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Yuragi-sou no Yuuna-san 2

Yuragi Inn’s Secret

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+ posted by garismaatti as translation on Mar 21, 2016 00:13 | Go to Yuragi-sou no Yuuna-san

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Poor quality translation!!!
Don’t even consider typesetting as it is!!!

Correct translations, flow and proofread it, then it may become usable.
If those are done, then you can use it freely! Just mention me in somewhere in credits (and I appreciate if you could send me message when you do, mainly because I want to know if some group is working on this).


Good experiments are able to produce instant result and are repeatable, so I made a second one. I changed my formatting style for this one. My last experiment taught me that my normal 2 line system is way too confusing, if the Japanese text is missing, so I left Japanese out completely. I also fixed this a little before posting it here, but don't expect much. I still don't plan on continuing to translate this series, but I'm considering it.
and what comes for my experiments...
Spoiler: results
Translations times:
Chapter 1:
Total time 14 hours for 56 pages with average of 15 min/page
Format fixing and quick proofreading: around 3 hours

Chapter 2:
Total time 6h45min for 25 pages with average of 16 min/page
Format fixing and quick proofreading: around 45 min

Summary:
It takes me around 16 min per page to translate like this. In my normal style I got the average of 34 min per page. so it’s a little over double my normal speed, but the quality drops and checking translation becomes harder.

And for those who didn't already know: You can use WolframAlpha.com to calculate averages. I love this "Computational Knowledge Engine" because you can calculate with units, among other things.



Reading instructions:
“[name] : ” means who is speaking or where text is
“[empty line]” means changing frame
“Page 00” means page change (accompanied by 2 new lines)
“ // ” means joined balloon, can start a new line or be in the middle of the text
Example:
[speaker] : [1st balloon in eng] // [2nd balloon in eng]
// [3rd balloon in eng]


Page index:
Page 01 - Front page
Page 02
Page 03
Page 04
Page 05
Page 06
Page 07
Page 08
Page 09
Page 10
Page 11
Page 12
Page 13
Page 14
Page 15
Page 16
Page 17
Page 18
Page 19
Page 20
Page 21
Page 22
Page 23
Page 24
Page 25


Page 01 - Front page
Title : Bath 2 - Yuragi Inn’s Secret
Floating text : Is this place heaven!?
// Hot spring boarding house Yuragi Inn.
Name : Yuragi Inn’s Yuuna-san
Artist : Miura Tadahiro


Page 02
In right margin : Waking up like in heaven!?

SFX : *chirping*

Kogarashi : Wha...?

Kogarashi : ...The sky?
Yuuna : MMMH
SFX : *snuggle*

Yuuna : Kogarashi-san......
SFX : *hug*
Kogarashi : ......


Page 03
Kogarashi : Y-Yuuna!?
// W-What are you doing...
SFX : *exhale*

SFX : *flap* flap*

Kogarashi : WHOAAAH!?
SFX : *whoosh*

Kogarashi : WOAH! Hey wake up! Yuuna!
Yuuna : W-What... Kogarashi-san? // Good morning~
Kogarashi : You... we are in the sky!

Yuuna : AA~H... sorry... I move while sleeping...
SFX : *snuggle* *snuggle*
Kogarashi : No remorse at all !?


Page 04
SFX : *fall*

Kogarashi : Wait... // We are fal-... // OWAAAAAA!?
SFX : *falling*

SFX : *chirp chirp*

Kogarashi : If that would have continued, I would have end up waking in heaven!
Yuuna : I’m sorry, I’m sorry!

Yuuna : Next time I try to sleep more distant from you!
Kogarashi : No, next time I probably have to tie my body to a pillar...
SFX : *sliding door opens*
Sagiri : HMM?... Suggesting yourself of tying yourself up, how admirable...


