichi: I…

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Taichi: After all that... // I won’t be seeing you off tomorrow…

5.

Meguru: I see… // You’re helping out with the shop, right? / It can’t be helped.

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Taichi: Sorry… / Grandma’s better, but… / Mom's still busy helping her out… // So…

Meguru: It’s okay! / But what about your never coming to see me before?!

Taichi: Ah… / Well…

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Meguru: You’re so cruel… / and cold-hearted!

Taichi: Hey…you…

Meguru: Taichi, you idiot!

Taichi: Wha…?

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Taichi: What?!

Meguru: What is it?!

6.

Taichi: Anyway! / You say that, but you’re pretty cruel, too!

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Taichi: You didn’t even come to watch (delete) any of my games!

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Meguru: Uh… // Well…

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Meguru: I didn’t want to go!

Taichi: What do you mean?!

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Taichi: We’ve known each other a long time…

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Taichi: It wouldn’t have hurt for you cheer me on in one or two games during the final summer!

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Meguru: But… / You were the one who said it…

Taichi: Huh?

7.

Meguru: Any game you go to, I’ll lose because of the way you cheer! // That’s why I didn’t want to go!

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Taichi: Eh...? / I said that?

Meguru: You did! / It was the summer of our 3rd year in elementary school, on the way home from that pro baseball game we watched!

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Taichi: I said that?

Meguru: What? I was worried about it, so I decided not to go!

In panel: Let it go, it’s been long enough…

Taichi: Ah… / Sorry…

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Taichi: What? / That was the reason…? // If you’d come, things might have gone differently…

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Meguru: Hmm?

Taichi: Uh…! // Well…!

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Taichi: You… // Uh…

8.

Taichi: Well… / If the cruel girl who never came to cheer me on once in 9 years turned up… // God might have been surprised and a miracle could have happened!

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Meguru: Haha…what are you talking about? / Asking God?

Taichi: Shut up!

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Meguru: But, I definitely couldn’t / go to watch…

Box 1: I couldn’t keep looking

Box 2: at that expression on his face…

9.

Taichi: Well… // At any rate… // This is the end of / my baseball career!

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Meguru: Are you serious?

Taichi: I’m quitting. / I said so, didn’t I? // Things are busy at home, so I don’t have the time to join a local team…

10.

Taichi: Meguru / I… // was no good…

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Taichi: Sorry. // I couldn’t keep my promise…

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Text 1: Mr Shooting Star! I wanna be a baseball player when I’m older!

Text 2: I want to be an archaeologist and live all over the world!

Text 3: Meguru-chan…an archae…?

Text 4: What’s that?

Text 5: We’ll make our dreams come true together!

11.

Text: Yes….the promise…

Meguru: You remembered?

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Taichi: So did you…

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Taichi: Ah… / Thinking up such huge dreams…

Meguru: Taichi…

Taichi: Children are scary…

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Taichi: Meguru… // Hey… // My share… // Sorry… // It’s nothing!

12.

Taichi: Meguru, I’m sorry…

Meguru: Stop. / I don’t want to hear it.

Taichi: I feel bad for putting a downer on this day…

Meguru: That’s right. / Taichi, you idiot.

Taichi: Hey, Meguru…

Meguru: Hmm?

Taichi: I think Dad’s work is unexpectedly… / interesting… / Even though it’s tough…

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Taichi: Then… // When the shop isn’t so busy, I’ll be helping out as a youth baseball coach…

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Taichi: Hey, Meguru…you remember, right? / The team I joined… // This time I’ll be teaching there… / I’m pretty excited about it…

13.

Taichi: Ah… // Umm… / I’ve got something / to give you…

14.

Meguru: I’ll… / try my best in Tokyo… // My dream will come true…

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Meguru: You try your best here… // Make your new dream / come true.

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Meguru: Promise!

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Taichi: Eh…?

15.

Taichi: Ah! // Hey…wait! / Hey!

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Taichi: Meguru!

Meguru: Taichi!

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Meguru: Goodbye!

16-17.

[no text.]

18.

Man: Excuse me. / There’s a delivery for you.

Meguru: Coming!

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Meguru: Hmm? / There’s one more than there should be…

Man: Ah…this one is from… / Hmm…Tsukamoto Taichi-san. / Thanks.

19.

Meguru: The comet… / from that time?!

Note: Good luck.

20.

Meguru: Leave it to me.

21.

Meguru: I’ll make it come true // before the next comet appears!

Text: Even if we’re far apart, we’re looking at the same sky…

Meguru: When I go home, what kind of expression should I have when I meet him?!

Thanks for proofreading this, erik!