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Nurarihyon no Mago 1

Nurarihyon no Mago Ch01

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+ posted by niphredil as translation on Mar 11, 2008 17:39 | Go to Nurarihyon no Mago

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PSA: Everyone go offer your babies to Elkin who just left a behemoth of a comment full of helpful advice and corrections. They've all been added in and appear in blue.
PSA the second: Uh, I hope you saved some babies for njt who also gave a ton of help. Translation has been edited again with his corrections and suggestions.

Hey all, I decided to try out translating this chapter ^^ I have quite a lot of questions and places I'm not sure about, so I'd really appreciate any advice, comments, or corrections you can provide! These places are marked in purple with asterisks, and will include the original Japanese above them. Thanks very much in advance. The raw can be found here.

Line break: New speech bubble or section of text within the same panel
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** Asterisked, purple lines are ones I am unsure about. Notes regarding these will also be in purple.
Blue lines are edits.


-01-
Long ago
People feared Youkai

A strange story revived for the present day!

The man standing at the head of those youkai, the one who commands the Hyakki Yakou**
[TN: literally a line of hundreds of spirits/monsters wandering around at night.]
People called that man the Supreme Commander of Youkai ––– or...

"The Grandson of Nurarihyon"

-02-03-
The Master of All Spirits
Nurarihyon
日が沈む逢魔が時
In the twilight hour, when the sun is setting
闇の淵より出づる妖(あやかし)の華
From the depths of the shadows comes the mysterious blossom

Bottom: Opening Colour, 58pages!!
Bottom, huge letters: New series

Bottom left, yellow: Shiibashi Hiroshi

Bottom left, white: Act 1: Becoming the Master of All Spirits

Right, black[title]: The Grandson of Nurarihyon

-04-
Box: A town on the Kantou Plain
Box: Ukiyoe Town

Box: In that town

Box: There's a "dissolute family", feared by people even today—
Yuki Onna: Master!
Yuki Onna: Young Master!

Yuki Onna: Oh!
Yuki Onna: That's where you were... what are you doing?

Rikuo: ..........

Yuki: Rikuo-sama?!
Yuki: Do you have a stomachache?! Wh.. what should I do...

-05-
Yuki: Eh?

Yuki: Uwaaa!

Yuki: ? ? ???

Rikuo: I did it!
Rikuo: I got the Youkai~
SFX: Ahahaha
Yuki: Ehhh? Ehhh?
Yuki: Ehhhhh?

Rikuo: So it's Yuki Onna!
Rikuo: You're as clumsy as ever!
SFX bottom: snicker
Box: Nura Rikuo, 9 years old, 3rd grade

Yuki: Wha-
Yuki: Wait! ...Master?!
SFX: ahaha

Youkai: Just how long are we gonna have to keep looking for him...

Youkai: Hey!

-06-
Youkai: Yuki Onna, what do you think you're doing?!
Yuki: Get me down!
Youkai: Who did th—

Youkai: Huh?!

Youkai: What the he----ll!!!
Youkai 2: I'm falling, I'm falling!
Youkai: We were tricked again!!

Text: Ahaha
Youkai: AH
Youkai: Just as I thought, Young Master!

Youkai: You guys!!
Youkai: Pl... Please wait, Master...

Youkai: He's just like the Commander...
Youkai: I know this was just a prank... but you went too far!!

-07-
Rikuo: And then, and then! Are you listening, Grandpa?
Rikuo: Everyone was really freaked out! Even though they're youkai!

Nurarihyon: Hahaha
Nurarihyon: That really is pathetic.
Nurarihyon: Youkai shouldn't get freaked out like that...
Box: Supreme Commander, Nurarihyon

Rikuo: Hey, so does that mean you'll hand it down to me?
Rikuo: The Emblem of The Third

Nurari: Hmmm?

Nurari: I think I'll wait a while longer... until you get a bit bigger and become more like a youkai.
Rikuo: Really?!

Rikuo: I'm gonna do my best!!
Rikuo: I'll do my best and become a great youkai Boss like Grandpa!!

-08-
Nurari: Fuhaha sounds promising.
Rikuo: But are youkai really that cool? Are they really strong?
Rikuo: They totally don't seem like it to me.

Nurari: What the heck are you saying, Rikuo!!
Nurari: Don't you know about my younger days?!
Rikuo: Tell me! Tell me!
Rikuo: I love that story!!

Text: Youkai...
Text: They use the spells of spirits, can fly around the sky, appear whenever they want, and their sword skills, martial arts, and even their appearance exceeds the imagination of normal men!!
Text: I had a hundred Youkai servants who obeyed me... night after night we ran wild
Text: Feared by humans
Text: Adored by Youkai as their Supreme Commander
Text: I was the one they called The Master of the World of Darkness!!
Rikuo: Awesome!!
Rikuo: Grandpa is so cool!

Nurari: Those guys revere me, so they're still working under me to this day.
Nurari: They're helping me out here, so don't give them any lip!
Rikuo: Yes sir!

Nurari: OK, Rikuo
Nurari: Then today again, feast your eyes on my spirit powers.

Server: Huh...?
Server: Where did those customers go?

-09-
Cook: Ahhhh they ate and ran!!
Nurari [text]: Hahahaha
Nurari: How was that, incredible right?
Nurari: That's the Eat Food For Free spell!
Rikuo: Grandpa, you're awesome!
Top text: Don't try this at home, kids!

Youkai: Rikuo-sama!
Youkai: Good morning!
Youkai: Looking well again I see!

Kubinashi: Rikuo-sama, let's get you dressed
Kubinashi: Otherwise you'll be late for school
Box: Kubinashi [TN: "no neck"]
Box: Yuki Onna [TN: "Snow Girl"]

Karasu Tengu: Oi, you lot!
Box: Karasu Tengu**
[**TN: "Crow Tengu". Tengu is a Japanese mythological creature, sometimes translated as goblin. It has black wings, and the Karasu Tengu's face looks like the beak of a crow]
Karasu: What're you doing lazing about? Aren't you gonna help with getting Master ready?!

Aotabou: Right, Master!! Let's dry your hair now that you've washed it!
Kurotabou sfx: kukukuku
Rikuo: That hurts!
Box: Aotabou
Box: Kurotabou
[TN: The –tabou in both names is identical, but Aotabou begins with blue, and Kurotabou with black]

Youkai: Master!! Here are your shoes.
Youkai: Here are your socks!
Youkai: Here's the bath for your feet!
Rikuo: Other way round!! Other way round!!
Rikuo: Seriously, come on everyone...

