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Blue Dragon: Ral Ω Grado 3

Blue Dragon - Ral Grado ch003 Translated

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+ posted by zindryr as translation on Dec 16, 2006 17:46 | Go to Blue Dragon: Ral Ω Grado

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Rofl. Chapter 3 of Ral Grado. Ral is awesome, end of story.

Feel free to use this translation in your scanlations.

Page 01
闇で育った少年は蒼き翼を体に纏いし時混乱の世を秩序へと誘う!!
When the boy raised in darkness is clad in his azure wings, he brings the world of chaos to order!!

(the rest is just advertisement for random crap like the Death Note movie soundtrack, etc)

Page 02-03
かなり危険よこれ ラル わかってるの?
You know this is pretty dangerous, don't you Ral?

ああ でも仲間は必要だ グラドを出していられるのも俺の体を変化させるのも時間に限りがある
Yeah, but I need comrades. There's a limit to how fast I can let Grado out or transform my body.

同時なら更に時間は限られる
And doing both at the same time takes even longer.

全て 俺と同じ様に閉じ込められたカゲ
And of all these Shadows that have been sealed up like I was,

一匹や二匹使えるのがいるかもしれない
one or two of them could be useful.

封印されし無数のカゲ・・・!!危機と隣り合わせの戦力補強・・・!?
A countless number of sealed Shadows...!! A dangerous possibility for reinforcements...!?

一人でも多くの女の乳をもむため
In order for me to fulfill my quest of fondling the boobs of many women,

この中に一匹でも使えるのがいたら見っけもんだろ
it would be a great find if even one of these guys was useful.

コラッ ラル!女の子だけじゃないでしょ
Damn it, Ral! Not just women, right!?

あっ ハイ 「世界の人々を救う為」でした・・・・
Oh, yeah, "to save all mankind", right...

Page 04
危険は承知の上俺も万全で望む
I understand the dangers, and I'm not taking any chances.

おお・・・
Ohhh...

グラド!
Grado!

Page 05
さあ いつでもいいぞ 鍵を開けたらすぐ逃げろ
Alright, whenever you're ready. Open them up and get away from them.

Page 06-07
うわっ 何だ あのゴツゴツしてでかいカゲ
Whoa, what the hell is that huge, rugged Shadow?

ああ 強そうだぞ
Man, he looks tough.

パラ
*flip*

えっと あれは・・・
Um, that is...

グラド 知ってるカゲか?
Grado, you know these Shadows?

どちらも知らない
Not a one.

あのトカゲみたいなのは使えそうもないが
That lizard-looking one's probably useless,

あっちは結構強そうに見えるな
but that one over there looks pretty tough.

Page 08
ホラ 他の者も宿っているカゲを出せ
Alright, you other guys bust out the Shadows inside of you, too.

影から出せない者、姿を変えない者はセカンドとみなし殺す
If you can't bring out your Shadow or change your shape I will consider you to be a Second and kill you.

ギアアアッ
*screeek*

Page 09
ギアッ

ギイッ
*kree*

ギカッ ギカッ
*keekaw-keekaw*

カチカチ
*krk-krk*

やっぱり全部セカンドだ
And they're all Seconds, of course.

Page 10
二匹逃げるわ
Two of them are running!

グラド右を
Get the one on the right, Grado.

わかった
Alright.

ジャキ
*keen*

Page 11
No text.

Page 12
やった!
He did it!

相変わらず強い・・・
Strong as ever...

ガタ
*tremble*

おまえもセカンドなのに何故逃げようとしなかった 覚悟はできているという事か
Why didn't you try to run, even though you're a Second. Does that mean you're prepared for what's going to happen?

ああ 飛べないから逃げようもないか
Ah, or was it that you can't fly so there was no way to run?

オ・・・オレ オレハ・・・
M-... M-me eat...

オ オレハニンゲン食ッタ・・・ガ・・・ガ・・・
M-me eat human... bu-... but...

