Gantz 307

Sugooi already have their own version, so this is for anyone to use. :3
A couple of sentences sound a bit weird to me so I welcome any suggestions on making them sound better.


1:
[0307] Giga Structure.
Text: Just another battlefield.

3:
-The unprecedented giant structure which doesn't allow any feelings of dejavu.
-The overwhelming mass just keeps descending.

4:
[Fantastic colour page! \o/]

5:
Text: Raging violently throughout Heaven and Earth, a powerless struggle for survival.

6 - 13:
[No text~]

14:
-Gaaaarggghhh!

15 - 17:
[No text again~]

18:
-That's...
-Something like that's...

-Hah [panting noises]
-Hah
-Hah

19:
-Arrrrrrrgh!!

-Arrrrrghhh! / Sensei! Senseeeeei!

-I see how it is...
-Goddammit...
-Hah

-Hah

20:
-I'll never give up!! Not even till the very end!!

21:
-Not even till the very last moment!! I won't fuckin' die! I'll survive!!

22
-Hey! / What the hell are ya doin', daytime lantern?
-Whataya thinkin' at a time like this!?
-Pervert!

-You two, / whatcha plannin' on doin' on the roof?
-Like we'd let you!!
-In a place like this!!

-Oh...
-Bastard, / ignoring us...

-Huh?

-Oh...

-Arrrrrrrghhh!!!
-Noooooo!
-Teacher!!

Box: Please evacuate the school calmly and quickly, proceed as according to the drills...

23:
-Phew [Exhaling noises]
-Phew

-phew
-Phew

-Phew
-Huh?
-Kei-chan?

-What...is that...?
-Tai-chan, get behind me.

-Pheeeew
-Phewww

-We are surrender! Give up! [He's speaking in Engrish.]
-Prease don't shooting!
-Prease!! Don't shooting!!

24:

25:
-Pheeew
-Just one more...
-Pheeew

-Arrrrrrrrggghhh!!!

26:
[Hell yes!]

27:
-Pheeeeeeeeeew.

-Dayti...
-Kuro...no...?

-Kei...chan...

28:

29:
-Cannot translate weird alien language.

Text: What he saw when he fought back...
Was a cold and incomprehensible reality.

-What...the hell is that...?

-GANTZ [0307] END
Next week, the gigantic life form confronts Kurono! // YJ # 52, published Thursday 26th November!