Defense Devil 32

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Merry Christmas to you, too! My suggested changes are bolded.
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Merry Christmas everyone! ^^
Enjoy my gift of Defence Devil chapter 32. \o/

Someone *really* needs to proofread this. Some lines sounded so... wrong ;_;

That and I'm not too sure about the bible quotes, since I'm an atheist. ^^;
I hope someone better versed in the bible can check them for me! XD

Reserved for the IEatManga crew! <3

1:
-Judgment -6 The Key To The Demon World
Text: In the December 18th Volume 3 release and last month's Volume 2 release,
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2:
Text: The Demon World…

-…Where am I?
-I’m positive I was just riding a train during the commuter (delete) rush hour…

Text: The balance between the Demon World and the Human World is beginning to collapse…

3:
-Who are you?
-Right back atcha! When I came too I was just here.
-I’m late for school~
-I’ve got an important meeting to go to!!
-I mean, where are we? / Why are we here!?

-This time the Shinigamis / have abducted all these humans from the human world.

-Legato-sama will forgive us for interfering with the human world, / as well as the increasing amount of Shinigamis who indiscriminately throw humans into Hell.

-They'll soon be sent to the trash-processing plant.
-By bringing such a large number of humans, / surely the balance in the Demon World will be even more disturbed...

-Hmmph, a bastard like you cannot possibly understand Legato-sama.

4:
-His orders are pure evil.
-Shugarl!

-No matter what'll happen to the Demon world, we'll follow our own instincts… / I see no reason why (delete) not to indulge ourselves and commit all kinds of destruction and massacre.

-If now it's good, then it's fine, huh.. / It's a hedonistic and completely unmathematical thought.
-今が良ければそれで良い、か… / 享楽的でまったく数学的じゃない思考だ。

-You going already? The fun's about to start.
-I don’t care.

5:
-Yo! Long time no see.
-I just had a nice fight with that weirdo Kucabara, / ...isn't he your buddy, Shugarl?

-Seriously, are you even any use in Hell considering that you've lost your qualification to be a Shinigami?

-Don't ignore me, you dick!
-Calm down, Yamaha-san.

6:
-Thus, according to the Apostle John... / "For God so loved the world..."
かくして使途ヨハネ曰く… / [主は万物を愛するがゆえ]…

7:
-"...that whosoever believeth in Him should not perish,"
[主に仕えれば誰にでも]…
-"but have everlasting life." (p/r note: This is John 3:16, King James Version)
[永遠の命が得られるであろう].

-Why didn't you return the shot!?
-Because that was a completely different angle!!

-That's why I told you to predict it and run there!! Idiot!!
-Idiot!? What are you calling me an idiot for!?

-We're on the second day of training…
-But I haven't seen any signs of progress in you two at all.

9:
-There are many "gaps"./ And the thing which fills the "gaps" is…

-"Consideration". / When you're considerate of each other, you're able to compensate for each other's weak points…

-Ya'know, you gotta respond quicker!!
-Hey! Isn’t that your area!?

10:
-This is the "Twice Bomb"/ It was developed by a Christian Science group.
-It was originally created to obliterate demons...

-Right now I am forbidden to use it. / And there's a reason for that…
-Father Serma...What's with you, all of a sudden?

-Under normal circumstances, if this bomb hits the ground twice in a row, / it will explode and expel the demons....
-...Like a tennis rule.

10:
-As you can see, due to this destructive power,
-the blast will also decimate any humans caught in it.

-Once the bomb has been thrown, the explosion is unstoppable… / However, there is a way to stop it from exploding.

-If you apply a 25JK shock 3,000 times, / the blast will lose its durability...

-25JK!?

-That means you can stop it if you hit it 3,000 times with your tennis rackets.
-What's with that logic!?

11:
-Father!? Are you insane!? We're in a city!!
-You're lying, right!? About the explosion..

-You’ll understand soon enough,

-if I'm lying.

-Shiiit!!

12:
-Arrrgh, I’m losing my balance!!
-I..Idamaria,

-It’s up to you!!

-I’m not gonna make it! It’s too far away!!

13:
-Just this once,
-I’m gonna help you out!!

-What!! I don’t need your help!!
-Don’t joke around!!

-If that’s the case, then get off!
-Hmmph!!

14:
-Arrrrrrrgh!!

-Noooooo!!

15:
-Geez… You've made too many unnecessary movements!

-You always do that!

-…That’s it. Now they've got it.
-This way they can cover for each other's weaknesses.

16:
-Oh no, Master!!

