Embalming - The Another Tale of Frankenstein 1

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Embalming ch. 1
[iNDENT]
01
- ___Year 189X
- Great Britain
- Highland Area
(Peaberry)- Energy of the thunder: estimated 1.21 jigowatt(/gigawatt) over
- Temperature: under 0℃
- All the conditions met
- Now, again
- At somewhere___

02-03
(center)- Frankenstein will be born!
- Watsuki Nobuhiro
(right, above title)- Another "history"(/"story") begins!!

04
(*talks about the background info and the occupation "gamekeeper."
let me do the translation when I have more time.)

05
Raith- hey Fury
- Looking back these 5 years, didn't we
- share a lot of things?
- residence(/house), job, and
- fate
Fury- Yeah, Raith, but this time it's different
- I will hunt that
- prey(*Japanese said "prey" upon the Kanji "killer") down!!
- This revenge
- Is mine!!

06
Raith- Now look at your face
- You won't know which one is the killer
Fury- Shut up, I was born with this face
Raith- Alright, as usual
- Fury is the main, I am the support
- In return, would you hunt that thing alive?
- I want to
- debunk him
- Just send him half death so he won't be able to move
- then we can use anything such as poison, torture... it will be easy
Fury- Your words are as scary (as you say my face is)

07
- Five years ago...
- Five years ago...
- I was small and weak back then
- But now it's different
- I've grown big
- big___...

08
- Damn! You've grown a lot too...
Raith- Wait, this is impossible...or, should be

09
Fury- Here we go, Raith
Raith- Let's go, Fury
Fury- We'll defeat him, and
- move forward!!

10-11
- It all started
- five years ago
- In deep night with thunder and snowstorm
- Just like tonight___...

12
- That carriage, unfortunately being stalled
- was a good prey to the killer

13
- Couple of ten minutes later
- Adults were all hung and taken
- Those who survived
- were me,
- Raith, and___
(Edel)- huff x5

14
- huff x3
Fury- Let's get out!
- No rescue is going to come!
- If we just wait, this girl will die!!
Raith- Do your best
- I'll wish you luck
Fury- Fool! You are coming, too!
- If you die, your revenge___

15
Raith- Revenge...well
- I guess that's the
- normal feeling
- You can go
- Me, no thanks

16
Fury- You...
- Don't want to go?
Raith- let's see
- Till now
- I didn't feel like living anyways
- Better hurry
- That girl is quite young
- You have to
- protect her well
- If you would just include me as the additional subject to avenge
- I'll be fine

17
Fury&Edel- huff x5
Shade- Are you alright?
- What happened?
- Two of you, is that it?
Fury- One...One more
Shade- Where? Where is___

18
- He's there!!
Raith- ___...
Fury- Fine! Don't come if you don't want to!!
- But do not go anywhere, stay here

19
-! (*Fury notices the plate with his surname on it)
Raith- That trunk...
- Isn't it your
- Stop!
- Don't!
Fury- If this fire burns out halfway, you'll freeze
- We will not know this place
Raith- but...your family's trunk...
- the token___... (/ what you had left)

20
-!!
Fury- Listen! I will definitely not take a revenge for you!! Not for you!!
- So
- Survive and get over here(/this)!
- If you want to die, do so afterwards!
- If you survive
Raith- If I...
- survive...?
Fury- How would I know!
- Live as however as you want!!

21
- The incident of the night
- did not become a case
- the dead bodies were lost
- just bloodstain and burnt carriage remained
- Only proof was children's sayings
- "An almost bare giant with patched scars"___still, too abstract
- After all
- With a little "mystery gossip" article on local magazine
- Everything had come to smoke___...

22
Fury- This revenge
- is mine
Raith- So you still want to
- take a revenge
Fury- Yea!
- That won't make dad or mom
- or anyone killed alive again
- but
- I have to do
- or I can't move forward
- I won't allow any peaceful death to him
- I will kill that with my own hands!!

23
Raith- You look scary
Fury- Wha_
Raith- Fury, for you,
- isn't revenge not a deed
- but a feeling?
- I don't really understand that feeling
- but
(Fury)- Live as however as you want___...
Raith- I will help you
- I want to debunk that killer
- Before I know that, I can't move forward
Fury- Here we go, Raith
Raith- Let's go, Fury
Fury- We'll defeat him, and
- move forward!!