ニンゲン ミカタ スル
Me friend humans.

信用するか? グラド
Can we trust him, Grado?

考え判断するのはおまえにまかせただろ ラル
You're the one making the decisions here, Ral.

Page 13
そうだったな
Ah, that's right.

それにしてもあんたのカゲ強そうだな
More importantly, your Shadow looks pretty strong there.

ああ こいつはゴルバゴ
Yeah. This is Gorbago.

なんでもぶっ壊せる闇女王(オブスキュリア)殺すと言っている
He says he'll waste anything to kill Queen Obscuria.

ラル ファーストだからと言って信用できるとは限らない
Ral, just because he's a First doesn't mean you can trust him.

人を食べてしまえば殺されると考えて食べていなかっただけかもしれないのよ
He might just be thinking that if he ate his human he'll die, so he hasn't done so yet.

わかってるよミオ先生
I know that, Mistress Mio.

Page 14
力を観たい 俺達と戦ってくれ
I want to see your powers. Fight us.

ドラゴンは強い殺す気でかかってきてくれ
My dragon here's pretty strong, so come at me as if you're trying to kill me.

わ・・・わかった
Al-... alright.

殺す気って・・・
As if you're trying to kill me...?

グラド
Grado.

・・・いいだろう 考えるのはおまえだ
... Whatever, you're doing the thinking.

Page 15
さあ 来い!
Alright, come on!

お・・・おい ドラゴンが・・・
He-... hey, the dragon's...

押されてる
getting pushed back.

Page 16
メキッ
*krk*

ミシッ
*kssh*

ボボボ・・・
*mmmm*

Page 17
うわっ ドラゴンをぶっ倒した すげえ!
Whoa, he took out the dragon. That's amazing!

負けた!?
Ral lost!?

いや まだドラゴンはフルサイズではないし・・・
No, the dragon isn't full-size or anything...

すげえっ!ゴルバゴ 強いじゃないか 使えるなんてもんじゃない
Wow! Gorbago is pretty strong. You'll be way more than useful.

・・・ああ
... Yeah.

あんたの名前は
What's your name?

マレロだ
Marrero.

Page 18
マレロ ゴルバゴ 頼みがある
Marrero, Gorbago, I've got a favor to ask.

この城に残ってくれ
Stay here in this castle.

俺達が旅立った後代わりにここを守ってほしい
I want you to defend this place after we've gone out on our journey.

あのセカンドとともに
Do it with that Second.

マレロちょっと耳を
Marrero, come closer a second.

一人だ
You get one.

ラル 何をこそこそ・・・
What's Ral whispering about...

秘策を教えてるんだろう
He's probably telling him a secret plan.

気に入った女一人だけ自由にしていい
You're allowed to do what you will with one lady.

オレ 太っ腹だろ
Aren't I generous?

Page 19
でもそれ以上俺の女に手を出したら
But if you touch anymore than that one woman,

あ コレ その一人に選んじゃいけないリストね
Oh, this is a list of girls you're not allowed to choose as your one.

戻って来てすぐアンタを殺す
when I get back I will kill you immediately.

俺達は闇女王(オブスキュリア)を倒し 必ず戻って来る
We'll kick the hell out of Queen Obscuria and be back here soon.

それまでー
Until then...

ゴツゴツ
*crag*

わかった ゴルバゴも闇世界(ノワール)の復活と戻る事を願っている ラル達を信じ ここを守り 帰りを待とう
Sure. Gorbago wants the dark world Noir to be restored and to return to it. We'll trust you guys, protect this place, and wait for your return.

そのかわり さっきの条件はのむが この城の守りの一切を俺に任せてもらいたい
In return, while I accept your 'terms' I want you to leave the defense of this castle to me and me alone.

いいか
Alright?

ああ 今 この瞬間からここの全てはマレロに任す
Yeah, this castle's now under your protection from this moment on, Marrero.