-10-
Rikuo: Kana-chan!

Kana: Ah! You're late, Rikuo-kun!
Kana: The bus is already here.

Kana: I said you'd be late if you keep on doing this, didn't I!
Rikuo: I know, but you see—

Rikuo: Everyone was...
Kana: Everyone?

Kid: Waaah, that house is huge!
Kid: That's Nura-kun's house? No way!

Youkai: Have a good day!
Yuki Onna: Honestly... he's just like the Commander, he loves playing tricks... he's very lively!
Kubinashi: Haha... the future looks like it'll be a lot of fun.

Kubinashi: That child will definitely take over as The Third!
Youkai: Hmmm, I wonder... even if he's the Commander's grandson...
Youkai: Could a human child truly be up to the task of heading the Nura Clan...?

-11-
Teacher: 6.9 seconds!!

Kid: Damn it... I lose again!!
SFX: *pant* *pant*
Kid: I lost to Nura!

Kid: You've gotten faster recently, Nura!!
Kid: Aren't you a little TOO good?
Kid: How is there any difference between me and you? Damnit...

Rikuo: Hehe... That's because my Grandpa is
Rikuo: The Supreme Commander of Youkai!

Kid: Youkai?

Kid: Does that mean... he's powerful?
Rikuo: He's super powerful!
Rikuo: Grandpa said so after all.
Kid: Really?

-12-
Kiyotsugu: ...And thus the child-eating, terrifying "youkai" were exterminated by the handsome, skilled onmyou swordsman.
Kiyotsugu: This happened at the local shrine, which is now said to be the Aratama Shrine today!
Kiyotsugu: The end.


Kiyotsugu: Our group collected the local legends.
SFX: Oooooooh
SFX: clap clap
Rikuo: Whoooaaa

Kid: Youkai legends are so scary!
Kid: You said they used to show up around here...
Kid: I don't like it!

Kiyotsugu: Teacher, what grade did we get?
Teacher: Full marks
Kid: As expected from Kiyotsugu-kun!
Rikuo: What?
Rikuo: W-wait a minute!! Didn't anyone find that story a little odd?

Rikuo: Youkai
Rikuo: Are good guys!

-13-
Kid: Eh?
Kid: Wh... what?
Rikuo: I mean... sure they're a bunch of dimwits...
Rikuo: But Aotabou is super strong and Yuki Onna's cooking is delicious, even if it's always cold...

Kid: Huh...? What's he going on about?
Kid: This guy's been acting weird all day...
Kid: Hey, what's your problem!!
Kid: Are you jealous of Kiyotsugu-kun's research project?
Rikuo: Huh?!

Rikuo: But it's true!!
Rikuo: I know 'cause my Grandpa's the Supreme Commander of Youkai!!

Kana: Rikuo-kun?
Kiyotsugu: Oh really!
Kiyotsugu: Then wouldn't that make your grandfather "Nurarihyon"?
Rikuo: ?!
Rikuo: That's right!!
Rikuo: You sure know a lot about him!
Rikuo: Is he that famous?

Kiyotsugu: You idiot... The one they call Nurarihyon...
Kiyotsugu: He goes into people's houses, steals their food, and purposely harasses them just to cause trouble. He's a real little scoundrel of youkai!
Kiyotsugu: What's wrong with you, talking about him like he's some sort of hero?

Kids: Whaaaat he sounds like a creep
Kids: Gross

-14-
Rikuo: ......
Kiyotsugu: Haha... but don't worry, everyone! Youkai were just made up by people a long time ago!
Kiyotsugu: There's no way they exist nowadays!
Girl: Really? Of course Kiyotsugu-kun would know!

Girl: It'd be scary if they really existed!
Text: I know, right?
Rikuo: W-wait a minute!!
Rikuo: But... but... in my house...

Girl: You're so rude, Nura!! You're really creeping me out!

ガキくさいんだよ!! きょうつぐくんのどーよこの大人な会話!!
Girl: You're so childish!! Look how mature Kiyotsugu-kun sounds when he speaks!
Girl: As if Youkai could actually exist!

Kubinashi: What's the matter, Rikuo-sama?
Kubinashi: You seem down about something.

Rikuo: Yeah
Rikuo: A little

Kubinashi: Today the Boss is having a big meeting, so cheer up.
Kubinashi: The Commander's calling you.
Rikuo: Grandpa is?

-15-
Rikuo: Wow
Rikuo: That's so cool!

Someone: The top Youkai from all over the country have gathered here.
Youkai: So today's the meeting huh...

-16-
Youkai: Come on, have a drink
Youkai 2: Sorry, I'm not drinking right now

Youkai: It's really been tough recently... humans aren't scared of Youkai at all anymore...
Youkai: Maybe we're too old-fashioned...
Youkai: By the way, that fire in Aratama Town? That was my evildoing, you know
Youkai: What? You haven't heard?
Youkai: The other day, I...
Youkai: Yeah, but...
Youkai: If you want to talk about evildoing, it's got to be Gagoze-sensei.
Youkai: Oh, Commander!

Nurari: Thanks for all your hard work.
Nurari: How's it been going for everyone recently?
Nurari: Having fun as youkai?

Youkai: Hehehe... Shinogi's been having a great time.
Youkai: By the way, Commander, why did you call us here today?

Nurari: Heh...
Nurari: I was just thinking that soon I'll have to choose someone as The Third.

-17-
Gagoze: Ohh, that's good to know.
Gagoze: It's already been a few years since The Second died... How long will the retired First go unrepresented... Surely it's painful...
ぬら組系ガゴゼ会頭領
Box:
Nura Clan, Head of the Gagoze Group
Gagoze
A man who committed evil deeds when he was alive. In the temple where he was buried after he died, during the night he became a ghost, and attacked the youngsters there. A youkai that kidnaps children and eats them.

Girl: Commander! When it comes to evildoing, there's no one who can match Lord Gagoze!
Guy: This year alone, all the child kidnappings were the work of the Gagoze group!

Gagoze: Now now, sending large numbers of children down to Hell is just my job
Girl: Ooooh, you're the ideal for youkai!! Hahaha

Daruma: Hmph...
SFX: Hahaha

Nurari: I see
Nurari: You're working as hard as ever, Gagoze...
Gagoze: Please leave it to me...

