Mahou Sensei Negima! 324

I started this about five or six hours ago... About halfway through I saw that someone had already translated it, but I figured I'd keep going and see if I could get input on my work, and I thought I might present things slightly differently.

I'm gonna go read the other one and compare it to mine now.

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Yue: Ugh... / Wh... where am I? / Makie-san!? / I see, we were fighting that fake Fate... / I can't move my body.. This is a rather powerful electricity based paralysis spell. / But it's alright, this in accordance with the sixteenth possible situation I projected earlier./ If it wasn't for this delayed spell that I'd implanted in my body earlier I might not have been able to move for three days./ Kaihou Mahikaiju!!(Release; Paralysis Magic Dispel)/ haah, haah, haah (breathing noises)/ I'll dispel yours too, Makie-san..!

Side: What's happened to Makie and Yue, who fought with the Averuncus of wind?

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Yue: Dispel!

Right Side: Sorry for the wait! Is there some hidden plan for a movie version? The "Negima!" serialization resumes!

Chapter title: Period 324, The secret revealed!

Makie: Huh?/ Yue-cha~n? What a bleak looking heaven this is...

Yue: We're not dead./As I thought, it seems they are not trying to kill us./Natsumi-san and Nodoka aren't here.../Just what on earth.../Ah!

Makie: Eh?

Yue: This is!

Makie: Ah! That beat up cloth is Kaede-chin's!

Yue: The "Tengoku no Kakuremono"!

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Yue: I'm fairly certain Natsumi-san was supposed to be in here...

Makie: Ehh? Th, then what happened? What happened to them?

Yue: !?

Makie: What's that sound?

Yue: That's the sound of magical combat!/It sounds like a series of consecutive lightning attacks are tearing up the place.../One of the fighters must be Negi-san!

Makie: Eh!? aside: How do you know that.../ But, wasn't in any condition to fight... aside: If it's lightning, then maybe that other Fate from before...

Yue: No, there's ... no mistaking it Aside: I'm not sure why though / Let's go to Negi-san!

Makie: Ah, wait, Yue-chan!/..../

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Makie: Asakura!?

Yue: Asakura-san, hang in there!

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Makie: Wow... I don't get it but she seems skilled.../She did this for me too...

Yue: Foa Zo Cratica Socratica

Makie: You've really become a real mage, Yue-chan

Yue: (can't read it because the kanji is too fricken small, seems to be a chant)

Makie: You really love Negi-kun a lot, don't you Yue-chan

Yue: Kaiju-bih! / Owwww! My dongue, my dongue!

Makie: Kyaaa!? S-s-sorry, are you okay!?

Yue: Ah, I can heal thith with mathic / (too small)

Makie: Oooh, that's a magic user for you/Aside: How convenient

Yue: What are you talking about, you're mistak-ke-ke-ke-confused!
TN note:(Here Chiga-ga-ga-ga leads into Gokai both sound and meaning wise, and I tried to keep that dynamic in the text)

Makie: Hah, you don't have to hide it, Yue-chan, I can tell just from looking at your face

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Makie: You lost your memories over here, and only your feelings for Negi-kun let you remember them/And because of your earnest feelings for Negi-kun(Nagi-san), you worked yourself to the bone

Yue: AH..

Makie: And now everything you do shows what an unabashedly great mage you are

Yue: Er, no, that's..

Makie: I think, because you wanted to be like Negi-kun, you did your very best

Yue: W-w-w-why are you able to completely analyze someone else's history so easily!?

Makie: ..I thought it was amazing/ That you care about him in such a straightforward way../I'm a little jealous../ and uneasy..

Yue: Eh?

Makie: Oh, that's right, I like Negi-kun too/ I confessed to him recently

Yue: Eh/Huh!?

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Makie: Oh, right, Yue-chan doesn't remember anything about our class in year 3/ First off, Iincho loves Negi a lot!

Yue: Ah/I, I certainly seem to remember something like that

Makie: Yeah /Aside: because she's a shotacon/ Everyone already know that Honya-chan loves Negi-kun

Yue: Huh!?

Makie: Anya-chan pretends they're just childhood friends, so she's pretty dangerous/ I don't really understand Asuna, but I'm a hundred percent sure she likes him/Ku Fei and Chachamaru-san are also fairly suspicious recently/Somehow or another Chisame-san seems like the most dangerous one/And finally there's also Eva-chan who certainly seems involved one way or another/ Well, there's a lot more than that, I think, but...

Yue: W-w-w-wha/I... I see...th, there's quite a few.../p, people who also like Negi-san... these...

