Embalming - The Another Tale of Frankenstein 4

Translation done by Epislonium, me.
Fine to be used in a scanlation or re-translation, preferably with credit.
I would still recommend going over the script at least.

Checked for confusions and made some (mostly minor) changes. The key:
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Suggestions are welcomed.


[iNDENT]Embalming #4

1
Fury- GU
-OOO
-OOW
-!!!

2
Shade- There is no chance at all
- I taught all of your knives
- Movement, tendency(/habit), I know it all
- Just realize it
Weiss- Hey hey, you two
- Stop that violent fight
- Be friends,
- Yes

3.
- Under me
- let's be frankensteins "together"
- and live "in peace".

4.
Fury(right)- Lord Weiss!
(left)- Edel!!
- Move aside! (/Let me go!)
-Shade!!
Shade- You're young...with full of power
- However

5.
-VUOOO
-OOOW!!

6.
Fury- Gagh...
Shade- For a fresh human to go against a frankenstein
- no
- even if not
- For you to go against me
- winning victory is definitely
- impossible!!

7.
Weiss- Shade is inferior to Titan in power
- but top-star(/all-top) in everything else
- Combined with such remarkable courage and obedience
- He would not flinch a bit even to shot-guns and knives
- The goodness(/quiality) of the Original
- Will be reflected in the Product
Shade- No, it is all indeed
- product of Master's skills

8-9.
Weiss- Ok the preparation is set
- When this charger stocks
- 1.21 jigowatts from a thunder
- The operation will begin
- Now Edel
- Shall you have black eyes(/iris)
- Shall you reborn as true Edel
- And then
- I will have my dearest
- No one will betray me!
- Will not disobey me!!
- Will not get away from me!!!
- Will not change til I die!!!!
- Just Me and
- Frankensteins
- The Family!!!!!
- The House!!!!!
- It's soon...
- really soon...
Fury- "...The ones to willingly
- get their hands on Frankensteins..."
- "Are either Wicked or Insane"

10.
- Lord Weiss, you are insane
- For Madman's "doll playing," We lost our future
- Many lost their lives
- I will take away your wish!
- This revenge is mine!!
Weiss- ...Fury, I am afraid we will not be getting along well
- How did you defeat that Titan with (your) fresh body?
- Only that is still a concern(/interest) to me

11.
- With the case of Raith, there is no need to test another frankenstein
- I am done with him
- Shade, chop him up into flesh(/pieces) and scatter (those) on snow
Fury- huff
-huff
-huff
Weiss- Shade...
Shade- ____...
- So regrettable,
- Fury

12.
Fury- I AM feeling
- regrettable!!!

13.
Weiss- Oh!
- 1.21 jigowwatt is here!
- A bit!
- Only a bit more___
Fury- How did I defeat that Frankenstein? (*Fury is referring to the Titan)

14.
- OAHHHHHH

15.
- OHH
? -!?
Fury- OHH
- OHH
- This is how!
- Keep looking!! Don't take your eyes off!!
Weiss- Aww
Fury- OHH
-OHH

16.
-!!

17.
Weiss- My charger
- My lab
- My....eyeballs
(*not Weiss's eyeballs itself. The eyeballs for Edel with black iris is what he means)
Fury- Edel...

18.
-!?
- Alfred
- Jacob
- Miranda?
sfx- Pi!
Fury- !!!

19.
Weiss- You sure have done it
- Fury...
- But it is not over
- If I have this book (*literal translation is "Forbidden text") and Edel...!
Frankenstein- Ga
Weiss- KILL HIM!!
Frankenstein- Ga
Fury- tch

20.
-!!
Frankenstein- Gaugh
Peaberry- I was intending I came to see if the production of a frankenstein is taking place, and look
- Gosh, what are you doing?

21.
- Give me the girl
- I'll check (what is with) her
Fury- Peaberry!
Weiss- !?!

22.
Raith- That skeptical man Lord Weiss
- I guessed he would have something
- Just in case some frankensteins were not controllable
- Well, this is great
- must be a special model
Fury- Raith!
Raith- Sorry, I was late
- Fury was friends with everyone in the house, I remember
(* Raith is basically caring Fury having to fight the servants who were friends with him)
- Leave the rest to me

23.
Frankensteins-Gya
-Gya
-Gya
-Gya
Weiss- Ah
- AAh
- Ahhhh
Fury- Alfred
- Jacob
- Miranda...
Weiss- Aww

24.
-What!?
Weiss- Oh shade
- You can still move!
- Worthy of my top-star(/all-top)!
- Now kill Fury!
- Get back Edel!
- Protect me!

25.
Raith- Oh god
- It's only breaking down
Peaberry- The chest
- get it destroy it
- Plugbolt is the common weakpoint of all frankensteins. Once broken down, it will not be repaired
- It will return to the corpse
- and will never move again
Weiss- What's wrong, Shade!
- Don't you forget the thing(/affair) 10 years ago!!

26.
- Who helped your diseased child without asking any money?
- It's me!
- Who used an expensive medicine to loosen the pain?
- It's me of course!!
- Who made a grave for the child and held a funeral for it?
- It's ME after all!!!
- Who sweared to repay the favor with all his life and body?
- It's You!
Fury- I see...
- You had a child
- I didn't know
- You picked us up... cared us well
- and raised us into a man

27.
- I thank you
- Shade

28-29.
- Thanks to you___...
- Robert=Weiss!
Weiss- !
Fury- You are the culprit
- Even though you are the culprit
- You did save us once
- So for this once
- this once I am letting you go
- Never again get us
- or
- frankensteins involved!
Weiss- Ah!
Raith- I will be holding on to this

30.
Fury- The revenge is
- Done...
Raith- Are you moving forward?
Fury- Yeah...
Raith- Alright then let's
- head to London (*interrupted)
Peaberry- hey Fury

31.
Fury- Peaberry
- How is Edel?
Peaberry- She is just sleeping with strong anesthesia(/pills).
- there is no worry
- so
- what are you going to do with this girl?
Fury- Of course
- After all of this
- I can't leave her here
- Us three together with Edel
- Will go to London.
[/INDENT]

The "us three" in last line of Fury is quite interesting. It will include Fury and Edel for sure, looking at the flow...but who is the third? Isn't Raith thinking Peaberry would be, thus looking upset?
Man, is this series just telling me to continue looking into and translate?:darn
I want to see what's next...what action is Raith going to take...?