-18-
Nurari: However... it can't be you.
Nurari: Regarding the matter of The Third... I thought I'd leave it to this grandson of mine here, Rikuo.

Gagoze: ?!

Gagoze: Wh... what did you say?!
Youkai: Oh my... but Rikuo-sama is...
Youkai: But he's still a young child...
Youkai: Indeed, it's true the blood of the Commander runs through his veins, but...

Daruma: What's the matter, Gagoze?... you don't look so good.
Gagoze: Y-you're imagining things, Mokugyo.

Gagoze: ............

Rikuo: Grandpa—
Nurari: What's wrong, Rikuo... aren't you happy?
Nurari: Isn't this what you wanted?

-19-
Rikuo: Yeah
Nurari: Nothing can surpass my own blood.
Nurari: You truly resemble me, and your ancestors too. That's more than enough to acknowledge you.

Nurari: Right, let's have a vote then shall we?
Nurari: Rikuo... we'll take you as the successor!
Nurari: The 72 groups of the Nura Clan... the 10,000 organizations of Youkai... starting today, they'll be your servants!!
Rikuo: N.... no!!

Nurari: What?
Rikuo: If... if I have to be around these kind of guys from now on...
Rikuo: Everyone will just hate me even more!!

Nurari: Rikuo...?
Rikuo: I didn't know... that youkai were such horrible guys!

Rikuo: And I'm...
Rikuo: Not like you at all, Grandpa!!
Nurari: Ah!

-20-
Nurari: Hey, Rikuo!

Nurari: Rikuo...
Daruma: ......
Daruma: Commander

Daruma: Please excuse my rudeness, but is Rikuo-sama truly the inheritor of your blood...?

Box:
Nura Clan Adviser
Mokugyo Daruma

Daruma: From the very beginning, his appearance and his way of thinking have always been that of a human...

Nurari: What?
Gagoze: Heheheh... this certainly is troublesome.

Gagoze: In any case, it looks like the Young Master...
Gagoze: Is still a child who just wants to play all the time...

Someone: ........
Gagoze: Commander... these are harsh times for us.
Gagoze: Isn't it necessary once more to affirm the oath sworn on the Emblem?

-21-
Gagoze: That we... Youkai...
Gagoze: Exist only to scare humans.
Yuki Onna: Master!!
Yuki Onna: You'll catch a cold.

Rikuo: Leave me alone!!

Kubinashi: ......
Yuki Onna: Master.......

Bus: Ukiyoe Elementary School
Bus: Ukiyoe Elementary School

Kiyotsugu: What's the matter, not riding with us, Youkai-kun?!
Kid: Don't! If we let him ride with us...

Kid: We might get attacked by youkai?!
Kid: That reminds me, his house is really old and falling to pieces, isn't it?
Kiyotsugu: A Youkai Mansion? It suits him perfectly!

SFX: Ahahahaha

-22-
Kana: Jeez!!
Kana: What are you whimpering about!!

Rikuo: Oww
Kana: The next one doesn't come for 30 minutes!
Kana: Just ignore those guys! Let's get on!

Rikuo: It's fine!
Rikuo: I'm not good enough to ride together with you guys anyway.

Kana: Why?!
Kana: Because you're a liar?
Rikuo: Wrong!!
Text: That's not true!
Rikuo: It's because I'm pathetic!!

Kana: What do you mean...
Rikuo: I used to think... youkai were a lot cooler...

Rikuo: But... all they do is sneak around doing bad stuff.
Rikuo: They're not heroes or anything... they're just losers, all of them...
Rikuo: And...
Rikuo: I was just copying Grandpa, who's just like them.

Kana: I don't really get it, but...
Kana: Rikuo-kun
Kana: You aren't pathetic at all. What's wrong with wanting to be someone like that?

-23-
Rikuo: .......
Rikuo: Huh?

Kana: On the bus that time... you told me you were late because of your clumsy servants, didn't you?
Kana: If you really live in a huge house like that... then you could be telling the truth!
Kana: If that's the case... then if you become a great person standing over them, that's fine, right?

Rikuo: A great... person?
Kana: That's right! So... you really should just drop the act.
Kana: Saying those servants are youkai and stuff.

Rikuo: So basically
Rikuo: That means you don't believe!!
Kana: Because otherwise it'd be scary!!
Kana: Youkai... they're monsters, aren't they?!

Rikuo: Scary?

Kana: I mean, if you showed them to me then I'd believe you...
Kana: But really I wouldn't wanna see that kind of stuff at all!

Rikuo: Hmm... people really do hate youkai...
Rikuo: I won't talk about them ever again.

-24-
Kana: ......
SFX: Wow, cool!
SFX: Hahahaha

Kana: I guess it was useless.
Kana: How does he think he's gonna get home anyway, that Rikuo-kun...
Girl: What? Thinking about Nura-kun?

Girl: Hey, so this isn't about Nura-kun, but that legend... apparently it's still going on today!
Kana: Huh? What do you mean?
Girl: Well, you know youkai?

Girl: A bunch of kids have been kidnapped!
Girl: Right. Around. Here.
Kana: K-knock it off...
Kiyotsugu: Oi!! You girls!!
Kiyotsugu: Stop right there!!

Kiyotsugu: Youkai don't actually exist!! In my research, I...

-25-
Kids: Kyaaaaa!!

-26-
SFX: rattle

Youkai: No doubt about it.
Youkai: That should be the bus the Young Master was riding in.

-27-
Karasu Tengu: Honestly, Rikuo-sama
Karasu Tengu: It's a good thing I came to find you after being worried you were taking so long to come home.

SFX top: flap flap
Karasu Tengu: Having to walk so far to get home...
Karasu Tengu: From now on, even if you aren't happy about it, I'll definitely be accompanying you.
Rikuo: ......

Rikuo: Say, Karasu Tengu
Rikuo: Am I... human?
Karasu Tengu: Eh?

Karasu Tengu: Well, yes...
Karasu Tengu: Since both your mother and your grandmother were human.
Rikuo: Yeah, you're right!
Karasu Tengu: But still, with the blood of the Commander...

Karasu Tengu: Of course... that makes up a quarter in you.
Rikuo: A... A whole quarter?
Karasu Tengu: That's right.

Karasu Tengu: So it would be good if you were a little more imposing.
Rikuo: .................

-28-
Yuki Onna: Ah!
Yuki Onna: H-he brought him back!!
Youkai: Master!! You were alright!

