One Piece 462

Originally I started b/c there were no trans up (skywalker's was stopped at page 5)
but in the interval i started suddenly 4 were up.
Anyway here is my version.

I'm typing the script so hopefully the other translators can pick it apart. Note - i'm skipping obvious katakana and names or very short lines.

01
オーズの冒険
ch 462 - Oz's Adventure

02
-Negative Hollows!!
-Hololololo!!
bottom right - four hollows atttack!!

さっきのは何かの間違いだこの一斉攻撃で
お前は完全に生きる気力を失う！
-Something must've gone wrong last time, but with this simultaneous attack,
-You'll completely lose all will to live!!

くらった！！4体完全に
-He took it! All four completely hit him!!

-Hololololo

このスリラーバーク始まって以来！！ゴーストに
心を折られなかった者など誰一人・・・
-This is the first time in Thriller Bark's history!!
-Not a single person has ever resisted that heartbreak!

03
ネガテェブゴースト達がネガテェブに負けした！！
あの男まさか仙人か聖人じゃねぇのか？
-WOOOOAH!!
-The negative ghosts lost to his negativity!!
-Is that man some kind of saint or monk*?!
*i chose monk, but the word here implies a hermit who's trained to transcend earthly desires.

クマシーいつも・・・ごめんね
本体のペローナ様にも影響が
-Kumashi...I'm sorry for everything I've done to you...
-It's even effected Perona!!

・・・いいかお前ら
物事をマイナスに考えることにおいて
-...listen up, all of you!
-When it comes to looking at things negatively,

このおれを超えられると思うな！！
-Don't ever think you can beat Usopp!!

だめな方にすげぇ自身だ！
-What confidence in his pessimism!!
(thx skywalker, indeed the slight font variation indicates the zombies saying this line. Stupid font!!)

04
-Perona's "Garden of Wonder"
-haa...
-haa...
まさかウソップのネガティブがこんな所で役に立つとは・・・
-I would have never thought Usopp's negativity would have come in handy here...

あいつがいかったらたったあれだけで
一味全滅もあり得た！！
恐ろしい能力があるもんだ
折って来てるのは妙な動物ゾンビだけだな
-If he wasn't with us,
-we would all have been done for!
-That was a frightening ability...
-The only ones after us now are some strange animal zombies

この庭をまっすぐ渡ればブルックのいる屋敷か
おれはここで別れてナミさんの元へ向かう！
-If you head straight across this garden you'll end up at the mansion where Brooke is.
-I'm getting off here to go after Nami!

わかったしっかりやれよ！！
おおよ！おれは恋の狐火！！
-Got it! Take care!
-OOO! I am a flame of passion!!** (he actually says i am a will'o'wisp of love, but i really dont know how to make that palatable in english...)
-N-N-Nami-sannnn! I won't let you marry him!!
とんだ・・・ここ結構高ェんじゃねェか？
-He jumped!! ...Aren't we pretty high up?!

05
ま、人間テンション上がると痛みも薄れるというからな・・・
-...well, they say when humans are under a lot of stress they don't feel as much pain
sfx - CRASH!!

とにかく俺達ァあの屋敷の最上階だ
研究室にガイコツがいる！
ああ
-Anyway, we need to get to the top of that mansion!
-The skeletons are in the lab!
-Right!

-Idiot!!
-Haa...!
-Haa...
-YOhohohoho!
-Haa...

06
まるで不死鳥・・・またはゾンビか
もう立ってもいられぬ筈ですがね
-You're like a phoenix...or a zombie...
-You shouldn't even be able to stand

-Zeh... (no idea why this, but this is his wheezing sound)
-zeh...

そろそろ完全に止まって貰いますよ
もう二度と影を奪い返しに来れぬ様に
私の得意とする”矢筈斬り”でどこを斬り落としてあげましょうか？！
-I'll stop you from moving yet!
-So that you can no longer come to take your shadow back
-What shall I sever, with my patented "Yahazu-giri"?
(Yahazu means the notch of an arrow in my dictionary. Something like a really pointed slice, it probably indicates the kind of mark it leaves or the shape of the stroke).

何も知らないクセに
その名を使うな
-You don't even know anything about it...
-Zeh...
-Don't you dare use that name...
-zeh...

