I Am A Hero 4

thanks again

Page 97 Gonna let "WHaaat" slide due to being drunk.
Page 102 Same with "HEeeeey!"
Page 107 I agree with TL checker





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Notes for editing, character voices:

H: Hideo: Protagonist, 35, manga assistant, otaku, delusional, manic, obsessive, eccentric, low confidence, man-child.
Y: Yajima: Supporting character, Hideo's imaginary friend, subservient, stupid
Tet: Tetsuko: Tekko, mid 20s, manga assistant, a little bit dim witted at times, rough when drunk and when she was younger, a pretty nice girlfriend all things considered.

I am a Hero 4

Page 97
Tet: I'm goooohin to buuuhay BEER!!

H: I told you, it's already-

Tet: WHaaat?! You are shooo ANNOYIN'!
Tet: Youss a shitty shit pieesh of poo?!
SFX: Kaku Kaku Kaku

Page 98
H: No- No- Calm down. [No- No- is in English here]
H: You'll get hit by a car or something.

Tet: Whadjuushaayyy~?

Tet: Ha
Tet: choo!! [Sneezing]

Page 99
Tet: Fue Fue Fue Yous such a tight ashh~

Tet: Ssso useleshh-
Tet: Pikko
Tet: Sickoff you... idjeet.

Pikko?

Page 100

H: Ah!!

H: Tekko! You can't pee over there.
Tet: Ummwha?

H: The toilet's over here, this way!
H: Mmm~ I know that.

H: Come on, stand up and walk.
Tet: Mmm~

Page 101
H: That's right, just like that.
H: That's good.
H: That's right.
Tet: Uhe Uhehe

Tet: I can walk by myseeehlf! Shhhhtupid!!

SFX: Batan

Page 102

Tet: HEeeeey! Go buy some BEER! Dumbasshhh!!
H: Ah- okay, okay.
SFX: Jyororo

H: Here you go, beer.
Tet: Ohh!

Page 103
SFX: Zubibi

Tet: Whaaaddahell!! This ish WATER innit?!

H: Oh? You don't say.
Tet: Youshlesssh- I'm going ta shhleep.

H: Yeah, get some rest.
Tet: You've got work tomorrow after all.

Tet: HEEYYY~ HEYYY~
Tet: I can't sleeeeep, My HEAD hursshts.
Tet: Pat my head!!

H: Like this?
Tet: ...That's nice!

Page 104

Tet: ...You piece of shit... drop dead...

H: ...Patting her head really calms her down quick... [Idiom involving breaking free of being possessed, find some idiom to use]

H: ...Didn't get any play today either...

H: Well,
H: whatever.

Page 105
H: If I don't get this storyboard finished and handed in by today, my editor's really gonna give up on me.

H: ...It's really about time,
H: I get back to being a pro...

Page 106
SFX: Pyrururu

Writing: Tankoubon Nerima Daikon [A manga series]
Writing: 100,000 copies Daiko
Writing: 500 Yen 10% = 50 Yen X 100,000
Writing: 5,000,000 Yen
Writing: After taxes
Writing: About 4,500,000 Yen
Writing: 4 Volumes in a Year (Published Weekly)
Writing: So 18,000,0000
H: So... 18,000,000 Yen huh? Kay, kay.

Writing: If it's 10 total volumes, then...
Writing: 45,000,000

Writing: An old apartment \what\
Writing: 25,000,000
Writing: Renovations 5,000,000 \what?!\
H: I should try to buy a house as soon as I can...

Writing: Things I want
Writing: Rolex Submariner
Writing: Mystery Ranch [A type of back pack]
Writing: Garmin 60CSx or 30 Rado [Found a 60CSx model, but dunno what the other one is supposed to be]
Writing: Benelli M-3 [Shotgun]
Writing: Aeron Chair [Designer Chair]
Writing: Lewis Leather Cyclone [Leather Jacket]
Writing: Eames Chair [Designer Chair]
H: ...What else did I want?

H: Eh?
H: What do you mean that's all for me? You promised you'd get a place together with Tetsuko, right? [Dunno who he's imitating here or if he's just talking to himself]
SFX: Butsu Butsu
H: All right! I know already...

Page 107
SFX: Kon
H: Hey, come on, Hideo, you need to focus a little more.
H: Sorry, Hideo.

\\H: I'm know this is gonna blow up, and when I get serialized I'll gonna be really busy.\\ TAKE ANOTHER LOOK AT THIS PLEASE

Tet: ...Uhehe, Hideo...
H: Hm-?
Tet: Can we talk now?
H: 'Course we can!

Tet: Nakata's manga is, like,
Tet: really, really amazing.

Page 108
Tet: There's not a single panel that's wasted.
Tet: It's completely different from the rest of the crap out there.
Tet: I was so moved by the ending, I, like, stayed in bed the whole day.

Tet: Hideo, you should read it too. You'll learn something from it.

Tet: Don't
Tet: embarrass me, okay?

H: What the hell? Embarrass...?

Page 109
H: She's got Nakata's books lined up all nice and neat,
Book: I don't believe in romance, but love is my guide - Nakata Korori

H: but mine... are all in a heap.
H: ...And she's only got the first half here.
Book: Uncut Penis 1 Suzuki Hideo \God, this guy... THIS GUY\

H: ...
H: Is the title seriously that freaking long?

Page 110
Page 111

H: It's so good~~ [Lit: Interesting]

Page 112

Tet: Eggs...

Page 113
SFX: Koto Koto Koto
Tet: Hey, Hideo, wakey wakey!
Tet: Do you want sugar or fish stock in your eggs?
H: ...Sugar...
SFX: Kacha Kacha Kacha

SFX: Chaka Chaka
Tet: You said sugar, right?
Tet: Ohhhkayy~.
SFX: To- To-

Tet: I put a lot of veggies in too, so make sure you eat them.

Tet: It might be a little bland, though.

Page 114
H: Mornin-smooch! [Find some cuter way to say this]\so you won't do oppayou, but ohhachu you will?!\
H: Wah~

Tet: Sorry about yesterday, I must've gotten drunk and fallen asleep.

H: Tekko...
Tet: Aww, what's wrong?
H: ...Nothing~
SFX: Gyuu

H: ...Let's have sex.
Tet: Wha~t, there's no time, and I'm still on my period.
H: If I say we're going to, then we're doing it!
Tet: What am I going to do with you, you spoiled little brat~

Man, I don't get why you guys have never seen "blown up" used as slang for "get popular." I'll probably just use something along the lines of, "gonna be a big hit" or somethin.