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Vagabond 209

Vagabond Ch. 209 Translated

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+ posted by zindryr as translation on Jun 28, 2006 17:41 | Go to Vagabond

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Latest chapter of Vagabond, translated by me. Feel free to use it in a scanlation or whatever, just so long as you give me credit for the translations. A link to my team's site Bakafish www.bakakage.net would be nice.

Page 00
あれは理だった
That was the Way.2

あの頃の俺は理に出会っていた
I found the Way back then as well.

こいつを見て分かった
Looking at him, I finally understood it.

あいて!
Ouch!

Page 01-02
アー
Ahh.

失ったものが、そこにある。
What he had lost lay right in front of him.
#209|回り道
#209 | The Long Road1

この野郎
You bastard...

Page 03
アー、アー
Ahh, ahh.

こいつは理の中にいる
He's in the midst of the Way.

Page 04
いて
Ow!

俺もそうだったはず
I should have been as well.

なぜ回り道をした?
Why did I take the long road?

ういて!
Agh!

なぜあのまま、まっすぐに来れなかった?
Why couldn't I just come straight to this point from the beginning?

この野郎!
Bastard!

Page 05
木も
The trees,

風も
The wind,

大地も
The earth,

ひとつのもの
They're all one.

そうだった
That's right.

刀が教えてくれるんだった
My katana would teach me.

Page 06
軽い
It's so light...

難しいぞ
This won't be easy.

でも
But...

この棒きれですら教えてくれるはず
Even this stick should be able to teach me.

耳を澄ますように
I just need to listen carefully...

Page 07
体を手放せ
Release my body.

Page 08
アー
Ahh.

この野郎!
Damn you!

いいとこで!
I was almost there!

アー
Ahh.

ぶらぶら
Swaying...

おう来た、これだ
Ah, this is it, I'm here.

指先にひっかかる
My fingertips are being pulled...

棒切れの確かな重み
By the weight of this stick.

Page 09-10
アウア
Auah.

アウアウア
Auauah.

うあ
Wha...

何か
I...

笑いが止まらねえ
I can't stop smiling.

回り道をしたのは何故だ?
Why did I take the long road here?

Page 11
もさ・・・
*grip*

Page 12
It was just by chance.

Page 13-14
たまたま勝ってきたに過ぎない
I fought through all of that by chance.

何が俺を理から遠ざけた?
What took me from the Way?

Page 15
違う
Not him...

違う
Not her...

違う
Nor her...

Page 16
俺・・・?
I did...?

Page 17
はっ
Huh?

Page 18
No text.

Page 19
すまねえ
Sorry.

アー
Aah.

「バガボンド」#210は次号第31号に登場!
Vagabond #210 will appear in Issue #31!


End.



1I feel that's a better translation than detour, though I used the word detour in the previous chapter. For consistency we may need to use "detour" here.
2Sorry I'm making changes to things midway through, but I'm finding better


Gah, sorry for all the changes, I'm going to go back and edit the translations for the other ones that have the same sorts of wording. That would be 208. It's all for the better though.

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#1. by Siedhr ()
Posted on Jun 28, 2006
Quote:
Page 01-02
アー
Ahh.

失ったものが、そこにある。
What he had lost lay right before him.

Suggestion: "What he had lost lay right in front of him." Gives the line a bit more oomph, imo.

Quote:
Page 04

なぜあのまま、まっすぐに来れなかった?
Why couldn't I just come straight to this point from there?


Suggestions: This is a bit unclear. "Why wasn't I able to get to this point from the beginning?" or something similar. I had the perfect rephrasing in my head and some car's alarm started howling and I lost my concentration. :shakefist

Quote:
Page 05

刀が教えてくれるんだった
My katana would teach me.

Would? Will? Or Would have taught?

Very nice. Thank you again for a wonderful job.
#2. by zindryr (誰も知らない)
Posted on Jun 28, 2006
Would teach me, he's speaking in past tense there. He's talking about his time on the mountain, where his katana would teach him all he needed to know.

In any case, the other two changes look good, I'll throw them in.
#3. by Siedhr ()
Posted on Jun 28, 2006
Quote:
In any case, the other two changes look good, I'll throw them in.

Okay, I feel so included in the "cool" gang. "cough"
#4. by zindryr (誰も知らない)
Posted on Jun 28, 2006
Eh? Sometimes the best people to give suggestions are the ones who don't know the language it is being translated from, since that is the audience that it is being translated for. Everyone's in the 'cool' gang. Unless of course we're talking about a complete mistranslation, then the gang narrows down to just translators.
#5. by Siedhr ()
Posted on Jun 28, 2006
What I meant was that it feels good to be more than just a fan sitting on the sidelines. :tem Helping perhaps things move along just by a little bit. Being the passive receiver can be frustrating at times. Especially since I love this manga and before you guys came along no one was doing anything about it.
I'm glad I can be even a little bit of help, especially to someone who's doing the heavy lifting.
#6. by NeoShweaty ()
Posted on Jun 29, 2006
siedhr, ill list you as a proofreader. Since that seems to be what you are doing considering making things flow is part of proofreading.
#7. by Siedhr ()
Posted on Jun 29, 2006
Hehe, thank you. :tem I feel so special now.
#8. by NeoShweaty ()
Posted on Jun 29, 2006
You should feel special anyway because if you hadnt posted in the vagabond thread it wouldnt have shown up on my updated topics list and i wouldnt have cleaned the chapter etc etc. So in a way, you started all of this.
#9. by Siedhr ()
Posted on Jun 29, 2006
Oh, yeah, that was me, wasn't it? :tem "whistles contentedly"
I was always of the opinion that if you want something done, and done well, you should do it yourself.
#10. by NeoShweaty ()
Posted on Jun 29, 2006
that is always a good policy and one i live by with my scanlations...most of the time.

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