ゴルバゴ
Gorbago.

Page 20
うわ たたき潰しちまったぞ
Whoa, he squashed it like a bug!

ひでーっ
Maaan.

セカンドなど置いておくのは馬鹿げている
It's foolish to have a Second around.

人間を食った時点で頭が弱すぎる 信用できん
He ate a human, so he had a weak will. He couldn't be trusted.

思った通りだ 文句なし気に入った
Just as I thought. I've got no problems with you man, you're alright.

Page 21
ドラゴンにはわざと負けた様に見させ とどめを刺す時もある様に見せた
I let you think my dragon had lost, and gave you a chance to finish me off.

しかしゴルバゴはとどめを刺そうとはしなかったし マレロも仕向けなかった
But Gorbago didn't try to finish me off, and you Marrero weren't tempted either.

これはゴルバゴが本当にドラゴンと闇世界(ノワール)に戻りたいと思っている証 マレロもその気持ちを理解し協力しあっている
That's proof enough that Gorbago wants to return to the dark world Noir just like my dragon. And you understand those feelings of his and are helping him.

それとあのセカンドは殺すべき その判断もできた
That, and you were right to decide that that Second should be killed.

マレロが殺らなかったら俺が殺ってた
If you hadn't done it Marrero, I would have.

へーっ ラルって結構考えてるんだ
Wow, Ral's really thinking through things.

わざとだったとはな
So that was on purpose.

あの子そういう面は優秀ですよ
That side of Ral is perfect.

本当に頼もしい安心して任せられるよ マレロ
It really sets my mind at ease knowing I can leave this to you, Marrero.

どうも
Indeed.

Page 22
ゴルバゴ喜んでるぜ
Gorbago's pleased as well.

闇女王(オブスキュリア)死ぬ 自分は闇の世界(ノワール)で自由に暴れる そう言っている
He says that if Queen Obscuria dies, he can riot about as he pleases back in Noir.

ラル 闇女王(オブスキュリア)は光のある世界にカゲを放り出したがオレやゴルバゴのように闇の世界(ノワール)の復活を望む奴は必ずいる
Ral, the Dark Queen Obscuria expelled all the Shadows to this world of light, but there have to be some other Shadows like myself and Gorbago that want to return to the dark world Noir.

人間を喰ってしまってるカゲよりは頭も少しはマシとオレは考える
They are also probably a bit more intelligent than the Shadows who eat humans.

この先も仲間を見つける期待はできるって事だな
So you're saying I can expect more comrades in the future, are you?

そうだ
Yeah.

残ったのはこの子か・・・
And now this girl's all that's left...

Page 23
名前は?
What's your name?

アイアアイア・・・
Aya Aya...

これ クルクルクルクル
This is Kulukulu Kulukulu.

アイアか!上から読んでも下から読んでもアイア いい名だ
Aya! It's spelled the same from left to right or right to left. What a nice name.

アイア
Aya.

君達は一緒に連れていく!
I'll take you two with me!

ちょっ・・・ちょっとラル カゲの能力や性格も見ずに決めちゃうの?
Hol-... hold on a minute there Ral, you're going to say that without having seen her Shadow's power or personality?

ん?
Hm?

だってアイア可愛い
Well, Aya's cute.

やっぱりあんたねー・・・
I knew it, you...

Page 24
大体アイアはまだ13歳よ
And besides, Aya's only 13 years old.

大丈夫 俺もまだ15だしロリコンだから
It's cool, I'm only 15, and a pedo.

・・・そ そういう事じゃなくてカゲと戦っていくのよ 危険でしょ
... That's not the issue here, we're going to fight the Shadow. It's dangerous!

いや 女は俺が絶対守る
Uh, I'll protect any girl.

アイ・・・
Ay-...