Karasu Tengu: ?
Karasu Tengu: What's wrong? Why's everyone out here?
Yuki Onna: Because... Because!...

TV: Breaking news!! After a cave-in accident near a tunnel in Ukiyoe Town... a route bus has been "buried alive".
TV: According to reports, a large number of Ukiyoe Primary School children were riding in this bus...

Rikuo: ?!

Rikuo: Huh...? Why did the bus...?!
Nurari: Oh, Rikuo, you're home...
Nurari: You really do have pretty bad luck.

-29-
Youkai: Rikuo-sama has returned!
Youkai: So it was true.
Youkai: So you weren't really dead?
Youkai: Thank goodness!

Kana: The next one doesn't come for 30 minutes!
Kana: Just ignore those guys! Let's get on!
SFX: thump thump

SFx/Text: Waaaaah Waaaaaaaah
Aotabou: Rikuo-samaaaaaaaaaa!! I was soooooo worried!!
Kurotabou: I was a lot more worried than you, Ao!!

Aotabou: Are you okay?!
Aotabou: Oi, bring some hot water!!
Aotabou: What a shock!

Rikuo: I... have to go save her.

Youkai: Now where are you going, so late in the day?!
Rikuo: Someone get my shoes!!
Rikuo: Isn't it obvious?!

-30-
Rikuo: I'm going to save Kana-chan!!
Rikuo: Please come with me!! Aotabou!! Kurotabou!!
Rikuo: Everyone!

Kurotabou: Y-yes sir!
Mokugyo: Wait!!

Youkai: Lord Mokugyo Daruma...?
Mokugyo: You cannot do this...
Mokugyo: Going off to help humans... it's preposterous!!

Rikuo: Huh?!
Aotabou: Wh... Why...?

Mokugyo: Do you think we youkai can just obey you with such ideas?!

Mokugyo: We are the headquarters of the youkai world... the Nura Clan!!
Mokugyo: As if I'd put up with you leading out an army of demons on a whim!

-31-
Aotabou: Lord Daruma! Young Master is our leader!
Aotabou: There's a limit to disrespect!

Mokugyo: Disrespect?
Mokugyo: Hmph... do you have any idea of the meaning of "Fear" on the Nura Clan's emblem?
Mokugyo: Youkai are beings that inspire fear in humans.
Mokugyo: For us to help humans... it's absurd!!

Aotabou: You asshole!
Youkai: Aotabou?!

Youkai: Uwaaa they're fighting!
Youkai: Aotabou and Lord Daruma... what should we do?!

Rikuo: Would...
Rikuo: WOULD YOU JUST STOP!!

-32-
Rikuo: There's no time for this!
Rikuo: I don't wanna hear your ridiculous theories!
Rikuo: Mokugyo Daruma

Mokugyo: ?

Rikuo: So...
Rikuo: Everyone...
Youkai: Master...?
Youkai: Master's face... it's...
Youkai: h-hey...
Youkai [small bubble]: Huh?

Rikuo: If it won't work...
Rikuo: "Because I'm human"....

Youkai: ?!

Rikuo: Then if I'm a youkai
Rikuo: There's no problem with me leading you guys out, right?

-33-
Rikuo: If that's the case... I'll just stop being human!

Mokugyo: What...
Text: What 's going on?! That's...

Text: Those eyes...
Text: They're different from the person before.

Rikuo: Don't follow me.

Mokugyo: Master?! Please wait!
Kubinashi: Lord Mokugyo Daruma...

Mokugyo: I'm busy right now! Ask me later...

-34-
Kubinashi: The fact that the bus Rikuo-sama was supposed to be on was in an accident could mean...
Kubinashi: ...that he's being targeted by someone...
Kubinashi: If it was by any chance... an assassin...

Aotabou: Master!!
Aotabou: Us lot from the main house will follow you!
Kurotabou: I at least had that intention from the beginning!

SFX: sip

Rikuo: Tonight it almost feels like...
Rikuo: My blood is... is on fire...

Karasu Tengu: You said it yourself, Rikuo-sama
Karasu Tengu: That's the blood of the youkai

Rikuo: Blood?
Karasu: It is your grandfather's blood.

Karasu Tengu: It's fine for Rikuo-sama to lead us out

Karasu Tengu: Because

-35-
Karasu Tengu: A quarter of the blood running through your veins...
Karasu Tengu: ...is Nurarihyon's blood!!

-36-
Police: Please stand back!
Crowd, top: No!
Crowd, top: Takahiro!!
Police: There's a risk of a second cave-in.

Woman: It doesn't make sense!!
Woman: Nothing here was in danger of collapsing at all...
Woman: There's got to be a mistake!

Woman: I have to save my son—
Woman: Where's the rescue team?!

Boy: Mama...
Woman: Huh? What is it?

Youkai: Oi, send more people over here!
Youkai: It's weaker here!

-37-
SFX: click

Kid: It hurts...
Kid: Mommy...
Kid: Everyone, don't worry...
Kid: Just hang in there.

Kana: Kyaa!!
Kiyotsugu: I-Ienaga-kun?
Kiyotsugu: Why are you scared?

Kana: B-Because...
Kana: There's...
Kana: People lined up over there...

Kiyotsugu: People?

Kiyotsugu: D-Do they look a little... strange to you...?
Kana: Kiyotsugu-kun... what are they...?
Kiyotsugu: Uh... b-beats me....

Youkai: Ch...
Youkai: There are so many still alive.

-38-
Kids: Hiieee?!
Kids: Wh-Who are you?

Gagoze: Looks like the tunnel didn't collapse completely...
Gagoze: Oh well, I suppose we'll just have to... slaughter everyone.

Gagoze: Children
Gagoze: A whole group of them.
Gagoze (same bubble, small text): Heheh

Kids: Hiiee...
Gagoze: Ahhh...
Gagoze: Over there...
Youkai: !!

Kiyotsugu: You—
Kiyotsugu: Youkai........

-39-40-
Kids: AHHHHHHHHHHH
Kids: AHHHHHH

Kiyotsugu: Hiieeeee Hiieeeee
Kiyotsugu: Haaaaa Haaaaaa

Kiyotsugu: AHHHHHHH

Gagoze: ?!

Kids: ?!

Aotabou: Oho... we found them, Master!
Aotabou: Looks like they're alive!

-41-42-
[41: no text]

Rikuo: ...Gagoze
Rikuo: What are you doing here?

Youkai: Ga...
Youkai: Gagoze-sama...
Gagoze: ......

