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Defense Devil 36

Night before departure

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+ posted by Queenofmuffins as translation on Feb 2, 2010 02:10 | Go to Defense Devil

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For I.E.M

1:
-Judgment 8: Night before departure.
[Tn: Female...nudity...overload...! >.<"]

Text:
Girl: “Kyaaaaaaa!”
Boy: “Ah! Sorry!”
Girl: “Mouuu…Idiot!”
[Tn: I’m sorry boys. Manga lies to you. If I or any other girl caught you seeing us nekkid, we’d kick yo’ ass. :3]

2:
Text: Ahhhhhh!!!

-I’m…scared…
-Kucabara…

-W-wait a minute!
-W-what…are you doing, all of sudden?

-Y-You're grabbing a weird place!
-Stop it! Lemme go!

3:
-I'm...scared of myself... / I can't...keep enduring it...anymore...

-Since the age of 5, when I began to see Demons...
-Usually at night...

-When the demons appeared before me...
-I was abosloutely terrified...

-Why was I...
-the only one who could see such things...?

4:
-Perhaps…
-Even my parent's murder...

-I wonder if I was the cause of that as well...?

-I guess… / I’m not a normal girl after all…

-I’m scared…
-Kucabara!

5:
[Tn: Nawwwwwwww!]

6:
-Did something happen between the two of them?

-Hmm?
-Er, how do I put it...

-It's like, even before they did the special training,
-Things have gotten even worse between the two of them...

-Don’t throw bags on someone’s hand!!
-Hey, are you listening to me!?

-Did you say something?

7:
-No.

-I think if I were to suddenly start to cry,
-It'd probably get cold in here real fast...

-I don’t understand human women…!!
-Right, Bichula?
-What?

-…Anyway, we can finally return to the Demon World! We'll about to finish packing soon.
-By the way…

8:
-Father, what have you been tinkering with for awhile now...?

-Oh, it's a tradition and regulation our monestry is very proud of. The latest...
-Er, well, anyway. It's a powerful partner to aid everyone in the demon world.

-Huh? Are you talking about this worn-out... / Is this another one of your weird jokes?

-Sometimes it's whats on the inside not the outside that counts.
-If it all goes according to plan…
-It'll certainly serve it's purpose.

Box: The night half a day before,
-the departure to the Demon World.

9:
-Evenyone may have acted like they were calm,
-But the truth is, we were all wrapped in an unusually heavy atmosphere.

-Wait for us, Jupiter. / We'll be coming to save you soon.

-And...
-Wait for me, bastards.

-I swear...
-I'll pay back the humilation from back then 100 times over!!

Text: Even though I thought that...

10:
-As always, the flames of Hell…

11:
-are extremely beautiful.

12:
-Legato-sama, shall we abandone it here?

-Oh, no. I didn't bring it in order to just throw it away.

-Then, why did you...?

13:
-It's because she makes / a perfect invitation.

-…At last, tomorrow morning,
-We’ll leave to save Jupiter.

14:
-Good evening,/ try to get some sleep.

-Are you going too, Father-sama?

-I wish I could. / ...But my duty is to protect this place.

-I see. Well, it can’t be helped.
-So, can a portal to the Demon world really be opened?

-It's useless to worry. Just concentrate on working together.
-And remember the harmony you two achieved from the special training.

15:
-The only problem is, after you rescue Jupiter...
-Will you be able to overthrow Legato, the demon world's new Prince...?

-Opening the way to the future,
-relies solely on you.

-You...know Legato...?
-Well now, time's up.

-Go back and rest. / After all, you're going to save Jupiter tomorrow, right?

-What the hell! / Just who is that Father?
-I told ya he was a suspicious guy!

16:
-I won't think of anything unnecessary anymore!
-I can only think of saving Jupiter!

-Wait for us, Jupiter!
-I swear…

-we’ll…

-rescue you!!

17:
-…Even though
-We thought that…

-Even though I thought that!!

