Psyren 16

More action = less text! Yippie!!
also, the raw this week was so much easier to read--many thanks go to the provider.

edit: done. do proof if you can, yaddah yaddah

01
bold: A gigantic monster blocks their path!

-Wha-wha-WHAT THE HECK IS THAT?!

-It's huge!

-A-a-a-aaaaah!
-Eee--M-m-monster!!

SUMMARY (left)
-Right in the middle of their PSI training, Ageha and co are pulled right back into Psyren. The starting signal puts the newcoming players into confusion. Amamiya tries to explain to them all about Psyren, but no one believes her. Instead, they all copy the actor Mochizuki Oboro who simply decides to go outside. As a result, a huge creature appears from below the ground right before their eyes--!!

02
-GYAAAAAAA!

03
-CALL.16 - "The ravenous worm"
bold: Her true feelings are entrusted to her blade...
author bottom, iwashiro toshiaki

04
-Le-let me goooooo
-OOONNNGAH

-AAAAAAAGH!!

-UWAAAAAH!

05
-RUN FOR IT!

sfx bubble: piku

-I'm right here in front of it, and it hasn't noticed me!?

06
-It's the footsteps! It can sense the vibrations through the sand, and that's why it came out to attack!

sfx crunch crunch

-eeek!!
-Leave us alone!!

-If that's true then how are they supposed to get away!?
-good question

07
-Find some elevation!
-That thing attacks when it hears your footsteps!
-Retreat to higher ground, and it won't be able to find you!

-Climb up! Hurry!

-I'm sure my message reached them...even though they haven't awakened, they're in Psyren's atmosphere after all
-It's the least we can do...

-Yeah...
-good thinking

08
-What!? It's still coming here!

-LEAVE ME ALONE!!!

-Shit!! That's not high enough! It's going to get them!

-Yoshina!?

09
-Mochizuki Oboro! Over here!!
-If you don't get up here, that thing'll come this way!
-Then why the heck did you come here?! You'll be eaten too!
-Give me your hand!! This only happened because you guys wouldn't listen!

-So now I have to listen to your lectures?
-I'm not a child!

-What the hell is wrong with you!? Do you have a deathwish?!

10
-VWAAAAAAAAH!!!

11 PWN'D

12 more pwnage

13
-Seesh
-Do you ever think before you act?

-LOOK OUT!!

14
sfx bubble: bakun

-Asaga!!

15
-That was a close call
-You're pretty reckless yourself, Amamiya

-A...dragon's tail...?

-When I was training...all I envisioned was becoming stronger...
-And before I knew it, that's the shape it took

-Is that...
-You guys have some kind of power...??
-haa
-haa

-Looks like it won't be able to find us here

16
-Are you alright, Yoshina?
-I told you I got the hang of it! ...ngh...I'm seeing stars...

-Don't use your PSI any more!
-Otherwise, you'll get as worn out as I was last time!

-What is his ability? You mean with the same training, that's the result?
-I have no idea

-Just a moment ago, I kinda used my Burst without thinking. And yet, I've never pulled out something that big
-It feels like I've somehow improved...maybe it's because we're back here that the load on my mind is less...?

-Yes, that's because of the atmosphere here. It conducts PSI on a level far surpassing the present
-As if our shackles have been released, you could say, our PSI powers are augmented here

-What the heck are they talking about??

17
-He--llo!! Guys??
-What do we do now??

-Hey check it! There's some guys left over there!
-I'm glad they made it

-Heeey!!
-Can you hear us??
sfx bubble: jyari (footstep sfx, what's a good one?)

-You're injured!!
-Yeah, I was cut up by the rubble when we landed here at the start of the game

-Well, it could have been worse
-But don't worry, it's just a scratch

18
-Yosh!! Let's go get them and head for the gate!
-We just need a plan to take out that worm and we're home free!!

-GYAAAH!!

-An explosion!?

19
bold: A "person" appears??? Is it the enemy?!

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