Gagoze: Those fools from the main house...

Kana: Wh-What now?!
Kid: This can't... there's no way...
Kid: What the hell is this, Kiyotsugu-kun?!?!

Kiyotsugu: I...
Kiyotsugu: I don't know...

Kiyotsugu: There must be...
Kiyotsugu: Some mistake...!

-43-
Youkai: There there, everything's fine now!
Rikuo: Stop that.
Rikuo: You guys are scary looking.

Youkai: Y... yes Master...
Kiyotsugu: ..............

Rikuo: I'm glad you're safe.
Rikuo: Kana-chan
Rikuo: You should close your eyes, this'll be scary.

Kana: ...?
Kana: Who is that?

-44-
Gagoze: Well, well, if it isn't Lord Mokugyo Daruma...
Mokugyo: Don't feign ignorance!
Mokugyo: Do you have any idea what you've done?!

Gagoze: ............
Gagoze: Dear me
Gagoze: I was... just attacking these human children here...
Gagoze: That's all, but...

Mokugyo: !

Gagoze: There... shouldn’t be any problem here, right?
Mokugyo: Ga... Gagoze!!

Rikuo: You think you're some kind of big-shot, killing children?
Gagoze: ?!
Rikuo: You wanted to eliminate me
Rikuo: And take the position of The Third for yourself...

Rikuo: Gagoze
Rikuo: You really are a pitiful little bastard of a youkai.

Youkai: What was that, asshole?!
Someone: ?!
Mokugyo: Wait... that person is...

-45-
Youkai: !
Kubinashi: Don't take one step closer to Rikuo-sama!
Kubinashi: You foul corpse of the Gagoze group!

Youkai: Why you—

Youkai: !

Youkai: Wha—?!

絡新婦(じょろうぐも)の糸と毛倡妓(けじょうろう)の髪をよってあわせた特製の糸だ
Kubinashi: This is a special thread made by combining the thread of Jorougumo** and the hair of Kejourou**...
[** TN: These are both Youkai which take the form of beautiful women. Jorougumo (絡新婦) seduce men with their long hair and biwa music, and lure them into spider webs so that they can eat them. Kejourou (毛倡妓) look like young women with long, straight hair which covers their face.]
Kubinashi: If you move, you'll die instantly!

Youkai: Don't underestimate me!

Youkai: AHHH

-46-
Gagoze: What...
Youkai: These guys...
Gagoze: Did you say... that person is Rikuo?

Gagoze: So you were alive!
Gagoze: C... Curse you

Gagoze: Damn it! Kill him!!
Gagoze: Kill the Master here!

Gagoze: Along with all those pathetic, weak-willed wretches from the main house!!
Gagoze: Annihilate them!!

Kurotabou: Master!

Aotabou: All this grunt work –

-47-
Aotabou: Just leave it to me, Assault Officer Aotabou!!
Kurotabou: Asshole, you're not the only Assault Officer here!

Gagoze: How...

SFX [Yuki Onna]: Whooosh

Gagoze: This can't be happening...
Gagoze: How is... my clan... being defeated...
Gagoze: We've killed more than anyone here...
Gagoze: We're the strongest fighting force...

-48-
Youkai: Gagoze, you say you want to be the master of the youkai
Youkai: Because you've killed countless numbers of humans... don't you have any pride?

Gagoze: What...
Aotabou: Give it up
この企み。。。指つめどころじゃすまされんぜ
Aotabou: This scheme of yours... even cutting your fingers won't atone for this

Gagoze: Gah...
Gagoze: Hm?

Kurotabou: ?! What—
Gagoze: Bwhahahaha Just watch me!!

Gagoze: Should I rip these ones to shreds?!
Gagoze: They're the Master's friends, aren't they? If you don't want me to kill them, then you better start listening to me—

-49-
Gagoze: Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiieee

Karasu Tengu: Master?!

Gagoze: How... How... How could I be beaten by a little brat like you...
Gagoze: Wh... What... do you have... that I don't...?!

Gagoze: When among all the youkai...
Gagoze: I'm the most feared of all!

Rikuo: A child-devouring youkai...
Rikuo: That truly is fearsome

-50-
Rikuo: However... one that preys on the weak and kills them, then becomes bloated with self-satisfaction

Rikuo: In this world of darkness
Rikuo: That youkai is the least fearsome creature of all.

Gagoze: !!

Rikuo: It's deplorable...
Rikuo: That such a foolish creature would be among the ranks of my Youkai servants!
Rikuo: Therefore!

Rikuo: I will take on the position of The Third!!
人にあだなすような奴ぁ オレが絶対ゆるさねえ
** Rikuo: I'll never forgive
** Rikuo: Anyone who is the enemy of humans!

Youkai: Master...
Gagoze: Hiieee... stop...

Rikuo: Tell the youkai of the world
Rikuo: I'm going to become the Lord of All Evil Spirits!!

-51-
Rikuo: Every single youkai
Rikuo: Will join the Hyakki Yakou at my back to prowl the night

-52-
Gagoze: Gah...

[****About the upcoming panels: Right, I am extremely shaky on this section. It goes into shades of meaning in vocab and kanji, which I am not strong on. I'd really appreciate it if someone would check this page (52) in particular.]
「畏れ」―――
Text: "Fear" –––

(MIDDLE PANEL)
その文字は―― 普通ではない者―― 「鬼」が
Text: That word is made up of the character for "Oni**"
[TN: Oni is often translated as demon, or ogre.]


「ト」(reading next to this: ムチ. It may not even be ト, but it looks like it)を持つ という意味の字
Text: And the character for the "stick" they held

それはすなわち
Text: That is to say—

(BOTTOM RIGHT PANEL)
未知なるものへの〝感情〝 ――
Text: Feelings towards things as of yet unknown

「妖怪」そのものを表す――
Text: The word "Youkai" expresses that —

(BOTTOM CENTRE PANEL)
ガゴゼのような悪行も「恐れ」――
Text: That "terror" inspired by the evil deeds of Gagoze

巨大なモノに対する「聳れ」―― 
Text: That "towering" feeling when facing huge creatures

脅迫に対する「怕れ」――
Text: That "fear" when facing threats

支配におびえるのも「懾れ」――
Text: That "intimidation" when in fear of being controlled

(BOTTOM LEFT PANEL)
だが―― それは妖怪の一面に過ぎない
Text: However – these words will not suffice for describing youkai

-53-
Kids: Wow... and yet he's so short...
Kids: He's so cool...
Kids: So youkai... really do exist... they really are that amazing...