クルクル カゲ60マキル伸びる 耳 とても良い 足音たてないぜったい ベロひっぱるとスゴク喜ぶ
Kulukulu's Shadow can stretch out 60 Machirs, his ears are really good, and he doesn't make a sound when he walks. He really likes it when you pull on his tongue.

わーっ最高ー!!俺の巨大なドラゴンでさえ9マキル!これなら文句ないだろ ミオ先生
Wow, that's awesome!! My big old dragon can only go 9 Machirs! No more problems here, right Mistress Mio?

よし そう決まったら皆 出発の準備だ
Alright, time to prepare to leave now that that's taken care of.

城にもう準備はしてある
Preparations have already been made in the castle.

え?ラルがしたの?
Huh? Did Ral do that?

Page 25
ちょっ・・・これ完全にラルの趣味でしょ!!
Wai-... These are just to Ral's tastes!!

ああ 二人とも似合ってる 特にアイアちゃん可愛いーっ
Yep, it looks good on you too. And Aya's especially cuuute!

これで旅の準備は全て完了!!・・・っていいの?
Preparations for the journey are complete!! ... right?

こんなのダメ!!結局女しか連れていかないし
No, they aren't!! And you're only bringing women with you, too!

ええーっ ダメなのか じゃあ アイアちゃんだけでも
Huh? Really? Then can you just let Aya stay like this?

ダメ!!
No!!

も・・・もしかして言う事聞かないとまた「闇に閉じ込める」・・・か?
Er... are you gonna close me up in the darkness if I don't do what you say...?

そうよ
Of course.

くっそ~・・・
Shit...



Rofl. Enjoy.

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#1. by blasta ()
Posted on Dec 16, 2006
Thanks zin for the translation and Ral is truly awesome lol. :smile-big Did you fix your monitor?
#2. by wiplok ()
Posted on Dec 16, 2006
rotfl, laughed my ass of! thanks alot for you great work zindryr
#3. by zindryr (誰も知らない)
Posted on Dec 16, 2006
Monitor not fixed yet, I just happen to be at school for the time being.
#4. by ijoit3k ()
Posted on Dec 16, 2006
thanks zindryr..u kick ass..great work dude..

Respect: Respect: Respect: Respect:
#5. by Pepius ()
Posted on Dec 16, 2006
heheheh i love this manga more and more
great work
#6. by eni (MH's Socialworker ٩( ᐛ )و ♡)
Posted on Dec 16, 2006
Quote by zindryr :

In order for me to fulfill my quest of fondling the boobs of many women,
[ ...]

Damn it, Ral! Not just women, right!?

Oh, yeah, "to save all mankind", right...

:rofl *muhaha* ... I so love this guy :XD

//edit ... oh..eh.. yes ... thank you, zindryr :D
#7. by cravenight ()
Posted on Dec 16, 2006
This is a late thanks for the tran. but blackout and all.
#8. by DeepEyes ()
Posted on Dec 17, 2006
Waaa, great trans... translating to Spanish n_n... Thx zindryr as good as ever n_n
#9. by Nihongaeri ()
Posted on Dec 17, 2006
I'm not sure I'll continue translating the series (I've been on a translating hiatus in general), but here's some corrections/suggestions for this chapter if they'll be of any help. As I note below, I try my darndest to stay away from commenting on style (I've learned that it is typically fruitless to do otherwise), but there's still a few points I ended up making in the end... I guess I'm incorrigible in the end in that respect...

Anyhow, good job overall. Have you seen anything official on the names yet or are you still just guessing at this point? Seem to be pretty solid choices either way. Oh, and one more question/comment... I haven't been able to decided for myself yet whether ドラゴン is supposed to be a common noun or a name. I could almost swear that there's a number of cases were it's being used effectively as a name... but goddamn Japanese doesn't make the distinction grammatically like English (or goddamn English doesn't let you fudge the issue like Japanese). Got any thoughts on the issue?

