Psyren 101

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1:
-CALL. 101 "Virus"
Text: Ageha and Matsuri, sneaking into Grigori!!
-Toshiaki Iwashiro

-Ah!

2:
-Matsuri-Sensei!

-Gurgh!

-Are you their comrades…? You monsters…!!

-Think what you like. We're not the type to give a shit.
-And as far as for (delete) being a monster is concerned, I don't deny it.

3:
-The intruders are moving from B2 to B3!
-We'll head them off at the research institute on Floor B4!

-Bullets have no effect on them!
-They're people with unusual talents!!

-Amamiya…We've arrived at the first isolation sector.

4:
-They’ve broken into Grigori.

-It shows signs of being torn off by the mother of all powers.
-Probably when Amagi Miroku and the others escaped.

5:
-The woman who made Nemesis Q was always... stuck inside there, too...

-Let’s go.

6:

7:
-It's being tidied up but it still doesn't look like it's been repaired.
-They've been pretty sloppy in cleaning up after their secret plan.

-That's 'cuz no one wants to get involved in this mess.
-After all, who'd be insane enough to stand up and take the blame for everything here, only to become #06's target of revenge? No one.

-No.
-This hasn't been thrown away yet.

8:
-This group plans on continuing with such experiments... no matter what situation it'll create...
-Just so they can somehow get their own grubby paws on the power of PSI...

-I want to become stronger.
-I want the power to force this world to change.

-Isn’t that the power to protect?

9:
-Either one of those is fine by me.

-Carry all the unconscious soldiers to the hall!
-...Shit! so we're the only ones left who can move, huh...
-Captain!!

-What about the reinforcements!?
-About that... I haven't received any communication from the above-ground party... Nobody's replied...

-What!? The wounded should be gathering in 1F.

10:
-What about the Monitor Room? What the hell is going on here!?
-After I got a report of the surveillance cameras inside the building malfunctioning 5 minutes ago, there hasn't been any communication since!

11:
-There's another enemy among us other than those two...?

12:
-All the shelves and the desk in the office have been cleared out.
-They're completely empty.
-My locker is the innermost one.

-It's a record of Grigori I made to protect myself in case something happened.
-I copied all the confidential information that not even I had access to. If it had been found, I would have spent the rest of my life imprisoned.

13:
-Dirty words!
-70% of the content is just gibberish as a red herring.... Look for a code on page 13.

-The code consists of 13 columns of numbers and the alphabet.
-From the very top, it's a cord for the destruction of #05, #06 and #07's Pacs chips.

-Alright then, where can we access the Pacs control system?
-The main computer has been completely destroyed. Go to the Subcommunication room.

-It's never been used. It's a subsystem built only for emergency use. It should still be usable, but only there.

-Roger.

14:
-Iba-san!

-...With this, it's all over...
-Forgive me, #05...#06...and #07...

-Yo, Iba. I handed over my card. Those 2 you sent did a pretty flashy job.
-...How annoying...

-So? What was this all-important thing that'll stop the test subjects? / I cooperated with you, didn't I? So c'mon! Tell me already.

-Yeah... It's the destruction code to a chip embedded in their brains. It's supposed to stop their PSI.

-Kukuku... I get it now...Ahahaha...

15:
-You
-betrayed Amagi Miroku, didn't you?

-Yusaka...?

-Ah...!?

-Iba-san!!?
-Gar..gh!? *cough cough*

-Yusaka...! You...!!

16:
-Th...This is...!!

-Matsuri-Sensei!?

-I didn't notice...
-We've been attacked... by that man...!!

-Iba, surely you didn't think a plain human such as yourself could possibly make friends with an exquisite human such as I?
-I've been keeping an eye on you.

-But, you fell short of Amagi Miroku's expectations.

17:
-So, I'll be executing you all as a member of W.I.S.E now.

-W.I.S.E....!?

-What is this!? What happened...!?

18:
-Gargh...!!

-HAHAHAHAHAHAA!

19:
-Matsuri-Sensei!

-Is this...the virus...?
-My body's going numb...

Text: Yusaka's true colours...!!

-There they are!!
-CALL.101 / End

Awesome! Thanks, Eric-the-red!

I'll speak to Binktopia and make sure they use your proofreads & credit you next week! ^^

No problem, thank you!