Mokugyo: I... I knew the truth... but I never realized it until now.
Text: The Master of the World of Darkness...

Text: Can even overcome people with the feeling of awe.
Text: He is the one truly clad in fear.

Mokugyo: ....?
Mokugyo: Rikuo-sama...?

-54-
Yuki Onna: Wh... What's wrong?
Karasu Tengu: ?!
Aotabou: No... he just collapsed all of a sudden...
Aotabou: Don't tell me he was hit?!

Youkai: Master!

Mokugyo: ......
Mokugyo: He's...
Mokugyo: Returning to his human form...?

Youkai: No way...
Youkai: So because his blood is only one fourth youkai
Youkai: He can only be a youkai...
Youkai: For a quarter of each day...?


Karasu Tengu: Huhhhhhhh?! What did you say?!
SFX/BG: Ehhhhhhhh?
Aotabou: Th-That means...
Youkai: What's going on?!

Youkai: Master!!!

-55-
Textbox: A few years later...

Nurari: ......
Nurari: So it's no use this year either, huh...

Youkai: It's just not possible...
Nurari: Well then
Nurari: Even though I summoned you all here until early morning
Nurari: Yet again, at this meeting too, that means...

Nurari: Nura Rikuo-sama's accession to the position of The Third is to be postponed...

Nurari: Grrrr
Nurari: Not even one person would agree to it...
Mokugyo: It can't be helped, Commander.
Mokugyo: Master in his normal form

Mokugyo: Looks like that.

-56-
Box:
Nura Rikuo
12 years old, 7th grade

Rikuo: Mother
Rikuo: I'll be going now!

Mother: Oh, you're leaving early today, Rikuo!
Mother: I haven't made your lunch yet!
Rikuo: That's alright... I'll just buy something today

Aotabou: Ah, Master!!
Aotabou: Gooood mooorniiing!!
Aotabou: I'll start getting things ready—
Rikuo: Morning!

Rikuo: Don't worry about it!
Rikuo: I did it myself!

Nurari: Why is it... that he hasn't transformed since that night...
Mokugyo: That night, I thought he would become a splendid youkai, but...
Rikuo: Oh!
Rikuo: Grandfather, another meeting?

Nurari: Uh... yeah...
Rikuo: That won't do!
Rikuo: You mustn't do evil deeds all the time!
Rikuo: You shouldn't trouble the neighbourhood!

Rikuo: Right!
Rikuo: I'm off to school now!

Mokugyo: Hmmm, in fact...
Mokugyo: I get the feeling he's becoming a splendid human instead...

-57-58-
Mokugyo: Well, it's not like we can do very much during the afternoon anyway
Mokugyo: However... once night falls...

Text: Siiiiiigh
Nurari: How long do I have to stay the Supreme Commander?
Nurari: I just want to retire soon and enjoy life comfortably...

Nurari: When will he take on the position of The Third?!

Rikuo: See you later!!
Mokugyo: Ah well, who knows...?

Text: He's human, and sometimes Youkai?! The curtain opens on a tale full of ups and downs!!

The Grandson of Nurarihyon
Act 1
The End

Notes
  1. I am overwhelmingly grateful to Elkin and njt over at MangaHelpers for the invaluable help with the translation. They both deserve your babies, hand them over.
  2. Most information on the various Youkai was found on the Japanese Wikipedia, in particular [url=http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%97%A5%E6%9C%AC%E3%81%AE%E5%A6%96%E6%80%AA%E3%81%AE%E4%B8%80%E8%A6%A7]http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%97%A5%E6%9C%AC%E3%81%AE%E5%A6%96%E6%80%AA%E3%81%AE%E4%B8%80%E8%A6%A7 this page (or search 日本の妖怪一覧 ).

  3. A few phrases were matched to those used by shrimpy in his translation of the oneshot from last year, such as (Young) Master, (Supreme) Commander, Lord of All Spirits Everywhere, etc.

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#1. by Elkin ()
Posted on Mar 12, 2008
Ahh thanks for translating! This is a massive chapter and I'm kinda busy right now, so I'll stop translating and help you with yours :)

Some suggestions, if you don't mind:

Quote:
日が沈む逢魔が時

When the sun is setting, in the twilight hour/time

Quote:
妖(あやかし)の華
Something like "the mysterious unfold/blossom". Probably has double meaning of a) strange things happen and b) ayakashi (supernatural beings/ghosts) become active :)

Quote:
Kyotsugu
Maybe Kiyotsugu? Because his name is 清継.

Quote:
-page 12-
Kyotsugu: That used to be at the Chinja Shrine, but this is said to be today's Shrine! That's all.

鎮社 is sort of like the 'town/local shrine', while '?神社' is the '<Town name> Shinto shrine'. Also, maybe the sentence as follows?
'This happened at the local shrine, which is now said to be the <Town> shrine today! The end.'

Quote:
-page 14-
ガキくさいんだよ!! きょうつぐくんのどーよこの大人な会話!!

You're just like a kid/brat! See how maturely Kiyotsugu-kun speaks??

Quote:
-page 15-
Someone: A huge number of Youkai from all over the country have gathered here

All the big-shot youkai in the country have gathered here

Quote:

-page 17-
ぬら組系ガゴゼ会頭領
**Box:
Nura Clan, Head of the Gagoze Group
Gagoze
A man who committed evil deeds when he was alive. In the temple where he was buried after he died, during the night he became a ghost, and scared the youngsters there. A Youkai that kidnaps children and eats them.

Maybe the group is under the Nura clan? Also, it should be 'attacked youngsters' rather than 'scared'.

Quote:
-page 17-
Gagoze: Now now, that's only because I sent large numbers of children down to Hell when I was alive

Gagoze: Now, now... sending large numbers of children to Hell is just my job

Quote:
-page 17-
あいかわらず現設(げんえき)バリバリじゃのう ガゴゼ。。。
** Nurari: You're working as hard as ever during the current battle, Gagoze...

現設 is 'active duty/service', so perhaps remove 'during the current battle'?

Quote:
-page 18-
Nurari: In the matter of The Third.

Sounds a little clunky... Try 'About/regarding the (matter of the) Third'?

Quote:
-page 20-
今一度。。。代紋に立てた誓いを確認すべきではありますまいか
** Gagoze: Isn't it necessary once more to affirm the oath sworn on the Emblem?