Page 05
Sagiri : Then, want to me tie you up, Fuyuzora Kogarashi?
Nonko : Yuuna-chan, Kogarashi-chan, Morning~

Yuuna : Good morning.
Kogarashi : Yeah.
Sagiri : ...Yuuna!

Sagiri : Yesterday... I’m really sorry.
// I didn't notice your crisis and just went to hot spring...
Sagiri : I’m weak-minded...
Yuuna : D-Don’t blame yourself so much!

Floating text : I think we should try stay hiding not to scare a new tenant!
Floating text : That why everyone should act like I didn’t exist at all!
Yuuna : It’s because I told you to act like that...
Sagiri : But even if you say that...

Sagiri : Nevertheless, Fuyuzora Kogarashi...
// You didn't tell us that you were a person with spiritual powers!


Page 06
Kogarashi : Surprised one is me!
// I didn't think that all the residents could see Yuuna...
Kogarashi : That explain how you all could live here so care free.

Kogarashi : Rather... how can you all see Yuuna?
// ...it should be possible... that all of you are ghost?
Nonko : I’m a living human?

Nonko : I even have my legs~

Kogarashi : T-That's true...
Sagiri : Nonko-san! That’s disgraceful!
Floating text : E HEH~

SFX : *angry*
Yuuna : What! Even I have my legs!
SFX : *grap*
SFX : *showing*
Kogarashi : You don’t have to show us!


Page 07
Kogarashi : But, is hard to see the difference between humans and ghosts that has entered into stable state...
Nonko : Then want to confirm it?
Kogarashi : EH?

Nonko : Here, here! It’s warm right~ <3
SFX : *heart beat* *heart beat* *heart beat* *heart beat* *heart beat*
Nonko : And also... can you hear it?
Nonko : Sound of my heart? // Well?

Kogarashi : Wha..What are you doing!?
SFX : *separates*
Nonko : FUFUFUU~ OH Kogarashi-chan your blushing is so cute <3
Kogarashi : Rather.. You smell like Sake!
// Have you been drinking whole morning!?
Yuuna : Nonko-san that have not been drinking is a rare sight.


Page 08
Sagiri : Fuyuzora Kogarashi you bastard!
SFX : *shivering*
Kogarashi : Why I’m the one at fault!?

Sagiri : Really... Hey Yuuna!
// Is it really all right to live with a guy like that?
Yuuna : UM... What do you mean?
Sagiri : This guy isn't like the previous ones!? This time he can even touch you, Yuuna!

Sagiri : I’m asking that until now, has he done anything strange to you?
Yuuna : S-Strange...?

SFX : *blush*

Yuuna : T-There is nothing!!
SFX : *rumble*
Nonko : This look like something happened <3


Page 09
SFX : *arrows flying*
Sagiri : Fuyuzora Kogarashi you bastard!!
Kogarashi : All of them were inevitable!!

Sagiri : You should leave that room!
// There is just right size tree cave in the back yard! That is just right for a beast like you!
SFX : *growwl*
Yuuna : At least treat him as a human!

Kogarashi : HAH! // I’m not anymore going to go back to those places where you can drown from the rain!
Yuuna : You have experienced it!?
Yuuna : Rather, Its deep!!

Kogarashi : I also have no intention of moving,
// It was me who rented that room!
Kogarashi : And also I...

Kogarashi : Made a promise to send Yuuna-chan to rest in peace.
Yuuna : Kogarashi...


Page 10
Yuuna : Thank you Kogarashi-san!
// I will also work hard!
Kogarashi : And then I get that room’s rent for free!!
SFX : *delight* or *yay!*

Nonko : It’s rather lonely, to know that we have to part our ways at some point...
// But I don’t really want to see Yuuna-chan to fall into a hell...
Sagiri : ......... // I’ll understand...

Chitose : AH! Yuuna-san, Kogarashi-kun,
// Good morning!
Yuuna : Nakai-san! Good morning!

Chitose : I’ll start making the breakfast right away.
Kogarashi : Thanks!
Chitose : AH! Kogarashi-kun?
Kogarashi : Yes?