Quote by zindryr :
Page 02-03
グラドを出していられるのも俺の体を変化させるのも時間に限りがある
Yeah, but I need comrades. There's a limit to how fast I can let Grado out or transform my body.
"fast" -> "much"

同時なら更に時間は限られる
And doing both at the same time takes even longer.
Something like "And even more of one when I'm doing both"... so time length, not speed.

Page 04
危険は承知の上俺も万全で臨む
I understand the dangers, and that's just how I like it.
This was a different kanji for のぞむ. Also, that's のぞむ in the sense of "face", "look towards", or less literally, "prepare". "I won't take any chances", for instance, could work for 俺も万全で臨む.

Page 12
ああ 飛べないから逃げようもないか
Ah, or was it that you can't fly so there was no reason to run?
"reason" -> "way"

考え判断するのはおまえにまかせただろ ラル
You're the one making the decisions here, Ral.
I generally try to make it my policy to not comment on style (after much experience doing otherwise), but couldn't this wording possibly suggest that Grado might be making the decisions in other scenarios?

Page 13

なんでもぶっ壊せる闇女王(オブスキュリア)殺すと言っている
He says he'll waste anything to kill Queen Obscuria.
This is supposed to be two sentences (unless this was changed for stylistic reasons).

Page 15
押されてる
getting pressured.
"pushed back"? (I *think* that's what's being drawn...)

Page 17
すげえっ!ゴルバゴ 強いじゃないか 使えるなんてもんじゃない
Wow! Gorbago is pretty strong. Looks like you can use him pretty well.
使える should be "useful" (from Ral's perspective). なんてもんじゃない, if you haven't run into the construction before, is basically just an emphasizer suggesting that the word previous to it is not sufficient in describing things, even though it still has the overall correct semantic properties. So something like "You'll be way more than just useful" could work here.

Page 19
わかった ゴルバゴも闇世界(ノワール)の復活と戻る事を願っている ラル達を信じ ここを守り 帰りを待とう
Sure. Gorbago wants to return to the dark world Noir. We'll trust you guys, protect this place, and wait for your return.
Missing translation for 闇世界(ノワール)の復活, assuming it isn't intentional.

そのかわり さっきの条件はのむが この城の守りの一切を俺に任せてもらいたい
So I accept your terms. Leave the defense of this castle to me.
A semi-stylistic suggestion, but perhaps, "In return, while I accept your 'terms', I want you to leave the defense of this castle to me and me alone".

Page 21
わざとだったとはな
So that was on purpose.
Style here again, but my cookie-cutter translation for the とは construction expressing surprise is "To think..."

Page 22
闇女王(オブスキュリア)死ぬ 自分は闇の世界(ノワール)で自由に暴れる そう言っている
He says that if Queen Obscuria dies, he can riot about as he pleases back in Noir.
(Assuming this isn't stylistic editing) I think this is three sentences, with the first just being semi-broken Shadow-speech.

ラル 闇女王(オブスキュリア)は光のある世界にカゲを放り出したがオレやゴルバゴのように闇の世界(ノワール)の復活を望む奴は必ずいる
Ral, the Dark Queen Obscuria expelled all the Shadows to this world of light, but there have to be some other Shadows like myself and Gorbago that want to return to the dark world Noir.
Has there been any mention as to whether Noir has ceased to exist currently, or if it's just in a horrible state? I can't quite remember. Anyhow, translation-wise, are you choosing to render 闇の世界(ノワール)の復活 as the shadows returning to it?

Page 25

これで旅の準備は全て完了!!・・・っていいの?
Alright, preparations for the journey are complete!! ... right?
FYI, this is just narration (assuming you're making that mistake)...

こんなのダメ!!結局女しか連れていかないし
No, they aren't!! And you're only bringing women with you, too!
... although I suppose you could possibly read Mio's line here as a response. But then again, the narration will probably be removed when published in volume form, so...

