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Juushin Enbu 10

Seperated People

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+ posted by Lingwe as translation on Jul 20, 2009 10:08 | Go to Juushin Enbu

-> RTS Page for Juushin Enbu 10

This has to be one of the hardest manga I translate because they keep on using all these terms that I am never sure whether people will remember what they mean in Japanese or not (Rikkashuu, Soukihou, etc)

Today's TVTropes page is Evil Weapon.

Page 1

-Your Majesty.
-Shoukaku Sensei!
-Your face looks full of colour, did you have a good dream?
-No / ...You see,
-(side) Taitou is in trouble, what about Taigatei...
-I've discovered the thing that I should accomplish.

Page 2

-Taitou,
-It is thanks to you.

Page 3

-Uaaarh
-Huun

Page 4

-Boss...
-It must have been destiny that I would fish you out.
-(title) Chapter 10 Seperated People

Page 5

Page 6

-'Scuse me.
-How long are you planning on not eating?
-Rinmei-san, aren't you worried?
-Of course I'm worried.
-But, / We promised that we would wait for them at Rentsuuji Temple.
-That why, / I definitely believe that they will come.

Page 7

-Rinmei-san...
-Fhue?
-Or is that Taitou-kun isn't a man who keeps his promises~~?
-Es Oh Hah (It's not that)!
-Then's it's fine isn't it.
-To have that belief.
-But if I had thought I would be returning to the Rentsujii Temple I would have worn something else!
-If they come back then I'll fillet them into fish!

Page 8

-Okay?
-All of those men selfishly weren't thinking about our feelings at all! / We shouldn't forgive them!?
-Why you're right!
-No matter who they are, causing us to worry and needing such high amount of maintence...
-Truly...
-There's no way to solve men!!

Page 9

-Fuh...
-Fuhahahahahahaha
-Ahahahaha!!

Page 10

-Welcome back, Keirou-sama.
-Keirou-sama?

Page 11

-He's still alive.
-That brat...!!

Page 12

-That guy...
-How long does he think he can stay like that.
-...Ryuukou...
-What worth is Hagun.
-It's all because of that...

Page 13

-Boss.
-What's going on?
-Ahh, this might be a problem.
-What to do.
-Damn old man.

Page 14

-Ehehe...
-I'm home.
-Ooooh!
-I'm glad the two of you returned!

Page 15

-Taitou turned into such a beautiful woman.
-Nice work, nice work.
-Have you become an idiot, Sonnei-sama!
-Can't an old man have some fun flirting for the short remaining part of his life~~
-Laila
-Father...
-The fact you are safe is most important.

Page 16

-...I'm back.
-I see... / So it was Tonrou...
-Yes.

Page 17

-Master, / Do you think Taitou is safe...
-He's with both Ryuukou and Rokuson of the Goshintoushi. / I hold that belief to be true.
-In any case, the Ken Empire is now exposed to the machinations of Tonrou.
-Taking Taitou out of the capital 12 years ago has also become known of.

Page 18

Page 19

Page 20

-Taitou...

Page 21

-How long do you plan on sitting there?
-Bastard!! What did you go all the way to Rakushou for!!
-It was to reclaim the Kenkaranbu right!!

Page 22

-...Just let it go...
-!? / What are you...
-So long as I'm here everyone will be unhappy.
-It's like what Kouei-san said.
-All because of this thing,
-Koueri-san, and Ryuukou were...
-What did you say just now!!
-Weren't you the one who tried to protect everyone with full awareness of that!!

Page 23

-What about that!!
-Bastard...
-Give it a rest.
-...Master.
-Like he is now he can't do anything anyway.
-Denying your fate,
-Is like cursing yourself, brat...

Page 24

-And the stars won't give you power.
-"Monkoku"...
-Danna is...
-In your situation before that was the biggest problem for you.
-But now when you use Soukihou, the method of controlling ki, you cannot polish your ki.

Page 25

-Bull's eye.
-What do you mean!? Cannot polish his ki...
-Whatever the case for someone who has no will to battle there is no need to polish his ki.
-If he can't polish his ki then his body can't accept it.
-So you've become that cowardly.
-Stop screwing around!!
-Master and Ryuukou both died a dog's death for your sake!!
-Whatever, I don't care about you anymore.

Page 26

-I don't want to lose anyone else...
-...No more than this.
-Because of me...

Page 27

-You called for me, Your Majesty.
-Yes, I was waiting for you, Taki.
-Taki, do you remember about Taitou.
-...Yes.
-Such a wild man.
-I feel a bit jealous of him living in that way.
-(sfx) Hahaha
-Your Majesty...