Chitose : I will only wait 1 month for your payment for food expenses,
// If you are even a 1 day late, you won’t be getting any food!
Kogarashi : Y-Yes!


Page 11
Kogarashi : That person... even though she is strangely small, she has some serious dreadfulness, right?
Nonko : Of course! She is the oldest one in the Yuragi Inn.
Kogarashi : EH?
Nonko : Yuuna is the second oldest.
Yuuna : I’m the eternal 16 year old!

Kogarashi : Does that mean, that she doesn't look as old as she really is?
// But that is...
SFX : *snuggle*

SFX : *poke out*
Kogarashi : WHOAH!?

Yuuna : Geez, Yaya-san! You where again sleeping inside of Kotatsu!
Yaya : ...Goo...m...orning...
Kogarashi : You... were inside of this!?
Kogarashi : HM!?


Page 12
Floating text : A tail..!?
Yaya : NYA?

Yuuna : Yaya-san! Your tail! Your tail!!
// Even your underwears are showing!
Kogarashi : A-At least try to hide it!

Sagiri : Fuyuzora Kogarashi... you bastard!!
SFX : *shivering*
Kogarashi : You also don’t get tired of this, do you?


Page 13
Yaya : ...Kogarashi is a person with spiritual powers,
// That is why isn’t alright if I don’t hide it?
Yuuna : AH! Your right!
Sagiri : But hide your underwear! you Baka-neko!!
(tl-note: Lit. “a stupid cat”)

Kogarashi : I see.. a tail? Then those neko-mimi’s are also real?
// is she a Bake-neko?
(tl-note: Lit. “a cat monster”)
Nonko : FUU~ Kogarashi-chan was close!
Chitose : FUFU... So he was,
// Then while we are in the topic, why don't we all do a self introduction?

Chitose : First one will be me, Nakai.
SFX : *band* *band* *band*
Priest : Excuse me!!!
Others : !?


Page 14
SFX : *impact*

Kogarashi : ...That’s the guy from yesterday!

Priest : You really did it yesterday, brat!
// Now I can even see that there are more ghost and spirits living in that house!

Priest : You brat included, we Gudon people have come to take care of everyone in that place!!
Kogarashi : What you say..?


Page 15
Priest henchman : T-The Head priest-dono! They are all taking a look of the girl...!
// While there is exception...
// This just seems like a bad joke...
Priest : This is no joke!
// We are to quickly get rid of these evil spirits.
Priest henchman : But..!

Priest : Then.. // Why not capture the girls! And after this, you are free to punish them as you like!!
SFX : *twitch*

Floating text : Punish..
SFX : *slap* *slap*
Floating text : These girls..
Floating text : As we like..!?


Page 16
SFX : *thud thud thud*
Priest henchman : I see, in that case let’s quickly catch these guys!!
Priest henchman : I was just thinking same thing!
Priest henchman : I also!

Sagiri : .........
Sagiri : You trash!

Kogarashi : I’m sorry.. it’s because of me! You all just hide inside the house!
// I’ll take care of these guys...
Sagiri : It’s you bastard who should just they there.
Kogarashi : What...!?

Kogarashi : !?
SFX : *taking out*

Sagiri : Ameno style Ninjustsu’s final move


Page 17
Sagiri : Murashigure!!
(tl-note: Lit. “autumn shower”)
SFX : *pow pow pow*

Kogarashi : ......... // What is that?...
Yuuna : FUFUFU, Did you get surprised Kogarashi-san?
// That’s an Ameno-ninja, Sagiri-san’s aura’s manifest.
// Ever-changing phantom!!
Kogarashi : First... what is aura’s manifest!?

Priest : GEH! Don’t fuster! // Wha-...!?
Nonko : YAY~ Everyone is so smooth, almost like a monk!

