Fairy Tail 166

You did really good, here are the parts you had question marks next to:

Page 5:
Lucy: What an idiot! (?)
-Lucy's asking if he's a idiot here

Page 14:
Gilberts: Mount Zonia(?)
-Close enough.

Just thought I help. This is only a rough run through and I tried to leave the original translation as it was.
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Page 2:
Top:
It's Gildarts!
Gildarts has returned!

Right:
Magnolia will now change to Gildarts-shift????

Left:
Everyone, quickly get to your positions! I repeat...

Bottom:
A one hundred years mission...
No one has done it before!?



Page 3:
Charle: Even if that's the case, aren't they making too much of a fuss?
Lucy: What's Magnolia's Gildarts-shift~?
Mirajane: You'll see if you go outside and take a look.

Lucy (bottom): N-no way!?



Page 4:
The town...
Is split in half!!!



Page 5:
Mirajane: Gildarts uses magic that crumbles anything he touches. If we don't do
anything he will destroy the houses as he walks by.
Lucy: What an idiot! (?) (Correctly worded)

Lucy: The town shifts just for that?
Wendy: This is amazing Charle!
Charle: Yes...very stupid...

Natsu: He's here!



Page 7:
Natsu: Gildarts! Let's fight now!!!
Elfman: What's with that suddenly?

Mirajane: Welcome back!
Lucy: So he's Gildarts

Gildarts: Miss, I'm sure the Fairy Tail guild is supposed to be around here

somewhere but...
Mirajane: This is it
Mirajane: And I'm Mirajane
Gildarts: Mira?

Gildarts: You sure have changed a lot!
Gildarts: And this guild looks newer too!
Lucy: He didn't notice the appearance...
Natsu: Gildarts!!!



Page 8:
Gildarts: Natsu! It's been a while!
Natsu: I said let's fight!!

Gildarts: Next time
Natsu: Wow...
Natsu: Really strong!



Page 9:
Gray: You haven't changed at all, ossan
Elfman: A man's man!!
Gildarts: I see some new faces too...
Gildarts: Things really haved changed

Makarov: Gildarts
Gildarts: Oh! Master! It's been a while!!!
Makarov: What about your mission?

Gildarts: Gahahaha!!



Page 10:
Gildarts: It's impossible
Gildarts: I can't do it

Gray: What!?
Middle: You've got to be kidding me!!!
Middle (left): Gildarts...
Middle (left): Failed!?

Lucy: Even Fairy Tail's strongest mage can't do it...What exactly is the one

hundred year mission...?b



Page 11:
Makarov: I see...even you couldn't do it...
Gildarts: Sorry I blackened (stained, sullied, or darkened would have been better choice) your name...
Makarov: No, I'm just glad you came back safely
Makarov: As far as I know, you are the first to be able to come back from the

quest
Gildarts: I want to rest so I'm going back now
Gildarts: Ah I'm so tired

Gildarts: Natsu
Gildarts: Come to my place later
Gildarts: I have a souvenir for you

Gildarts: Now, excuse me.
Guild member: Exit through the door!!!
Erza: The one hundred year quest is too early for you. Give it up.
Lucy: Huh? Did I seem to be excited!?



Page 12:
Natsu: I wonder if the souvenir is some rare foreign flame?
Happy: Who knows.
Natsu: Yo!
Happy: We are here
Gilberts: Oh, you are here Natsu, Happy.

Gilberts: You...are you doing well with Lisana?
Natsu: Huh?
Gilberts: Oh you!
Gilberts: Gahahaha!



Page 13:
Natsu: Lisana died
Natsu: Two years ago
Gilberts: You are (you're would seem more natural) serious...?

Gilberts: I see...then that's why Mirajane...ahhhh sorry Natsu
Natsu: If that's what you wanted to say, I'm going back
Happy: Wait, Natsu!
Gilberts: Natsu...

Gilberts: During the mission
Gilberts: I saw a dragon



Page 14:
Gilberts: Although it's not the red dragon you are looking for
Gilberts: It's a black dragon
Natsu: W-where?

Gilberts: Mount Zonia(?)
Gilberts: Thanks to that I failed my mission. Dammit!
Gilberts: What are (again shorten to What're would be more natural in my opinion) you going to do if you go?



Page 15:
Natsu: Isn't it obvious? I'm going to ask the whereabouts of Igneel!!
Gilberts: You can't find it. The black dragon flies around the entire continent,

no maybe even the whole world.
Natsu: Even so, there may still be a clue!!!
Gilberts: Natsu, look here.



Page 16:
Gilberts: It was done instantly
Gilberts: It also got my left arm and right leg. Even my internal organs. (organ or organs? because organs would mean he is most likely dead. If organ, then I would say "Even an internal organ.")
Gilberts: I don't know about Igneel but
Gilberts: That black dragon is without a doubt an enemy to mankind.

Gilberts: Humans can't possibly defeat it
Natsu: The ones who can defeat it...
Natsu: Are the dragon slayers!!!



Page 17:
Top (right): If I use my magic...
Top (right): Even the black dragon...
Gilberts: If you are serious, stop thinking that

Natsu: Damn it!!!
Happy: Natsu!
Gilberts: Happy

Gilberts: Please support Natsu.
Bottom (left): Humans can't win against that
Bottom (left): But dragons may be able to



Page 18:
Top: If it's Natsu
Top: Then someday...

Makarov: There are three dragon slayers in the guild...
Makarov: Porlyusica, it's just like I (since he is refering to someone wouldn't it be more likely "you") said...
Makarov: The wheels of fate are starting to turn



Page 19:
Damn it! Damn iiit!!!!



Page 20:
I wonder if you are doing well,
Igneel.

You skipped page 6^^

Thanks for the help devilsadvocagte101!

And Farfalla, I didn't do page 6 because all it had was Gildarts' name pretty much :P

No problem. However I recommend you look at grammar some more. I change a couple of things but I got tired after a while. Another thing I recommend is to either treating every bubble like a sentence or not. Some lines you put periods on the end and correct grammar while others you did not. Staying consistent is the key ^^

Yeah this was my first translation so it was a practice run so to speak :P
Thanks, I'll keep that in mind.