Page 28

-However, I am the Ken Empire's Emperor.
-I cannot ignore that obligation.
-As such, I will carry out my promise with Taitou.
-I will turn this Empire into a better country.
-No matter how much time it takes!
-And so...
-How do I say...
-I have little experience with the opposite sex to rely upon as a man.

Page 29

-Ta / Ta / Taki!!
-Yes!?
-And so / I...
-I would like you to support me.
-If you can...
-For your whole life...
-Your Majesty...
-The stage is set.
-Now if we can get rid of Hagun...

Page 30

-Our enemies are the refugees!! / No need to hold back!!
-Kill them all!!
-Hurry to the Rentsuuji Temple!
-The residents are being attacked first!

Page 31

-Uuh...
-Guh...
-Wh...what are you doing.
-The enemy is only a single woman!!

Page 32

-Hii!!
-If you want to get past here then prepare yourselves.
-I'll be filleting you like a fish.

Page 33

-Gyaah
-Geez!
-What on earth is this!?
-We've never had an army this large come here before.

Page 34

-Oy, oy, give me a break.
-You can't tell what the young lady's power is?
-I guess then,
-That I should head on over there.

Page 35

-Hmph...
-I've been leaving it up Taitou recently. / Have I become rusty.
-Father~~!
-Laila! I told you it's dangerous and to wait inside the Rentsujii Temple...
-Everyone's attack is finished!!
-She isn't affected by her parents heartfelt words at all.
-Alright, / We'll pull back too.
-Yeah!

Page 36

-Hey, hold on a sec.
-You're Shimei!
-Such a quick temper you have.
-I didn't really come here to fight you or any... / thing.

Page 37

-Ottoto.
-Man...Hagun and his father have the same hot tempered blood.
-...Although,
-You're not exactly connected by blood.
-Eh?
-What do you mean by that...
-It's quite simple.
-Young lady, you and the Hagun brat aren't real siblings.
-Ain't that right...

Page 38

-Former Empire Courtier / Souei Tokuha-san.
-...Father...
-It was 16 years ago.
-In the capital a kid prophecised as Hagun of the Hokushin Tenken, the North Star Celestials, was born.
-North Star... / But that's...
-I still haven't finished telling you the entire story.
-Hagun is a star of destiny that will bring upheaval.
-The beaurcracy decided that that seed of upheavel should be removed from Rakushou for it's own good.

Page 39

-And so Souei one who had connections to the Rikkajuu dressed up like a criminal and made off with him out of Rakushou.
-He was to escape the pursuing party.
-...Father...
-However,
-Unaccustomed to long journies Laihou Ouli died.

Page 40

-Eh....
-Mo...ther...?
-Gehyahyahya!! / You met with such misfortune all because of some kid who you didn't even have a blood relationship with, Souei Tokuha!!
-Get down here!!
-I will silence that vulgar tongue of yours!!
-Oh, scary.
-Seems you can see what being affected by Hagun does?
-Try thinking about it.
-Why has the Genroutou sent such a large army here.
-That's right.
-A single person, / It's to kill Hagun.

Page 41

-If you just hand over Hagun then we might not need to have so many sacrifices right!?
-Well, it's not like they can send him out if he isn't here.
-I wonder how many people have died. / All because of Hagun.
-Shut up.
-I'll make it so you can't use that mouth again!!
-Hold on, hold on. / If you get all fired up like that,
-Then a stray arrow might just hit you.

Page 42

-What the...?

Page 43

-...Eh?
-Ah,
-It wasn't an arrow, it was a spear.
-Father----!!!

Page 44

-Father!! / Father...
-Father!!
-Father---!!
-Why...
-I told you right?
-It's because you're involved with Hagun.
-If Hagun wasn't here...
-Then your father, your mother, Kouei...
-None of them would have died.

Page 45

-If Hagun weren't here...
-Right?

Page 46

-...Taitoooou...!!
-Caught you...!!

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#1. by Nantalith ()
Posted on Aug 5, 2009
Proofreading - use what you wish:

Pg 7, line 5 - ''s' on 'then' and comma after 'fine'
Pg 8, line 4 - 'amounts'
Pg 17, line 4 - leave off 'of'
pg 24, line 4 - 'In your previous situation, that was the biggest problem you had.'
Pg 25, line 3 - 'Whatever the situation, if someone has no will to fight, they can't polish their ki.'

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