Makie: Your rivals in love!

Yue: Yes, ri../Rivals!?

Makie: I also/ don't want to lose, Yue-chan!

Yue: Huh!?

Asakura: Dear me... two girls talking about love matters at a time like this

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Asakura: Of course, I suppose that to girls that's also a very important issue, but/If we don't take care of things right now then this all for nothing.

Makie: Asakura! Aside: You're revived

Yue: I-I- I am quite aware of th-th-th-/C-c-come on! Let's go to Negi-san!

Asakura: Yeah, yeah/But even still/Maybe Yuetchi should seriously consider confessing too

Yue: Ah, th-/th-th-th-th-

Makie: Oh, will you? I'll help you out!

Yue: What!?

Asakura: Negi-kun has become a bit more of a man on this trip, too/If he can't even handle this hellish amount of suitors then there's no way he can save the world, heh heh

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Kaede: pant, pant/Kotarou/Kotarou!/He's still breathing/As I suspected, It seems they really won't kill us-de gozaru/Just make it so that killing us would be easy-de gozaru/Negi-bouzu.. your opponent is Fate-de gozaru?Dear me, how intense.../To think that he could fight someone so powerful to a standstill..!
TN:(I'm going with the flow on this de gozaru business)

Makie: Kaede-chiiin!

Asakura: Kaedeee!

Kaede: So, they're safe -de gozaru

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Konoemon: "There's something hidden away in this academy" ..you say?

Evangeline: That's right. Talk.

Konoemon: Urgh..

Albireo: Headmaster Konoe,/The situation won't change... it should be alright for us to tell her, shouldn't it?

Konoemon: Ack..

Eishun: But, Al!

Albireo: It's okay.. she's no longer the queen of darkness she used to be./ Thanks to Negi-kun and friends, she's become a lot more tame. As she is now...

Eva: Tch

Albireo: She'd like make friends with her classmates, and is a very disobedient and impudent middle school student.

Eva: That's more than enough!

Konoemon Aside: That was rather longwinded

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Al: Incidentally, Kitty.. You too were at some point just an ordinary little girl.

Eva: Hm? Why are you bringing that up?/I'm fairly certain that you're aware that it's dangerous to talk about my past.

Konoemon: No, wait.. I would hear this. What are you trying to say?

Eishun: Al..?

Al: The person who made you... as you are now.../ What do you know about them?

Evangeline: Who cares? He was probably some fool who thought to learn the secrets of immortality/ I already killed him / I don't even care anymore/ Aside: This is something that happened six hundred years ago

Al: ...And if that person/ Had never actually died?

Evangeline: Huh..?

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Al: And furthermore, that person still lives to this day/ and is right over there...What then?

Eva: Wh..at?

Kaede: He's winning...

Makie: Huh!?

Kaede: It looks even, but... Negi-bouzu is winning-de gozaru!

Makie: Huh

Yue: Th..

Makie: Really!?

Yue: Even against Fate?

Asakura: Seriously!?

Kaede: Seriously-de gozaru

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big SFX: "Crash!"

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TN:(I can't make sense of all the sound effects..., but the one in the bottom right with Fate is "cough"

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Negi: Hahh!!!

Fate: After all, I am a doll... No matter how many times it happens, the conclusion is always the same, huh?/Ten years ago, twenty years ago...or rather, even before then, for the longest time...

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Nodoka: Ah

Big 'SFX' in the middle is the mimesis of all those boulders ripping out of the ground

Fate: I've seen the end, Negi-kun./But why...

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Fate: This time, unlike all those others... I feel no irritation./The next exchange shall be our last.

Negi: You..!

Fate: But... before then.. Negi-kun./This plan you speak of.. May I hear it?

Negi: What's wrong, Fate? Don't you lack the ears that would ever even hear about anything about my plan?

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Fate: ...That's right. There's no point in hearing you out now./I take it back. Forget what I just said.

Eva: He was never dead... you say? Even in that condition..?/That doesn't make sense, if he was already immortal, there would be no need to bother using me as research.

Al: And if, rather than 'immortal', he was 'indestructible'?

Eva: Then..

Al: That's right/Aside: It's a scenario that happens often in those video games you love so much/ We of Ala Alba also failed to suppress him twenty years ago,/And just barely managed to seal him away ten years ago./Thanks to the sacrifice of one hero.

Eva: I...impossible!

Al: That's right. What sleeps over there is...

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Al: The Mage of the Beginning/The "Lifemaker".

Bottom: The one full of mysteries who started everything... is here!!!