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Hatsukoi Limited 5

Hatsukoi Limited 5

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+ posted by BlackDX_knight as translation on Nov 1, 2007 21:26 | Go to Hatsukoi Limited

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Hi, this is my first translation ever. ( I hope I post this right ) There are parts which I can`t seem to find the suitable English for them. just tell me what you guys think. I`m still new, so feel free to drop some pointers for me okay!

I seperate the page by numbers, the boxes by the symbol "-" and the bubbles by pressign the enter key.

1
運動ができるコは嫌いですか?
Do you hate one who is good in sports?

第5話、内緒。。。
5th episode, secret...

2
(banner)体育祭
sports day

☆先週に引き続き体育祭
☆continuation from last week sports day

続いてのプログラムは二年生女性による100メートル走です
The next event is the 2nd year 100m dash for girls

-

きゃああどばちゃん早い!!
wow, Doba-chan is fast!!

よっしゃ!!このレースも1位いただきー!!
alright! that`s another gold!

-

カッコイイなあ土橋先輩!!
Dobashi senpai is really cool!!

その辺の男子よりマジおどこまえだよねー!!
that manlike attitude of hers sure is soo handsome! ( ^_^ )"

3

( the blond ) あたしも1位だったよ
I got first place too!

2年2組土橋りかさん三収種目連続でまたもやぶっちぎりの1位!!いかがでしたか陸上部部長!
Dobashi Rika from class 2-2 already participated in 3 races, but again, she still got the first place! What do you make of this, track field club president?

いやあー見事な走りですよね!今からでも是非ウチの部に入部していただきたい!!
A superb run indeed! Even now I still hope she would enter my club!

4

こえー!今寺井のことニラんでったぞ
Scary! Just now she stared at Terai

土橋は寺井の天敵だからなー..この後の男子100m走いい結果出さねーとまたシゴかれるぜ
Well, Dobashi is Terai archenemy. If you didn`t got a good result for the man 100m dash, you`re back to the training man!

-

はは。。
haha..

しっかし土橋ってかわい気ゼロだよな。。綺麗な顔はしてるけどさあ彼女にはしたくねーよなあなっ寺井!
But Dobashi`s cuteness aura is zero don`t you think? I know she got a pretty face and all, but you wouldn`t want her to be your girlfriend right, Terai?

-

うん
urm...

多分 誰も知らない
perhaps nobody knows...

5

僕と土橋さんの本当の関係ーーー
The real relationship between Dobashi and me...

2か月前
two months before

6

寺井!!
Terai!!

2面しかないコートにせっかく立たせてやってるのに何だそのヘッピリ腰はああ!!
Eventhough I only gave 2 courts for you to cover, what the heck are you doing??

隣りのコートで玉拾いてる1年彼女子も笑ってるぜ!
The ballpicker first year girl in the next court are laughing at you, you know!

すみませ。。
sorry...

-

それに比べて
On the other hand..

-

あっちの2年は当たり年だな
That 2nd year is in the same year as you isn`t she

土橋がこないだの関東大会は4位だったろ?スターの出現で部員も増えたし3年も安心していんたいできる
Dobashi won the forth place at the Kodaima Kantou tournament hasn`t she? With the birth of such star player,
our member increases and our third year can now retire in peace, huh..

-

どばしさん。。。
Dobashi san...

本当パワフルだなあー
She is really powerful

あんなに可愛いカオしてるのに
despite her cute look

7

じゃあ寺井と横山交替
OK, Terai, switch with Yokoyama

はい
yes!

-

アンタさあ部活辞めようとか思ってんでしょ
You are thinking of quiting the club、 aren`t you?

-

はい!?
eh!?

あーその声の裏返り方はビンゴなんだ
Oh, that`s the right respond.

どう?ヤじゃなきゃあたしがしばらくアンタの面倒見てあげようか
So? If that`s a no, you want me to take care of you?

-

あー!それイイ!!みっちりシゴいてやってよ土橋!
Aaa! That would be great! teach this guy good Dobashi!

え。。でっでも。。。
eh? but....

ついでに私生活の方の面倒も見てくれよなんつって
While you`re at it, why don`t you take care of his private life too?

8

何いってんのバカ横山!
What are you saying Yokoyama, you stupid!

じゃあまたあひたな!
well, see you guys tommorow!

どばちゃんバイバイ!
Doba-chan, bye bye!