国王の「奇襲部隊」出身の私の得意とした速や斬りの技の名は
”鎮魂曲バンドゥロル”、その剣技を賞賛し仲間達がつけてくれた通称こそが
”鼻唄三丁矢筈斬り”
-The name of that fast-slicing technique that I made my specialty ever since I was in the kingdom's "surprise attack squad"...
-was originally "Requiem Bandouroru."** My friends admired that move and nicknamed it
**Indeed, Banderole. See skywalker's trans.
-"Hana-uta San-chou, Yahazu-giri"
(did some research. Hanauta = humming (brooke's nickname I believe), san = three, chou is tricky. Chou here can mean a huge variety of things. I really learned more here than when I first studied kanji. For example, chou is a counter for tools, guns, levers, even leaves or servings or rounded numbers. This leads me to believe the meaning is quite loose. I'm almost leaning toward it indicating some kind of speed at which he executes the move even though it's not a kanji having to do with time. Until we see more of his moves I can't really come to a conclusion on its exact meaning. One more thing to note, "sanchou" means summit/peak but obviously that word uses different kanji.)

07
私の性格と技を持っていても
思いでも人情も忘れてしまったお前なんかに
その名を使われたくはない！
-Even if you possess my personality and my skill,
-You, who has lost his memories and his humanity,
-Have no right to use that name!! (lit. I don't want you to use that name)

ヨホホホあくまであなたが本家というのなら
私の使うニセ物の剣技を破ってみなさい！
-Yohohoho...If you're so insistent on being its creator,
-Then go ahead and defeat my "imitation" swordsmanship!

これが
最後のチャンスですよ
-This is...
-Your last chance

-haa
-haa

-haaa
-yoho... (bubble letters)

-haa
-haa

08
”鼻唄三丁”
-Hanauta Sanchou...
”矢筈斬り”
-Yahazu-giri

09
-Lavaan!

何よりお前に謝りたい
-I want to apologize to you, more than anything

この悲運な私を謝りたい
まずは勿論このアフロ
-This pitiful skeleton wants to apologize (lit. this misfortunate me)
-Of course I'll start with the afro

暗い海を50年・・・長かったのになァ・・・生きた意味がなかったなんて・・・
-For 50 years in this dark sea...even after all that time...I failed to find a reason to live

淋しいなァ！
私の人生・・・淋しいな！
-How lonely...
-How lonely my life has been!

-Yohoho!

10
-Ngh!!

-aaaaah!!

-Huh!?
何だ！？屋敷がゆれて・・・
-What's going on?! The mansion is shaking

うおい！何だこの揺れは！！
知るかよ！地震じゃねェか？！
-Hey!! What's this tremor?!
-Like I'd know! Some kind of earthquake?
both lower bubbles: haa

-This it!? That laboratory...!?

-Hey, the skeleton's over here!!
-eh...?

11
お前！！だいぶやられてるが
命はあんだな！？生きてるな！！？
あ・・・あ・・・あなたなぜここに
-Hey!! Looks like he got you pretty bad!
-You've still alive, right?
-A...ah...why are you here?

ヨホホホ！！困りますね！！敗者に勝手に触れて貰っては！！
-yohoho!! You're in the way! Get your hands of that loser!!

おっと待った
-Woah there, just a minute

12
お前か
大昔に竜を斬った”伝説の侍”ってのは
竜なんて生物がいたかどうかもしらねェが・・・
-It's you, huh?
-You're the legendary samurai who slew a dragon way back when
-Well, I have no idea if dragons actually existed, but

会いたかったぜ！！
-I've been dying to meet you!! (ha, did i make a pun?)

押し勝った・・・
彼は一体！
-He...he actually pushed him back
-Who is...that man!?

やたら好戦的な三刀流の海賊剣士だ
相当強ェぞ。お前のブライドが許すなら
お前に代わって影を取り返してくれると思うがどうする？
わっ・・・
しかしこの揺れ何だ？！
影を・・・？ホントですか？ぜひ・・・どうか
-He's an unpredictable and violent pirate swordsman who uses santou-ryuu (three sword style)
-He's really strong. If your pride will allow,
-He can take back your shadow for you. Whaddya think?
-woah...
-Where are these tremors coming from?!
-My shadow...!? Is that true?! Then please...!

13
お願いします！！私の影！！取り返してください
うるせぇ！黙ってろ！！
-Please!! Take back my shadow for---
-SHUT UP ALREADY!!

-eeee----h!?

-gaku (sfx)
-Hey, skeleton!?!
お前その刀・・・良さそうだな
-Yo, that's a nice sword you got there...

