Naruto 295

Now here I can understand what Yamato was saying about Kyubi form , thanks very much lolomaru !

Whoa, you're everywhere, lolomaru XD Thanks!

if i can bring my contribution to this beautiful forum, I'll continue ^^
thnaks ! :thumbs

Thanks for the trans. HAHA the avatar reminded me of an old movie i watched when i was a kid.

thanx lolomaru

Wonderful translation, easy to understand! Good job on that, lolomaru.

Greate translation , thank you , you made my day :D

Well done! :ossu

Whoa, you're everywhere, lolomaru XD  Thanks!

yeah!! but he did good- thanks

wow, that's nice from you, lolomaru. You do the French translation and scanlation and now you are doing the Japanese Translation as well! O_o That's marvelous. :clap

Hi I'm new, please be gentle with me. :amuse

Just some points on the excellent trans:


sidetext: It's a warrior ! it's a seducer ! It's a pervert !

Would this be bettter as "he's a..." ? As it refers to Jiraiya?

I would have it: "He's Tough! He's noble! He's PERVY!" Or if it's "I", as it well could be, just drop the subject "Tough! Noble! PERVY!" :smile-big


"orochimaru: if I have to take this attack directly with this huge quantity of chakra...
i'll die..."

I'd have it as " If I got hit by such concentrated Chakara....I'd most certainly die" "sasuga ni"さすがに is tough though...hmmm "no one..." 　could be used perhaps? something to the effect of "Regardless as to who I am, If I got hit by such concentrated Chakara....I'd most certainly die"...

I added the "most certainly" even though it's not in the Japanese because I think it sounds creepy, like Orochimaru. The "wa ne" with the grin. Perhaps someone can think of something less long that sounds better. "Regardless of who I am, getting hit by such concentrated Chakara...That'd be the end."

Hmmmmm this is harder than I though it would be. :darn



[br]Posted at: February 17, 2006, 11:43:33 AM_________________________________________________Yamato (thinking): what an amazing fight ! It's not a question of level, they are trying to see the other's weakness point...


Also this bothers me a little...Someone please help with

"What a fight! This is no tactial battle!"
"what a fight! Even if they could find each others weak point, what could they do?"
"What a fight! At this level They couldn't do anything even if they did spot the others weak point"

Perhaps the last one is best...hmmmmm, still not happy though.

oyasumi :)

you're right brucelee, i must have made some mistakes, but english is not my native language, and i made this translation very quickly...
I'll try to make my best next time !
But thank you for your advices !

Best thing about this forum - especially for Naruto translators - you'll definitely get some input from other translators as you go along. So learn, improve, and do more excellent translations for us, lolomaru! :D

And welcome to the forums brucelee. :)

Thanks alot Lolomaru, and welcome to MH Brucelee

Wow, lolomaru, you're really great in translating anyway...

La HNT devrait se mettre aux scans anglais aussi ^^ Comme ça, tout le monde serait content !
Great job !! :)

Wow, lolomaru, you're really great in translating anyway...

La HNT devrait se mettre aux scans anglais aussi ^^ Comme ça, tout le monde serait content !
Great job !! :)


c'est fait maggeus, dans la section scan, on a fait un chapitre en anglais ^^