24
Fury&Raith- huff x4
Titan- Fsheew(*onomatopoeia)

25
Raith- Ha...aren't we wounded all over the body
Fury- Yeah
- Us, and him, too
- One more hit!
- One more will set__...
Titan- Ga

26
Titan- Ga x5
Raith- Fury
- This guy...
- I don't think he's human...
Fury- (mind that) Later!
- He's coming!
Raith- Really, what on earth is him
- five years ago, my trash father, my trash life
- all thrown away in an instant moment
- the truth of that power...
- I want to know
Fury- Raith!?
Raith- Huh!?

27-no lines

28
Fury&Raith- !

29
Raith- haha...
- sorry Fury
- I failed
Fury- ...Rai__
-__th...
- just...wait
- I'll save you
Raith- run
- away
- Fu-
- ry
- Don't share (even) the death with me!
- Run away and live on! Fury!!

30-no lines

31-no lines

32-33-no lines

34-no lines

35
(Peaberry)- Found you

36
Fury- !?
- huff x10
-.....
Peaberry- Oh
- Finally awaken
- you sleepyhead
- You didn't move at all for a month; I was about to give up

37
Fury- Who are you(interrupted)
Peaberry- Your Name!!?
- your name
- hands perhaps a tie, but my question was faster
- now answer
Fury-......
- ...Fury

38
- Fury = Flatliner
Peaberry- age?
Fury- 18
Peaberry- family?
Fury- no one; all died five years ago
Peaberry- occupation?
Fury- doing gamekeeper at Lord Weiss's house, the saver
Peaberry- Ok, your sense is just fine
- body condition is good, too
- but
- not here
- It took me quite a hand since it was damaged so badly
Fury- Are you
- a doctor?

39
Peaberry- of course
- don't you see it in my constume?
Fury- I'll be thinking between
- a doctor or a prostitute
Peaberry- You are the first one to have a complain on my relaxation style
- you asked who I am
- I am Dr. Peaberry
- Well
- anything else you want to ask?
Fury- ...how's Raith?
Peaberry- As for the man fighting together with you
- I think, since I saw things through scope,
- you know what happened to him better.

40
Fury- ...fool
- Didn't I say I won't be taking revenge for you...
- That...
- Fool...
(Raith)- I want to know the truth of him
Fury- That killer...
- what was he?
- Just what the hell was he!?

41
Peaberry- he?
- ah
- did you mean this one?
- well, the identity is known
- I came to this place in research of this
- this is
- a Frankenstein

42-43
- FRANKEN STEIN
(*I suppose it is a spelling mistake...but well, that's how it is on the raw.)
- Back c. 150 years ago
- A young (prodigious) genius Victore Frankenstein had imitated (/modeled on) God and created "Nonhuman Human" from parts of corpses
- Although the exact method of creation was lost long ago
- based on the two prohibited books (*禁書, literally translated) containing fragmentary memos Victore had left
- people are still trying on "Demon Deed," under the history and in the darkness of graves
- Each frankensteins differ in looks and actions, just like humans
- Only with one common point, that all frankensteins have
- the electrode for activation
- This also serves as the distinguisher from human___

44
Peaberry- You make scary face (/you look scary)
Fury- I was born with this face
Peaberry- Well, look at your face expression

45
- where are you going?
Fury- returning home
- I'm telling them about Raith
- Then I will go find the creator of that Frankenstein
- to kill him!
- this revenge is not over (yet) !!
Peaberry- I will be staying here (*meaning she won't be moving)
- come once a day for treatment of your neck
- okay?
- "Fury"
- Just like his name represents___...

46
(inside box)- House of Weiss
Edel- Fury!!
- Where have you been for the past month?
- We were all worried about you

47
Fury- ...sorry
- Edel
Edel- Fury...?
Fury- Where is Master? I have to tell him something
Shade- Master went to downtown to visit the institution of helping poor (*perhaps better capitalized, but I cannot think of better name.).
Fury- Shade-san (/Mr. Shade)
Shade- you have wounded your neck
- Are you alright?
Fury- Yeah...but...
- Raith...
Edel- Yes, Raith!
- Raith had been worrying about you the most!!

48-49
Raith- Fury
- You are alright
- Thank god
- We were so worried
- about you

50
- Welcome back!
- Fury!!

51
(Peaberry)- All frankensteins have the electrode for activation
- This also serves as the distinguisher from human___
Fury- ....Raith
- you....
Raith- Oh, Fury learned about it, too?
- I also learned the truth of that thing
- Frankenstein
- The existence that surpasses humans____...

left aori- The curtain...has risen!! (*lit trans, perhaps "the show/story has began" is better)
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Now now, where is #5 from may issue?
It should be out...soon perhaps...I really want to read it...I mean I will translate it, too...but...:darn