-

部活のみんなで帰ると
And with all the club members gone home

5分間だけ土橋と二人きりになる
I got a five minutes alone time with Dobashi

...こないだまでは県大会があたしの中心だったけど
The Competition in Kodaima was my focus...

-

これからはアンタがアタシの中心だな
but from now on, I`ll be focusing on you.

-

やるからには厳しきいくからね!
If we want to do this, I`ll be very strict ok!

はっはい。。
yes..


-

こうして,当然僕の個人レツスンは始まった
with that, my lesson started

*よしゃー燃えてきたぜ~
Yosh! Lets do our best!

でもやっぱ怖いよう
but still, I`m afraid...

9

もー正しいグリップもわかってないのおー?
Come on, you don`t even know to hold your racket correctly??

- ( the column where Dobashi seems to be preaching while Terai holds a piece of paper )

ダメなところ
Your bad point

-

地面に対して重直に
The racket should be 90 degrees from the ground

人差し指は伸ばさないの!
Don`t pull out your index finger!

手の平全体で長く握るんだって
Hit the ball with your whole body

-

あー疲れた!
Ah! I`m tired!

やっとラリーつづくようになったよね
Finally you can keep your rallies huh..

う。。うん
urm

10

何?
what?

あっやっわっっ 我ながらホント上達したなあって思って
errr.... no, Im just thinking am I really getting better?

そうだね。もうすぐ夏休みも終わるし。。。通常練習に戻っても大丈夫かもね
well.. The summer break is almost over, after this, even if you get back to your daily
training you would be fine, I think..

-

え
eh?

-

寺井はよくついてきたよ、うん!
Terai really keep up with the training, um!

それは
that`s because...

ひとつ何かできるようになるとそうやって土橋さんが笑ってくれたからー
whenever I did something correctly, you were there to smile for me..

-

それなら頑張らなきゃよかったかも。。。
If that`s the case, It`s better if I didn`t try my best..

そうしたら。。ずっとこうやって土橋さんと練習が。。
If I do that... Then I`ll be able to practice with you forever...

11

はあ?
haa?

土橋さんは同情で僕につきあってくれただけだろうけど
maybe the reason you trained me was just because of sympathy

-

それに。。厳しかったけど。。。でも
Even though the training was harsh.. but...

あんなに一所懸命教えてもらったらその。。。土橋さんのこと。。あの。。。
After you have taught me with all your effort.. I think... About you, I...

-

えっと・・あれ?
Eh..what?

何言って打撲。。。
What am I saying...

-

じゃあ
well then,

このまま本当につきあってみる?
you want to try to really go out with me?

12

うう嘘だ!!
eh?? You aren`t lying aren`t you??

-

そーゆーんなら嘘でもいーけど
keep on saying like that, I don`t mind that being a lie.

いやいやよろしくお願いします
no. no. please take care of me.

-

こ こんなに上手くいっちゃっていいのかな
is it really ok for this to be going so smooth?

それじゃ特訓は今日でお終いな
well, that it for todays special training

-

あっわっ
eh,

待って土橋さ...
wait! Dobashi-san!

-

そうだ
thats right

ここで思い切って手を握ってー
now is the chance for me to hold her hand..

13

え!?
eh?

よっ どばちゃん
Doba-chan!

そっちも練習終わったの?
You finished the training over there?

あー明日からそっちと合流するから
erm, we will be training as usual starting from tomorrow

へーそうなの
really

-

「このまま本当に付き合ってみる?」
[ you want to try to really go out with me?]

この言葉の意味の解釈の仕方をぼくはまちがってるのだろーか
Did I miss interpret the meaning of those words?

-

そんなことないよな!?つきあうって普通は恋人
That can`t be! Going out usually means.. lovers..

帰り道二人きりになる時間があるからその時にちゃんと聞いてみよう
On the way back, there`s a time to be alone with her. I`ll ask her properly then.

14

ちゃんと。。。
properly...

なんか前より距離開いてるんですけど。。。
Is it just me or the gap between us seems bigger than before..

-

なんて声かけたらいいかわからない。。
I don`t know how I should ask her..

-

じゃあバイバイ
well then, bye bye

あっ うんバイバイ
aa, erm. bye bye.

-

二人きりの時間。。もうこの5分間しかないのに。。。
our time alone.. Is just this 5 minutes..