Priest henchman : You... When you get here!?
Nonko : Hey, hey, Is it alright if I play the bowling?
Priest henchman : B-Bowling!?


Page 18
Nonko : EEH~ Can’t I really?
SFX : *peek* *peek*
Priest henchman : Well... If it’s only a little...

Nonko : YAY!
SFX : *grap*
Priest henchman : What..?

SFX : *lift*
Priest henchmen : !?

Priest henchman : What is that superhuman strength!?

Priest henchman : Look! That women is...

Floating text : Oni!
Nonko : Here we go!

Nonko : HA!
SFX : *trow*
Priest henchman : What...!?


Page 19
Nonko : It’s a strike!
SFX : *crash*

Kogarashi : Human pin bowling...!?
Yuuna : The more drunk Nonko-san gets, more stronger she becomes!
// Because she is Kano Oni Leader’s descendant!!
Kogarashi : .........

Priest : Curse you, curse you, you devils!!
// I didn't think that you’ll be this...
Priest : Powerful..?
SFX : *miau*


Page 20
SFX : *gloom*
Priest : Wha...?

Yaya : ...Yeah // You can play with these guys.
Cat : NYAN~
SFX : *run*


Page 21
Priest henchmen : KIYAAAA!!
Floating text : How’s that

Yuuna : Yaya-san is so cute that Nekokami-san has taken liking of her!
Kogarashi : You aren’t going to do anything yourself!?
SFX : *yawn*
Yaya : But Yaya is sleepy...

Priest : T-This can’t be..!?
// No, we regroup our ranks and then next time for sure...

Chitose : I’m sorry customer-sama, but that won’t do!


Page 22
SFX : *shining*

Kogarashi : That light is...?

SFX : *various ringtones*
Priest henchman : Mom...?
Priest henchman : What is it...?

Priest henchman : HA!

Priest henchman : My lottery ticket won a jackpot!?
Priest henchman : I was accepted to Joniizu!?
Priest henchman : I was selected as heir of millionaire!?
SFX : *sudden momentum*
Priest henchman : !?


Page 23
Priest henchman : Billion debt was cleared!?
Priest henchman : Pochi has come back!?
(tl-note: “Pochi” is common dog name)
Priest : What...
Priest henchman : I was selected a therapeutic agent test subject!?
Priest : ...Is this a witchcraft...!?

Priest henchmen : It’s not anymore time to be beating up spirits!
Priest : What!?

Priest : GEH! This is why you should just follow...
Phone : *ringtone sound*
Priest : HM!?

Priest son : I’m sorry dad...
// Now that I have become dad myself, I’ve finally noticed that I was wrong...!
// That’s why... please... stop being a priest and come back home...

Floating text : .........................

Priest : Remember this you evil spirits!
// I will certainly return this gratitude!!


Page 24
Priest + henchmen : Truly thank you very much!!
SFX : *running*
Chitose : Take care.
Yuuna : And Yuragi Inn’s oldest and also working as a caretaker, Nakai-san is...
Yuuna : The user of fortunes, a zashikiwarashi-san!

Yuuna : How is it Kogarashi-san? Everyone is amazing, right?
Kogarashi : A-AAH, Nakai-san is amazing! I also want some luck...
Yuuna : You should drop that idea. That is using they own luck.
Floating text : Hooray!!
Kogarashi : EH!?
Yuuna : Well if you don’t mind to using your lifetime luck all at once...
Kogarashi : Scary!!
Kogarashi : In the end Nakai-san is the strongest...!


Page 25
Chitose : Then everyone, now that the our real self introduction has ended...
// Why don't we welcome our new tenant!
SFX : *tap*

All girls : Welcome to Ayakashi filled
All girls : Yuragi Inn!

Text box : At this point I was thinking that...
Kogarashi : ...G-Glad...
Kogarashi : ...To be here...
Text box : If i screw up, I may end up to next world before Yuuna...
Text in left margin : There is Ayakashi’s everywhere!?

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