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Naruto
#470: Killer Bee VS Kisame
[Insert text: Sakura's confession provokes a furious reaction!!]
Sakura: I'm... // ...lying... to myself...?
Naruto: .........
Sakura: Everyone has the right to determine how they feel!! // If you don't like me, then you might as well just say so!! / There's no need to go around making up excus-
Naruto: Well, something's not right here! / Why would you come all the way out here just to tell me this?!
Sakura: ..."Just to".........?!
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Sakura: What's that supposed to mean?! Are you telling me you don't think a confession of love is
important enough for you?!! // Why would I "come all the way out here"?! // I'll tell you why I would! // You're always thinking about nothing but Sasuke-kun, Sasuke-kun, Sasuke-kun! Chasing after him like it's all that matters! / Getting yourself in all kinds of trouble! // The Kyuubi Jinchuuriki is being targeted by Akatsuki! / Why don't you try worrying about
yourself for once in a while?! // Listen, all right...?! / There's no need for you to put yourself in all this danger just for the sake of chasing after Sasuke-kun! // I want you to give this up and come back to the village! That's why I chased you all the way out here! / That's all there is to it!
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Naruto: It still sounds to me like you're just trying to make excuses. // I like to think I understand you too, Sakura-chan.
Sakura: Then why
don't you understand?! / I don't have any feelings any more for that criminal Sasuke-kun! // So your promise with me doesn't mean a thing any more!
Naruto: This isn't about some promise... // I feel like I understand myself, a little... // ...why Sasuke is so crazily obsessed with revenge...
Kakashi: .........
Naruto: Sasuke loved his family and his clan so much... // I think it's because his feelings for them were so strong that he can't find it in himself to forgive.
Kiba: Then why is it that
after defeating that Itachi who he finds it so hard to forgive... / ...he's teaming up with Akatsuki?
Naruto: But that's not how it is... // The truth is...
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Kakashi: Naruto!
Naruto: !
Sakura: ?
Kiba/Lee: !!
Flashback!Yamato: Now, listen. I'd like to keep everything that Madara just said between the three of us for now. // Treat it as top-secret information. // We don't want to introduce any extra complications when the village is still recovering. // And unless we can verify his information for ourselves, it can't be trusted either. // Pointing the finger at the higher-ups of Konoha as the true masterminds behind Itachi's massacre of the Uchiha clan is not a step to be taken lightly...
Naruto: ...It doesn't matter to me right now whether that promise still stands or not. / It doesn't make any difference.
Sakura: !
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Naruto: It's my own desire to save Sasuke that is driving me here.
Sakura: .........
Kiba: (What do we do now, Sakura...? // Is it not about time we just came out and told him the truth -)
Lee: !
Kiba: Nghh!
Sakura: Fine. I'll head back, then!!
Kiba: Owwww.........
Akamaru: *whine*~~~~~
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Sakura: We're leaving! / Kiba, Lee-san, Sai!
Lee: Sakura-san...
Kiba: Let's just go.
Sakura: (Naruto... // I'm sorry!)
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Kiba: Are you sure this is all right, Sakura?
Sakura: Kiba, I have a request to make.
Kiba: ! // What is it?
Sakura: I want you to find Sasuke-kun for me right now! // I need your help!
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Kurotsuchi: But why?!
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Kurotsuchi: If we take this opportunity to dispose of the Hachibi and the Kyuubi, we can put a stop to this plan of Madara's... // ...and since that would mean depleting the Cloud and Konoha's military forces at the same time, surely we'd be taking out two birds with one stone!
Tsuchikage: We're not playing by those kind of rules this time.
Kurotsuchi: Why not?! / This isn't like your usual stubborn self at all!
Flashback!Gaara: When did you people abandon your selves?
Tsuchikage: ...Because I remembered something......
Kurotsuchi: Remembered what?
Akatsuchi: ?
Tsuchikage: ...How I used to be before I got so stubborn.
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Ponta: Urghhh...
Kisame: For all that size, that bear wasn't even worth harvesting.
Sab: Ponta is a raccoon! // And now you're going to taste the depth of my passion!
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KillerBee: (Passion... so this is the kind of situation where you use it, huh...? Okay! Gotcha!)
Kisame: I suppose that means you're going to stand in my way!
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Kisame: (Using Raiton to create high-frequency vibrations and increase the pencil's penetrative capacity before throwing it... // And it's more penetrative than even a Fuuton-enhanced projectile... those some impressive vibrations all right...... // Even I'd end up with a hole in me if I took one of those straight-on.)
Sab: Yosakugiri!!
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Kisame: (Using mid-range attacks with his Raiton projectiles to gauge my reactions... // ...and he uses even that as a diversion... // ...to corner me completely...)
KillerBee: (Time to open some holes in you~!♪)
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KillerBee: ?!
Sab: (What's going on here?! Bee's hyper-vibrato Raiton blades are failing to penetrate him?!)
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KillerBee: HAAAAAHHHHH!! // HEADBUTT!!
Sab: (The Hachibi Cloak!! Excellent! That should take his head right off!) // !
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KillerBee: ......! // You're... draining my...!
Sab: Bee! I see it now! // It's his sword! The sword is draining your chakra! // Presumably he used it to drain the chakra of your hyper-vibrato Raiton blade as well, before it could make contact with his body!! // That's why it couldn't pierce him through!
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Samehada: Gghhhhhhh...
Kisame: It looks like Samehada rather enjoys the octopus flavour of your chakra. / It's not often I see him get this excited...... your chakra seems quite worth harvesting.
KillerBee: Pretty cute little face you're pulling there. But I'll change it into a dead-fish stare!♪ // I'll... lessee...
Kisame: Hoshigaki Kisame. // A name you should remember.
[Insert text: Samehada transforms... will this be a tough fight for Killer Bee?!]
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You said:
Kiba: Then why is it that after defeating that Itachi who he finds it so hard to forgive... / ...he's teaming up with Akatsuki?
I said:
Kiba: Then why is it that after defeating Itachi, who he found so hard to forgive... / ... that he's now teamed up with Akatsuki?
--------------What I did:
What I bolded will tell you what I removed and what I added or edited.
I hope you change a few things. Good job though.
Late translation anyhow...