Looks all right to me :)

Quote:
-21-
Gagoze: That we... Youkai...
Gagoze: Must exist to scare humans

Rather than 'must exist', probably 'exist only to 'scare humans''.

Quote:
Kana: What are you standing around whimpering for!!
What's there to whimper about!!/What're you whimpering about!!

Quote:
-page 23-
Kana: But otherwise it'd be scary!!

Because, otherwise it'd be scary!! (sorry, nitpicking here...)

Quote:
-page 24-
Girl: A bunch of kids have been kidnapped! Right. Near. Here.

Right around here?

Quote:
-page 29-
誰かっ はきものを!!
** Rikuo: Someone get my shoes!! Isn't it obvious?!
[TN: hakimono = footwear? It just seemed a weird placement for the bubble when he's already running outside...]

It's to do with the Japanese custom of outdoor/indoor shoes/slippers.

Quote:
-page 31-
Mokugyo: Youkai are beings that force humans to harbour fear. For us to help humans... it's absurd!!

Youkai are beings that inspire fear in humans.

Quote:
Youkai: Man...
ち is more of a tsking sound.

Quote:
若
** Gagoze: Children
[i'm assuming he's addressing the trapped kids, not randomly using the term若they've had throughout this chapter for (Young) Master?]
Gagoze: Gather round

Probably, but I don't think もろとも is a verb. I think he's saying 'children... a group of them huh'

Quote:
-page 44
Rikuo: If you want to ignore me... and take the position of The Third for yourself...

Eliminate me... so you can take the position of The Third for yourself

Quote:
この企み。。。指つめどころじゃすまされんぜ
** Aotabou: This scheme of yours... you won't achieve it with just your claws
[i know, this sounds pretty ridiculous. I can't gauge the sense here... maybe you can't solve everything with mindless slaughter? The SFX that accompanies Gagoze, jiri jiri, almost seems like his claws grinding together. So I'm not sure ._.]

Yubitsume (指つめ): it's a yakuza finger-cutting ritual to atone for sins. So it's "This scheme of yours... even cutting your fingers won't atone for this/settle this".

Quote:
-page 50-
人にあだなすような奴ぁ オレが絶対ゆるさねえ
** Rikuo: I'll never forgive anyone that seeks to harm humans!
[あだなす hard for me to convey. Yahoo dictionary had 敵対したり害を与えたりする。あだをなす。Harm doesn't seem quite strong enough... maybe prey on?]

Nn antagonises? Or 'I'll never forgive anyone who is the enemy of humans!'?

Quote:
-51-
Rikuo: Every single Youkai
Rikuo: Will join the swarm of demons at my back to prowl the night

Maybe use 'Hyakki Yakou' or some form of translation? Seems like quite an important concept in this manga.

Quote:
その文字は―― 普通ではない者―― 「鬼」が
Text: The characters in that word are not used for normal creatures
「ト」(reading next to this: ムチ. It may not even be ト, but it looks like it)を持つ という意味の字

"This character is made up of-- 'ghost'--- supernatural creatures
and the 'stick' they held. Such was the meaning of this character."
The mangaka is referring to the original writing of the word... click here

Quote:
ガゴゼのような悪行も「恐れ」――
The evil deeds of Gagoze can be described by the word "Fear"

巨大なモノに対する「おそれ」―― 
[the kanji here, I THINK, is 聳れ. Though the top part appears more like 従 on things like JWPce. But not sure at all, the scan is hard to read]
Text: For huge beings, we can say they tower over us, instilling fear

脅迫に対する「怕れ」(reading given:おそれ)――
Text: For things which are threatening, we can say they loom over us and cause terror

支配におびえるのも「懾れ」(reading given:おそれ)――
Text: For those who are afraid of being controlled, we can also say they possess fear

Yes, you got the kanji right :) But not quite the meanings of each ‘osore’
ガゴゼのような悪行も「恐れ」- inspired by the evil acts of Gagoze, that ‘terror’
巨大なモノに対する「聳れ」- when faced with huge creatures, that 'towering' feeling (feeling of majesty? looming feeling? hard one to find an appropriate word for =/)
脅迫に対する「怕れ」- when faced with threats, that feeling of 'fear'
支配におびえるのも「懾れ」- when in fear of power, that ‘intimidation’

Quote:
-page 53-
Text: The lord of the world of shadows...

Maybe keep to 'The Master of the World of Darkness' for consistency? Like in the beginning of the chapter.

Also, I think you missed out some text on page 6?

*worn out* Er, I wrote more than I thought I did haha... Hope it's helpful.
#2. by biotech_vertigo ()
Posted on Mar 12, 2008
Wow....loooooong.........

Thanks so much for the hard work Niphredil and Elkin!
#3. by niphredil ()
Posted on Mar 12, 2008
Elkin, you are a god *_* I have only briefly read through these so far but let me just say thank you SO much for all that work, holy crap. I can't tell you how grateful I am! In a little while I'll go through and rework the translation and reply properly.
[hr]
Okay so I think it's safe to say you have my undying love for all the work you put into checking the translation. And I just realised you're the one doing the Baccano translations... so here's where I start fangirling as well as thanking you.

Ahem. Anyway.

Quote:
Maybe Kiyotsugu? Because his name is 清継.
*facepalm* I totally misread that the... 50 times it shows up in the chapter :x

Quote:
Yubitsume (指つめ): it's a yakuza finger-cutting ritual to atone for sins.
Oooh, I'd never heard of that. Thanks ^^


Quote:
The mangaka is referring to the original writing of the word... click here

:O I thank you for the link... that site is addictive and fantastic.

Quote:
Yes, you got the kanji right :) But not quite the meanings of each ‘osore’
ガゴゼのような悪行も「恐れ」- inspired by the evil acts of Gagoze, that ‘terror’
巨大なモノに対する「聳れ」- when faced with huge creatures, that 'towering' feeling (feeling of majesty? looming feeling? hard one to find an appropriate word for =/)
脅迫に対する「怕れ」- when faced with threats, that feeling of 'fear'
支配におびえるのも「懾れ」- when in fear of power, that ‘intimidation’


I said it before, but... you're a god. This stuff makes so much more sense now. I've edited according to your corrections and suggestions, and will keep a note of credit/thanks in the notes section. If you want it to appear any way other than how it is there, let me know <3

Again, thank you, you're brilliant.
#4. by Elkin ()
Posted on Mar 12, 2008
You give me too much credit! I realised I made quite a few mistakes in my own translation when I read through yours, which is why I threw in the towel XD Still got a long way to go...