-

僕は所詮テニス部のお荷物的な存在で
my present to the tennis club is more like a burden

-

土橋さんは期待の2年性エース
while Dobashi-san is the 2nd year ace

15

せめてもう少しテニスがうまくなったら手を二握って見よう
at least when I`m getting a bit better at tennis, I`ll try to hold her hand.

もう少したくましくなったらデデートとか誘ってみよう
after I became a bit stronger, I`ll try to ask her out、maybe on a date.

もう少し。。。
in just a bit..

でもその「もう少し」になかなか届かなくて
but I just can`t seem to reach that [just a bit]

だからせめてこの体育祭でかっこいい姿を
thats why, at least in this sport festival I`ll have to show her my good side!

16

土橋さん、君のために
Dobashi-san, this is for you!

- ( medal )

3位 よくやった
3rd place - congratz

-

結局こんなもんなんだろーか僕なんて
at the end, this is all I`m able to..

よ!今帰り?遅かったじゃん
yo! You`re pretty late

土橋。。。さん
Dobashi...san

17

あははははは
ahahahahah

さ3位だったよ見てた?僕なりに頑張ったつもりではいたんだけどさあ。。
you saw I got third place? After all the hard work Ive put..

1位ばっかの土橋さんには全然
Compare to you who got 1 place in everything...

寺井
Terai

-

アンタいつも卑屈すぎ!
You`re always passive thinking!

あたし知ってるよ?アンタ去年は100mダントツでピリだったじゃん!それが3位ってスゴイことじゃないの?
I know that last year you got the last place in 100m dash right? Now, you`re 3rd, isn`t that a big thing?

-

また怒られた。。。
she is mad again..

-

寺井は自分のこと認められないでいるみたいだけど
even if you don`t acknowledge yourself

あたしはあんたの頑張り知ってるからー
I know how hard you have worked..

18

だからあたしから努力賞
This is you award for trying hard

19

じゃ帰るよ
ok, lets go home

土橋さん。。
Dobashi-san...

-

そ そうだ! 今こそてをつないで。。
oh, yes! Now is the chance!

-

はっ (またっ)
eh ( again )

-

当分僕は土橋さんに振り回されてしまいそうです
Perhaps for the present being, I will be toyed like this

なぜかいつもぼくからは近づけない。。
why don`t you want to be close to me...

僕は愛されてる!愛されてるんだよね土橋すわん。。。
You love me! you love me right Dobashi??

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#1. by Mamoru ()
Posted on Nov 1, 2007
Wow....thanks so much!

Edit:

It just needs a few grammatical improvements that might make this read better in english. but aside from that really good work.
#2. by Crayola ()
Posted on Nov 1, 2007
thanks, ill get to work on this later
#3. by Obxist ()
Posted on Nov 1, 2007
thank youuu !!! at lasttt :wtf:
#4. by Kaiten (Harasho)
Posted on Nov 1, 2007
Thanks for the translations! I can't wait to see the scans!
#5. by r3born ()
Posted on Nov 2, 2007
Great work. Thanks.
#6. by ChaosCloud ()
Posted on Nov 2, 2007
thxxxxxx
#7. by Nami (Queen of The Damned)
Posted on Nov 2, 2007
Translation looks neat!
Blacknight, Thanks a lot for giving this series a try. :)
#8. by Phat ()
Posted on Nov 2, 2007
thanks :D
#9. by Velvet_Rain_Dropz ()
Posted on Nov 2, 2007
Cool!! Thankies for the trans!! :whoo
#10. by hatsuharupeace ()
Posted on Nov 2, 2007
thanks!!!
#11. by BlackDX_knight ()
Posted on Nov 2, 2007
god, now I realized that there are lots of mistakes and 不自然な english in my translation.. T_T... I`ll try harder next time... Thank you for all who supports me~
#12. by Mamoru ()
Posted on Nov 2, 2007
Quote by BlackDX_knight;595812:
god, now I realized that there are lots of mistakes and 不自然な english in my translation.. T_T... I`ll try harder next time... Thank you for all who supports me~

It was a great first translation and we should be thankful that you helped out. Don't worry about it too much, I'm sure your translations will continue to improve as you use both languages more often.

I'm not a translator but if you need any help editing any future translations of this manga feel free to PM me and I can try and help you out when I can or I'll add some points in my comments in future.

I think the next chapter will be released within a couple of days.

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