-Ummmpphh….

-Uummmmppp…/ hhh…

-Idamaria…?

18:
-Uuuu…uuummmpppgghhh!!!
Text: The invitation from Legato…is Jupiter!?

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#1. by Pitou ()
Posted on Feb 2, 2010
More then a half of the text from pages 8 and 15 is missing. Plus entire page 9....
And the breakdown between pages 16 and 17.

Page 7:
"immedietly" --> immediately?
#2. by zambo92 ()
Posted on Feb 2, 2010
"[Tn: I’m sorry boys. Manga lies to you. If I or any other girl caught you seeing us nekkid, we’d kick yo’ ass. :3]"

Haha love it ;)
And it ain't necessarily true ;P
#3. by Ojosama ()
Posted on Feb 2, 2010
and when will you correct a chapter? a lot of mistakes and fragments of the text are missing.
#4. by Queenofmuffins ()
Posted on Feb 2, 2010
I'm sorry, I was rushing a bit since I was two chapters behind/I'm leaving for Japan in a few days so I don't have much time to spare.
I thought I had it all done. My mistake! It's all fixed now~ ^^

@Ojosama
I'm on a different time zone, so I was actually sleeping. ;3
But it's all done now! Please enjoy. ^^

@Zambo
...Do I even want to know what you've been doing? XD
#5. by Vegi ()
Posted on Feb 3, 2010
Thanks, Queeny!!! ^-^ Have a nice trip to Japan!
#6. by Queenofmuffins ()
Posted on Feb 3, 2010
Arigatou, Vegi! ^^
#7. by Pitou ()
Posted on Feb 3, 2010
Thanks for fixing it all
#8. by ritsume ()
Posted on Feb 3, 2010
On page 7, the second panel,

-I think if I were to suddenly burst into tears
-She'd immediately become even colder...

Does it actually mean
-I thought that she'd suddenly burst into tears
-But she immediately became so cold

I don't know if the と思えば can be interpreted in this way, but it does seem to make more sense >.<
#9. by Queenofmuffins ()
Posted on Feb 3, 2010
と思えば = If I think/thought

Yeah, that sentence fustrated me too. Because in Japanese sentences they don't really use "markers" like we do in English (he/she/them/you) it's often really hard to figure out who they're talking about exactly.

The sentence is literally;
突然 泣き出した と思えば
All of a sudden burst into tears if I think

急に 冷たくなったり
suddenly colder became.

Do you see my problem with that line? ^^;

I did think that he might be referring to Idamaria, but then I thought..."Why would she cry?" As in, Kucabara had a bag thrown on his hand, so bursting into tears would be understandable (if not very manly. XD) But nothing happened to Idamaria to make her start crying...

I've edited the line to say something like "I think if I were to suddenly start crying, it'd get cold in here real fast."
That's what someone reccomended me to translate to.
#10. by Tessen ()
Posted on Feb 5, 2010
Thanks for tl'ing this :)

Here's what I have.

3:
-I was absolutely terrified...

6:
-Don’t throw bags on someone’s hand!!

This one confused me, because she's definitely dropping a wooden box on his hand, but then says something like this? But I even went to double check it myself, and you are right. Most of my dictionaries said "baggage/luggage" though, so I changed it to that since it's a LITTLE closer than bags, but I didn't want to change it to boxes, either, since that's not what it says... Why do they do stuff like this. :( The final sentence I changed it to ended up being "Don’t drop baggage on someone’s hand!!" I try not to make a lot of really big changes like that but most people reading this won't go back and look at the raw to see that's what it really says...and they might think we're all a little strange in the head if we're calling boxes bags...

7:
-…Anyway, we can finally return to the Demon World! We're about to finish packing soon. (we'll -> we're)

8:
-Father, what have you been tinkering with all this time...? (literal translations aside, I think this is closer to what you'd say in English.)

-It'll certainly serve its purpose. (it's -> its)

12:
-Legato-sama, shall we abandon it here?
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