-There are kids riding on that bus…!!

-Dammit!! I didn't notice his mistake...!

-Idamaria!!
-You gotta send me flying!!

-Hurry!!

17:
-Noooooooooooo!!

Text: Next issue, Much more excitement in the [Devil Tennis Match]!?
-That’s it!

Thank you!! :D
You did such an awesome job. ^^

Are you for hire? ;)

You're welcome!

I can typically proofread an average-sized (~20 pages) chapter fairly quickly. If you're looking for a proofreader, I'd be happy to do it.

"this translation is ready for use"?????
aren't anybody aware, that page 8 is completely MISSING?!!
what kind of "proofread" is this??

sorry for my roughness, but if I have to wait 2 weeks(!!) for an incomplete translation and a botch proofread, I think my anger is comprehensible...

(btw two pages 10... plus title must named as "The Key To The Demon World (7)", otherwise would it be chapter 26...)

Well, I had someone named ghstchild offer, and I was very happy to have a proofreader, but I think she/he might be a bit too busy since so far she hasn't checked any of my trans. ^^

I do a lot of different series though, so if you just want to do defence devil, that's fine! :3
I'd love to have you on board!~

don't ignore my post. this is a really serious case...

Pitou, your tone is not appreciated.
I did not ignore your post, I just didn't see it.

Page 8 is missing in the raws, therefore I skipped it so as not to confuse the scanalator. In case you haven't noticed, being Christmas time, people are usually very busy, just like lingwe and I am. I've been working triple shifts at 2 jobs so weirdly enough, I don't have a lot of time spare to spend 6 hours or so providing you with a FREE service! I got asked by lingwe to do this just the other day, so I stayed up till 3am translating this on Christmas eve so it would Rbe done quickly! Be patient.Waiting 2 weeks for something will not kill you.

Normally, I would be nice to someone even if they're just complaining, but seeing as I've only had 4 hours sleep because of tranlsating, I'm not in the mood. I will fix the page 10 issue, and re-check the raw since I'm pretty sure it said 6 but I might have been mistaken. Merry Christmas.

Please be aware, that it is 4:30am in germany and I did translating also for free...
I'd also many things to do especially it's christmas eve... so I saw the trans on the main-page on noon and want to assigne it over night. I'm dog-tired and frustrated, 'cause I take the time so late to translate one of my favorite manga, and then it's incomplete...

please mention things like missing pages anywhere.
btw the raws by raw-paradise/dofla were complete...

and please don't excuse the lateness with the holydays. the raw of chapter 32 was released more then 2 weeks ago.
and if you really got more things to do while the holydays then usual, you shouldn't have time for translating. so it's no excuse.
I'm really thankful for your job the main time, but if you keep the fans waiting for two weeks and have no time an christmas, take these 2 - 3 days also and do it, if you got more freetime...

Mmm, my raws went from page 7 - 9... I'm not sure if I got the raws from raw-paradise or from MH. But, I don't think a page is actually missing, most likely whoever scanned the raws labelled the pages wrong? The 2 x page 10 mistake occurred when I noticed I didn't have a page 8, corrected it, then noticed the page missing in the raws and re-corrected it. ^^;

either way, it should be fine in the scanalation~

There also shouldn't be a problem with the next chapter :3

I really hope, there'll be no problems ._.
lingwe sayed in his last trans, he would be faster by the next one.......and couldn't deliver his promise...
I hope you will.

Counting on you!
Still good hollydays.

P.S. I got my raws from RP and the pages are labelled correct =7

Thankksss!!!

Thankksss!!!

I just noticed you changed your previous comment, so I'll reply to the "holiday" thing.

Pitou, the raw may have been out 2 weeks but this is lingwe's project. Not mine. Therefore, as I have already said, lingwe asked me to translate this FOR HIM just the other day. I translated this chapter pretty damm fast. It is not my fault it has been 2 weeks. I do not steal projects from other people which is why I did not translate this project until now. And when lingwe is no longer busy, he will pick it back up.

If you have such an issue with waiting 2 weeks, take it up with lingwe. Not me.

Thanks for the TL :3

Wow,some people need to get a grip of themselves.

Thank you zyki! ^^

Grip of myself? -.-..... I have it. Otherwise my words were really "appreciate".

Ok, last comment:
A incomplete tranlation is for international translaters like me usless, if there are whole pages missing. So I think I got the right to agitate as I did... -.-
And btw a manga-series is never the projekt of only one guy. If he's late, then it's only natural to pick it up and do it by yourself.