ヨホホホ！お目が高い！確かにこれは
大業物２１工の一本刃は・・・黒刀乱刃大逆丁字！！
名刀”秋水”という一品
そこらではお目にかかれぬ代物でしょう
-Yohohoho!! You have good eyes! Indeed, this is
-One of the 21 great swords...the blade that can split nations themselves...The Grand Inverse Clove!
(Kokutou-Midareba Daisaka-Chouji)
(T/N: There's more than meets the eye to this name. The kanji lit is: dark/blade/chaos/edge/treason/clove, however there's more to it. The pronunciation given is a pun (i think). The kokutou = throughout countries/nations, midareba - a verb in a potential tense meaning to disturb, throw into unrest/disorder. So my gut is telling me this actually means "The blade that can drive nations into unrest", or more aptly "The blade that divides nations", meanwhile bearing kanji that mean it's a black-colored sword with a "disordered", or by extension, frayed--even serrated--edge. The latter part is what feels to me like an actual name. Daisaka's kanji means high treason although the pronunciation does not mean that. Daisaka has no direct equivalent, but piecing those pronunciations with their kanji, it could only mean large+reverse. Chouji means clove, the spice. I also checked the names of the real Owazamono but none match...darn)
-It is better known as the "Shuusui"! (=Autumn Water)
-It's not one you can find anywhere else!

大業物なのか！！そりゃいい物に出会った
侍というからそこそこのものは期待してたが
-One of the great swords, huh? How lucky for me
-Well, since I heard you were a samurai I was expecting something like this anyway...

よし！その刀
おれが使ってやる！！
なにを！？
-All right!! That sword...
-Is gonna be mine! (lit. I'll use it)
-SAY WHAT!?

14
マストの屋敷１階教会
-Mast, 1st floor - Church...
-uwah!!
-waa---h!!

-Kiss/kiss/kiss

ーーっておぉい！ちょっと待って！何なんだこの揺れは！
誓いのキスもできやしね！
-...h-HEY!! HOLD UP!! WHAT'S WITH THIS SHAKING?!
-I CAN'T KISS THE BRIDE!!

-Master Absolom!!
-What is it? Do you know what's going on?!
この巨大船スリラーバークが妙な海流に捕まり流されています！
この揺れは島ごとです！！
-This giant vessel--Thriller Park--has gotten caught in a strange current and is being pulled with it!
-These tremors are traveling throughout the ship!

15
-Why did this happen!?
-Ooh, it moved, it moved!
それが・・・特別ゾンビが適当に舵をきってる様で・・・！
-Well, it's because...the special zombie ripped the rudder off!
-WHAT!?

将軍ゾンビ！今すぐ全員出撃せよ！！
-ZOMBIES GENERALS!! I WANT ALL OF YOU TO GET OUT THERE!!
-STOP OZ!!
-...ROGER!!

-Hmm?
そこまでだ特別ゾンビオーズ！
-That's as far as you go, Special Zombie Oz!!

16
足元から切り崩せ！！
-Strike at his feet!!
-OOOOUUU!!

-...HUH?!
-He's gone!! Where's Oz?

あのデカさで
何だこの俊敏さ
-He's huge!
-How could he move so fast?

-GOMUGOMU NO...!! (Although I'm not rubber)
-There he is!! Above!!

-GATLING!!　（銃乱打）
-GYAAAAAAA!!

18
おれの冒険の
邪魔をするなァ！
-Quit getting in the way
-Of my adventure!!
(swapped order for english）

全滅！？
今ここを出てったあいつらだぞ！？
はーはい！みんなぺチャンコに
あいつらはこの島の最強のゾンビ軍団だぞ！？将軍ゾンビだぞ！！
-Wiped out?!
-Everyone who just left here?!
-Y-yes sir!! They were all flattened...
-Weren't they were this island's strongest zombie army?! They were Zombie Generals!!

は－はい！一瞬で！！！
バカな！
-...C-correct sir! All defeated in an instant!
-...No way!!

19
オーズは味方じゃねェのか！？
なぜ勝手に暴れ回ってる！
あそこだぞ！？
そうです。本当だからもう離して！
ゾンビは従う事しかできねェ筈だ！あんな奴を野放しにしたら
このスリラーバークどうなっちまうんだ！？
-Wasn't Oz our ally?!
-Why's he going around destroying everything?!
-OVER THERE?!
-Yes, yes! It's the truth so let me go already!!
-Zombies are supposed to do nothing but obey! If we continue to leave him alone,
-What's going to happen to Thriller Bark?!

-NAMI-SA----------N!!
-I'VE COME TO RESCUE YOU----------!!

-THERE YOU A---------RE!!

麦わらの一味か？
サンジ、到着！
-One of mugiwara's crew...!?
white: Sanji arrives!!

-end-

EDIT - proofs and script completed. Thanks for the comments, I appreciate it.