And thank you for your translations! Really thankful you're translating Fairy Tail and especially Tegami Bachi, so we can enjoy the beautiful series :D
#5. by jaimacando ()
Posted on Mar 12, 2008
thanks to both of you for your hard work!
#6. by noob3d ()
Posted on Mar 13, 2008
whoa thats fast :amuse I guess I have to speed up cleaning the raws then.I'll credit both of you(Elkin & niphredil) once I release it in next week(if I can work fast enough:darn) Thanks for the hard work:)

Update:After doing 50% of the chapter,I am not happy with the quality of the editing thus I am delaying the release of chapter 1A until further notice.I have sought help and I expect to be back on track in a few days.
#7. by bunshindattebayo ()
Posted on Mar 14, 2008
Thanks for your translation,Niphredil.:amuse

*waiting for scanlation with excitement and patience*
#8. by Koen (Celestial Belgian)
Posted on Mar 15, 2008
now I hope someone will do a scanlation
#9. by  ()
Posted on Mar 15, 2008
Awesome work, Niph, thanks ;)
#10. by njt (Last Boss ♪~( ̄。 ̄))
Posted on Mar 15, 2008
I put my edits in ( ) after your original dialogue :D... I also didn't finish it so yeah, will come back to it tomorrow :3. (also i did put in a lot of just suggestions as opposed to corrections :p, just letting you know there are other ways to say it :) ) -- on second thought seeing it posted, maybe i should use quotes instead >.> I'll do that next update :p

Quote:
People called that man the Supreme Commander of Youkai ––– or...

"The Grandson of Nurarihyon"

-02-03-
The Master of All Spirits
Nurarihyon

Not sure if you noticed this or not, but the --or... ties into the "The mater of all spirits" thing you have here but you forgot the trailing "と" so my take would be

People called that man the Supreme Commander of Youkai ––– or by his other name...

The master of all spirits, Nurarihyon and

his grandson (if you want to keep it with the original title here too, it'd work)

==

Rikuo: I did it! Youkai Get~ (I know it says this, but does it work in English? :p)

-06-
Youkai: Yuki Onna, what do you think you're doing?! (Why are you like that?!)

-07-
Rikuo: Everyone was really surprised!(I think "Freaked out" would fit that better :D )

Nurarihyon: Hahaha a masterpiece indeed (Hmmm I think a better word for Kessaku would fit this, "Laughable / funny / silly" since the following statement is...)
Nurarihyon: Youkai really shouldn't be getting scared like that...(change to freaked out (if changed above :p))

Rikuo: I'm gonna do my best!! (could also use "I'll try real hard" -- that just sounds too japanese... :p)

Rikuo: I'll do my best and become a great Youkai Don** like Grandpa!!
[**TN: Don = Leader, Boss] (I think something like this wouldn't really need a TN, instead just writing Youkai Boss / leader would work better, no?)

-08-
Nurari: Fuhaha I look forward to it (not tanoshimi, but tanomoshii so- " sounds promising"

So don't you ever complain about me looking after you! (They're helping me out here, so don't give them any lip!"

Server: There was a customer here? (Where did those customers go?)

Youkai: You look well today too! (Looking well again I see-- my version :p)

Karasu: What're you doing lazing about? Aren't you gonna help with getting Master ready?! (You dare not pay your dues by helping the master get ready?!)

Kana: I said you'd be late if you keep on doing this, didn't I! (I already told you, If you missed the bus you'd be late, didn't I?!)

Kubinashi: Haha... it's going to be a lot of fun in the future (Haha... the future looks like it'll be fun)

Kid: Damn it... I lose again!! (Darn it...)

Kid: How is there any difference between me and you? Damnit... (Darn it-- do most 3rd graders say damn?)

Kid: Does that mean... he's powerful? (I'd use "great" here
Rikuo: He's really powerful! Grandpa said so after all (same)

-12-
Kiyotsugu: ...And thus the child-eating, terrifying "Youkai" were exterminated by the skilled and handsomeonmyou swordsman
Kiyotsugu: This happened at the local shrine, which is now said to be the [Town] Shrine today! The end. (added red area :) )

Kid: Youkai legends are so scary!
Kid: You said they used to come out around here... I don't like it!

Kiyotsugu: Teacher, what grade did we get?
Teacher: Full marks
Kid: As expected from Kiyotsugu-kun! (That's Kiyotsugu-kun for ya (just my take :p))

Rikuo: What? (ugh/huh/eh?)
Rikuo: W-wait a minute!! Wasn't that story just now a little odd? (Didn't anyone find that story a little odd?)

-13-
Kid: Eh?
Kid: Wh... what?
Rikuo: I mean... sure they're really clumsy... (I mean... sure they're a bunch of dimwits)
Rikuo: But Aotabou is super strong and Yuki Onna's cooking is delicious, even if it's always cold (Yuki Onna's cooking is cold but delicious)

Kid: Huh...? What's this kid going on about? (what's he going on about)
Kid: This guy's always been a bit weird... (This guy's been acting weird all day)

Rikuo: You sure know a lot about him?! Is he famous? (I'm surprised you know that! Is he famous?)

Kiyotsugu: You idiot... The one they call Nurarihyon
Kiyotsugu: He goes into people's houses, steals their food, and purposely harasses them just to cause trouble. He's a real little scoundrel of Youkai! What's wrong with you, talking about him like he's some sort of hero?


===================================
It's ummm late, er well early 8am >.> so I'll go to bed now and finish this tomorrow :D. But awesome job :D really~
#11. by janu_onliners ()
Posted on Mar 16, 2008
Thx for the translation!
#12. by TheGenius ()
Posted on Mar 19, 2008
There is no scans out right?
#13. by niphredil ()
Posted on Mar 23, 2008
Quote by njt;769617:
I put my edits in ( ) after your original dialogue :D... I also didn't finish it so yeah, will come back to it tomorrow :3. (also i did put in a lot of just suggestions as opposed to corrections :p, just letting you know there are other ways to say it :) ) -- on second thought seeing it posted, maybe i should use quotes instead >.> I'll do that next update :p
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whoa, I definitely didn't get a notification about these last 3 replies -___-; njt, thank you so much for the corrections and advice, I really appreciate them. This chapter was really hard for me and I hope I can learn a lot from my mistakes, especially after all the wonderful help I've received. I've added in the edits, finally~

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