ええーっ ダメなのか じゃあ アイアちゃんだけでも
Huh? I can't do that? Then I'll just take Aya.
Something like "Huh? Really? Then can you just let Aya stay like this?"
#10. by juUnior ()
Posted on Dec 17, 2006
thx for the translation, zindryr xD

And yeah, Blue Dragon truly amazing title with fanservice, and Ral rocks haha ^^
#11. by zindryr (誰も知らない)
Posted on Dec 18, 2006
You sir, are a lifesaver Osaka. When I get a monitor I'll go and look through your fixes more thoroughly when I have a working monitor, but I feel like thanking you now, heh. But yeah, at this point all of my name romanizations are guesses. Just been using all of my years of reading Fantasy novels when I was a kid to pick decent spellings for the names. Unfortunately that all goes out the window when they decide to spell the names in Roman characters at some point in the manga, (or other places).[br]Posted on: December 17, 2006, 04:04:29 PM_________________________________________________If I don't comment on it, you were absolutely write and I was a newbie, heh.

Quote by Osakagaeri :

I haven't been able to decided for myself yet whether ドラゴン is supposed to be a common noun or a name. I could almost swear that there's a number of cases were it's being used effectively as a name... but goddamn Japanese doesn't make the distinction grammatically like English (or goddamn English doesn't let you fudge the issue like Japanese). Got any thoughts on the issue?


I've kind of treated the issue as Ral saying 'his dragon' and left it as a common noun. There are already a lot of proper nouns in the series to differentiate from, so when they just say standard 'ドラゴン', I treat it as a common noun. ブルードラゴン however is a proper noun to me, so it gets the Blue Dragon capital letters.

Quote by Osakagaeri :

Page 02-03
グラドを出していられるのも俺の体を変化させるのも時間に限りがある
Yeah, but I need comrades. There's a limit to how fast I can let Grado out or transform my body.
"fast" -> "much"

同時なら更に時間は限られる
And doing both at the same time takes even longer.
Something like "And even more of one when I'm doing both"... so time length, not speed.


Are you sure it's length? I thought it was limited on time, because he says 時間に限り at the end of that first sentence there. I might just be confused though.

Quote by Osakagaeri :

考え判断するのはおまえにまかせただろ ラル
You're the one making the decisions here, Ral.
I generally try to make it my policy to not comment on style (after much experience doing otherwise), but couldn't this wording possibly suggest that Grado might be making the decisions in other scenarios?


The way I see it, the 'here' applies because Grado isn't going to permanently be in Ral. As soon as Bira is killed, Grado's going back. The 'here' applies to their current situation of being "Friends". At least that's what I thought when I wrote it.


Quote by Osakagaeri :
Page 13

なんでもぶっ壊せる闇女王(オブスキュリア)殺すと言っている
He says he'll waste anything to kill Queen Obscuria.
This is supposed to be two sentences (unless this was changed for stylistic reasons).


Stylistic change. Shadow talk is fun and all, but I'm not sure it should be used unless the Shadow itself is directly speaking. It tends to make things less readable in the end, in my opinion. Though a possible way to go with the line would be: He says, "I destroy all. I kill Queen Obscuria."

Doesn't work as well in my opinion, but that's a possible route.

Quote by Osakagaeri :
Page 15
押されてる
getting pressured.
"pushed back"? (I *think* that's what's being drawn...)


Yeah, at the time I was thinking they were kind of talking about power, but you're right, looking back at it. It just didn't dawn on me to look at it that way.

Quote by Osakagaeri :

Page 21
わざとだったとはな
So that was on purpose.
Style here again, but my cookie-cutter translation for the とは construction expressing surprise is "To think..."


The "to think" always seems more verbose and highbrow to me. I use it occasionally depending on characters, but I like to mix things up a bit. I thought of it more as, (and I should probably add this to the script): So that was on purpose.

Putting stress on the 'was' there, as if the person is just realizing it.

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闇女王(オブスキュリア)死ぬ 自分は闇の世界(ノワール)で自由に暴れる そう言っている
He says that if Queen Obscuria dies, he can riot about as he pleases back in Noir.
(Assuming this isn't stylistic editing) I think this is three sentences, with the first just being semi-broken Shadow-speech.


Same reasoning as before for this.

Quote by Osakagaeri :
ラル 闇女王(オブスキュリア)は光のある世界にカゲを放り出したがオレやゴルバゴのように闇の世界(ノワール)の復活を望む奴は必ずいる
Ral, the Dark Queen Obscuria expelled all the Shadows to this world of light, but there have to be some other Shadows like myself and Gorbago that want to return to the dark world Noir.
Has there been any mention as to whether Noir has ceased to exist currently, or if it's just in a horrible state? I can't quite remember. Anyhow, translation-wise, are you choosing to render 闇の世界(ノワール)の復活 as the shadows returning to it?


I switch between 'restoration of Noir' and 'return to Noir', as in the context they're almost the same thing. I'm assuming what happened, though, is that the when the Queen left the world of darkness, the other Shadows couldn't stay there without her, (for whatever reasons). And now that she's become a Second here in the light world, she can't return to Noir. And if that's the case, neither can any of the Shadows who are still Firsts.

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これで旅の準備は全て完了!!・・・っていいの?
Alright, preparations for the journey are complete!! ... right?
FYI, this is just narration (assuming you're making that mistake)...

こんなのダメ!!結局女しか連れていかないし
No, they aren't!! And you're only bringing women with you, too!
... although I suppose you could possibly read Mio's line here as a response. But then again, the narration will probably be removed when published in volume form, so...


We'll see, you never know what they'll leave in the volumes these days. I'll probably change it to look more like a narrator, get rid of the 'alright, ', but it really felt like Mio was responding to it, heh.


Thanks for all the help. If you don't continue translating Blue Dragon, I'd love to get more pointers and the like if you ever get time. Can't get better without outside input.
#12. by Nihongaeri ()
Posted on Dec 19, 2006
Looks like most of the comments I made that could have been style were indeed intended as such... Forgive me that I don't reply to everything myself, as I'm a little short on time today.
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I've kind of treated the issue as Ral saying 'his dragon' and left it as a common noun. There are already a lot of proper nouns in the series to differentiate from, so when they just say standard 'ドラゴン', I treat it as a common noun. ブルードラゴン however is a proper noun to me, so it gets the Blue Dragon capital letters.Yeah, I still honestly don't know what to make of it... I'll feel a lot more comfortable if there ends up being another dragon shadow that they also refer to as ドラゴン... but until then...
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Are you sure it's length? I thought it was limited on time, because he says 時間に限り at the end of that first sentence there. I might just be confused though.I'm quite sure it's length of time and not the speed of "letting out Grado's shadow" or "transformation", but I'm not sure where the interpretation problem is occurring here... 「…時間に限りがある」 would be "there's a limit on the time...". Are you interpreting the 時間に限りがある phrase in some other way?
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We'll see, you never know what they'll leave in the volumes these days. I'll probably change it to look more like a narrator, get rid of the 'alright, ', but it really felt like Mio was responding to it, heh.Well, either way, it *is* all part of the fan-service in the end, so...
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Thanks for all the help. If you don't continue translating Blue Dragon, I'd love to get more pointers and the like if you ever get time. Can't get better without outside input.Very glad I could be of some help. And yeah, as long as my comments are welcome, I'll continue making them... providing I have the time. As long as your getting something out of them, I'm more than happy to make them.
#13. by Siedhr ()
Posted on Dec 22, 2006
Quote by zindryr :

おまえもセカンドなのに何故逃げようとしなかった 覚悟はできているという事か
Why didn't you try to run, even though you're a Second. Does that mean you're prepared for what's going to happen?

Even though you're a Second, why didn't you try to run? Does that mean you're prepared for what's going to happen?

Funneh. :tem

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